Would you say if this could be an awesome anime or show?
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Posted 12/13/08 , edited 12/13/08
Characters i made up in my mind that would be awesome to be in a anime or any show. look at the characters description and post to the forum if this would be awesome or not to be in a anime or a show.


Caleb (Main character)- He is in a broken family and just lives with his sister (Amber) , who is now his legal guardian, is a lay back high school student who is in love with his grade school sweetheart (Jenna), but still trying so hard to know if she likes her or not, if he can try to make her like him again, and trying to find the perfect way to tell her how he feels. At home he is in a house full of drugs and alcohol, since his sister makes a business about it to keep both of them alive. Of course he is taking up the drugs, but he was gifted to not get addicted to any of them, but none the less, he still takes them. At the High school he is trying to make his friends happy no matter what happens.

Jenna (Girl Lead)- She is pretty and smart girl that cluelessly doesn't know that Caleb loves her. Her ex-boy friend broke up with her since he transfer and lived somewhere away from the school and felt like finding another. After that, Jenna was just moving on enjoying the single-life being with Caleb and someother friends, Jenna and Caleb's changed alot after entering high school, she really didnt care, she was just happy Caleb didnt change, from this twhole year of highschool, she made a promise to just stick with him, as they go through the school year, she starts liking Caleb more and more, Although their are times when they go out, guys really think she is more attractive, making it hard for Caleb to get with her.

Crystal - She starts as a very sweet goody good perky eader at the beginning of then year and president the school's body directory, and being a sweet couple with her boyfriend (Carter) who she had changed him to a goody good too. When she decided to hang out with Caleb after the class being divided, she starts to show her true colors by being a very attractive girl with a kinky additude, to make her boyfriend go back to the funny tough guy that she fell in love with. she would be like that only around her friends, because her dad is the vice principal of the school. She would do drugs with Caleb when they were getting to know eachother until he admitted his feelings about the girl. After finding out that the guy is in love with the girl, she would be a very good friend and trys to get guys away from the girl so he could get his way with her with out any distractions. Caleb promised her once that Caleb and Jenna get together, she and her boyfriend would be the new bestfriend.

James Carter - he was the best friend of Caleb and boy friend of the Crystal since junior high prom. He starts as a lame good boy that fell in love with Crystal, but then turns back to his tough and funny guy that drinks and doesn't give for anyone but her. He wouldn't try the drugs since he can't control it like his girlfriend, and isn't immune, like the guy, so he just smokes pipes and cigarettes to join the fun they have. He was the first to know that the guy likes the girl since he admitted it. for being an expert on guys hitting on girls, he tells the him how to get to her, even if he never rily like Jenna,and tells Crystal to make the guys who are hitting on Jenna so the guy can make his moves. The relationship they have together are very very erotic everytime they are alone, but what the girl wants is to save her virginity til the end of highschool.

Kris -He Is a very multi-talented kid as he can play guitar drums and piano, dance hiphop, sing like an angel, and make his friends laugh. but he is still a average teen to everyone else. he is Calebs bestfriend right now, and he knows that he has drugs, but he doesnt know that Caleb likes Jenna since Caleb thinks that he wouldn't care less. He is in love with this popular girl (Hailey) in his class until he falls inlove with a girl (Sadie) he met at a party. the popular girl finds the clue that Kris likes her and realizes that she does like him Back, then these two girls fight over him, he tells the popular girl that he doesn't like her anymore, but along high school, he keeps on thinking if he ever made the right choice.

Elizabeth (Liz) - She is a tough girl that makes everyone happy acting all cute. She is the co-captain of her soccer team and president on the debate club. She too doesn't know anything about Caleb liking Jenna but she barely hangsout with them except during lunch and nightsout. She rily is sad that her boyfriend (Morgan) is having his lastday in highschool together before he leaves for college, so she makes days with him very special, unfortunatly they breakup after half of the simester was done, then she has a bi curious thoughts about this accident she had with a popular girl (Simmon) in the locker room and ends up thinking she is lesbian, she goes on highschool thinking if her thoughts are right and she is clearly a lesbian or not.

Amber- She is the older sister and guardian of Caleb, since there parents divorced, there mom dead, there dad in war at Iraq, and when they had a feud with there other brothers, she is still in college taking up tourism. but after nights she is at clubs drinking and hanging out with friends. she is also making money by food service and selling drugs which she get by knowing people from the clubs. she is very smart and very helpful when it comes to Caleb's problems and is always there for him, she is trying so hard to make the police get out from her back and trying her best to keep the house and her brother from being taken away.

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Posted 12/13/08
Too much character , and most character has its own story, maybe you have to focus more on the first character. When I first read it, I thought it was interesting, but when i read more, its get complicated and confusing, maybe the way you write it. just my opinion though..
I like to write stories too, usually I'll write it down and ask my cousin/friends to read it. If you like writing stories maybe you can do what I did, if you get great feedback you can publish it :))
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Posted 12/13/08
first off, could you use names? cause I'm having trouble understanding who dated who and who dumped who and got together with who to make jealous another who... get it? :D
secondly, if it were to be an anime, it would be like... after dark hours, cause it's pretty harsh...
thirdly... you only write the script or draw yourself? (if it were a manga/anime)
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Posted 12/13/08

riripyon wrote:

Too much character , and most character has its own story, maybe you have to focus more on the first character. When I first read it, I thought it was interesting, but when i read more, its get complicated and confusing, maybe the way you write it. just my opinion though..
I like to write stories too, usually I'll write it down and ask my cousin/friends to read it. If you like writing stories maybe you can do what I did, if you get great feedback you can publish it :))


Well technically that is my whole point, every person has a story to contribute. that what makes it interesting.
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Posted 12/13/08

layla_adelle wrote:

first off, could you use names? cause I'm having trouble understanding who dated who and who dumped who and got together with who to make jealous another who... get it? :D
secondly, if it were to be an anime, it would be like... after dark hours, cause it's pretty harsh...
thirdly... you only write the script or draw yourself? (if it were a manga/anime)


Well, the time i thought of it, i was still thinking for gud names for each character, but i edited it so u could understand it now....

I do agree with the dark hours, since its very bold and stuff, like elfen lied.... but yeah i get it

I would draw the characters in this series, but i was thinking of just writing it in a book, my friends told me it should be an anime or a drama series. so then i just made this forum and showed off the character.
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Posted 12/14/08
give it a shot! what have you got to lose? write it in a book and you'll see later what may come out of it
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Posted 12/18/08
The story itself is pretty interesting...I think you should go for it and try to make it into a book( the drug part is a little different/weird though.Just a thought ).
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