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Posted 12/23/08

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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


This is really good! Um, 9.43 (lawls)

Really? thanks so much!! I'm sorry it was so long. I'm sure it troubled you to read all that. >__> gomenesai.

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Posted 12/24/08 , edited 12/24/08

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I think you have a really good story line, but you need to check your vocab. For example, you used your instead of you're and you used the same words alot. I highlighted some of your mistakes. But overall, it was good so um 8.5


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So... Who won...? It's closed right, so is it being voted on now? will we be notified if we win?
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Posted 12/27/08

cinnamon_bunny wrote:

So... Who won...? It's closed right, so is it being voted on now? will we be notified if we win?


yeah t is im waitin for the judges to choose >.< and yeah i guess T^T
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cinnamon_bunny wrote:

So... Who won...? It's closed right, so is it being voted on now? will we be notified if we win?


yeah t is im waitin for the judges to choose >.< and yeah i guess T^T


oh still not voted on?? Owells. I'm so excited for the winner lol
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Posted 12/29/08

cinnamon_bunny wrote:


bgirl523 wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:

So... Who won...? It's closed right, so is it being voted on now? will we be notified if we win?


yeah t is im waitin for the judges to choose >.< and yeah i guess T^T


oh still not voted on?? Owells. I'm so excited for the winner lol


well im waitin on one i think >.<
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Posted 12/29/08

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cinnamon_bunny wrote:


bgirl523 wrote:


cinnamon_bunny wrote:

So... Who won...? It's closed right, so is it being voted on now? will we be notified if we win?


yeah t is im waitin for the judges to choose >.< and yeah i guess T^T


oh still not voted on?? Owells. I'm so excited for the winner lol


well im waitin on one i think >.<

ohh, kool. can't wait,

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cinnamon_bunny wrote:

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I did this story for my english class X3 ZOMG... i dunno if i have bad words.. i don't think so.. does darn or stupid count?
i wrote an epilogue but it sucks cause my teacher wouldn't let me write more then 2 pages *cries* it was so rushed and not well written but i hope you enjoy! <--it won't happen =.='' THESE ARE BOTH VERY LONG STORIES. I don't think i would ever win, but i think i'm the 2nd person to enter a story? please read.
"Die Trying"


And if you ACTUALLY want to read on, well heres the "Epilogue" Sappy and romantic, sorry =)

Hope you guys like it.


i read the WHOLE story... wow, the ending surprised me... LOL and, nice, no spelling errors ^.^


Gee, that was great! A wonderful story, mayb u should hav structured ur sentences more openly, if you get my drift XD But a suprising plot, very dramatic, and not at all too romantic
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A wonder when the winner will be posted up? Please, hurry hurry hurry! XD
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Ok ah well i'll just put it here ...
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Omgsh! Your bound to win! I LOVE your story! it's really good! 9.5! =)



Oh, thank u so very much! It's not that gud though, and i think i should have made the plot clearer, but i didn't want it too b 2 long caus i didn't kno if there was a limit ... but i love ur story too! And it was so much more easier to read than mine, i would guess.
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Ok ah well i'll just put it here ...
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Wow that's really good xD
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Ok ah well i'll just put it here ...
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Wow that's really good xD


Hehe thank u so much! I'm glad u think that.
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Ok ah well i'll just put it here ...
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Wow that's really good xD


Hehe thank u so much! I'm glad u think that.


You're welcome
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