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woo! it's my fourth one - shot! heehee .. ^^ one - shots first then multi - chapter ,, ne~?
hehe .. anou .. the story is kinda .. sad .. hope ya'll like it .. so here it goes .. :p

SYNOPSIS ::



wooaahh!! .. finally!! .. enjoy it! .. i tried so hard for it to post it here .. ^^ hope u all like it!! .. :p

It’s the wind.. it makes me happy everytime a strong wind passes by.. because I knew it is her.. I wanna hear her voice, every minute.. every second.. just to paint a smile in my face.. I hope it’s not just for my face, but also for my heart.. that leaps because of joy..


STORY ::

“There was a girl named Angela Atkins, she lived in Paris, her parents are not always at her side, her parents are travelling around the world to work with the executives of different countries.. she is so lonely, she wanted to tour the world like what her parents do. No matter how beautiful her country is, she still wants to travel around the world to discover new things.. in year 2004, she traveled in Tokyo, Japan. By the time she went there, it was timing that in japan, it was spring time.. she discovered the beauty of “Cherry Blossoms”. In which they call “Sakura”. She enjoyed living there, she have many friends, most of her friends are celebrity. Because she study at a very famous school in Tokyo, Japan, the Eitoku high. Her closest friend there, or what we call bestfriend is a boy named Inoo Kei. The first time they met is also the first time when she landed in Japan. Last spring 2004.”

@ the airport

Angela’s POV
Atlast! Japan .. my new target! Hehe, wow, I never knew that japan was also this cool. Hmmn, I wonder if I will like this country .. because it seems that I traveled many country but I never even appreciated even one of them. I hope I would enjoy here ..

“when she got down the plane, there, she saw somebody sitting alone. She wanted to make friends, she never thought if something would happen to her, because she had a feeling that this guy she is about to talk to is a kind person. She got a feeling, even by just from a first sight.”

Angela’s POV
Hmm .. this guy’s kinda weird.. why is he alone? I’m so curious.. I wanna go near him.. talk to him.. make friends? Right! Make friends.. since I’m new in this country .. he’s cute .. perfect in height .. love his eyes.. I got a feeling that he’s a kind person..

Kei’s POV
Hmmn .. weird.. why is that girl coming near me? Do I know her? Have I met her before? Her face is not even familiar .. I see .. she’s a foreigner .. she’s beautiful, attractive, well, since she’s coming near me, then I’ll talk to her.

“when Angela is in front of Kei, she was so nervous, afraid that this guy might not be what she is expecting.. she’s afraid this guy might be the bad guy.. not friendly type.”

Angela: excuse me? Uhmm,.. can you help me?
Kei: +looks up+ oh, uhmm .. sure.. may I know your name please?
Angela: oh, I’m Angela Atkins.. nice to meet you.. how about you?
Kei: oh .. I’m Kei Inoo. Nice to meet you too.

Angela’s POV
Wow .. I knew it.. he’s a good person. Lucky for me .. ^^ I hope we’ll be good friends..

Kei’s POV
Hmmn .. I guess she’s not weird.. but why me? There are so many people here .. hmmn, maybe because I’m alone.

“Angela lived in Japan for four years until now, it’s already 2008. Angela and Kei become bestfriends.. they go to school together, have their lunch together, and Kei goes to Angela’s house for study group and chikkas, Kei’s friends are also close friends of Angela, like the Hey! Say! JUMP, hey say jump is a famous band in Japan, many girls are crazy on them, even in their school, even though they are not the only artists in there .. Kei and Angela are known to be the loveteam in their school. There are rumors that they had a relationship.. but all of those are not true. They never had a relationship, because they don’t know how to show their feelings on each other. And Kei don’t believe that Angela has a feeling for him like what he have for her. Because they were together for four years, and they are still not in a relationship. And he thought that what Angela is feeling for him is just like a brother. Not until when it was already the prom. Wanna know how Kei asked for Angela? Here it goes.”

Kei: Angela.. I still don’t have a partner .. uhmm .. may I know if you have already?
Angela: oh, me? No, not yet.. nobody asked me to be their partner yet,. Why? Wanna be my partner? Heheehehe, just kidding!
Kei: oh, uhm .. sure! Can you be? I haven't asked somebody yet .. because I want to ask you first since ..
Angela: what?
Kei: since your’e my closest.. hehehe ..
Angela: oh .. is that so .. sure ..

Angela’s POV
I thought what he was going to say is .. because he wanted to be my partner at least .. well .. I guess he don’t even have feelings for me .. I’ll just go on .. being in his side makes me happy though .. :)

Kei’s POV
I guess .. it’s not yet the time to tell her .. maybe our friendship will break because of this confession and her prom night will be not happy ..

“they’re so childish right? They are both afraid to show their feelings! Especially the boy .. well .. you wanna know what happened during the prom? Let’s see .. “

Kei: uhmm ,… Angela?
Angela: yes?
Kei: uhmm .. can you go with me for a while? I just wanna tell you something ..
Angela: oh .. sure ..

@ the dancing hall

Kei: wanna dance with me?
Angela: oh .. uhmm .. sure .. hehehe .. so .. what are you about to say?
Kei: uhmm .. it’s because .. we are together for four years right?
Angela: yeah, haha, four years is long .. really long .. why?
Kei: we’ve been bestfriends .. your’e so good to me …
Angela: oh .. that .. yeah … thanks,.. I never knew I was that good to you ..
Kei: you were .. since I met you ..
Angela: hehe, yeah.. you too .. your’e so good to me .. and you helped me in many things.. you are a good guy Kei.. I’m so blessed that I met you ..
Kei: oh .. thanks .. me too, God have given me a living angel.. so beautiful and kind ..
Angela: oh .. hehehe ..
Kei: Angela..
Angela: hmm?
Kei: I love you ..
Angela: ahh .. I .. I love you too ..
Kei: hey, Im confessing my feelings .. that I kept from the past few years ..
Angela: I know .. you finally did it .. those words are the words that I’ve been looking for from your mouth..
Kei: really? I .. I didn’t know that you liked me too .. I, I thought you are treating me just like a brother ..
Angela: well .. let’s stop this argument .. I’m just happy .. that you finally confessed .. so glad .. that I met you …
Kei: me too Angela .. I love you so much .. I hope this would never change ..
Angela: your’e right .. me too .. I love you ..

“they look so good together .. they danced while hugging in the dancing hall .. people are staring at them .. but they didn’t care.. like it’s the first and the last time that they will do it .. after that romantic moment, Angela was called by her parents to go back to Paris because they will have a family reunion.. and the three of them will finally see each other again .. Angela was confused if she will be happy or not .. because if she leave, she will not see Kei everyday again .. she have no choice but to leave .. two years have passed, until Angela had left Japan. Kei was so lonely, back to his mysterious self again .. sitting alone like nobody .. he doesn’t even want to talk to his friends .. he and Angela had lost communication and he is still wondering what happened to her.”

Kei’s POV
Angela .. I miss your voice, I miss your cute and beautiful face.. I miss your hug .. I miss your jokes, I miss your presence .. I miss everything about you .. what had happened to you? Why are you not communicating with me again? Is something wrong?

Angela’s POV
Kei .. I’ll see you again there .. I miss you so much! I hope you missed me too like how I missed you already .. I’m going back there .. wait, back? I guess your presence is my home .. wait for me Kei .. we’ll see each other again.

+cellphone ringing+

Kei: hmmn .. I don’t know this number .. but .. okay then .. hello?
Angela: Kei! .. I missed you! This is Angela! ..
Kei: oh! Angela .. I missed you too! .. where are you right now?
Angela: .. I’m here in Paris airport! .. I’ll be going back to Japan! I’ll be there tomorrow 5am! .. wait for me in the airport okay?
Kei: re .. really? .. yes! I will! I will wait for you there! ..
Angela: ok then! .. I gotta go now ! bye! I miss you!
Kei: okay .. I miss you too … bye!

Kei’s POV
Oh yeah! I’ll see her again! I can’t wait! Shall I sleep or not? Maybe not .. because I might not wake up .. oh .. I’ll sleep .. because I might have big eyebugs .. and Angela woudn’t notice me .. ehehehe ..

“Kei was so excited! So as Angela .. Kei slept with a wide smile painted in his smile and Angela was always laughing and daydreaming .. that her seatmates were wondering if this girl might be crazy .. but Angela didn’t even mind .. as long as she’s happy.”

@ 4am in the morning

Kei: wooah! I woke up 1 hour early! .. haha .. I gotta ready first …

“then suddenly, kei’s phone rang”

Kei: oh .. +takes the phone+ hello?
Leona: uhmm .. is this Kei Inoo?
Kei: yes, may I know who is this?
Leona: I am Leona Atkins .. Angela’s mom .. I have a bad news .. please turn on your tv .. I’m afraid I can’t handle it ..
Kei: oh .. yes ma’am..

“when Kei turned on the tv..”

Newsreporter: a plane that flew last night coming from Paris to Japan was accidentally crashed .. there were 90 passengers inside that plane and all were critically crashed in the middle of Paris and Japan. All passengers died, nobody survived and----

Kei: wha.. wha..
Leona: I’m so sorry .. she left me your number before she left .. it was just an incase because maybe she wanted me to contact you when you two were not together .. but this was used in other reason .. I’m so sorry …
Kei: ahh .. it’s .. okay .. ma’am…

Kei’s POV
What is happening? .. is this true? I can’t believe it .. the girl .. that .. gave my life a reason .. is now .. gone .. I have waited for her .. I was so patient .. yet .. it wasn’t worth it .. I shoudn’t have waited … If I knew that this is the thing that would happen .. I can’t accept it .. why? Why? …. :(

“then suddenly .. a wind passes by Kei .. and he remembered what he and Angela were talking about .. “

Flashback ::

Angela: Kei?
Kei: hmm?
Angela: if .. you die .. what do you want to be?
Kei: I .. don’t know .. I never thought of that yet .. how about you?
Angela: .. I wanna be the wind .. I wanna be free .. when I die .. I wanna pass by you and whisper my last words .. :)
Kei: last words? What would it be?
Angela: secret! .. haha .. just wait .. :)
Kei: oh .. okay .. hehe ..

End of flashback

Wind: Kei .. I Love You ..
Kei: I love you too .. Angela .. pleas wait for me ..

Kei’s POV
It’s the wind.. it makes me happy everytime a strong wind passes by.. because I knew it is her.. I wanna hear her voice, every minute.. every second.. just to paint a smile in my face.. I hope it’s not just for my face, but also for my heart.. that leaps because of joy..


“well .. that’s the end of their story .. ^^”



that's all!! .. weeee .. finally .. :p pls comment .. minna!! .. XD
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waaa...sugoi..omoshiro!! can't wait!!!
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ehh~?
sounds sad...
kyaaa~ cant wait X3!
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Oh shoot~

there goes a sad fanfic again~!!! >_<!!!
I'm so gonna make a sad fanfic again 'coz ALL of you keep making me cry for your One-shots~ >=]!

I just hope I have a box of tissue beside me if I read your fanfic~
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Oh shoot~

there goes a sad fanfic again~!!! >_<!!!
I'm so gonna make a sad fanfic again 'coz ALL of you keep making me cry for your One-shots~ >=]!

I just hope I have a box of tissue beside me if I read your fanfic~


goommmeeennn!! .. i just don't know how to make happy ending one - shots ... because i think sad fics are much more easier to think .. oh .. btw .. i changed the sypnosis ..

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shieLdembLem wrote:

Oh shoot~

there goes a sad fanfic again~!!! >_<!!!
I'm so gonna make a sad fanfic again 'coz ALL of you keep making me cry for your One-shots~ >=]!

I just hope I have a box of tissue beside me if I read your fanfic~


goommmeeennn!! .. i just don't know how to make happy ending one - shots ... because i think sad fics are much more easier to think .. oh .. btw .. i changed the sypnosis ..



*hehe*
I guess I'l work on my own sad fic today~ >=]!
*harhar!*
payback TIME!
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shieLdembLem wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

Oh shoot~

there goes a sad fanfic again~!!! >_<!!!
I'm so gonna make a sad fanfic again 'coz ALL of you keep making me cry for your One-shots~ >=]!

I just hope I have a box of tissue beside me if I read your fanfic~


goommmeeennn!! .. i just don't know how to make happy ending one - shots ... because i think sad fics are much more easier to think .. oh .. btw .. i changed the sypnosis ..



*hehe*
I guess I'l work on my own sad fic today~ >=]!
*harhar!*
payback TIME!


ur gonna make one too?? .. hehe, i'll wait for it! .. :)
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emkyuu wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

Oh shoot~

there goes a sad fanfic again~!!! >_<!!!
I'm so gonna make a sad fanfic again 'coz ALL of you keep making me cry for your One-shots~ >=]!

I just hope I have a box of tissue beside me if I read your fanfic~


goommmeeennn!! .. i just don't know how to make happy ending one - shots ... because i think sad fics are much more easier to think .. oh .. btw .. i changed the sypnosis ..



*hehe*
I guess I'l work on my own sad fic today~ >=]!
*harhar!*
payback TIME!


ur gonna make one too?? .. hehe, i'll wait for it! .. :)


but I would wait for yours first~! XD!
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shieLdembLem wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

Oh shoot~

there goes a sad fanfic again~!!! >_<!!!
I'm so gonna make a sad fanfic again 'coz ALL of you keep making me cry for your One-shots~ >=]!

I just hope I have a box of tissue beside me if I read your fanfic~


goommmeeennn!! .. i just don't know how to make happy ending one - shots ... because i think sad fics are much more easier to think .. oh .. btw .. i changed the sypnosis ..



*hehe*
I guess I'l work on my own sad fic today~ >=]!
*harhar!*
payback TIME!


ur gonna make one too?? .. hehe, i'll wait for it! .. :)


but I would wait for yours first~! XD!


eh? .. i'll post it still this saturday .. hehe, it's stil long .. hehehe ..
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OMGosh!!
I now have a heartache!!
somebody help me!! T.T

btw..
you dunno how wide my smile was when I've read that Kei's the main character of this OS!! ^-^
I just luv him!! like.. 2nd to Yamada!! xDD
this is really good umi-chan!!
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OMGosh!!
I now have a heartache!!
somebody help me!! T.T

btw..
you dunno how wide my smile was when I've read that Kei's the main character of this OS!! ^-^
I just luv him!! like.. 2nd to Yamada!! xDD
this is really good umi-chan!!


oh! .. hahaha .. i i'm here ..
i'll help u .. juz kidding! .. haha ..

owh .. i'm glad ur face was
painted a wide smile! .. haha ..
eh?? .. wer'e the same!!
Kei's my niban too! .. hi5!
now wer'e double rivals .. hahaha ..
arigatou gozaimasu jessee-chan!! ..
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hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
I now have a heartache!!
somebody help me!! T.T

btw..
you dunno how wide my smile was when I've read that Kei's the main character of this OS!! ^-^
I just luv him!! like.. 2nd to Yamada!! xDD
this is really good umi-chan!!


oh! .. hahaha .. i i'm here ..
i'll help u .. juz kidding! .. haha ..

owh .. i'm glad ur face was
painted a wide smile! .. haha ..
eh?? .. wer'e the same!!
Kei's my niban too! .. hi5!
now wer'e double rivals .. hahaha ..
arigatou gozaimasu jessee-chan!! .. :)


hahaha!!
that's a good way of being rivals!!
because..
if you got Yama-chan first.. you can give me Kei ne?? xDD
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hsj9392 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
I now have a heartache!!
somebody help me!! T.T

btw..
you dunno how wide my smile was when I've read that Kei's the main character of this OS!! ^-^
I just luv him!! like.. 2nd to Yamada!! xDD
this is really good umi-chan!!


oh! .. hahaha .. i i'm here ..
i'll help u .. juz kidding! .. haha ..

owh .. i'm glad ur face was
painted a wide smile! .. haha ..
eh?? .. wer'e the same!!
Kei's my niban too! .. hi5!
now wer'e double rivals .. hahaha ..
arigatou gozaimasu jessee-chan!! .. :)


hahaha!!
that's a good way of being rivals!!
because..
if you got Yama-chan first.. you can give me Kei ne?? xDD


hahaha .. !!
yea! .. ofcourse! .. but ..
if you got yama-chan .. kei's mine ..
i guess .. everything's already fair ne~?
woaahahah .. i love u rival! .. haha .. :p
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emkyuu wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
I now have a heartache!!
somebody help me!! T.T

btw..
you dunno how wide my smile was when I've read that Kei's the main character of this OS!! ^-^
I just luv him!! like.. 2nd to Yamada!! xDD
this is really good umi-chan!!


oh! .. hahaha .. i i'm here ..
i'll help u .. juz kidding! .. haha ..

owh .. i'm glad ur face was
painted a wide smile! .. haha ..
eh?? .. wer'e the same!!
Kei's my niban too! .. hi5!
now wer'e double rivals .. hahaha ..
arigatou gozaimasu jessee-chan!! .. :)


hahaha!!
that's a good way of being rivals!!
because..
if you got Yama-chan first.. you can give me Kei ne?? xDD


hahaha .. !!
yea! .. ofcourse! .. but ..
if you got yama-chan .. kei's mine ..
i guess .. everything's already fair ne~?
woaahahah .. i love u rival! .. haha .. :p



yeah!!
we're like..
so generous to each other!! xDD
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hsj9392 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

OMGosh!!
I now have a heartache!!
somebody help me!! T.T

btw..
you dunno how wide my smile was when I've read that Kei's the main character of this OS!! ^-^
I just luv him!! like.. 2nd to Yamada!! xDD
this is really good umi-chan!!


oh! .. hahaha .. i i'm here ..
i'll help u .. juz kidding! .. haha ..

owh .. i'm glad ur face was
painted a wide smile! .. haha ..
eh?? .. wer'e the same!!
Kei's my niban too! .. hi5!
now wer'e double rivals .. hahaha ..
arigatou gozaimasu jessee-chan!! .. :)


hahaha!!
that's a good way of being rivals!!
because..
if you got Yama-chan first.. you can give me Kei ne?? xDD


hahaha .. !!
yea! .. ofcourse! .. but ..
if you got yama-chan .. kei's mine ..
i guess .. everything's already fair ne~?
woaahahah .. i love u rival! .. haha .. :p



yeah!!
we're like..
so generous to each other!! xDD


hahaha .. ne~? all problem's solved! .. XD
are u on in ym now jessee-chan? ..
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