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Twilight FANS+HATERS. PLEASE HELP me. D:
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Posted 12/9/08
I need to do a book review on Twilight. But my teacher said you have to criticise it, somehow. I can't really think of anything bad about Twilight. Except for that twilight is sort of copying anime vampire romance. Help me think :]?. Peow if you don't mind you can add or message or GuestBook Post me of something bad about twilight. Even If I won't use it in my review, I'll appreciate your help <33.
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Posted 12/9/08
too much dialouge? perhaphs... wat kind of person is ur t'cher? twilight is a great bk!
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Posted 12/9/08
search on google - find a review online and just base your review on what you find.. for my review i found bad and good reviews and stole important paragraphs and changed them to my own words =______________=
i got top marks though
Posted 12/9/08
just say the shit is over rated just like naruto which is also shit that is also over rated
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25 / M / O.C. So.Cal
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Posted 12/9/08
are you SERIOUS

here ill give u lots of criticisms

too cliche
too unrealistic
no plot
o..and did i mention TOO CLICHE
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Posted 12/9/08
Lols i agree with Unrealistic and cliche, not sure about the plot thing though.
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Posted 12/9/08

animekid94 wrote:

too much dialouge? perhaphs... wat kind of person is ur t'cher? twilight is a great bk!


LOL i dislike my teacher.
Posted 12/9/08
Lol I like this book and all but Bella is a bitch =]
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Posted 12/9/08
You could say it has a overused plot
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Posted 12/9/08
thanks for all your help <33 :DDD
Posted 12/9/08
Twilight = way too overrated
Posted 12/9/08
^ Yes, I agree. And Bella is annoying.
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Posted 12/9/08
More like a personal thread
Posted 12/9/08 , edited 12/9/08
Well, if you're talking the entire series (but I guess it can apply to the first book too).

There is very little character development -- and that's very important in literature. Meyer's characters, Bella and Edward = Mary Sue and Gary Stu -- meaning they have no faults, too perfect, and Bella's clumsiness is not a fault, actually it's a "charming" trait made to make her seem more likable.

I'll edit this later because... I have a life. -___-
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Posted 12/9/08

evilcookiie wrote:

Lols i agree with Unrealistic and cliche, not sure about the plot thing though.


here i can summarize the plot in a couple of sentences

girl meets boy

girl likes boy

boy likes girl

bad boy wants to kill girl

boy kills bad boy

boy and girl live happily ever after

(just fit in the fillers as you go)
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