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Grab the Swords.
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Posted 12/15/08
thanks for using my idea about the dress and stuff.it's really greAT
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Posted 12/16/08
...so, the story is good and when is the next chapter coming out??
Posted 12/16/08

Jasminelym_1 wrote:

...so, the story is good and when is the next chapter coming out??


hmm don't know... lol XD
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Posted 12/16/08
wow, this is amazing. keep going!
Posted 12/16/08
This is awesome! Going to china! Woah! This is a TOTAL twist in the GA stories compare to other stoies. Good Job!

*two thumbs up* !
Posted 12/17/08 , edited 12/17/08


GUYS LOOK AT THE SWORDS!!! lol these are the weapons from Mikan. And that girl in that pic, that isn't Mikan. Lol... so heheh just look at the Swords =D
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Posted 12/17/08
can't wait for the naxt one
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Posted 12/17/08
thanks for using my pic...atleast they have a picture of it
Posted 12/17/08
I want to add in! Go powerpuffgirl! Your grammer improved ALOT!!! Good Job^-^ GO GO GO!!!

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Posted 12/18/08
this is really amazing!!
Posted 12/19/08 , edited 12/19/08
Written by - powerpuffgirls-z

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Summary - Mikan Sakura works for a mysterious man, since her friend died, two years ago. She haves to keep it a secret, so that means she haves to lie against everybody. Against her best friend Ai too..

- Grab the Swords.




So hope you liked it!!!! And Jasmint, I will be glad if you will edit my Chapters, because Orange_Sorbet is too busy and I don't want her to be more busy.. Thnx for reading, and don't forget to comment!


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Posted 12/19/08

powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Written by - powerpuffgirls-z

Edit by - Nobody

Summary - Mikan Sakura works for a mysterious man, since her friend died, two years ago. She haves to keep it a secret, so that means she haves to lie against everybody. Against her best friend Ai too..

- Grab the Swords.




So hope you liked it!!!! And Jasmint, I will be glad if you will edit my Chapters, because Orange_Sorbet is too busy and I don't want her to be more busy.. Thnx for reading, and don't forget to comment!




i can edit it 4 u^^ thats if u want it.....and its still open..^^..luv ur chapters!!!
Posted 12/19/08

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powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Written by - powerpuffgirls-z

Edit by - Nobody

Summary - Mikan Sakura works for a mysterious man, since her friend died, two years ago. She haves to keep it a secret, so that means she haves to lie against everybody. Against her best friend Ai too..

- Grab the Swords.




So hope you liked it!!!! And Jasmint, I will be glad if you will edit my Chapters, because Orange_Sorbet is too busy and I don't want her to be more busy.. Thnx for reading, and don't forget to comment!




i can edit it 4 u^^ thats if u want it.....and its still open..^^..luv ur chapters!!!


haha thank you so much!

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Posted 12/20/08
Oh! So that was the picture you were talking about! Would you like me to edit your second chapter again? I'm sure I could be more detailed on the clothing, if you don't mind...
Hey, do any of you guys read Twilight? I write fanfiction for it, too. At least, the first story is coming out soon. I might put it in crunchyroll before publishing it in FanFiction.net.
Mind you, it won't be put in this group, as this group is mainly about Gakuen Alice, but it will be around somewhere... Most likely in my pages, but I will kindly inform you when I put it in.
Also, please check out a few new Gakuen Alice fanfictions I added here, such as: "According to the Manga" and "Plushie Replacement"
To readers of "Pull the Trigger", please be assured that the second chapter is on its way, and will be here soon.
And don't forget, "Signs You're In Love 101"! I'd greatly appreciate it if you would kindly comment on any of the above.

Much love,
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Posted 12/20/08

powerpuffgirls-z wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:


powerpuffgirls-z wrote:

Written by - powerpuffgirls-z

Edit by - Nobody

Summary - Mikan Sakura works for a mysterious man, since her friend died, two years ago. She haves to keep it a secret, so that means she haves to lie against everybody. Against her best friend Ai too..

- Grab the Swords.




So hope you liked it!!!! And Jasmint, I will be glad if you will edit my Chapters, because Orange_Sorbet is too busy and I don't want her to be more busy.. Thnx for reading, and don't forget to comment!




i can edit it 4 u^^ thats if u want it.....and its still open..^^..luv ur chapters!!!


haha thank you so much!




ahh and if she is busyy i'll edittt! hahah.

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