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Why is Life so Boring???
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Posted 12/4/08 , edited 12/4/08


Feedback and comment please. This is my first story, so please be nice
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clap clap clap!!! that was awesome for a first story!!
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i like it is there another part later on
Posted 12/5/08
It's great! The story i mean. Contiune writing! I wanna read more!

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yeah i've written quite a few parts, just gotta copy them into a post, heres chapter 2

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Your story is really good, i was reading it earlier on your profile, and i was completely engrossed with it.
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thank you i'm flattered! i always seemed to think that there is a lot of loopholes i keep missing! its like i'm writing then get engrossed in it myself, then forget to write bits in!!! hehe lol but thankyou anyway, i'll post 3 in a second
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excuse small bad language, it only happens sometimes in the story, and if you want i will try to cut it out before i post, so just tell me on here and i will!!!
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Nope, it's fine, as long as it isn't excessive or anything
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coolio, but if anyone wants me to change it, i'm fine with that.
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Posted 12/5/08

Sunny_Loo-Loo wrote:



Feedback and comment please. This is my first story, so please be nice

this is ginann and heres ur pic

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Posted 12/5/08
that was too awesomeness
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Posted 12/6/08
anyone want number 4 then???
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Posted 12/6/08
I DOO! ^_^
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here it is then!!!! happy reading!!!!

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