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"AS ONE WE BLEED"
By: deen22


Jin as Joe, a famous singer, actor, kinda stubborn but also kind.
Megi, the extraordinary girl.
Extras:
Deen > girlfriend of Joe
Pamela Joe’s Friend
Italic/Purple words > Song [Tonight by FM static]

There was a man, who was famous, rich, and stubborn but has a really soft heart. But what he did accidentally changed his own life. By an extraordinary, unusual, strange, odd, unexpected or even surprising Girl. Now listen to their story…

@ recording house 6pm…

Joe: [singing] I gotta find you….
Manager: good! Now you’ve perfected it!
Joe: [smirked] yeah right… [went to the back room] *sigh* what time is it now… 6pm? It’s still early… I think I’m just gonna practice my new song. [sings while walking] turn on that radio~
???: whoa yeah yeah~ you are the one that I’ve been searching for my whole life~
Joe: uhm… excuse me?
???: yes?
Joe: h…hi! I’m Joe… you are?
Megi: I’m megi! Nice to meet you!
Joe: it’s the first time I saw you here at the recording house. Are you new here?
Megi: ohh.. heheh maybe you just didn’t saw me before. I’m always here.
Joe: oh… I see.
Megi: oh well I gotta get going. Bye!
Joe: wait—! She left.

I remember the times we spent together
On those drives
We had a million questions
All about our lives
And when we got to New York
Everything felt right
I wish you were here with me
Tonight


Next day… @ the Studio for the photo shoot for the new album of Joe.


Photographer: ok~ ok~ pose~ that’s it! That’s right~
Joe: thanks for today!
Deen: Hi Joe what’s up!
Joe: ohh deen~ hehehe
Deen: so… where will we go today?
Joe: uhm… im really sorry! But promise I’ll treat you next time!!! Sorry!!
Deen: oh well.. ok… ^_^
Joe: uhm bye! Need to go to the recording house!
Deen: recording house? For what? Haven’t you finished yesterday?
Joe: uhm… i.. uh.. I left my guitar~ yeah. I left it ^_^ I gotta go now bye! [leaves]
Deen: strange…

I remember the days we spent together
Were not enough
And I used to feel like dreamin'
Except we always woke up
Never thought not having you here now
Would hurt so much


@ recording house 6pm…

Joe: Megi? Megi? Are you there?
Megi: Joe? Why are you here?
Joe: I… just wanna see you~
Megi: really?
Joe: and I want to hear your voice.
Megi: oh… hehehe
Joe: ok… I’ll play the guitar then you’ll sing ok?
Megi: ok! Then.. Don’t tell me of Avril Lavigne? Do you know that?
Joe: of course!~ ok here it goes… [Plays the guitar]
Megi: [sings Don’t tell me by Avril Lavigne]

You held my hand and walked me home, I know
Why you gave me that kiss it was something like this it made me go oh ohh
You wiped my tears, got rid of all my fears, why did you have to go?
Guess it wasn't enough to take some of my love
Guys are so hard to trust
Did I, not, tell you that I'm not like that girl?
The one who gives it all away

Did you think that I was gonna give it up to you, this time?
Did you think that it was somethin I was gonna do and cry?
Don't try to tell me what to do,
Don't try to tell me what to say,
You're better off that way


Megi:Ok let’s stop it there~ hehehe
Joe: ohh okay~ hehehe
Megi: ohh wait… I have to go now ^_^
Joe: but why!?
Megi: for… some reasons…
Joe: don’t leave!
Megi: but I have to. Bye! [left]
Pamela: hey joe~ what are you doing here? Who’re you talking to?
Joe: oh… just.. a girl…
Pamela: a girl? Strange…
Joe: gotta go… see you.
Pamela: ok bye…

@ Joe’s House

Joe: why am I so like melting every time I hear her voice? And her face. It’s so beautiful. I can’t and I’ll never let her go…

Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you, I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight


After a Few days @ the Recording House…

Joe: I haven’t seen her for a while. Where is she? Where did she go? She didn’t have to leave does she?
Pamela: hey Joe~ what are you murmuring about?
Joe: nothing… bye… I’ll leave by now.
Pamela: oh… ok… wonder what happened to that man.

@ back door


Megi: joe!
Joe: Megi? Megi!
Megi: how are you?
Joe: I haven’t seen you for a while! Where have you been?
Megi: I’ve been… just busy…
Joe: oh… shall I walk you home?
Megi: okay…

[while walking through Megi’s house]

I remember the time you told me
About when you were eight
And all those things you said that night
That just couldn't wait


Megi: so have you been busy?
Joe: not much…
Megi: ohh… hehehe that’s good ^_^
Joe: how about you?
Megi: ohh well… here. Just singing…
Joe: good luck always ok?
Megi: you too.
Joe: [holds megi’s hands]
Megi: [smiles]

Outside megi’s house…

Megi: ohh… you can’t enter my house… well the time will come when you can ^_^
Joe: ohh okay… but…
Megi: yes?
Joe: [hold Megi’s face and kissed Megi] I shall give this to you…
Megi: joe…. Thanks… I’ll treasure this forever… and ever…

I remember the car you were last seen in
And the games we would play
All the times we spilled our coffees
And stayed out way too late


@After 3 days, in a restaurant.

Deen: Joe! Gladly you came! I thought you wouldn’t come.
Joe: ^_^ of course I would.
Deen: let’s eat then?
Joe: ok…

After few minutes…

Joe: deen… you see… I don’t think I can be with you anymore…
Deen: what? Why?
Joe: because… because…
Deen: because of a girl? You see, I hear rumors that they saw you talking to someone…
Joe: what? That’s…
Deen: but the only surprising was they didn’t saw you with someone.
Joe: what? What do you mean?
Deen: they told me you were talking to someone who’s not really there!
Joe: What!
Deen: what happened to you Joe? Are you crazy? Hallucinating? Or what?
Joe: Stop it! That’s not funny!

I remember the time you sat and told me
About your Jesus
And how not to look back
Even if no one believes us
When it hurts so bad
Sometimes not having you here
I sing…


@ the record house

Joe: Megi? [shouting] Megi! Megi?! Megi!!
Pamela: whoa~ Joe? What’s happening to you?
Joe: have you seen Megi? [Shouts] Megi!
Pamela: there’s no such person as Megi here!
Joe: what? Are you joking? The girl! Who sings great and has a beautiful face!
Pamela: Megi? That girl? But… she’s…. gone…
Joe: gone? What gone?
Pamela: gone… de…
Joe: NO! Don’t say that! It’s not true! [Rushed into Megi’s house]

@ Megi’s House


Joe: Megi? [searches for Megi] Megi? [looks into the room] O_O

Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you, I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight


@ Megi’s Room

Joe: Megi!

The poor Joe saw Megi lying on her bed. So cold, not moving and bleeding… he didn’t know what to do… he was crying and was shocked. For that was the girl he loved. The lost soul girl who just wants to find her love one before she goes away.

Joe: [grabs a knife] if you’re not here… I’m useless… I’ll cut my self… and now... Together… we will bleed as ONE…

I sing
Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight...


Together, they bleed as one. Lying on the same bed, hugging each other. And now, they’re together in the other world, smiling for they now have each other without finding each other anymore. That’s how this story of the man who changed her life and even costs his own life just to be with her loved one…

Comments are much Appreciated!! xD
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umh.. you just made Jin die... LOL *cough* 'Joe'...

why does it seem that Deen does not love Jin at all? Umh... i know!

Deen : hmph! Whatever you stupid boy... *leaves Jin's deadly soul*
Daiki : hi Deen!! *high and excited*
Deen : oh.. hi...
Daiki : i love you ^_^
Deen : i love you too ^_^
*kiss kiss*
*hug hug*
*holding hands*
yay~!!

umh.. ok.. random..
yay! i still have a wild imagination xDD

hope ya enjoy 8 line fic!! xDD

ooo! btw! haha.. got too much caught up there...
NICE FIC!!
i somehow now read every fic that the main lovers died =_=
*just finished reading one like that a few hours ago*

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! ^_^
GOOD LUCK IN... FUTURE?!?! xDD

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omgawd.love can make u do anything..
this is not tht creepy.ehehe
it's sooo sweet~
^^
good job!!hahah
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Posted 12/13/08 , edited 12/13/08
oh and.. FIRST ONE TO COMMENT!! YAY ME!! xDD

*sorry.. weird*

*posted 19 seconds before cha-chan* xDD
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h4CkSigN wrote:

umh.. you just made Jin die... LOL *cough* 'Joe'...

why does it seem that Deen does not love Jin at all? Umh... i know!

Deen : hmph! Whatever you stupid boy... *leaves Jin's deadly soul*
Daiki : hi Deen!! *high and excited*
Deen : oh.. hi...
Daiki : i love you ^_^
Deen : i love you too ^_^
*kiss kiss*
*hug hug*
*holding hands*
yay~!!

umh.. ok.. random..
yay! i still have a wild imagination xDD

hope ya enjoy 8 line fic!! xDD

ooo! btw! haha.. got too much caught up there...
NICE FIC!!
i somehow now read every fic that the main lovers died =_=
*just finished reading one like that a few hours ago*

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! ^_^
GOOD LUCK IN... FUTURE?!?! xDD



whoaa!! hahahaha!!! thanx h4ck rin!!!


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omgawd.love can make u do anything..
this is not tht creepy.ehehe
it's sooo sweet~
^^
good job!!hahah


hahahaha~ its not creepy? lol i think it is.. hahahaha!


h4CkSigN wrote:

oh and.. FIRST ONE TO COMMENT!! YAY ME!! xDD

*sorry.. weird*

*posted 19 seconds before cha-chan* xDD


hahahaha!
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19 sec bfore me?
ahaahah
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deen22 wrote:


h4CkSigN wrote:

umh.. you just made Jin die... LOL *cough* 'Joe'...

why does it seem that Deen does not love Jin at all? Umh... i know!

Deen : hmph! Whatever you stupid boy... *leaves Jin's deadly soul*
Daiki : hi Deen!! *high and excited*
Deen : oh.. hi...
Daiki : i love you ^_^
Deen : i love you too ^_^
*kiss kiss*
*hug hug*
*holding hands*
yay~!!

umh.. ok.. random..
yay! i still have a wild imagination xDD

hope ya enjoy 8 line fic!! xDD

ooo! btw! haha.. got too much caught up there...
NICE FIC!!
i somehow now read every fic that the main lovers died =_=
*just finished reading one like that a few hours ago*

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! ^_^
GOOD LUCK IN... FUTURE?!?! xDD



whoaa!! hahahaha!!! thanx h4ck rin!!!


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

omgawd.love can make u do anything..
this is not tht creepy.ehehe
it's sooo sweet~
^^
good job!!hahah


hahahaha~ its not creepy? lol i think it is.. hahahaha!


h4CkSigN wrote:

oh and.. FIRST ONE TO COMMENT!! YAY ME!! xDD

*sorry.. weird*

*posted 19 seconds before cha-chan* xDD


hahahaha!


xDD hope your life is happy with Dai-chan!!

-after 2 years-

Daiki : deen-chan please marry me *does the proposing stance thingy*
Deen-chan : hmph! that ring is so worthless *turns around*
Daiki : awww~~~
Deen-chan : i'm just joking ^_^ of course i will marry you~
Daiki : yay!
*kiss kiss*
Deen-chan : but you have to get me a better ring you know..
Daiki : yes yes wifey~
-after 1 year-
Chinen : me.. wan... food!!!
Deen-chan : ok chii dear ^_^
Daiki : good morning honey~
Deen-chan : morning dear~ *good morning kiss*
Chinen : ewww~!!

=_= umh.. don't ask me..
anyways...
review : Deen-chan and Daiki got married and Chinen is their child~~
do not ask me why i wrote this =_=ll
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

19 sec bfore me?
ahaahah


haha.. and my last post was 1 second after you :lol:
yes~ i am sooo fast in posting~!
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wayahahaha!!! i think u should continue ur noobish fanfict again h4ck rin =P hahaha!!!
nice i lvoe it!! kyaaaaaaaaaaa!~
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

19 sec bfore me?
ahaahah


haha.. and my last post was 1 second after you :lol:
yes~ i am sooo fast in posting~!


ur really fast!!ahaha
n btw OMG ur avii!!kyaaaaaaaaa~
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ehhh.. *lazy lazy*
T^T''
you can read my other fanfics on my LJ though..
umh.. their based on dbsk YunJae fanfic..
so theres yaoi in there~ ^^

http://kurisuteru94.livejournal.com/

*advertising* LOL

so yea~~
here~!!

Daiki : *looks around the house*
Deen-chan : dear.. what are you looking for?
Daiki : is Chii in the house?
Deen-chan : he's in school.. why?
Daiki : *evil smile*
Deen-chan : uhh... Dai-chan?
Daiki : *evil smile*
Deen-chan : O_Oll
Daiki : *approaches Deen-chan* kuhahahaha!!
Deen-chan : waaa!! *runs away*
Daiki : i'm coming dear~~~~~~~~~~~
*chases around the house*
Chinen : *opens door * I'M HO------ *sees his parents running around the house* *his ice cream drops*
Daiki : caught you! *kiss*
Chinen : WAAAAA?!?!?!
Daiki : eh? O_O
Deen-chan : *steps on Daiki's foot*
Daiki : waaa!! hunnniiieeeee~~~~ *cries*
Deen-chan : welcome back Chii ^_^ *cooks lunch*
Chinen : mummyyy~~~~
Daiki : *goes to one corner and pouts* hmph~!

xDD
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:


h4CkSigN wrote:


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

19 sec bfore me?
ahaahah


haha.. and my last post was 1 second after you :lol:
yes~ i am sooo fast in posting~!


ur really fast!!ahaha
n btw OMG ur avii!!kyaaaaaaaaa~


yes i know..
hott guys..
ya gotta love em!!

been so long since i talked to you cha-chan~!!
*huggies* miss youuuu~~
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h4CkSigN wrote:


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:


h4CkSigN wrote:


yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

19 sec bfore me?
ahaahah


haha.. and my last post was 1 second after you :lol:
yes~ i am sooo fast in posting~!


ur really fast!!ahaha
n btw OMG ur avii!!kyaaaaaaaaa~


yes i know..
hott guys..
ya gotta love em!!

been so long since i talked to you cha-chan~!!
*huggies* miss youuuu~~


jaejoong!!!!!!ahahaha
hv u heard their songs from mirotic vers c?

yeaaaaaaah!soooo longg.
IMY2!!*hugshugs*
:)
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yesss!!! omgosh!!

Love Bye Love and Don't Say Goodbye are love!!!

*excited excited*
jaejoong-oppa wrote Don't Say Goodbye!!! xDD

i bought their Mirotic album!! HUGE POSTER!!

*huggies*~~~
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h4CkSigN wrote:

ehhh.. *lazy lazy*
T^T''
you can read my other fanfics on my LJ though..
umh.. their based on dbsk YunJae fanfic..
so theres yaoi in there~ ^^

http://kurisuteru94.livejournal.com/

*advertising* LOL

so yea~~
here~!!

Daiki : *looks around the house*
Deen-chan : dear.. what are you looking for?
Daiki : is Chii in the house?
Deen-chan : he's in school.. why?
Daiki : *evil smile*
Deen-chan : uhh... Dai-chan?
Daiki : *evil smile*
Deen-chan : O_Oll
Daiki : *approaches Deen-chan* kuhahahaha!!
Deen-chan : waaa!! *runs away*
Daiki : i'm coming dear~~~~~~~~~~~
*chases around the house*
Chinen : *opens door * I'M HO------ *sees his parents running around the house* *his ice cream drops*
Daiki : caught you! *kiss*
Chinen : WAAAAA?!?!?!
Daiki : eh? O_O
Deen-chan : *steps on Daiki's foot*
Daiki : waaa!! hunnniiieeeee~~~~ *cries*
Deen-chan : welcome back Chii ^_^ *cooks lunch*
Chinen : mummyyy~~~~
Daiki : *goes to one corner and pouts* hmph~!

xDD


uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
continue!! continue!!!!!!!!!!! hahahaha i dont mind if this became a chat rum!!!
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