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I've decided to put my serious stories... I hope you enjoy it...

Summary:

Have you ever fell into love? Have you ever dated the wrong guy?
Have you experienced a heart-shattering break-up?
Have you ever been used for money?
Have you ever fell into a one-sided love without knowing?
Have someone dated you for money matters?
Well, one girl has experienced all of those above.
That time when she experienced all of those she almost gave up love.


“It’s Christmas again, the time to go out with your loved ones.” The television said.

*turns of television*

Sigh… It’s this time of year again… It is the time when the snow falls. It is also the time where people give gift to their loved ones… Too bad I won’t give any gifts to anyone this year. It had been 1 year and 10 months since then huh… Just what happened 1 year and 10 months ago? I’ll tell you my story.

Flashback:

-February 14-

“Riku! Riku! Meet me at the school’s rooftop when school ends.” I said in a loud voice.
“Okay, Yukari…” Riku said.
“Do you have something else to say to me?” I asked in a suspicious tone.
“Ah… No I didn’t have anything else to say. I’ll just see you later.” He said, nervously.
“Okay, see you later, Riku.” I said convinced.

The two of us parted, and we went to our own group of friends, and our own section.

“Yu~!” shouted my friend.
“Yes, Mizu?” I asked.
“When are you going to give your homemade chocolates to your boyfriend?” Mizuki asked.
“Later at dismissal.” I said excitedly.
“Oh... Good luck then~!” Mizuki said.

Classes started, and I can't think straight, all I think about is dismissal. At last, after 10 hours of waiting, I'll be able to give my chocolates to him. I'm so excited. I quickly ran to the rooftop, and when I opened the door, a boy with brown hair was revealed it was none other than my oh-so-handsome boyfriend.

“Riku!!!Riku!!! Sorry we were dismissed late.” I said, quite huffing.
“Oh, it's okay, our chat won't be that long anyways.” He said quite coldly.
“What do you mean..?” I asked, quite scared that he might break up with me.
“... What did you want to say to me..?” He asked, not bothering to answer my question.
“A-ah! Here... I made these chocolates. Happy valentine's day!” I said, completely letting the other topic go.
“I'm afraid I can't accept that Yukari.” He said.
“Wh-why?” I asked, wanting to cry.
“Don't you get it? I'm simply implying that I'm breaking up with you.” He said, coldly.
“Why? Haven't I been a good girlfriend to you? I know I may not have been the perfect girlfriend, but you know how much I loved you.” I said, wanting to cry.
“You've been a good girlfriend, but I just dated you for money. Me and my friends had a bet, a bet where I should date a girl for 3 months, and you're the easiest to hook up, so I chose you.” He said.
“Then if I had been a good girlfriend, why don't you continue going out with me? You will still get the money right?” I said, in disbelief.
“No, another part of the deal is that I need to break up with you after 3 months.” He said to me.
“I... H-how much is the prize..?” I asked, really wanting to cry now.
“50,000 yen.” He said.
“I can't believe you! You made me think I was special. You made me think I was loved. You made me believe that love will last forever... And in the end, I'm just a toy, once I'm new, you'll play with me, but after that, throw me away.” I exploded with anger.
“...” He was completely speechless.
“Here... Here's the necklace that I once always loved to wear. The necklace you gave me for Christmas. The necklace which keeps our memories, I mean my memories. The necklace many envied.” I said, in a tone that I will be fine.
“No... You keep it, to let you remember that love isn't as sweet as everyone said it would be.” He said.
“I won't keep it unless you take my chocolates. To remind you of a girl's pure love isn't to be played. To remind you to not make a bitter love. To remind you of something you should regret.” I said, as strong as I could.
“Then I shall accept.” He said, and took the chocolates from me.

After he took the chocolates I made for him, he left without saying a word, but he stopped at the door.

“I... I'm sorry. I'm sorry for doing those things. This is my farewell to you. The truth is, I did love you, but one of the rules of the bet is NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH THAT GIRL, IF YOU DO, THEN YOU WON'T GET THE MONEY. YOU CAN'T DATE THAT GIRL DURING MIDDLE SCHOOL, YOU CAN ONLY DATE HER WHEN YOU REACH TO HIGH SCHOOL. Which I had broken, but I kept it secretly.” I heard him say the words he said after saying farewell. Even though it was soft, I heard it, and it passed through my heart, he really did mean it.

After that, he closed the door, and I fell to the ground, and cried. I cried till night came. At night I said to myself I won't ever fall in love ever again.


End of flashback...
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wow...powerful much??? but brilliant! your a fantastic writer!
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Woah! This story is so emotional. I LUV IT!! KEEP WRITING!!! I'll look forward to the next chapter!!!

I want to try something new. Just a try I know i'm not an illustrator so The Real illustrator will be the ones to give the picture.



This is the girl. But i know it doesn't really fit right? I don't have much anime pics. This is the best one i could find...hehe...
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this is ginann and here is ur pic
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I'm glad you all liked it here's the second chappie~

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i luved it this is ginann and heres ur pic
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awesome storieee. got the pic for ya
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Wow! Great story! The love- love thing is really sad. (tragic end for both of them...sad sad) But i still luv the story!
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Wow!!! Brilliant Winter!!! Its like the ultimate Love story!!! you must have crazy dreams!!! hehe lol
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WOOHOO!!! I Luv the story! Happy New year to you too winterkiss!!! Keep up the good work and contiune the story!!!
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