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Posted 11/28/08 , edited 12/30/08
Itsumademo Chiasa Chiyo



I am currently working on CHAPTER 3...





Synopsis

Gofraidh, a wizard, meaning behind his name: "God's peace. He took on a mission to search for the "Itsumademo Chiasa Chiyo." Chiasa means, "one thousand mornings", and Chiyo means, "child of a thousand generations." With the help of the talking, intelligent Swan, Jerusha, which is the wife of the king Swan Daadalus; meaning behind his strange name, "cunning worker" and respected by all. A rhythmic sonnet played while our main character Akemi (now named Chiasa Chiyo by the wizard) has awoken from a 25 year slumber. Who was behind it, is still unknown. In the middle of all controversy she gains more and more of her tainted black memories and a burning flame that has yet to be unlit.
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...Extras...


The Thousand Generations child *click spoiler below*

The Intelligent swan *click spoiler below*

The God's Peace *click spoiler below*







Akemi; the child of a thousand generations, a child of one thousand mornings. Became known as "sleeping beauty" for at least 25 years now. Previously she and one special man had lived at a cottage house where it seemed like utter most paradise. Birds chirping every morning the moment you awake, the wind blowing threw your hair as you opened the window, the light blue sky that never had gotta dim, the many friendly animals accompanying them and loving them, the friendly neighbors they had. You probably wouldn't believe this...but all that vanished in a mere numbers of minutes. And so did the lovers affection...and everything else. Could it be possible that all they worked for just...disappeared? There has to be something done about it, so, our hero Akemi set out on a journey...to seek and find the broken promises and affections. Each day was getting harder for poor Akemi though. As she had visioned a time she was once happy.

-The Secret Life Of The Lovers (Akemi's grandmother had published a book with known knowledge of Akemi and her husband, (she also knew that Akemi was the "one thousand generations child and furthermore.) The paragraph you just read was a part of Akemi's book. Akemi's grandmother had wrote it after Akemi's deep sleep of remembrance of Akemi and her husband.)



Chap 1* A Time Of Happiness, Me And You





-1991~ November 19th-
"Kazuhiko...are you asking me to...marry you?" I fell toward Kazuhiko as he catched me while I fell. "Kazu-hiko...I do want to marry you." I whispered beside his ear as he held me tightly. "Forever we'll be." Kazuhiko smelt of many good things, I didn't want to let go.



-Present Time~


"I...love...you...Kazuhiko!" I grabbed his hand as we enjoyed the rest of our moonlight walk back home. "As do I, love you." Kazuhiko, officially Akemi's husband now. Kazuhiko admitted his love toward Akemi as so did Akemi. "You know, I'm so proud...proud to be calling you my lover!" Akemi admitted leaning on Kazuhiko's shoulder and sighing happily. "I know there are flaws in this relationship but-" I ended my sentence with words yet un-said due to the expression on Kazuhiko's face. "What's..wrong...?" I looked up at Kazuhiko gazing at him, I would of done it longer but he stared down at me and said..."I have to go...see you tonight..." And that was all Kazuhiko said as he left me wondering. "Kazuhiko...! What's been going on with him lately...?" I tried to forget about the whole incident last night, and tried to have a better day today. "Grand mother...there's something that's been on my mind, I just cant seem to understand!" I picked up my broom and stopped dusting the ground for a bit to talk to grandmother. "What is it, Akemi?" Grandmother said sitting on a bench. "I-Its about Kazuhiko..." I stammered as I sat on the same bench as grandmother. "That man again...he always tends to be the main subject in all of our conversations recently..." Grandmother said wisely, as she was very old. "I'm sorry...my problems are nothing more than burdens to everyone, huh?" I said to myself looking up at the falling spring petals, they kept dancing in the wind, so freely. "Dear, take advice from an old wise woman like myself, forgive him. You know how hard for him it is...to keep you two together...especially since you two aren't supposed to be seeing each other, and well...you two are supposed to be natural born enemies. You just fell in love that's all." Grandmother said closing her eyes peacefully. "In the beginning...yes...we were entitled to being enemies, but we don't care what people think anymore of us grandmother!" I said trying to defend Kazuhiko and I. "Akemi, do what you must. But promise me something, when he lets go...please...let go also, don't hang on to nothing. And...be careful." Grandmother told me her last words and then walked off back into the house. "I wouldn't...grandmother...I wouldn't dream of ever letting go!" I ran toward grandmother cheerfully as we had a nice cup of coffee to wake us up, it was close to 6am in the first place. "Akemi, are you home?" Kazuhiko came running threw the door. "Kazu! Your home...I- My sentence ended as Kazu took my hand and dragged me out the door, that had made me spill the super hot coffee I was drinking..."G-grandmother! Stay here, please!" I shouted from afar. "Of course, I'll protect your paradise." Grandmother said sitting still with coffee in her hands. "Kazu...where are you taking me!? Is something wrong?" I questioned Kazu as he did not reply, my hand slipped from his, then he just disappeared. "What the...?" My facial expression became very worried and confused, like what the hell was going on? I dropped my shaking hands from my chest. "Akemi!" My grandmother shouted back at the cottage house. "Huh? Grandmother?" I came running back to the cottage house as quickly as possible. I came to see Kazu appear standing next to my grandmother. "Kazu...?" I took two steps forward, then stopped. "Listen...I-I can't remain here much longer. Today..." Kazu had been interrupted by my grandmother as she was about to finish Kazu's sentence..."It seemed as much, I knew this time would come sooner or later, what Kazuhiko is trying to say Akemi...Is that today might be the last day...you two are together." Grandmother stated as I became devastated. "A-And...Kazu's disappearing is a sign of that...?" I said staring at Kazu for the last time. "Akemi...you are the one...who will change everything." Kazu whispered. "No...Akemi, you're destined for great things...remember...that..." Grandmother got up from her chair and touch my red cheeks with her old hands. "I-If I am...I...want...to spend my life with Kazu! Not myself! I just..." I didn't end my sentence I stopped speaking then Kazu disappeared before me, again. "I...don't want this grandmother! What happened to paradise?! What happened to......paradise? Paradise...I kept repeating to myself the same question. I felt as if everything around me was tearing down. "Akemi! Pull yourself together. At least you have memories of your beloved." Grandmother spoke trying to make me feel better about the whole situation. "M-m-memories...aren't enough to satisfy me." I cried rushing to the place Kazu proposed. It was on November 19th...1991...I remember every detail they day. It has only been a year since we've been married...and..." I stopped talking because I was crying too much, I couldn't get out the right words. I stood at the entrance of a cave; he proposed to me inside a cave...Kazu was in the middle of hiding and he would surely die because well, he was my enemy, and we weren't supposed to be seeing eachother...if he would of been found...he would have...died...but he luckily found a cave that we could escape to. That... was the cave where Kazu took me...It was very small in there, inside was a strangely shaped bed, shelves with mementos, and many other things that meant a lot. I fell onto the bed only to find myself fall asleep 5 minutes later... "Kazu...Kazuhiko...come.....back...."Do you Kazuhiko take Akemi to be your wife? To love and to cherish till death do each other part, and in sickness and health? "Yes. I do." "And do you, Akemi, take Kazuhiko to be your husband till death do each other part, in sickness and health?" "Yes!" "Then...I wish you two the best, you may now kiss the bride...." "That dream....I've dreamt of it everyday...since...we...got...married." Akemi said to herself still dreaming, and dreaming. Akemi didn't feel like waking up from her dream this time, she couldn't. So instead she slept...and slept...until Kazuhiko came back to her..."Nemuri...waga...koigokoro...25 toshidoshi kara mohaya..." An unknown man chanted doing some unknown magic above Akemi, leaving her there...sleeping. "You sure are a beauty. I shall see you again sometime, lets make it a date." The strange man seemed to know Akemi...he kissed her forehead and that was that...he never came to see her again. "Please...Akemi...understand that he did all this so you may dream of many great things that still lie ahead, he wants you too remember him forever." Grandmother thought to herself, she knew what was going to happen. Kazuhiko wasn't planning to come back anytime soon, maybe 25 years from now....?


~25 Years Later~



Chap 2* Awaken~ Chiasa Chiyo



"Where is he? Where is he?" I echoed my words inside a dream, many dreams actually, mixed in with others. "I...pity her. For trying to find Kazuhiko after all these years." Someone unfamiliar said standing by Akemi's body. "Yes, but, what's sadder is shes trying to find him inside her dreams..." A woman said also standing next to Akemi's body. As if they were there for a reason, many more people appeared and granted Akemi the name "sleeping beauty." Everyone bowed their head and prayed that Akemi will one day awaken...and when that time came, so shall she be reincarnated into her true self. "Poor Akemi....her facial expression still remains the same; angry in deceit." "But why?" Random people start talking about Akemi all at once...accompanying her kindly, later there was another scene... "Who could of done this to her? Who would have the power to?" An odd Swan appeared to be talking, splashing its wings in water. "I don't know...but what I do know is...I mean, do you really want to take on this task...please don't." A scrawny looking boy asked Jerusha. "Duh!" Jerusha said in a swan like voice while water splashed on the boys face. "Oh jeez, Jerusha." The boy hit his forehead with his hand, you heard a loud slap. "What, brother?" Jerusha squeaked. "I still cant get over what you've become..." Konen, Jerusha's little brother said. "A swan." Jerusha said in a stronger voice. "Yeah, it's unbelievable!" Konen admitted being tackled by Jerusha out of no where. "Y-you know how I hate when you judge me for what I am..." Jerusha seemed sad, but you couldn't really tell. "Sorry, Jerusha..." Konen apologized petting Jerusha. "It doesn't matter...by the way, have you seen Daadalus today?" Jerusha said smiling again, or so she seemed to be. Jerusha got off her brothers stomach and started running toward a castle, maybe Daadalus was there. "DAADALUS! I'm coming for you." Jerusha ran fast leaving behind a dusty trail. "Jerusha...big sister...does she really plan to go on with Gofraidh's request?" Konen wondered leaving the opposite direction from where Jerusha was headed. "I already told you, Jerusha. I cannot allow it!" Daadalus yelled concerned. "Hubby, you must allow it. I haven't done anything important ever since I became yours...Its no fair." Jerusha complained while people started staring. "Fine, but, what are you people looking at!?" Daadalus shouted while everyone went back to work after hearing his loud announcement. "Daadalus..." Jerusha smiled reassured. "Okay Jerusha, Gofraidh should be here soon...hes a weird one, watch out." Daadalus warned me. "Okay." I giggled cheerfully hopping on my two feet. "Jerusha, just be careful." Daadalus thought really worried, I can handle myself though. A couple short minutes later... "Your kidding right? A swan should accompany me in my mission? All I asked was for its help, not its company." Gofraidh said rudely disobeying his master. "She's a very intelligent swan, though...remember who you're talking to." The Master responded. "Master, intelligence is beside the point, only I can awaken Chiasa Chiyo, I have no use for a swan..." Gofraidh the kind yet rude wizard speaked. "It is in fact your responsibly as Chiasa Chiyo's soul, and as for Jerusha, she shall be her heart. Understand? You're a cold and cruel person at times...Gofraidh, I admit that, but remember she will awaken after 25 years...she'll need comfort." Master said intelligently. "But...Master! A SWAN!?" Gofraidh shouted disobediently. "STOP YOUR WHINING!" Master's voice became very strong, it seemed as though the earth shook at the time. "Have you a clue where to find her, Gofraidh?" The master said talking in his normal voice. "Her grandmother had wrote a book about her life...after Chiasa Chiyo slept...and in the book it read that Chiasa Chiyo is sleeping in a cave, where Kazuhiko proposed to her." Gofraidh said getting out a book from thin air, he was a wizard after all, a powerful one. "Ah, I see. Is her grandmother still alive?" Master asked. "No." Gofraidh responded looking down for a moment. "What is it, son?" My father said looking at me with cautious eyes. "Nothing, father, everything's fine." I said not telling my father whats actually wrong with me. "Chiasa Chiyo's fate...rather sad isn't it." Father said randomly. "Sad?" I asked, confused. "Losing her husband without her even knowing why...and sleeping threw all this time..." Father seemed to care for her burden. "Have you read her book father?" I asked curiously, my father doesn't show compassion, so this is new. "Its a very good book." Father said smiling, I stared at him for a while then left, to the cave where Chiasa Chiyo slept for all those years. "DON'T YOU DARE FORGET JERUSHA!" I heard fathers words in my head, so I decided to bring along that odd swan. "What if my powers grow out of control...what if I...kill her? Father, what will you do then?" Gofraidh thought to himself in search for Chiasa Chiyo. "QUACK! I'M COMING TOO!" Jerusha shouted flying from the sky onto the ground. Afterward... "Hes coming..." A dark looking shadow person said walking around Akemi with weapons. "We better make this count." Another person appeared using magic while getting out a magic sword. "Your planning on killing her?" The person smirked and the other man answered "Yes." "I'm Jerusha!" Jerusha quacked in Gofraidh's face. "YEAH, I know. And I bet you know me too." Gofraidh said walking past Jerusha with a grin. "Well, of course...listen...since we're going to be looking after Chiasa Chiyo we might as well get along right?" Jerusha said stopping hoping Gofraidh would look back at her. "Fine." Was all Gofraidh said. "Hey! I sense something...unusual." Jerusha said surprised sticking out her swan neck. "Jerusha, could it be? Chiasa Chiyo?" Gofraidh asked running and talking beside Jerusha. "Y-yeah. I'm sure of it!" Jerusha ran and ran next to Gofraidh, she tried to catch up. Akemi was starting to wake up after all..."She's starting to open her eyes, Arata." Manabu informed Arata while Arata lifted up his sword. Akemi opened up her eyes that she hadn't opened up for so long and whispered "Kazuhiko.." while she took grasp of the sword subconsciously. "Your not Kazuhiko..." Akemi mumbled letting go of the sword carelessly with tired eyes. "Arata...?" Manabu had wondered why Arata was hesitating to kill Akemi. "No, Manabu. Perhaps we can use her." Arata said as he hears footsteps in the distance. "Manabu, you know what to do now, get rid of those people out there." Arata said as Manabu ran out the cave to make acquaintance of Gofraidh and Jerusha. "You came a long way, but your not going any further!" Manabu announced standing in front of the cave. "Get outta the way fool! Do you have any idea what your doing!" Jerusha shouted in anger. "A stupid duck trying to tell me what to do...? Manabu laughed distinctly then laughed loudly. "I'M A SWAN BAKA!" Jerusha shouted flying in the air again. "How is flying in the air going to help!? You cant do much in your condition you know!" Gofraidh said as he stopped Manabu from attacking Jerusha as she fell from the sky. "Hm." Manabu wondered as he jumped back, Gofraidh caught Jerusha falling. "Next time, leave it to me!" Gofraidh said dropping Jerusha. "Ow!" Jerusha whined with her head in the ground. Gofraidh immediately closed his eyes and focused his energy on Chiasa Chiyo, ignoring the battle. "You have no time to think meaninglessly, wizard!" Manabu ran toward Gofraidh with a sword. "Kazuhiko...I can hear his voice inside my head..." Akemi thought getting up but she was forced to lye back down because Arata pushed her back down. "This Kazuhiko you speak of is gone, Akemi." Arata said knowing Chiasa Chiyo's real name strangely enough. "How...do you know my name?" Akemi asked with Arata's hand still around her neck......






Chap 3* My Eyes First Saw The Enemy, Why?




"Tell me...how..." I asked again as his hand was choking my neck, he was planning on killing me. "Its wrong to call you a name your not even familiarized with yet right?" He let go of my neck, strangely I didn't gasp or anything...what was I anyway? "What name...?" I asked the man. "She's awaken at last, Jerusha!" Gofraidh said as he flew across Manabu and kicked him in his face. "Out of the way!" Gofraidh shouted going inside the cave. "Hey, Gofraidh! Wait for me!" Jerusha shouted not wanting to be left behind. She turned back at Manabu and sticked her tongue out at him. "You..." Manabu struggled getting up coming closer to Jerusha. "Ack! Gofraidh help....!" Jerusha shouted flapping her wings for assistance, there was no response. "Chiasa Chiyo...your mine now." Arata said as he helped Akemi get off the bed she had slept on for 25 years. "You still don't have a will of your own...yet you still remember some of the memories." Arata spoke softly. "Yeah...." I said looking back at Arata with cold eyes. I heard a man shout in the distance "CHIASA CHIYO!" "Akemi...my name is Arata." Arata said ignoring the man that was approaching, you heard metal scrape onto the ground, it was Gofraidh's sword. "Chiasa...Chiyo!" He stopped running to find Chiasa Chiyo at last. "I think.....you have the wrong person stranger..." I said familiarized with everything around me, I looked around to find a picture of me and...Kazuhiko, I looked at it for a while, picked it up and a cold tear fell from my cheek. "Its okay, Akemi." Arata came from behind me and hugged me....his hug felt like Kazuhiko's...so warm... "Uh..." I thought in my head, the picture of me and Kazuhiko had a tear in the center...I placed the photo back on the cabinet. "Chiasa Chiyo, don't let him deceive you!" Gofraidh said preparing to risk his life for Akemi's. "Stranger...I-I already told you, I AM NOT THIS 'CHIASA CHIYO'!" Akemi shouted closing her eyes while still in Arata's grasp. "That's right...your not this 'Chiasa Chiyo' person. "No.....leave now stranger!!" Akemi shouts with a strong voice that seemed powerful enough. "Her voice...is so powerful..." Gofraidh thought becoming still. "Who are you to just barge in here like this?" Arata asked Gofraidh with defying eyes, as he let go of Akemi slowly. "ACK! LET GO OF MY FOOT, STUPID!" Jerusha nudged her foot at random. "You...stupid...duck..." Manabu spoke slowly. "W-w-what?!" Jerusha's eyes became fiery red as she went into her crazy mode. "Take this, AND that!" Jerusha laughed hysterically jumping on top of Manabu's head repeatedly pushing his head into the ground. "Who are you anyway?" Akemi asked lifting her arm to the side, attempting to stop a fight.

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Awesome
I think u should keep a copy of this story if chapters "disappear" again..
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naruto330 wrote:

Awesome
I think u should keep a copy of this story if chapters "disappear" again..


yea i thinkk so too...
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did i ever tell you to SUE cr? o-o
I BLAME THEM..
or its a cause of one of tah mods o-o
-side step- wasnt me :[
besides why teh hell would i want to erase joohr awesome stories ? :[
Posted 12/4/08

iRaikax3 wrote:

did i ever tell you to SUE cr? o-o
I BLAME THEM..
or its a cause of one of tah mods o-o
-side step- wasnt me :[
besides why teh hell would i want to erase joohr awesome stories ? :[


i don't think so o-o''
cuzz um iidk
lolz they like always disappear wen i get to chap 4 almostt! X.X
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when is this coming out
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naruto330 wrote:

when is this coming out


tmrw or todaii X-X
or now xD
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