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This story is a sad love story. A love toward a guy called father,dad, oto-san… A love toward two guy called brother,onii-chan… And a love toward a guy called Yamada Ryosuke..It all end on the Christmas Night.

On the Christmas night
A girl were crying in her room while cover herself with her blanket. She knew that her death is getting near. She felt weak and it hard for her to see because her vision was blur and she barely hard to breath.It’s all because of this DAMN sickness.
Yukari crawled slowly toward the window and she opened it.
She smiled weakly when she felt the snow fell on her hand. Suddenly, she saw a bright light.
“It so beautiful…”Said Yukari.
“Yukari, you have grown now,”said a woman in a white dress.
“Oka-san!”Shoted Yukari. She missed her mother so much.


Flash Back:

At the school field
“Yatta! Christmas is coming!!” Shouted Yukari happily.
“Hahaha..You look so happy,”said Yamada.
“Of course I’m happy! Christmas is like my birthday! Idon’t want to miss it!” Said Yukari with full of spirit.
“Well,I hope you won’t forget about my present,”said Yamada.
“Eh?Why should I?”asked Yukari, pretend to know nothing.
“Yukari!You lost the bet, so you have to prepare me a special Christmas present,”said Yamada. He pretended to be sad. Yukari laugh at Yamada childishness. She hit Yamada’s head.
“Ittai!” shouted Yamada.
“Hahaha..Of course, I remember, silly. By the way, what present do you want for this Christmas?” Asked Yukari.
“I wanna…*getting closer to Yukari’s ears*..a KISS!” Said Yamada. Yukari’s smile fade a little. But she tried to form a smile in front of Yamada.
“Hahaha…How about I give you a kiss now?” Asked Yukari.
“No.I want it on the Christmas night because it will be the wonderful present I ever receive,”said Yamada with a bright smile. It crash Yukari’s heart but she tried to form a fake smile.
“Hmm..Ryo-kun, I got to go now. My brothers will shout in my ears if I late,”said Yukari.
“Okay, see you later,”said Yamada. He gave a kiss on Yukari’s cheek. That kiss stabbed her heart.
“Hai.Ja ne~”Said Yukari before leaving.
As her’s back face Yamada, her tears rolling on her cheek.
In her heart, “Gomen ne~ Ryo-kun.”


In the car
“Gomen ne~, Yukari-chan. I was late,”said her eldest brother, Keito.
“Daijobu, onii-chan. Hi, Shie-chan,” greeted Yukari to Keito’s girlfriend that sat at the front seat.
“Hi!So, how your last class today, Yukari-chan?”Asked Shie with a warm smile.
“It was great!”Said Yukari with a wide smile.
“Oh, where is Chinen?”Asked Yukari.
“He has a cram class today,”replied Keito. Yukari knocked her head. ‘How could I forget about it?’
“Christmas eve is getting near. So, Yukari-chan are you going anywhere with Yama-chan?” Asked Keito.
“Hmm..Nope.I haven’t think about it yet. How about you guys?” Asked Yukari.
“Shiii…A secret,”said Keito with laughter.
“Aww…Onii-chan, you so mean. So, Shie-chan, tell me what you two going to do on the Christmas eve?”Asked Yukari, excited.
Shie couldn’t open her mouth.This year Christmas is meaningless to her especially after knowing she gonna lost a precious friend. Accepting the fate is so painful but she have to hold her promise to Yukari.
“Aww..Shie-chan, even you don’t want to tell me??!!Ow!My bad onii-chan have turn you!huhuhu…”said Yukari, pretending sad.
“Hahaha…Yukari-chan, don’t cry ne~If not your onii-chan will mad at me,”said Shie.
“How can he mad at you,huh?After all, you are his ‘future wife’,”teased Yukari. Shie blushed.
“Hahaha…Shie-tan, no need to listen to her. She really likes to talk nonsense thing lately,”said Keito. Yukari just smile. She saw her brother happy with Shie and it made her happy.
“Oh, by the way, is oka-san and oto-san already back from their honeymoon?”Asked Yukari.
“Not yet. They said that they will meet us on the Christmas night,”said Keito.
“Oh,souka!”Said Yukari in her low voice. Shie tried to hide her sad face from Keito. She knew, crying won’t help to cure Yukari sickness.
Yukari really happy to know that her parent will come back soon from their honeymoon. Actually, her father, Tomohisa, is remarried with a woman named Maki. She finally has a mother BACK! She lost her mother when she was 7 and it left a dark memory in her family history.
‘Finally, my oto-san have his own mate,’said Yukari in her heart. She looked at the outside of the window. The snow are so pretty. Her brothers, Keito and Chinen, always said that she is fair like the snow…like mom.


At the Yamashita’s resident
“Tadaima!”
“Okaeri, onii-chan!”Replied Yukari to her older brother, Chinen.
“Yukari-chan, you went home so early. Is there any special things today?”Asked Chinen with his cute face. Yukari really proud to have Chinen as her brother because when even she’s out with Chinen, people will stare at them like they were a couple.
“Hmm,onii-chan, can you accompany me to the mall?”Asked Yukari.
“Of course. Demo, for what?”Asked Chinen.
“Shopping, of course!” Shouted Yukari happily.
“Oh, I have a bad feeling about this!” sighed Chinen. He knew that his little sister LOVE shopping. When it comes to the mall, he will be damn bored to wait for his little sister. But what can he do, he love her so much.
“Hehe….”Yukari laughed.
“Oh, by the way, we will go with Umi-chan since I already invite her to go shoppinmg with me,”said Yukari.
“Eh?Umi-chan?”Asked Chinen, shocked. He blushing too.
“Hehehe..Yeah!I invite her..*whisper*..hehe..I know you have a crush on her,”said Yukari before she ran away with laughter.
YUKARI!!”Shouted Chinen.


End flash back.

“Yukari?Why?Why do you have to leave us so soon?”asked Keito in tears. He found Yukari’s body on the floor when he went into her room because wanted to give her a surprise a few minutes ago.
The surprise is…
“Yukari, I’m..back..”Said Mr.Yamashita in tears.He sat beside Yukair’s lifeless body with Maki beside him, crying.
“Yukari!Wake up!Wake up!It not funny,you know,”said Chinen while shake his little sister’s body. He forced himself to laugh.
“Stop it,Chinen. She…not going to..reply to your call..She’s ..gone,”said Shie in tears. She sat beside Keito, who was holding Yukari’s body.
“What are you talking about, Shie-chan?She GONNA reply…*his voice started shaking*..she..gonna..reply..I know,”said Chinen, stubborn. Chinen started shaking his little sister’s body. Shei can’t hold it anymore. She slapped Chinen’s face.
“She’s GONE!IT HER FATE!”Yelled Shie in tears.
“What do you…mean?”asked Yamada, who was stood at the door, listening to every words that they said. The gift that he hold in his hand, drop when he heard that Yukari is gone. SHE’S GONE!
Everyone who were there were shock with his present.
“She’s had a brain cancer,”said Shie in her low voice.
“What?Why didn’t you tell us?”Asked Mr.Yamashita.
“She forced me to not telling the truth. She..don’t want to see tears..tears from her beloved people,”said Shie. She tried to control her tears.
“Yukari,nande?Nande?NANDE?”Asked Yamada while hugged Yukari’s lifeless body.
“But at least tell me,”said Keito in tears.
“Gomen..honto ni gomen…”Shie cried even harder.
Mr. Yamashita held his daughter’s cold hand.
“Yukari..you finally left me..left your brothers..left us with your laughter..leave us with your love..Yukari-chan, sorry for being irresponsible father!”Apologized Mr.Yamashita in tears.
“I want to give you the letter that Yukari-chan left to me,”Said Umi that came from the door.
“I will read it for all of you,”said Umi in tears. She also lost a piece in her heart when one of her best friend gone.Gone forever.
“Otto-san, Onii-chan, minna-san, Gomen ne~ I have to leave you all so soon.Thanks Umi-chan for reading this letter for me. I want to say Thank you so much to my new oka-san, Maki-san. Arigatou!Arigatou for marrying my father. I hope you can take a good care of my otto-san and also my naughty brothers.^_^
Yamada, Gomen ne~ for not telling the truth. I want you to know that I never fell this way before. Thanks for taught me the meaning of love.Arigatou.Still, I never gonna break my promise. Take this handkerchief..*Shie gave Yamada a handkerchief*..I already put my lip on it!Just take your kiss from there.
Shie-chan, Umi-chan,
Gomen ne~Gomen for bothering you two with this matter. Thanks to you two, I can accept this sickness. Thanks for support me all the time. Please take a good care of my onii-chan. Onegaishimasu.
Onii-chan,
Gomen ne~for not telling the truth!Honto nig omen..I love you guys so much!Thanks for taking a good care on me. I know you two tried as hard as you can to make me feel better..to make me feel the love of a family..arigatou..*the tears rolling on their cheek*Demo, Onii-chan, to be honest, I miss mom so much.Until now, I miss her..I know my time is over now, please take a good care of yourself.
Otto-san,
Gomen ne~Honto ni gomen for being the trouble maker in this family.I love you so much as much as mom love you.Demo, otto-san, I want to see your smile, not your tears..Please take a good care of yourself. I think it’s time for me to be with mom. I have lost her for about 9 years..And now, I will meet her again..finally..that’s the reason why I never regret for what had happened to me……Arigatou,minna!^_~” Umi closed the letter.


“Yukari, you will always be in my heart,”said Yamada while held Yukari’s hand.
“Yukari-chan, I promise. I will take a good care of our family..You hear that, OUR FAMILY. So, please rest in peace with mom,”said Keito.
“Yukari-chan, you’re my only little sister in the world..no others!”said Chinen in tears.
“Yukari,it’s hurt!..really hurt to watch your fake smile everyday..It’s kills me in the inside.But, you are the best girl I had ever met,”said Shie.
“Yukari-chan, I enjoy my shopping moment with you.It really meaningful to me..Arigatou,”said Umi.
“Yukari-chan, my cute daughter, *smile*..I admit that you really beautiful, like your mother,”said Mr.Yamashita. He looked toward the snow that fell at the outside of the window.
“Yuki(Yukari’s mom),She really look like you..Please take a good care of her at there,”said Mr.Yamashita.



That’s was the saddest Christmas in the history of Yamashita’s family.The lost of someone that we love so much…How do you accept it?

The END!


To tell you all the truth, I had felt how shie(the character in this story)'s felt. Knowing someone gonna left you so soon,it hurt. Knowing I gonna lost someone that i love, it hurts more when i can't help her anything..That is how i feel 3 years ago..Honestly,i still feel the Pain!
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OMG...i almost got teary!!
hehe
it's soo cool
and WOW....YAMAPi AND MAKi
it would have been better if it was Yamapi and Me *kidding*
anyways
waaaah...it's sooo cooooool!
i really loved it!!!
KEEP IT UP!!
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Awww, thats so touching and sad TT^TT
(i cried ;~;)
luv it! :3
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OMG...i almost got teary!!
hehe
it's soo cool
and WOW....YAMAPi AND MAKi
it would have been better if it was Yamapi and Me *kidding*
anyways
waaaah...it's sooo cooooool!
i really loved it!!!
KEEP IT UP!!


HI!!^_^Thanks for reading my fic!!Hai!!I will do my best!!^_~haha
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Awww, thats so touching and sad TT^TT
(i cried ;~;)
luv it! :3


Gomen ne~If i made u cry!!^_^haha..Thanks for reading my Fic!!I really glad!!!XDhaha
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shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"
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shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe
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Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe


*uuwwwaaaa~!*

arigatou~ne!
I think geh-chan is the only one who makes happy fanfics and no other...
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shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


Haha..Gomen ne~Shie-chan!!^_~It all becoz of that song, WHITE XMAS!!!XD..haha
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shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe


*uuwwwaaaa~!*

arigatou~ne!
I think geh-chan is the only one who makes happy fanfics and no other...


aww honto?..haha...i might do something sad..very sad...mwahahah..*evil laugh* hope you can read it ne~...
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shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


Haha..Gomen ne~Shie-chan!!^_~It all becoz of that song, WHITE XMAS!!!XD..haha


oh~

so that's why I'm being suspicious of you on that time you made me listen to it~
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Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe


*uuwwwaaaa~!*

arigatou~ne!
I think geh-chan is the only one who makes happy fanfics and no other...


aww honto?..haha...i might do something sad..very sad...mwahahah..*evil laugh* hope you can read it ne~...


ohnoes...

I think sad fics are raging on geh-chan too~!!!
DASUKETE!!!
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shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe


*uuwwwaaaa~!*

arigatou~ne!
I think geh-chan is the only one who makes happy fanfics and no other...


aww honto?..haha...i might do something sad..very sad...mwahahah..*evil laugh* hope you can read it ne~...


ohnoes...

I think sad fics are raging on geh-chan too~!!!
DASUKETE!!!


ahehe gomen...oh yeah...don't forget...read my other fic...it's multichaptered..the title is our school days..demo it's a kat-tun fic..i hope you can read it..
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Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe


*uuwwwaaaa~!*

arigatou~ne!
I think geh-chan is the only one who makes happy fanfics and no other...


aww honto?..haha...i might do something sad..very sad...mwahahah..*evil laugh* hope you can read it ne~...


ohnoes...

I think sad fics are raging on geh-chan too~!!!
DASUKETE!!!


ahehe gomen...oh yeah...don't forget...read my other fic...it's multichaptered..the title is our school days..demo it's a kat-tun fic..i hope you can read it..


wwweeee~!
sure! *rushing to read*

I think my multi-chap fic isn't read by anyone rather than yours...
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shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

shoot...

all of you in here wants to make me CRY always do ya?!

"Losing someone is like Losing another part of your LIFE"


waah..don't make shie chan cry ..don't worry...i'll make a oneshot again next time to make you laugh...i guess..ehe


*uuwwwaaaa~!*

arigatou~ne!
I think geh-chan is the only one who makes happy fanfics and no other...


aww honto?..haha...i might do something sad..very sad...mwahahah..*evil laugh* hope you can read it ne~...


ohnoes...

I think sad fics are raging on geh-chan too~!!!
DASUKETE!!!


ahehe gomen...oh yeah...don't forget...read my other fic...it's multichaptered..the title is our school days..demo it's a kat-tun fic..i hope you can read it..


wwweeee~!
sure! *rushing to read*

I think my multi-chap fic isn't read by anyone rather than yours...


eh?..haha...mine is not totally read u know..coz i haven't updated it for a long time..and at that time..i thought i would try to stop it for a while.. demo i can't wait for the next part in ur fic..=D
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