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I like Robin better then the other guys ^^ I like his personality better ^^ Is Robin and that other pirate guy the same people?!?!


No,Actually Robins very playfull,and acts like a complete numbscall.And you'll see,hes a total flirt with al kinds of girls,including Alice.But hes actually vry clever,and dangerouse so many pirates on his ship are scare to not listen to him lol But hes actually going to be a love rival (I think anyway) I wanna make Scars get jelouse muhahaha!!


well since scars ganna get her then who will robin end up with?


hehe thats only for me to know,and u to find out (<---- actually has no idea how yet) lol :D


he heh i hope he doesnt end up alone


hhmm I got an idea just now ^-^ though some readers may not like,but it'll be a surprise.Either way it'll some how work out theres probly going to be like 2 more sequals to this story actually lol cuz the way alice thinks is the way I think :P


i wish i knew what you where talking about
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sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:


sgurlrox67 wrote:


kyahikaru wrote:

I like Robin better then the other guys ^^ I like his personality better ^^ Is Robin and that other pirate guy the same people?!?!


No,Actually Robins very playfull,and acts like a complete numbscall.And you'll see,hes a total flirt with al kinds of girls,including Alice.But hes actually vry clever,and dangerouse so many pirates on his ship are scare to not listen to him lol But hes actually going to be a love rival (I think anyway) I wanna make Scars get jelouse muhahaha!!


well since scars ganna get her then who will robin end up with?


hehe thats only for me to know,and u to find out (<---- actually has no idea how yet) lol :D


he heh i hope he doesnt end up alone


hhmm I got an idea just now ^-^ though some readers may not like,but it'll be a surprise.Either way it'll some how work out theres probly going to be like 2 more sequals to this story actually lol cuz the way alice thinks is the way I think :P


i wish i knew what you where talking about


LOL!!!!You will later on (or some day XP )
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Chapter 4-Job:Crews Enjoyment

It had been about an hour since I had woken up to find that I had somehow became a toy for all the crew

And so far I think I had takin it quit well

Well pretty good for someone who had just been kidnapped from my hometown

I think I was getting good at copping with the whole kidnapping thing

This was going to be my 2nd kidnapping streek yet

Maybe I could write a book after the 5th time

Knowing me I'd probly make it to a 10th kidnapping streek

Even the crew so far thought I was doing pretty good with it all

Not to brag or anything,but most nobleists would be freaking out at the momment

But so far I had come up with a solution to it all

If I stayed on this ship long enough I could be able to find Scars

I could pick up some information every now and then when we stopped at port (that is if any civilians are alive after there arival and attack)

So I think I'm doing pretty good

"Hey Alice,dance"The pirate named Flor ordered

If he kept this up he really would be ONE with the FLOOR

'for Scars,For Scars'I chanted in my head,grinding my teeth togeather to make a fake smile

"Sure"I said through my teeth

Good thing I was an awful dancer or else this wouldn't work

I slowly began to dance around

Amazingly enough I didn't get dizzy or forget the dance steps,I remembered them

I swung back and forth without a partner but soon relized what I was supposed to be doing

I slowly swung back and forth,closer,and closer towards Flor to the rythm of the ocean waves

And quickly I wammed my hip into him

He grunted and fell to the floor

'Ah..sometimes its good to be a girl.Aspecially with hips'

A fake frown spread across my face

"Oh!I'm ssoo sorry"I apologized

Using the exact same saying as many of the nobleist girls that were my age would say when they 'accidently' bumped into me

All the pirates began to snicker to one another

As Flor sat slumped against a crate

"Damn it"He growled

I finally let out a smirk "Remember to watch all your' backs.After all.I never agreed to this crap and don't DO orders"

They seemed takin aback but soon began to help Flor up and pat him on the back

Or should I say wack his back

"Everyone better get to there stations!Captain is orderin!"

As soon as the pirates heard this they all instantly..ran? to there stations

Waiting for more orders from Robin

Why did they seem so scared by such a comand,from Robin at that!

"AAHH!!Alice hello"I saw Robin wave towards me,grinning like the idiot he was

"Hey Robin"I murmured,walking up the small steps towards the weel of the ship

'Was it just me or did some of the pirates glance over here when I said his name?'

"Alice,I heard your being mean to the rest of the crew!Its not right to tease~"

"Eh?"I raised an eyebrow "I was never the one to agree to joining this ship remember that,so I can do whatever I want"I grummbled

in some was it seemed perfectly true to me

But it didn't seem like that to Robin

For some reason,even though he had that stupid smile pasted over his face he seemed almost scary!

"Alice.Remember what I said You HAVE to.Or else you'll be sorry"He closed his eyes and continued to smile at me

It was like that saying 'cute but deadly'

THOUGH I DIDN'T FIND HIM CUTE OR ANYTHING!!

Actually,it was sort of fun being with him

As a friend though

I looked down at the hard wood deck floor

It was like I were TRULLY staring at something deadly

"What are you looking for?"I asked,chaning the subject

I didn't want to agree to LOSE my freedom of choice

"Oh!I didn't tell you Alice?"He asked

I shook my head,annoyed by how little kidish he acted

"We're looking for the key to ever lasting life"He said smiling happily

"Everylasting...life?"I repeated

"yes!Don't tell me I have to repeate myself mutiple times again Alice"He said sounding annoyed again

My eyes were wide by now

Not even really fazzing from how annoying he was

Scars and everyone on the ship had been living for a long time now because of that

Could he have been looking for Scars then?

"Theres no such thing as that.Are you an idiot Robin?"I grummbled,crossing my arms now

Did they possibly know I knew Scars,that we were lovers

That I had JOINED his crew before because I had sword fighting talents?

If he did

This whole thing could be dangerouse

On the ship of the enemy

"No its true Alice!!"He argued back childishly

"You can go and beleive that but I don't"I growled

He didn't say anything for a few minutes

Neither did I

Had I POSSIBLY been thinking I was friends with both an idiot,and a rival.

And DANGEROUSE rival at most!

"Well I do then"He said,sounding seriouse

I looked up to see his childish happy-go-lucky smile was gone with a MATURE face

A terrifieing mature face

A DANGEROUSE mature face..
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Sry If this wasn't good!!! plz tell if good or not plz ^-^
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I liked it!!!! wooot
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I liked it!!!! wooot


yays!!!I'm so happys!!I wasn't sure if it was good
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I liked it!!!! wooot


yays!!!I'm so happys!!I wasn't sure if it was good :P


trust me it was! i want to know whats ganna happen next now
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I liked it!!!! wooot


yays!!!I'm so happys!!I wasn't sure if it was good :P


trust me it was! i want to know whats ganna happen next now


LOL well,there gonna keep sailing,and stop at some deadly old town were everyone trys to kill them cause there PIRATES,and its like a law to kill them
And to make u happy I'm gonna have some momments with Robin and Alice lol and there sorta gonna learn a bit about one another
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Chapter 5-Danger meets Dangerouse

"Captin,were almost at port!"One of the crew members yelled out

I tried not to look like I was caring

But I wasn't sure weather I pulled it off or not

My head slowly turned to were Robin stood

He stood on the railing of the ship,holding onto rope for support

Though I had to admit,if there hadn't been so many pirates around I would have pushed him off

"Okay,then when we reach port grab your weapons"He ordered

My eyes widened,and without needing to tell my body I marched towards him,grabbing onto his clothes,ready to pull him down

But as I did this,he turned around as fast as lightning not giving me a chance to blink and grabbed my hand that had been holding onto him

He pulled me backwords,jumping off the railing and landing swiftly on his feet.Only to push me farther back,my back slamming into the lookout post pole

It had all happened so fast

My eyes were now wide

I stared at him with big eyes

What?

His eyes were cold and feirce,and...scary?

No Dangerouse

Slowly,as the seconds ticked by his eyes became wide too

The whole ship was now silent

But as Robin slowly began to move,the pirates went back to there duties quickly

Probly as scared as I was to be caught alive looking at the demon

Robin looked me in the eyes with the same mature eyes he had,had on 2 days before.Mature eyes

Eyes that were to mature for his often playful face

His childish face

"Sorry Alice,you shouldn't sneak up on me"He murmured,his eyes cautius

My eyes tight

All I did was nod

This was the first time he had ever really said my name without the 'chan' or 'san'

It was...strange

Even though I had only known him for about 3 days.

And for one short second his eyes proved to show a small bit of sadness

It made my heart stop

He turned around swiftly,not saying another word and walked towards one of his crew members

I stared at the back of his head

I knew he knew I was staring

But I couldn't seem to stop

How had all that happened in less than a minute?

Was he some sort of superhuman?

LATER

The ship slowly neered the island which looked kinda creepy in my opinion

No one had spokin a word about the whole incident that had happened this morning

And I didn't intend on bringing it up

"Alice"I heard a voice say from behind me

I turned around quickly

Not as quickly as Robin but hey,I was still pretty quick

I MAY have been just a LITTLE jelouse of his swift moves..

Kanata stood before me

He leaned against the lookout post as I had

"What is it Kanata?"I asked,amazed that he had even talked to me

"Are you okay?"He asked roafly

Coughing at the end as one of the pirates from a few feet away from us glanced in our direction

"What do you mean?"I asked blackly

"Well,most would be pretty shockin up by the Captain"

I was tookin aback

Could he have POSSIBLY been worried about me?

"Now why would I be scard by that baka"I said,my back and shoulders straight

"Don't lie"He sweatdropped

"I'm not lieing"I growled,throwing my arms in the air

"Well I'll be honest.You've probly noticed everyones always sorta uptight with the captain around right?"He asked

I nodded

"Well thats because hes dangerouse"

No REALLY?I thought sarcastically

"I didn't know"I said sarcastically faking a shocked voice

He rolled his eyes "Alice what I'm saying is,BE CAREFUL"

As he said this he turned his back to me,walking away before I could say another word

He COULDN'T be worried about me right?

I heard a splash in the water as I thought this over

We had reached the port it had seemed

But why were they so FAR away from the island

At least a yard away from it

Why not just port at the island

Not ancur here

Strange...

"Captain ye row boats are ready"One of the pirates yelled from next to one of the row boats

"Good,then lets go.Grab your weapons"I heard Robin say from afare,with the same mature voice as before

Could Kanata have been right about him being dangerouse?

Could he have been faking his whole childish playfull image?

Robin strided towards the small rowboats

Where half the crew were now lined up in

What the heck was I supposed to do while they were gone!?

Robin reached the rowboats FINALLY and glanced in my direction

My eyes widened

His childish face was back

He smiled like an idiot

But somehow,that smile made me feel good?

And made a smile apear on my face too

"Alice-chan,stay on the ship ookkaaayyy??"He yelled

I grinded my teeth togeather

"WHY THE HELL DO I HAVE TO STAY ON THIS DAMN SHIP!!!???"I yelled over to him

Storming towards him

"Because entertainment shouldn't die.You should understand this Alice,after all you lived in a rich house all the time"He said,nodding along with every word he said.His eyes closed

Stupid baka

"WHAT THE HELL!!DON'T USE THAT CRAP ON ME!!I'M NOT EVEN ENTERTAINMENT!!"I roared

The crew sweatdropped

"BYE ALICE-CHAN!!!"He yelled,waving back and forth as the crew followed his mental orders and lowered the boats into the water

"ROBIN!!!!"I yelled,my fist in the air

"ALICE~!!!!"He mimicked me,continuing to wave as he slowly become farther and farther away

Out of my reach...

AH ANOTHER CRAZY THOUGHT!!!

I meant,out of my reach to jump on boared and strangle him.Or to through something at him

Yeah!Thats what I meant!!!

Almost everyone on the ship was gone

All that was left of the crew was some wimpy looking mop guy

And Flor who I could probly beat up now without anyone to stop me

You'd think he'd want more people to look after the ship

What if soeone came to attack

What would wimpy and the Floor do?

Of course,I could beat the crap out of anyone that came to attack

But then I'd just make the guys feel bad,and even wimpier

And it would make me even more less feminit to people

No feminit apeal...

Plus,it wasn't my problem if there stupid ship was stolin

It was there own fault for leaving it in the hands of two of the stupidest pirates I'd ever met

I sat myself down next to the wheel of the ship

Crossing my arms,and tucking it under my chest

How annoyng,and boring..

I couldn't even practice my sword skills here...

Or else they'd know..

I slowly stood up,walking towards the sleeping courters

Deciding to sleep on one of the hamocks that smelled the least compared to all the others

It also wasfarthest away from the dirty looking window were the afternoon sun shoon through

Right now I wanted to be in total darkness...

LATER,LATER...DARK

I awoke to find darkness all around me

The moonlight shone through the small window

Barley noticible

What had wokin me up?

I had been having a good dream

Scars was in it

He had come back for me...

I shook off the overwelming emotion,and the tears that begged to leak out

And swallowed the lump in my throught

I rubbed my eyes,slowly standing up to hear the horrified voices of wimpy,and the Floor

I walked up the small steps,opening the door to find wimpy surronding something...no.Someone?

I walked forward

They looked back at me quickly,showing the terror in there eyes

AND showing me the body that lay before them

The boy looked no younger than 16

He had blood all over his clothes

And many scratches all over his body

He looked at me with terrified eyes

Eyes that showed the fear of the unknown

The fear of death...

I walked towards him,my eyes wide.And my body collapsing at my legs

Falling before the boy

He looked as though he were in great pain

I swallowed yet another lump in my throught

Reaching out to the boy

My hands flowing through his crisp orange hair

Only to find more blood

"Who...?"Was the only word that I could seem to speak at that momment

The pirates stared at me

Floor answered me,his voice giving out "One of our newest members"

I didn't move me eyes from him

"What are you standing around for like idiots!"I gasped out

"Get him some water,and cloths to help slow down the bleeding!"I ordered

They instantly rose from the ground,running to many areas of the ship

Searching for what I asked...rather,ordered for

"Are you okay?"I asked,looking at his wounds

He ignored my question "Who are you?"He asked,his voice barley a whisper

"Alice Dudley"I whispered

You'd think he would have known

I had been on this ship for about 3 days now after all

And it was obviouse to me,that they had all talked about me

His eyes were now slowly seeming to lose couler,and focus

"Are you okay!?"I asked ugently,clasping my hands around his hand

He nodded slightly

"I'm Liam Otomo"He murmured

His voice sounding dry

I nodded,finally allowing tears fall

He was going to die

I wasn't sure he knew it though...

I didn't want to tell him such a horrible thing though

"Please..."He whispered,grasping my hand "Give this to my sister...Lillyanne"He whispered,reaching into the pocket of his shirt

Wincing at yet another wound that was hidden under his clothes

He grasped a small peice of paper in his hands

An envolope

"Tell her...I love her"He winced "And that I'm sorry"He murmured

"Please"He repeated

Tears continued to fall,wettining his,and my face

I nodded

I didn't know why I had agreed to it,but I somehow felt I COULDN'T say no...

"Thank you"He said,finally smiling up at my face

His eyes slowly closed

I heard him take a breath of air,and then...nothing

I leaned down,terrified at what i knew had already happened

My ear touched his chest

Hearing nothing...

My heart thudded against my ribs

He was gone...

I HAD to find this Lillyanne Otomo for him

But where?

I felt running feet from behind me,and saw Flor crouch beside me,ripping the boys clothes off to find even more blood

And a HUGE fresh blood stained scar across his chest

"Looks like they tried to steal his heart"I heard wimpy whisper from beside me.Mortified

"Hes already gone"I whispered "So I'm glad hes not in any more pain"I whispered,clenching the envilope against my heart

Flor,and wimpy nodded,looking over at the dead body known as Liam.

"He said that he had escaped"I heard Flor murmur "And that a whole batch of men,and woman surrounded them with blow darts that could stun them..."He whispered

"And one by one,they ripped the hearts out of them"Wimpy whispered

"How could they...?"

Flor inturupted my horror "Its a law to kill pirates,they despise them"

"Is that why Robin had brought so many men with him,and weapons?"I asked,still in shock

That was why he had tookin so many people

But..that

"Thats like a death sentance!"I gasped out

Slamming my fists on the heard wood deck

We all continued to look over Liam

"Captain needs the information that they have"He murmured,touching his finger tips against Liams scar

My hands tightened into fists as my body shock

Annoyed

Robins playfull,childish face playing in the back of my head

He knew...They had ALL knew...

I swalled hard

Storming towards the wheel of the ship

Tucking the small envolope in a small pocket that I had sewn in one day for a time passer

"What are you-?"

"I'M GOING TO SAVE YOUR DAMN CREW IS WHAT I'M DOING!"
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did you get caught making this?!?! by your mom or something? oh no ><
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lol no,well not really.She came pretty close to the room,plus I was gettin lazy and stopped so I posted.Plus I was scared something would happen once again and the story would be deleted lol
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Chapies finished....Hopes u liked
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nooo! death! for a sec i thouth robin died! waaa
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nooo! death! for a sec i thouth robin died! waaa


hehe nopes ^-^ Just some inicident bystander that was 16 years old,not Robin (I'm making myself look bad here lol)
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nooo! death! for a sec i thouth robin died! waaa


hehe nopes ^-^ Just some inicident bystander that was 16 years old,not Robin (I'm making myself look bad here lol)


oh lol
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