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Hai! I'm winterkiss18, and I'm here to show you a story that I dreamt! I hope you would like it.

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There was an announcement that the 6th Graders were supposed to paint the whole school in exchange for a perfect hundred in their report card. The places that they are to paint is going to be decided by picking a paper. Who will Hashiba Kairi be working with?


"6th graders, please proceed to the school ground." The speaker said.

"What might it be this time?" I asked Mika.
"I don't know, I'm not a fortune teller you know." Mika replied.
"Let's go down and see." I said.

We went down to know what we will do. When we arrived at the bottom floor, students our grade were talking to each other asking what is the call about.


"Dear students, you might be asking why you are here right now. I'll tell you all why. You students of the 6th grade shall paint this old school. You will pick a paper, and whatever you pick shall be your place." The principal said.
"Any questions?" She continued.

A boy raised his hand.


"What's it to us?" He asked.
"You will get a perfect hundred in your card." The principal replied.

Everyone was shocked when they heard it, and their quite irritated mode changed into a big smile mode. Everyone was so excited, including me. They started to pass out papers, and I got one.

"What does yours say?" My friend asked.
"Shine the waterfall." I replied.
"You?" I continued.
"Paint the walls of the hallway white." She replied.
"How unlucky." I said.

"Students start your work now." The principal said.

The students went to their working place, and I too went to my working place. I was being followed by the boy who raised his hand awhile ago.


"Uhm... Why are you following me?" I asked.
"Why the heck should I be following you..?" He replied.
"Well, I don't know." I said.
"I'm off to the waterfall to shine it, and you?" He asked.
"M-me too..." I replied.
"Oh." He said.
"Please take care of me during the painting sessions." I bowed while saying it.
"Hn." He said.

He looked upwards when he said 'hn'. When we arrived on the working place, we started shining the waterfall. The whole time was quiet until I spoke up.

"Why are you staying away from me?" I asked.

Well, it's true whenever I try to go near him to start a conversation, he always moves to another place.

"No I'm not." He replied.
"Yes you are!" I said.
"I said I'm not!" He shouted.
"S-s-sorry..." I apologized.

I went to the opposite side of him, and started working again. Tears were forming in my eyes. I cried.


"Why am I crying..?" I murmured to myself.

I wiped the tears away, but it kept on falling. The boy sat next to me, and he hugged me. I was in complete shock, but my tears dried because I felt so safe in his arms.

"Huh..?" I asked him.
"Sorry... K-Kairi..." He hesitated saying my name, for it will sound rude.
"It's okay." I blushed.
"I ignored you because I love you." He said.
"I...I... Daichi... I love you too." I said.

Yes, I knew him from the start, and I sorta liked him. I hugged him, and then kissed him.... On the cheeks.

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v. nice, keep going, you've got me wanting more!!!
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Sunny_Loo-Loo wrote:

v. nice, keep going, you've got me wanting more!!!


Thanks, but I think it still needs more improvement~ ^~^
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good work im ginann and heres your pic
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It's so cute~ ^~^
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Awww so cute and innocent. I can't wait for more!
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YEAH YEAH i want to hear it all!!!!

i got a pic for you too:
you like? it that one scene...(only at the beach)
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sorry i did somethin wrong... gomei gomei!!!
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clap clap clap!!! awesomeness!!
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Thanks everyone, I'll make a sequel when I have time.
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you better cause that was awesomeness!! XD
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Thanks, but it still needs improvement, ne?
@Sakurachan515: It's nice~! ^~^
Posted 12/7/08
Amazing! Your story is really captivating (and straight forward)! Keep up the good work! GO GO GO! I want to read more!
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Are you gonna write more on both Winter???
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this was good!!! wow make a sequel soon plz!!!
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