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Posted 12/22/08

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when's the deadline? (i didn't check)


December 24, WEDNESDAY


really? i should really read!
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.
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Posted 12/22/08

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o.O Ohhh yay! So do we put the stories onto sepretate forums or put them here??


sry for the late response and ur story was very good and we put them here so dont worry bout it


uhmmz...if my story is too long, is it going to lose marks? Cause. if it's too long and yu get bored of it.. thats going to suck... it's easier to read if you put it on microsoft word =)

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Posted 12/23/08

cinnamon_bunny wrote:


bgirl523 wrote:


Kujin-jump wrote:

o.O Ohhh yay! So do we put the stories onto sepretate forums or put them here??


sry for the late response and ur story was very good and we put them here so dont worry bout it


uhmmz...if my story is too long, is it going to lose marks? Cause. if it's too long and yu get bored of it.. thats going to suck... it's easier to read if you put it on microsoft word =)



i dont mind if its long or not as long as its a story ^^
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Posted 12/23/08 , edited 12/23/08

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Username: cinnaomon_bunny
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^
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Posted 12/23/08

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cinnamon_bunny wrote:


bgirl523 wrote:


Kujin-jump wrote:

o.O Ohhh yay! So do we put the stories onto sepretate forums or put them here??


sry for the late response and ur story was very good and we put them here so dont worry bout it


uhmmz...if my story is too long, is it going to lose marks? Cause. if it's too long and yu get bored of it.. thats going to suck... it's easier to read if you put it on microsoft word =)



i dont mind if its long or not as long as its a story ^^

relee? OKAY. good.
i hope dey like it
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Posted 12/23/08

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cinnamon_bunny wrote:

Username: cinnaomon_bunny
Name: Jessica
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^


Really? Yay! thanks for putting up with it, did you read the epilogue? i'm glad my ending worked X3 is my story bad? it's bad isn't it?

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gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:

Username: cinnaomon_bunny
Name: Jessica
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^


Really? Yay! thanks for putting up with it, did you read the epilogue? i'm glad my ending worked X3 is my story bad? it's bad isn't it?



it's good ^.^!! Kuro ROCKS!! it meant alot, but, you're more important... gaaaaa~~~~ i can't get enough of that
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Ok ah well i'll just put it here ...
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Omgsh! Your bound to win! I LOVE your story! it's really good! 9.5! =)

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Posted 12/23/08

gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:

Username: cinnaomon_bunny
Name: Jessica
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^


Really? Yay! thanks for putting up with it, did you read the epilogue? i'm glad my ending worked X3 is my story bad? it's bad isn't it?



it's good ^.^!! Kuro ROCKS!! it meant alot, but, you're more important... gaaaaa~~~~ i can't get enough of that


nyaaaa!! Thanks so much! XD i'm SOO glad you enjoyed it S2!!

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cinnamon_bunny wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:

Username: cinnaomon_bunny
Name: Jessica
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^


Really? Yay! thanks for putting up with it, did you read the epilogue? i'm glad my ending worked X3 is my story bad? it's bad isn't it?



it's good ^.^!! Kuro ROCKS!! it meant alot, but, you're more important... gaaaaa~~~~ i can't get enough of that


nyaaaa!! Thanks so much! XD i'm SOO glad you enjoyed it S2!!



np ^.^ hope other mods enjoy it as much as i did
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Posted 12/23/08

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cinnamon_bunny wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:

Username: cinnaomon_bunny
Name: Jessica
Pic:

I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^


Really? Yay! thanks for putting up with it, did you read the epilogue? i'm glad my ending worked X3 is my story bad? it's bad isn't it?



it's good ^.^!! Kuro ROCKS!! it meant alot, but, you're more important... gaaaaa~~~~ i can't get enough of that


nyaaaa!! Thanks so much! XD i'm SOO glad you enjoyed it S2!!



np ^.^ hope other mods enjoy it as much as i did


^____^ i hope they do, but i dunno if they're gunna read it or nawt. owellz.
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I'm sure they will cuz, they can't judge if they don't read all

Posted 12/23/08

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Username: cinnaomon_bunny
Name: Jessica
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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


This is really good! Um, 9.43 (lawls)
Posted 12/23/08 , edited 12/23/08

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I think you have a really good story line, but you need to check your vocab. For example, you used your instead of you're and you used the same words alot. I highlighted some of your mistakes. But overall, it was good so um 8.5
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