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This is a “he said, she said” type of story. It’s like, I know the point-of –views to both of my protagonists—Aya and Yuto. Of course, I wouldn't forget to comment on scenes that I think was cute. So, I'm sorry if sometimes I butt in the scenes and give comments.

IMPASSE

She said….

A girl named Nakashima Aya applied for a scholarship in Japan. She had trainings and Japanese lessons for her to speak Japanese perfectly and not to be left out at school. When the time came, she had to say goodbye to her old life, and hello to her Japanese life. She was nervous to going to school. She was worried that people there wouldn’t like her. Her Japanese foster parents were doctors. And, she was a bit disappointed to know that they had maids because she wanted to be independent as it is. Aya has a strong personality. Beyond looks, she’s also smart. She’s mature and honest. But, on contrast, she’s jolly and cheerful.

First day of school, she was so damn nervous. She followed her sensei on his way to her new classroom. When her sensei got into the room, she waited outside to be called.

Sensei: Yosh, minna. Take your seats, and I will introduce the transfer student.
**Everyone sat down and listened**

Sensei: Please come in, transfer student.
**Aya walks through the door and went inside. She could hear the sounds, “Eeehhh?!” and “Uwaaa” all around. And, she was so nervous of what it meant. “Maybe they don’t like me after all”
, she thought.**

Sensei: Introduce yourself, please.
**”I have to go through this. Gambatte, Aya!!”
, she thought**

Aya: Watashi wa Nakashima Aya desu. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu! **She bowed**
**The teacher started writing her name down on the blackboard. “Yosh!! No mistake on introductions!! Yatta neh!!!”
, she thought to herself.**

Sensei: She’s Nakashima Aya, and she’s a transfer student. She will be staying here until graduation, of course. Since you’re all graduating junior high students. Please be kind to her. And, welcome to our school, Nakashima-san.
Aya: Arigatou gozaimasu, Sensei....minna.
Sensei: Well, you could sit down there. **pointing at a chair in front of a long-haired guy and seemingly handsome. Aya felt that she’s getting nervous, especially sitting in front of a good-looking guy. “Uwaaa. So handsome…..Eh? Stop it, Aya. You’re here to study”
, she blamed herself**

Break time...

Girl 1: Neh, Nakashima-san? What’s your hobby?
Aya: I like cooking and sports, too.
Girl 1: Eh? Kakkoi neh?
Girls: Un, un. She is.
Girl 2: Neh, watashi wa Yuki Yumiko. Hajimemashite.
Aya: Hajimemashite.
**Aya saw that there was a cute boy with chubby cheeks but angelic face approaching the guy behind her**

Girl 1: Neh, Yamada-kun? When’s your next single?
Yamada: Well, we will be singing the theme song of Kung Fu Panda. So, better watch out for it.
All the girls: EEEHH?! SUUUUGE!!!
Yamada: Neh, Yuto? Are you going straight home later?
**Yuto seems to be the name of the guy behind her. That’s what Aya thought**

Yuto: I don’t know, You?
Yamada: Wanna meet up with Chii later, instead?
Yuto: Sounds fun.
Yumiko: Nakashima-san….Neh, Nakashima-san!
Aya: Eh?
Yumiko: Why are you staring at Yamada-kun and Yuto-kun so intently. Masaka…you’ve fallen for them!
Aya: No, no! You’re mistaken. **She blushed because she knows PERFECTLY that Yamada and Yuto could hear Yumiko’s accusation**

Yamada: Hello. You’re the transfer student, right?
Aya: Hai.
Yamada: Boku no Yamada Ryosuke desu. Hajimemashite.
Aya: Nakashima Aya. Hajimemashite. **She smiles at Yamada**
Yuto: *coughs* Anoooo… Na-Nakajima Yuto de-desu. Ha-hajimemashite.
Aya: Hajimemashite.**She smiles at Yuto but felt embarrassed as she did so.**
Yamada: Well, what do you think of Japan?
Aya: I’ve loved Japan with all my life and it’s like I’m dreaming thinking of the fact that I’m here.
Yamada: Whoa! You speak your mind perfectly. How are you coping up here?
Aya: Well, I attended trainings and workshops to know more about Japan. So, I think, before I even come here, I’m already ready.
**Aya couldn’t comprehend why she can talk so confidently in front of Yamada**

Yuto: A-anooo.. Do you have a cellphone?
Aya: Gomen. But I don’t have a cellphone here in Japan. I’m using my international cellphone so I don’t have access here. Gomen ne. **"Eh?! He wants to know my mail?!!"
, Aya thought. Her heart skipped a beat by his question. Kyaa~!**

Yamada: Eh? Yuto? You want her email, heh?
Yuto: That’s not it! I was just asking.
**Aya laughed at that…”It seems like my time to be spent here in Japan will be worthwhile”, Aya thought.**

He said….

A Japanese celebrity and idol named Nakajima Yuto thinks that he doesn’t have privacy at all and he’s struggling to that. He’s too busy to think about anything except his work. Love doesn’t even crosses his mind. Well, not really. He does have interviews about girls, but that’s it and nothing else. Don’t you think his life is boring? There isn’t any thrill. Well, let’s make his life like a roller coaster ride. Wanna ride it with me? (^_^)

First day of school is nothing else but waking up early and learning some stuff that isn’t connected to Yuto’s profession. He doesn’t give a damn about it. But it couldn’t be helped. It’s for making his parents more proud than what they are right now. Yuto’s such a good guy neh? Well, he thinks school is boring. But, that’s going to change….

**Sensei entering the room**
Yuto couldn’t hear anything but “blah, blah, blah”. It’s all “blah, blah, blah” to him. He keeps on staring at the beautiful sun. “What a beautiful scenario”
, he thought. His thoughts were all about his work and how fun it is. But then, his thoughts were interrupted by….

Class: EEEHH?!! UWAAA~!!
**Yuto came to check out what’s going on. Apparently, he saw a beautiful girl with porcelain skin, hair that extends up to half of her back, a girl with round and at the same time chinky eyes, a girl who seems to be as tall as Yama-chan, her lips were...kissable [Although, Yuto haven’t been kissed yet]. “Uwaaa. Kirei”
, he thought. Yuto, of course, have seen a lot of beautiful girls. But this one hit him like a big yellow bus. She seems to be a transfer student.**

Transfer student: Watashi wa Nakashima Aya desu. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu! **She bowed**

**”Eehh. Nakashima Aya. Even her name is kawaii”
, Yuto thought.**
When the teacher started talking, everything went “blah, blah, blah” to him again. He was so fascinated by the transfer student and kept wondering what kind of girl she is. But, his thoughts were interrupted by…..

Sensei: Well, you could sit down there. **Yuto got really nervous—more nervous than being in front of many audience in Tokyo Dome—because his sensei was pointing the chair in front of him. “Uwaaa. What should I do? This is embarrassing”
, he thought.**

Break time...
Almost all of the girls gathered around Nakashima. And it annoyed Yuto because of the noise. But he felt a bit happy about it because he could see Nakashima smile and feel embarrass. Meanwhile, the guys are gathering at the opposite side of the classroom talking about Nakashima. And, of course, it made him jealous. DO THE FIRST MOVE, YUTO!!!

**Yuto saw Yama-chan approaching him.**
Girl 1: Neh, Yamada-kun? When’s your next single?
Yamada: Well, we will be singing the theme song of Kung Fu Panda. So, better watch out for it.
All the girls: EEEHH?! SUUUUGE!!!
Yamada: Neh, Yuto? Are you going straight home later?
**Nakashima’s eyes flickered on his side. And, it made him a bit nervous, so he wants to play it cool.**

Yuto: I don’t know, You?
Yamada: Wanna meet up with Chii later, instead?
Yuto: Sounds fun.
**Yuto heard a voice calling Nakashima. And, it seems that Nakashima is still staring at him and Yama-chan. “Hehe. One point, Yuto-pyon!”
, he thought—feeling accomplished**

Yumiko: Nakashima-san….Neh, Nakashima-san!
Nakashima: Eh?
Yumiko: Why are you staring at Yamada-kun and Yuto-kun so intently. Masaka…you’ve fallen for them!
**Yuto’s heart skipped a beat when he heard this and he could feel his face was blushing**

Nakashima: No, no! You’re mistaken. **But got heart broken with Nakashima’s reply.**
Yamada: Hello. You’re the transfer student, right?
Nakashima: Hai.
Yamada: Boku no Yamada Ryosuke desu. Hajimemashite.
Nakashima: Nakashima Aya. Hajimemashite. **Yuto didn't notice that she smiled at Yama-chan**
**”Yosh, I can’t let myself be beaten by Yama-chan!!”
, he thought.**

Yuto: *coughs* Anoooo… Na-Nakajima Yuto de-desu. Ha-hajimemashite.
**”How could I stammer with just introductions? Baka, baka”
, he thought—getting disappointed with himself**

Nakashima: Hajimemashite. **She smiled at Yuto**
**"Uwaaa. Suge kirei~"
, Yuto thought admiringly.**

Yamada: Well, what do you think of Japan?
Nakashima: I’ve loved Japan with all my life and it’s like I’m dreaming thinking of the fact that I’m here.
**”So straightforward and honest. Just my type! Demooo.. [his eyes flickered on Yama-chan’s direction]… Yama-chan also like girls like that. [sighs]”
, he thought. KAWAII YUTO SOSHITE GAMBATTE NEH!!**

Yamada: Whoa! You speak your mind perfectly. How are you coping up here?
Nakashima: Well, I attended trainings and workshops to know more about Japan. So, I think, before I even come here, I’m already ready.
**”Yappe. She’s definitely Yama-chan’s type. I have to make my move!”
, he thought—determined.**

Yuto: A-anooo.. Do you have a cellphone?
Nakashima: Gomen. But I don’t have a cellphone here in Japan. I’m using my international cellphone so I don’t have access here. Gomen ne.
Yamada: Eh? Yuto? You want her email, heh?
Yuto: That’s not it! I was just asking.
**”Damn it. Why does Yama-chan have to be so cool in front of her?”
, he thought—getting more upset and regretting what he just said.**

Will this be Yama-chan’s win? Or will Yuto fight for it? Does Yama-chan really like Nakashima?

Find that out on the next part!

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Oh yeah. Impasse means, like, there's no way out. There's no excape or something that there's nothing we can do.
It was hard to pick a title. But, I like this word.

Wait for the next chapters. I'll be working on it.
Enjoy reading.

Oh. You can also see my fanfic on other Yuto groups such as: YUTO and Nakajima Yuto FC.
You can also see it on my profile pages.
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ AWESOME!!
IT'S SOOOOO KUTE!!!!!
i like the "he said, she said" thing
it's a great way to read in a fanfic heheh
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pafoua wrote:

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ AWESOME!!
IT'S SOOOOO KUTE!!!!!
i like the "he said, she said" thing
it's a great way to read in a fanfic heheh


Thanks. I posted up the next chapter.
Hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 5 is actually on progress. But I don't want to post all the chapters I've done at once.
So yeah.
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Part 2
Sorry if it took a long time to post this. Now, here it is. Enjoy!:D


IMPASSE
She said…

Nakashima Aya’s school life has been really tiring. A month has passed after she transferred in a Japanese school, of course, in Japan. Ever since her first month had passed, a lot of guys in their school, strangers to her or not, are starting to leave her letters in her shoe locker and in person. Guys’ confession are one of the most irritating and stressful thing that Aya has to go through. She just doesn’t like turning guys down. She doesn’t like making people upset. But, of course, that’s how it really works. Too stressful to be pretty. (^o^)

Although she had this problem, she started to make friends with Yuki Yumiko, Akimoto Kumiko and Kato Michiko. They’re all girls in her class.

Aya: *sighs*
Michiko: Daijobu?
Aya: Daijobu desu. Just….stressed. **patting her shoulders**
Michiko: You’re right. Confessions and love letters could be stressful. Especially, when their handwritings are, let’s say, ugly.
**They both laughed**
Michiko: Who was the last person to confess to you?
Aya: Maa…I guess his name was Fujiwara Akira. I think he’s a senpai.
Michiko: EH?!!! Fujiwara-senpai?!!! He’s a star here. Well, with the exception of Yamada-kun and Nakajima-kun. If both of them aren’t studying in school, Fujiwara-senpai would be the most popular guy in school. So, what did you say?
Aya: What?
Michiko: What was your response?
Aya: Of course, I turned him down.
Michiko: WHAT?!!! Are you insane?!!!!
Aya: Well, first of all, I wouldn’t know who he is if he didn’t confess to me. Second, I don’t like him.
Michiko: Who do you like, then?
Aya: **blushing** Eh? **Her mind pictured Yuto’s face when Michiko asked that question… But then, it was replaced by Ryosuke’s face. “Eh? What the hell?”, she thought.**
Michiko: Why are you blushing? There is? I was actually joking.
Aya: It wasn’t funny.
Michiko: So, there really is?
Aya: None. None at all. **looking down. Aya has never lied before to a friend.**
Michiko: Eh? There is. I know it. Well, I’m not asking you who that person is until you’re ready. **stands up** Well, I can wait until you open up to me. I mean, I can’t blame you. We just knew each other barely. Come on. Lunch time is about to end.
Aya: **still looking down. “She found out I was lying. Hazukashii.”, she thought.** Un.

In the classroom...

**Yumiko jumping to block Aya and Michiko’s way**
Yumiko: [to Aya] So? Whose turn is it to be turned down by our school’s beauty?
Aya: **blushing. She perfectly knows that her classmates [specifically Yuto and Ryosuke] could actually hear Yumiko’s loud voice** Shut up! **overtaking Yumiko**
Yumiko: Eh?! [to Michiko] Who was it, ne?
Michiko: If Nakashima-san doesn’t want to tell you, then I have no right to tell you.
Yumiko: Hidoi. I was just asking.

**Aya sits down and sighed**
Kumiko: Why are you sighing?
Aya: Just….stressed. It’s nothing. I’m okay. **she smiles**
Kumiko: If you’re not feeling well, just tell me. I could take you to the infirmary.
Aya: Arigatou. But I’m really okay.
Yumiko: Neh, Aya. Tell me, please. Who was it?
Aya: I’ll tell you but not here. **she blushed because she knows that she obviously doesn’t want Yuto and Ryosuke to know who that was**
Yumiko: Yatta~!! Tell me later!
Aya: Hai, hai. **sighs**
**Ryosuke was heading her way**
Yamada: Neh, Nakashima-san. Anooooo, do you want to go with us after school to a game center? Well, it’s not a date. I’m going with Yuto, Chii and Keito. You can bring Katou-san and the rest. **glaring at Yumiko**
Yumiko: Hmph. Show-off. **she went away**
Aya: That was rude! Apologize to her.
Yamada: No way. She’s a devil. When we were young, she tried to throw my bag in the trash bin.
Aya: That was then. This is now. [to Yumiko] Yuki-san, did you apologize to him before?
Yumiko: Why would I? He took my best friend away from me.
Aya: **sighs** I don’t want to get more stressed here. Do whatever you want. [to Yamada] I won’t go. Sorry.
Yamada: Why? Do you have plans with the person who confessed to you?
Aya: No! It’s just that I don’t want to go with you guys without bringing Yuki-san with me. I don’t like having fun when someone is not.
Yamada: Fine. We still have next time.
**Yamada headed to his chair**
Yuto: [to Aya] Are you sure you don’t want to go?
**Aya was sure that she felt regretful when Yuto asked this**
Aya: Un. Gomen ne. Maybe next time. **she can’t help smiling**
Yuto: Next time, it’ll be more fun. I assure you. **he smiled so beautifully that Aya had to gasp for air**
Aya: Really? How can you tell?
Yuto: Hmmmm… because you’re there. **he blushed**
Aya: Hmmm… and because you’re there pulling on pranks.
**both of them laughed**
**BELL**



He said…

Nakajima Yuto seemed to be busy with his work plus, school is starting to be a burden. But, he cannot afford not to attend school when he has time, because……

On their set....

Yuto: Neh, Yama-chan. Nakashima is starting to get popular ne.
Yamada: You don’t know? She’s already the most popular girl in our school.
Yuto: EH?! That fast?
Yamada: Yes, yes. **having his devilish look** Masaka…Hmmm. Yuto likes Nakashima-san!!! **laughs**
Yuto: **blushing** You’re mistaken! It’s not like that at all! It’s just that she’s not around during lunch breaks and will be back, like, 10 minutes before the bell.
Yamada: That’s because, a lot of guys are taking that time to confess to her. **chuckles** So, do your best! There are a lot guys who are making their move now. She might be taken away from you if you move slowly. **chuckles**
Yuto: I told you! It’s not like that!
Yuya: So, who has a crush on who?
Yamada: Good timing. Yuto’s crushing on our transfer student!
Yuto: **blushing. He looks like tomatoes now** I TOLD YOU!!! IT’S NOT LIKE THAT!!!!
Yuya: Eh?! Yuto does? Hmmmm. Interesting. **laughs**
Yuto: It’s not.
Yuya: Awww. Don’t get pissed. Ne. Is she pretty?
Yuto: **excited** I’ve never seen such a pretty girl.
**Yamada and Yuya laughed in unison**
Yuya: **still laughing** You hahaha just hahaha admitted hahaha it! **laughing goes on**
Yamada: **wiping his eyes** Baka.
Crew: Yamada-kun? Takaki-kun? Nakajima-kun? It’s time to shoot now.

In the classroom....

Yuto noticed that Nakashima is still not in the classroom. “Is someone confessing to her again?”, he thought. “Do I really like her?”, he sighed.

Yamada: Yuto! Oi, Yuto! Why are you daydreaming? Are you listening to me?
Yuto: Eh? What were you saying?
Yamada: *sighs* If you’re that worried, why don’t you confess to her yourself?
Yuto: It’s not like that.
Yamada: Whatever. *chuckles*

He heard someone.
Yumiko: [to Nakashima] So? Whose turn is it to be turned down by our school’s beauty?
Aya: Shut up! **overtaking Yumiko. She was heading to her seat which is in front of Yuto**
Yumiko: Eh?! [to Michiko] Who was it, ne?
Michiko: If Nakashima-san doesn’t want to tell you, then I have no right to tell you.
Yumiko: Hidoi. I was just asking.
**Nakashima sits down and sighed**
Kumiko: Why are you sighing?
Aya: Just….stressed. It’s nothing. I’m okay. **she smiles. “*sighs* Kawaii”, he thought**
Kumiko: If you’re not feeling well, just tell me. I could take you to the infirmary.
Aya: Arigatou. But I’m really okay.
Yumiko: Neh, Aya. Tell me, please. Who was it?
Aya: I’ll tell you but not here.
Yumiko: Yatta~!! Tell me later!
Aya: Hai, hai. **sighs**

Honestly, Yuto also wants to know who it was. But, of course, he’s shy to ask. And, it’ll be rude.
**he saw Yama-chan heading her way**
Yamada: Neh, Nakashima-san. Anooooo, do you want to go with us after school to a game center? **”What the hell is Yama-chan doing?”, he thought** Well, it’s not a date. I’m going with Yuto, Chii and Keito. You can bring Katou-san and the rest. **he saw Yama-chan glaring at Yumiko**
Yumiko: Hmph. Show-off. **she went away**
Aya: That was rude! Apologize to her.
Yamada: No way. She’s a devil. When we were young, she tried to throw my bag in the trash bin.
Aya: That was then. This is now. [to Yumiko] Yuki-san, did you apologize to him before?
Yumiko: Why would I? He took my best friend away from me.
Aya: **sighs** I don’t to get more stressed here. Do whatever you want. [to Yamada] I won’t go. Sorry.
**Yuto was a bit sad to hear this. But also relieved because, there was no way he could let Chii and, especially, Keito to see his beautiful classmate. HAHAHA! **
Yamada: Why? Do you have plans with the person who confessed to you?
Aya: No! It’s just that I don’t want to go with you guys without bringing Yuki-san with me. I don’t like having fun when someone is not. **”So straightforward and mature”, he thought**
Yamada: Fine. We still have next time. **”What the hell did he mean by that? Don’t tell me he’s going to ask her on a date next time!!! NOOO!!!”, he thought. Kawaii. Haha!**
**Yamada headed to his chair**
Yuto: [to Nakashima] Are you sure you don’t want to go? **He was nervous to even ask this**
Aya: Un. Gomen ne. Maybe next time. **she smiled. ”Ka-wa-iiii!!”, he thought**
Yuto: Next time, it’ll be more fun. I assure you. **he smiled. ”For sure, I’m going to make this girl have fun next time!”, he thought**
Aya: Really? How can you tell?
Yuto: Hmmmm… because you’re there. **blushes. “What the hell am I blurting out? Baka, baka.”, he thought.**
Aya: Hmmm… and because you’re there pulling on pranks.
**both of them laughed**
“A funny but mature girl. Suge kirei—inside and out!”, Yuto thought.
**BELL**


Will Aya say yes to the next person who will confess to her?
Does Ryosuke really like Aya?
Is Yuto confused with his feelings or is he sure now?
Will the other Hey! Say! JUMP members get to see Aya?
Will Aya find out who she really likes?


Find that out on the upcoming chapters!!!
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pafoua wrote:

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ AWESOME!!
IT'S SOOOOO KUTE!!!!!
i like the "he said, she said" thing
it's a great way to read in a fanfic heheh


Thanks. I posted up the next chapter.
Hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 5 is actually on progress. But I don't want to post all the chapters I've done at once.
So yeah.


heheh ur welcome!
it was kawaii!
i'll wait until u post it up ^^
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PART3


She said….

Aya was picked by her classmates to be their leader for the school festival. And we all know how stressful a school festival can bring.

Aya: Moooou. I’m so tired. I can’t believe they picked me to be the leader for the school festival. Sooo tired~
Michiko: Yes, it’s tiring to be pretty, neeeeh?
Aya: Shut up now. I’m not what you think I am. I mean, I don’t even have time for hearing confessions from guys I don’t even know.
Michiko: I understand. But, Aya, really. Don’t you like anyone right now? I mean, you’ve been wasting 3 months of your last year in junior high without a boyfriend. You’ve got to have a love life, girl.
Aya: I’m not thinking about those things right now ‘cause the only thing I could think of is the school festival. Well, anyway, I’ve got to get going. We have a meeting.
(Aya stands up….Yuto and Yama-chan just entered the classroom)
Yama-chan: Oh? Nakashima-san, it must be hard to be a leader, neh? Gomen ne for also voting for you. But, I’m confident that you could do it. Neh, Yuto?
Yuto: O-Oh. Gambatte. (blushes)
Aya: U-Un. Arigatou na, Yamada-kun, Nakajima-kun. Sore jaa.
(Aya heads outside… “I’ve got to do my best!”)

The school festival….
(Everyone’s on work… Maid cafes, horror house, food booths, etc.)
(Aya and her class are in charge of photobooth for lovers)
Aya: (sending fliers) Please go to our love-love photo booth at the 1-B classroom. Capture your hearts’ passion. Enjoy! (sends another flier and repeated the same words)
Michiko: Aya! Aya! We need help here!
Aya: I’m coming. (walking toward Michiko.... sends out a flier and repeated the same words)
Aya: What’s wrong?
Michiko: Well, there’s no problem. Just that…. Hey! Say! JUMP is here!!! Kyaa~!
Aya: Michiko-san, Michiko-san. Calm down.
Michiko: Who can calm down when you get to see 10 hott guys! Kyaa~!
Aya: Well, you see 2 of them every single day. (laughs)
Michiko: Oh. You’re right. (laughs) Buuuut, it really is awesome. Nakajima-kun and Yamada-kun might be busy right now. A lot of girls are squealing there. (laughs)
Aya: (sighs) Well, don’t be too much of a fangirl and work, okay? We need a lot of customers and profits. Remember, I’m going to be blamed if this won’t turn out to be successful.
Michiko: Hai, hai. (walks away)
Aya: (sighs… “Well, that’s Michiko for you. [chuckles]”…turns around, and found Hey! Say! JUMP XD….”Oh no. This is not happening to me. How embarrassing! Should I hide? No. It’ll be obvious that I’m avoiding them. Act normal, act normal.”….spots a couple and sends out fliers) Please go to our love-love photo booth at the 1-B classroom. Capture your hearts’ passion. Enjoy! (keeps on sending out fliers… Yama-chan and Yuto are starting to go her way, followed by the other members…..”Yappe. I want to disappear.”)
Yama-chan: Nakashima-san, it must be hard to send out fliers. Do you want us to help?
Aya: Ah. No, no. I’ll do this by myself.
Yuto: It’s really alright. We’ll all help. Ah! I’ll introduce you to them. Etooo. Takaki-kun, Hikaru-kun, Yabu-kun, Inoo-kun, Dai-chan, Chii, Keito and Ryutaro. Minna, This is Nakashima-san.
Aya: Ha-hajimemashite. Nakashima Aya desu. (bows)
Takaki: Eehhhhh.. Masaka…..
Yuto: A-ANO! Let us help you, onegaishimasu! (bows)
Aya: Eh. Don’t do that. Raise your head. Okay, I understand. I’ll let you guys help.
Yuto: A-Arigatou. (gets the fliers and gave them out to the other members)
Aya: (“Hmmm.. Yuto surprised me. I didn’t know he wanted to gave out fliers that badly. [chuckles] Kawaii.”)
Yama-chan: What are you chuckling about?
Aya: Eh? Ah. It’s nothing.
Yama-chan: Hmmmm… Have you gone to the classroom? Do you want to check what’s happening there?
Aya: Un.
Yama-chan: Let’s go.
(They walked away…Aya heard the HSJ members giving out fliers… “How funny. [chuckles]”)
Yama-chan: You really like chuckling to yourself.
Aya: Ah. Gomen ne.
Yama-chan: (laughs) You’re funny.
Aya: Hidoi. (laughs)



He said….

Yuto has always balanced school and work. And, just now they released a new single. Plus, he’s going to have a new drama. It’s really hard for Yuto. But, he feels that he can’t afford to skip school because……

Yuto: Neh, Yama-chan? Should I confess to Nakashima-san?
Yama-chan: If you’re ready for her answer, whether it’s yes or no, then I guess you should.
Yuto: Hmmm... I think I’m not yet ready, neh? (laughs)
Yama-chan: I think so, too. (laughs)
(Reaches the class door… Yuto sees Aya walking out the same door where they are….”Ahhh… I’m definitely NOT ready.”)
Yama-chan: Oh? Nakashima-san, it must be hard to be a leader, neh? Gomen ne for also voting for you. But, I’m confident that you could do it. Neh, Yuto?
Yuto: O-Oh. Gambatte. (He’s positive that he blushed…”Baka. You can’t blush.”)
Aya: U-Un. Arigatou na, Yamada-kun, Nakajima-kun. Sore jaa.
(Aya heads outside)
Yuto: (whispers) I really am not ready.
Yama-chan: (laughs…whispers back) Baka.

Shoot….
Yama-chan: Neh! Minna! Are you guys free on Saturday?
Takaki: I don’t have a date on that day. So, I’m free.
Yabu: My parents are going out so, I guess I’m free, too.
Hikaru: I’m also free on that day.
Inoo: Our test just ended so I’m pretty much free.
Daiki: I can skip school for whatever that’s happening.
Ryutaro: I don’t have to baby sit Shintaro so I’m free.
Keito: I don’t have my gym schedule on Saturday, so I’m free.
Chii: I’m also free.
Yama-chan: Good. So, you’re all free. Do you guys want to go to our school festival?
Takaki: Okay. I’ll see cute junior high girls then.
Yabu, Hikaru, Inoo: I’ll go.
Daiki: I can skip school for that.
Ryutaro: I’ll ask my mom.
Keito and Chii: Okay.
Yuto: Eh? You’re all going? (“Yappe. This was what I was afraid of.”)
Takaki: Ehhhhh…. I think I know what you’re thinking. You don’t want us to see the cute girl you like. Hmmmm… Yuto-kun is being cold.
(Everyone laughs)
Yuto: It’s not like that. Fine, you can go. I’ll even introduce you to her!
Yama-chan: Yosh~! It’s decided then! Let’s go to the school festival!
Everyone: OH!
(This is SO Gokusen! Forgive me.)

The school festival….
(“Okay. So, I have to act cool at ALL TIMES. Or else, I’ll look stupid. Yosh~!”)
(They met up in the train station)
Takaki: I’m ready to give out my mail to cute junior high girls.
Chii: Which mail? You have tons of mails. (laughs)
Takaki: Shut up, chibi. (laughs)
Chii: Hidoi yo, Takaki-kun. (laughs)
Yabu: Can you stop that? You’re getting people’s attentions.
Takaki and Chii: Gume, Kaa-chan. (chuckles)
(They reached Yama-chan and Yuto’s school)
Hikaru: Eh? It’s a nice school. It’s not that big but it’s really presentable. Almost like a private school.
Inoo: I agree to that.
Yama-chan: So, do you guys want to walk around or go to our classroom?
Daiki: Wait. What are you guys doing for the school festival?
Yuto: It’s a love-love photo booth. The girls decided on it and the guys too with girlfriends. (chuckles)
Takaki: Soooo….Do you want to have one too, Yuto-chan? (laughs)
Yuto: Shut up.
(Girls squealing has started)
(“Well, this is our life. [sighs]”)
(After a long walk, Yuto has finally spotted where Aya is. She is talking to her friend, Michiko)
Yama-chan: Eh? There’s Nakashima-san. Well, she’s the leader of our class.
Takaki: Ehhhh… Suge kawaii. I should give my mail to her later.
Yuto: You can’t. Because, that’s her.
Takaki: EH?! REALLY? Hmmm… Nice Yuto. Nice taste! But still….I should give her my mail in case you chicken out on confession to her. (laughs)
Yuto: Shut up. (blushes)
Takaki: Yuto-chan's blushing. Yuto-chan, kawaii~ (laughs)
Yama-chan: Let’s go to her, neh Yuto?
Yuto: O-Oh. (“This is it. I should act cool at ALL TIMES”… Michiko left and Aya turned. He was pretty sure she saw them but Yuto thinks she just wants to do her job and not bother calling for them. “Sasuga!”)
Aya: (sending out fliers) Please go to our love-love photo booth at the 1-B classroom. Capture your hearts’ passion. Enjoy!
Yama-chan: Yo, Nakashima-san, it must be hard to send out fliers. Do you want us to help?
Aya: Ah. No, no. I’ll do this by myself.
Yuto: It’s really alright. We’ll all help. (“Act cool, Yuto”) Ah! I’ll introduce you to them. Etooo. Takaki-kun, Hikaru-kun, Yabu-kun, Inoo-kun, Dai-chan, Chii, Keito and Ryutaro. Minna, This is Nakashima-san.
Aya: Ha-hajimemashite. Nakashima Aya desu. (bows)
Takaki: Eehhhhh.. Masaka…..
(“Yappe. I know exactly what he will say! Takaki, you are so dead later!”)
Yuto: A-ANO! Let us help you, onegaishimasu! (bows… “Argh. Goodbye, my cool self.”)
Aya: Eh. Don’t do that. Raise your head. Okay, I understand. I’ll let you guys help.
Yuto: A-Arigatou. (gets the fliers and gave them out to the other members…”How embarrassing.”)
(Yuto was sure he heard Aya chuckle…”Mooouu. I bet she thinks I’m such a weird guy. DAAAAMMEEE!”)
Yama-chan: What are you chuckling about?
Aya: Eh? Ah. It’s nothing.
Yama-chan: Hmmmm… Have you gone to the classroom? Do you want to check what’s happening there?
Aya: Un.
Yama-chan: Let’s go.
(They walked away…”Eh? Yama-chan’s with her? Mou. Yama-chaaan.”)


Wait for the next part of the school festival.
I guarantee you a roller coaster ride chapter!

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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ AWESOME!!
IT'S SOOOOO KUTE!!!!!
i like the "he said, she said" thing
it's a great way to read in a fanfic heheh


Thanks. I posted up the next chapter.
Hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 5 is actually on progress. But I don't want to post all the chapters I've done at once.
So yeah.


heheh ur welcome!
it was kawaii!
i'll wait until u post it up ^^


I just posted part 3.
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ AWESOME!!
IT'S SOOOOO KUTE!!!!!
i like the "he said, she said" thing
it's a great way to read in a fanfic heheh


Thanks. I posted up the next chapter.
Hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 5 is actually on progress. But I don't want to post all the chapters I've done at once.
So yeah.


heheh ur welcome!
it was kawaii!
i'll wait until u post it up ^^


I just posted part 3.


waaahhh thnk you!! yuto kawai as always hehhe
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can't wait for more...
yuto is so cute~ =)
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This chapter is my FAVORITE…so far. AND THERE’S A BONUS! YAMA-CHAN’S POINT-OF-VIEW! WOOHOO!

Chapter 4

School Festival


She said…

I never thought I would feel like this. I never thought it was you… all along. But, who exactly are you?

Michiko: Oh. Aya. Yamada-kun. Ehhh? Do you want to take a love-love photo together?
Aya: No. We just wanted to check on….
Yamada: Okay.
Aya: EH?
Yamada: We’ll take a photo together.
Michiko: Right on. Just wait. You’ll be the next one. (talks to the couple in line) Can they cut in line? He’s Yamada Ryosuke of Hey! Say! JUMP anyway. Plus, this girl with him is our class representative.
Couple: Okay.
Aya: What are you doing?
Yamada: Well, I just want to have a souvenir of my last school festival in junior high.
Aya: Then, take it with someone else. (walks away)
Yamada: (pulls her) But it has to be you.
Aya: Eh?

I don’t know what I’m feeling right now. I don’t know why my heart is beating. All I know is that when he said those words, I felt his sincerity. But, I don’t know. What should I do?

Purikura machine: Ichi, ni, san---CHISU! (flash)
Yamada: (laughs) Your face looks too serious.
Aya: Ah. Gume.
Purikura machine: Ichi…
Yamada: Smile. (laughs)
Aya: Un.
Purikura machine: CHISU! (flash)
Yamada: Okay. Let’s get this printed. Hmmm… I like the last photo. It’s the only picture where you’re smiling.
Aya: Gomen ne.
Yamada: (laughs) What are you apologizing for?
Aya: Gomen ne.
Yamada: (laughs) Here! (hands her the picture)
Aya: Arigatou.
Yamada: Arigatou, Nakashima-san. It was fun. (smiles)
Aya: It was fun, too. Arigatou. (smiles faintly)

For the whole time we were together, my heart just won’t stop beating. And I don’t think it’s because I like him. Maybe it’s because I’m scared. Scared of what he will say next. For all I know, this is not like me.

(both went out of the classroom)
(the members came)

Yamada: Oh! Kochi, kochi!
Takaki: Where were you guys? (to Aya) We sent out all the fliers already. (winks)
Aya: Ah! Arigatou. (smiles)
Yuto: A-ano. Nakashima-san. Do you want to go to the haunted house?
Aya: Ah. Un. It’s alright.
Yuto: With me?
Aya: Okay.

I didn’t want to run away. I wasn’t running away. It’s just that, I think this guy was interesting. He’s always tense but I think there’s more to him than that.


(leaves the members)
Yuto: Ano. Are you scared of haunted houses?
Aya: I don’t know. I haven’t been to one.
Yuto: EH? Hontou?
Aya: (laughs) Un.
Yuto: I never thought that.

All the while, we kept silent. A silent connection, I thought. I was calm but excited. And everytime he opens his mouth to say something, I just want to laugh.


Yuto: We’re next. I’m so excited. (laughs)
Aya: (laughs) Me too. It’ll be my first time. I’m getting nervous.
Guy: NEXT! Enjoy, be frightened and come again.

(went inside the dark room)
Yuto: (held Aya’s hand)
Aya: Eh?
Yuto: I-It’s not going to be scary anymore.

At that time, I felt safe being protected by his grip. But the moment he held my hand, I thought my heart wasn’t safe anymore. I got more confused. What should I do?

My first time going to a haunted house was unforgettable. I got scared by people I know were just dressed like monsters. I never thought I was scared of these things. But his hand never left mine. His grip tightened whenever it got scary for me. And loosened up when he felt I’ve already calmed down. And the moment he let go of my hand, I felt something was not right anymore. My heart was beating so fast. Not like the time when I was with Yamada-kun. This was not the same. It was really different. It was the first time I felt I knew him before. It was like déjà vu. It was like I’ve been longing for this. And then I knew.


Aya: A-arigatou, Nakajima-kun.
Yuto: I-It’s alright. Are you okay?
Aya: Yeah. Thank you.
Yuto: How was it? It was your first time, right?
Aya: It wasn’t scary. (smiles)
Yuto: I thought so, too. It wasn’t scary for me too. (laughs)
Aya: (laughs)

(the members came)
Hikaru: Oi! We wanted to go to the haunted house too. But I think you guys are already done.
Chinen: Mou. I still want to go.
Keito: Yeah me too. Do you guys want to go again with us?
Yuto: We’ve been through a lot. So, I don’t think I want to go again. Do you still want to go Nakashima-san?
Aya: No, thank you. It was enough going once.
But my only reason was that I wanted to be with him for a little longer. And I realized that I’m starting to understand what I’m feeling.

Yabu: Well then. Let’s go. I want to see the haunted house too.
Daiki: The one who will scream first will treat us ice cream, okay?
Takaki: Game on!
Yamada: (to Yuto and Aya) Can I just hang out with you guys?
Takaki: Don’t be a coward, Yama-chan. Come on.
Aya: It’s worth a try. (smiles)
Yamada: Uh… if you say so. Then, I’ll go.
(the members left)

Yuto: Do you want to go to somewhere?
Aya: Hmmm… Cherry blossom tree. The one beside the tennis court.

I never thought I would feel like this. I never thought it was you… all along. But who exactly are you?
Nakajima Yuto.



He said….

I’ve always liked you. Ever since the first time I saw you. You’re irreplaceable in my heart… always will be. And it’s still a mystery to me why. But I want that mystery to be unveiled. You’re my mystery.

Ryutaro: Yutoooo. Are we done yet?
Yuto: It’ll be done once you’ve given out all those fliers and stop whining.
Yabu: Yuto, all kids are whiners. (laughs)
Ryutaro: Hidoi.
Takaki: (talking to girls) So, just mail me. (gives out his card and the flier) I’ll be waiting. (winks)
Girls: KYAA~! XD
Daiki: (sighs) Takaki has done it again.
Hikaru: He’s like a host. (laughs)
(Everyone laughs)
Takaki: What’s so funny? Am I missing out something?
Everyone: Nothing.
Takaki: You guys always say that when you’re making fun of me.
Inoo: We weren’t. (chuckles)
Yuto: Okay. So is everyone done?
Ryutaro: Wait. Just one more. (gives it out to the ice cream vendor) Once you’re done selling your yummy ice cream, go here with your girlfriend or your crush.
Yuto: Yosh. Let’s look for Yama-chan and Nakashima-san.
(they start walking and looking for Aya and Yamada)

Takaki: Neh Yuto. When do you plan on confessing?
Yuto: (blushes) Eh? What?
Takaki: Confession. A lot of guys have probably confessed to her, right? You might as well make your move before she gets snatched away by a guy. If I were you, I would have confessed by now.
Yuto: We’re different.
Takaki: No one’s different when you like someone so much. Are you scared of being rejected?
Yuto: O-Of course.
Yabu: If you get rejected, it only means that there’s someone much better for you.
Yuto: I don’t think there’s someone much better than her.
Chinen: Awww. That was so sweet. I want to cry.
Hikaru: Don’t worry Chii. My shoulders are free. You can cry. (hugs Chii)
(laughs)

Inoo: Ah. There they are.
Yamada: Oh! Kochi, kochi!

When I saw Yama-chan and her together, I thought they suit each other very well. It made me feel jealous. I didn’t like that feeling. How can I feel like that to my best friend? And then I realized two things. I realized how much she meant to me. How crazy I am for her. How much time I’ve wasted just looking at her from afar. I realized I should tell her how I feel. If not today then tomorrow. I didn’t think of the worst scenarios anymore. I just felt it was time.

Takaki: Where were you guys? (to Aya) We sent out all the fliers already. (winks)
Aya: Ah! Arigatou. (smiles)
This is my chance, I thought.
Yuto: A-ano. Nakashima-san. Do you want to go to the haunted house?
Aya: Ah. Un. It’s alright.
Yuto: With me?
Aya: Okay.

(leaves the members)
Yuto: Ano. Are you scared of haunted houses?
Aya: I don’t know. I haven’t been to one.
Yuto: EH? Hontou?
Aya: (laughs) Un.
Yuto: I never thought that.

When she agreed to go with me, I felt really happy. Like I could laugh for an hour. I kept silent because, if I kept on talking, I might laugh from being overjoyed. It was crazy, I know. But, seriously, I was already crazy.

Yuto: We’re next. I’m so excited. (laughs)
And so, I did laugh.
Aya: (laughs) Me too. It’ll be my first time. I’m getting nervous.
Guy: NEXT! Enjoy, be frightened and come again.

When the guy shouted “Next!”, I decided to hold her hand. “If I can’t protect her here, how can I protect her in worse times?”, I thought. I should take the lead and go through the hard path. So that when it’s her turn to go to the same path, it wouldn’t be hard anymore. Because I’ve already made it easy for her.

(went inside the dark room)
Yuto: (held Aya’s hand)
Aya: Eh?
Yuto: I-It’s not going to be scary anymore.

At that time, my heart was beating so fast. I even thought my ribs got fractured. I didn’t mind it. I was on-guard. I wanted to protect her badly. I wanted to make her anxiety to go away since it was her first time. Although there were times I also got scared, I didn’t mind it. And then I realized, “She is important to me now”.

I didn’t know what her first time in the haunted house was like. But I did all I could to make it memorable and not frightening. I tightened up my grip whenever I heard her whimper. To make it go away and make her calm again. And I loosened up my grip whenever I saw her smile back at me when I checked on her. Letting go of her hand was hard. She was too important. My heart could have stopped for a moment. I felt it was getting so tired. I was getting tired. My heart couldn’t calm down even for a bit. And then I knew.
“I have to confess to her today. It’s now or never.”


(went out of the room)
Aya: A-arigatou, Nakajima-kun.
Yuto: I-It’s alright. Are you okay?
Aya: Un. Daijobu.
Yuto: How was it? It was your first time, right?
Aya: It wasn’t scary. (smiles)
That smile was so beautiful I almost had to gasp for air.
Yuto: I thought so, too. It wasn’t scary for me too. (laughs)
Aya: (laughs)

(the members came)
Hikaru: Oi! We wanted to go to the haunted house too. But I think you guys are already done.
Chinen: Mou. I still want to go.
Keito: Yeah me too. Do you guys want to go again with us?
I thought this was my chance to have her alone with me. To confess to her.
Yuto: We’ve been through a lot. So, I don’t think I want to go again. Do you still want to go Nakashima-san?
Aya: No, thank you. It was enough going once.
Yabu: Well then. Let’s go. I want to see the haunted house too.
Daiki: The one who will scream first will treat us ice cream, okay?
Takaki: Game on!
Yamada: (to Yuto and Aya) Can I just hang out with you guys?
Takaki: Don’t be a coward, Yama-chan. Come on.
Aya: It’s worth a try. (smiles)
Yamada: Uh… if you say so. Then, I’ll go.
(the members left)

That time, I was pretty sure Yama-chan knew what I was going to do. And I was sure that he liked her too. It was not because I was betraying him that I wanted to confess to her. It was because I didn’t think I could hide what I was feeling any longer. I’m sorry, Yama-chan.


Yuto: Do you want to go to somewhere?
Aya: Hmmm… Cherry blossom tree. The one beside the tennis court.

I’ve always liked you. Ever since the first time I saw you. You’re irreplaceable in my heart… always will be. And it’s still a mystery to me why. But I want that mystery to be unveiled. You’re my mystery.
Nakashima Aya.

BONUS!

Yamada’s point-of-view

Yama-chan said…

I actually like her. I never thought I could be this attached to her for so little a time. She hit me like a bullet train. It was unexpected. It wasn’t planned. It was too fast. And I thought maybe I have a chance. Then I knew, I could be with you.

Michiko: Oh. Aya. Yamada-kun. Ehhh? Do you want to take a love-love photo together?
Aya: No. We just wanted to check on….
And maybe this was it. My chance.
Yamada: Okay.
Aya: EH?
Yamada: We’ll take a photo together.
Michiko: Right on. Just wait. You’ll be the next one. (talks to the couple in line) Can they cut in line? He’s Yamada Ryosuke of Hey! Say! JUMP anyway. Plus, this girl with him is our class representative.
Couple: Okay.
Aya: What are you doing?
Yamada: Well, I just want to have a souvenir of my last school festival in junior high.
Aya: Then, take it with someone else. (walks away)
Yamada: (pulls her) But it has to be you.
Aya: Eh? (blushes)

It had to be her. Really. Although I was not sure if my feelings are strong enough, I wanted to take my chances. I was scared. Of being with her and losing my friendship with Yuto, or if I really don’t like her. I really didn’t know the reason why I was scared.

Purikura machine: Ichi, ni, san---CHISU! (flash)
Yamada: (laughs) Your face looks too serious.
Aya: Ah. Gume.
Purikura machine: Ichi…
Yamada: Smile. (laughs)
Aya: Un.
Purikura machine: CHISU! (flash)
Yamada: Okay. Let’s get this printed. Hmmm… I like the last photo. It’s the only picture where you’re smiling.
Aya: Gomen ne.
Yamada: (laughs) What are you apologizing for?
Aya: Gomen ne.
Yamada: (laughs) Here! (hands her the picture)
Aya: Arigatou.
Yamada: Arigatou, Nakashima-san. It was fun. (smiles)
Aya: It was fun, too. Arigatou. (smiles faintly)

After I made a hint that I liked her, she was acting strange. She wasn’t herself and it made it hard for her to smile. I thought she was scared. Scared of my feelings for her. Then I realized, she doesn’t like me that way. But the question is, do I like her that way?

(both went out of the classroom)
(the members came)

Yamada: Oh! Kochi, kochi!
Takaki: Where were you guys? (to Aya) We sent out all the fliers already. (winks)
Aya: Ah! Arigatou. (smiles)
Yuto: A-ano. Nakashima-san. Do you want to go to the haunted house?
Aya: Ah. Un. It’s alright.
Yuto: With me?
Aya: Okay.

She was avoiding me. It was awkward for her to be with me. But, surprisingly, I wasn’t hurt or offended. And I realized that my fondness for her was shallow. And maybe Yuto’s fondness for her was deep. And maybe he was not fond of her anymore. Maybe he loves her already. I was defeated. Completely.

Inoo: YAMADA!
Yamada: Eh? Nani? Nani?
Inoo: I was asking you where the maid’s café is.
Yamada: Oh. Warui. Let’s go there.
Daiki: Are you okay? You were spacing out.
Yamada: (smiles) I’m okay.

(enters the maid’s café)
Girls: Irrashaimase!
Girls: KYAA~!!! IT’S HEY! SAY! JUMP~!!!
Girl 1: Welcome to our maid’s café. Your server would be Mari-pyon. Eh? Where’s Mari? Ah. Gomenasai. Wait. MAAAAARRRRIIIIII!!!
Mari: Hai hai. Tsk. I don’t like wearing these. It’s uncomfortable.
Girl 1: Stop complaining. We have guests. They’re Hey! Say! JUMP. Ah. Gomen for the wait. She’s your server, Mari-pyon.
Mari: Stop calling me that, it’s annoying.
Girl 1: Well then. I’m leaving them to you, okay?
Mari. Hai hai. Where do you guys want to sit?
Takaki: Hey. You’re really cute. Plus I like your cool-I-don’t-care attitude. Do you want my card? Mail me.
Mari: Sorry. I don’t mail guys I don’t know. So are you gonna pick seats or what?
Yamada: Take us to any seat you like. Please. (chuckles)
She’s too straightforward. And for all I knew, I almost forgot my uncertainties.
Mari: Okay.
(starts walking)
Mari: Here. All 9 of you can sit here.
Yamada: (smiles) Thanks.
Mari: It’s what I do. What are your orders?
Takaki: You.
Mari: I believe there is no “you” in our menu. Please only pick something on the menu.
Yabu and Hikaru: Ooooooooooh. Takaki got dumped!!!! (laugh)
Mari: Shut up. I’ll ask this for the last time. What are your orders?
Yamada: (stands up) Gomenasai for the troubles. (slightly bows) Just give us iced coffee and strawberry cake.
Mari: Okay. I’ll get your orders now. Thank you.

That girl caught my eye. People always say that good things take time. But it seemed that great things happen in a blink of an eye. I never believed fate or destiny. I thought all things are planned thoroughly. But I was wrong. Love is not a plan. It just comes.

(about to go out the maid’s café)
Mari: Thank you for visiting our maid’s café.
Takaki: Eh? You changed your clothes.
Mari: I wasn’t comfortable with those heels and skirt.
Takaki: You look really really cute with jeans.
Mari: You’re like a host. (laughs)
(everyone laughs… even Takaki)
Takaki: You are the first girl to tell me that. (chuckles)
Mari: There’s always a first to everything.
Yamada: Who are you?
I wanted to know so badly. The identity of this unknown girl.
Mari: Eh? Katou Mari. Class 3-C.
Yamada: Our classrooms are just next to each other but I never saw you.
Mari: Maybe because there are a lot of girls around you. Well, I’ve got to go now. Jaa.

When she said that, it stabbed my heart. Not in a bad kind of way. She caught me off-guard just when I was dejected. And for the first time, my heart beat. And it was for a girl I barely knew.

Takaki: That girl was something.
Yamada: She is. (laughs) Let’s go to the haunted house.

“I’m looking forward to seeing you again”, I thought. And my mind kept on chuckling… in unison with my heart.

(the members saw Yuto and Aya)
Hikaru: Oi! We wanted to go to the haunted house too. But I think you guys are already done.
Chinen: Mou. I still want to go.
Keito: Yeah me too. Do you guys want to go again with us?
Yuto: We’ve been through a lot. So, I don’t think I want to go again. Do you still want to go Nakashima-san?
Aya: No, thank you. It was enough going once.
Yabu: Well then. Let’s go. I want to see the haunted house too.
Daiki: The one who will scream first will treat us ice cream, okay?
Takaki: Game on!
And it hit me. Yuto’s going to confess. I was back to my misery just as fast as I almost forgot about it. I didn’t know why I did it, but I tried to interfere. Maybe because I was afraid for Yuto. I didn’t want him to get rejected.
Yamada: (to Yuto and Aya) Can I just hang out with you guys?
Takaki: Don’t be a coward, Yama-chan. Come on.
Aya: It’s worth a try. (smiles)
Yamada: Uh… if you say so. Then, I’ll go.

When I saw her smile and heard the tone of her voice, I knew. She wouldn’t reject him. She was happy. Her face was flushed and she was glowing. They were glowing. Both of them. And while watching their backs, I thought they suit each other perfectly. Like a puzzle piece just made for each other. And I was happy.

And it got to me. I should also be happy. And I ran. I didn’t know where I was going. My feet and my heart just led me to her.


Girl: Jaa ne, Mari.
Mari: Jaa. (walks away)
Yamada: Katou-san!
(Mari looks back)

When she looked back, I saw hope… and a face of familiar girl I barely knew. I was gasping for air. Because I ran all the way for her, or because my heart was beating so fast. I really don’t know. All I know is that she caught my eye… and my heart.

I actually like her. I never thought I could be this attached to her for so little a time. She hit me like a bullet train. It was unexpected. It wasn’t planned. It was too fast. And I thought maybe I have a chance. Then I knew, I could be with you.

Katou Mari.


What will happen to these people?
Love is really not a plan. Love just happens to be there in just a snap
DO YOU WANT TO INCLUDE YAMADA'S POINT-OF-VIEW PERMANENTLY?
Or DO YOU WANT ME TO MAKE A FANFIC OF YAMADA AND MARI?
I'll be waiting. So are you.
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summerstar wrote:


pafoua wrote:


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pafoua wrote:

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ AWESOME!!
IT'S SOOOOO KUTE!!!!!
i like the "he said, she said" thing
it's a great way to read in a fanfic heheh


Thanks. I posted up the next chapter.
Hope you enjoy it.
Chapter 5 is actually on progress. But I don't want to post all the chapters I've done at once.
So yeah.


heheh ur welcome!
it was kawaii!
i'll wait until u post it up ^^


I just posted part 3.


waaahhh thnk you!! yuto kawai as always hehhe


I posted chapter 4.
It's my favorite chapter so far. I hope you'll like it.
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can't wait for more...
yuto is so cute~ =)


I posted a new chapter.
It's my favorite chapter so far. I hope you'll like it.
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april230 wrote:

can't wait for more...
yuto is so cute~ =)


I posted a new chapter.
It's my favorite chapter so far. I hope you'll like it.


I WILL NOT LIKE IT!!!





I WILL LOVE IT!!!
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summerstar wrote:


april230 wrote:

can't wait for more...
yuto is so cute~ =)


I posted a new chapter.
It's my favorite chapter so far. I hope you'll like it.


I WILL NOT LIKE IT!!!





I WILL LOVE IT!!!


HAHA! Thanks. A lot of it.
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