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Posted 12/14/08 , edited 12/15/08
Okay, so, first competion will be for the month of January. All entires are due by the first of next month. It's must have something to do with the topics surrounding the roleplay. I'll create a special thread for voting and and contests entires in the next few days for so.
Okay so this time around it's for poetry. Submit your best. ^_________________^
I FORGOT TO ADD THAT IT WILL BE FREESTYLE POETRY SO POST ANY TYPE THAT YOU WANT, SHOOT IT CAN EVEN BE A COUPLET ABOUT A TOLIET>
Posted 12/15/08 , edited 12/15/08
I guess Im in...

Theme:Sky
The sky was a piece of blue
It was like a serene picture
It reflects us like a mirror
A neverending piece of blue.


Theme:Sea
The sea is water
It flows back and forth
It has a mirror like.
A neverending piece of it
It finds gaps and holes to flow
It has a destination
Never to reach


Theme:Songs
It reflects on ourselves
It has the power to reach
Everyone has their own song
Songs can be light
Even darkness fill them


Theme:Darkness
Darkness fill every corner
It fills your heart
It welcomes people


Can't believe Im really doing it :p I became really poetic
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Posted 12/15/08 , edited 12/15/08
here i go~

Theme:Loneliness
Night falls...doubts rise

...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in.

Loneliness becomes your companion

...depression becomes your friend

...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien.

Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart

Pain is all you know

...suffering is all you practice.

The demons dance insanely

...The eagles' wings are clipped

...the hungry dog is left to die.

Pain is only eased by greater pain.

A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with

......nothing, emptiness.

All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked.

You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment.

The leaves turn brown and die

......a cold wind caresses your body.

Lost in a maze, searching for a way out

Check............and mate

......the game is over, the battle is lost.

Welcome home my friend.

Feel free to dance among the dead.

can i do more?? i really love poems~

Theme: feelings
What do you do when your feelings are mixed up inside you
You try to be happy but inside your always blue
At times you'd like to cry but theres people all about
So you hold it back and try not to pout
You try not to think of the bad times you had
And try to be happy but inside your always sad
You know exactly what you really want to say
But you can never get it out to this very day
It runs about in your head both day and night
And it doesn't go away no matter how hard you fight
People ask "How are you" you say "good" what a lie
If they only knew you would really rather cry
No matter what you do it is always on your mind
And all the people around you are so happy and kind
You try everything but nothing seems to work
All that pain because of one little hurt
No one understands what your going thru now
You want to live a happy life but you don't know how

there you go hope you like it~
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Posted 12/15/08 , edited 12/24/08
blah here goes...making these up on the spot! x]

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i dont think i'm very poetic but im really bored ._.;
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Posted 12/15/08

miysui wrote:

blah here goes...making these up on the spot! x]

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i dont think i'm very poetic but im really bored ._.;


i really liked it . good job~
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Posted 12/15/08

kittymeo wrote:

i really liked it . good job~


no way! yours was soo much better. i like your first one :3
Posted 12/15/08
I nvr became this poetic.
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Posted 12/15/08

miysui wrote:


kittymeo wrote:

i really liked it . good job~


no way! yours was soo much better. i like your first one :3


hehe thank you lols we both are awesome lols
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Posted 12/15/08
lol same. the last time i wrote a poem was a long time ago but i dont know what happened to them...they were good too ><
Posted 12/15/08
How about mine?They're horrible*goes to corner to weep*
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Posted 12/15/08
i love poems my sis showed them to me


hehe i didn't have time for them but now!!!!!!!! i love them!!!!!!!!
Posted 12/16/08
ahh i'll give it a shot Dx

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While the sun falls and the moon rises,
gentle breezes easily pass through
The darkness appears with merciless cries,
yet they manage to scar the pain inside of you

Again and again,
the neverending feeling of someone watching you
The bloodlust you can't seem to control
has taken over your mind as it goes into overdrive,
but you never know what to do

Love is forsaken as well as all feeling
Emotionless and senseless, all is lost
Instinct is put to the test as you fight only to survive
Because death is always painted in our eyes

The path is dark and will haunt forever in our dreams
A memory so dreaded that even love cannot heal
A nightmare it's called, that's locked deep inside
But nothing can keep our true demon-self sealed...




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Posted 12/16/08
i love your poem!! X3
Posted 12/16/08
lol thanks, same goes to you~! xP
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Posted 12/16/08
no, mine are lame XD hahaha
yours has a little rhyme to it. so awesome >w<
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