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Posted 12/18/08
Yep.
Posted 12/21/08 , edited 12/22/08
:DD ~ i'm in ,

<3<3<3

fake moments;

THE SUN THAT NEVER SETS
to the happy endings -
that never have beginnings
to the broken hearts-
that never are smashed
to the litre of tears -
that never been shed
to the late night conversations
that never took place
to those who never fall out of love
because you never fall in love
THE SUN THAT NEVER SETS


<3<3<3


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Posted 12/21/08
wow....your poem is great
Posted 12/21/08
... [:<
really?! o-o
Posted 12/21/08
Ooh.Nice.
Posted 12/22/08
thankss
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Posted 12/22/08 , edited 12/22/08
I'm saving that one...
Posted 12/22/08
your saving mines ? o_o
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Posted 12/24/08

kittymeo wrote:

here i go~

Theme:Loneliness
Night falls...doubts rise

...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in.

Loneliness becomes your companion

...depression becomes your friend

...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien.

Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart

Pain is all you know

...suffering is all you practice.

The demons dance insanely

...The eagles' wings are clipped

...the hungry dog is left to die.

Pain is only eased by greater pain.

A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with

......nothing, emptiness.

All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked.

You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment.

The leaves turn brown and die

......a cold wind caresses your body.

Lost in a maze, searching for a way out

Check............and mate

......the game is over, the battle is lost.

Welcome home my friend.

Feel free to dance among the dead.

can i do more?? i really love poems~

Theme: feelings
What do you do when your feelings are mixed up inside you
You try to be happy but inside your always blue
At times you'd like to cry but theres people all about
So you hold it back and try not to pout
You try not to think of the bad times you had
And try to be happy but inside your always sad
You know exactly what you really want to say
But you can never get it out to this very day
It runs about in your head both day and night
And it doesn't go away no matter how hard you fight
People ask "How are you" you say "good" what a lie
If they only knew you would really rather cry
No matter what you do it is always on your mind
And all the people around you are so happy and kind
You try everything but nothing seems to work
All that pain because of one little hurt
No one understands what your going thru now
You want to live a happy life but you don't know how

there you go hope you like it~


this work amazed me
i wanna be a bee
until you surprised me
YOUR WORKS IS REALLY GREAT
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Posted 12/24/08

gleshillejacob wrote:


kittymeo wrote:

here i go~

Theme:Loneliness
Night falls...doubts rise

...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in.

Loneliness becomes your companion

...depression becomes your friend

...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien.

Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart

Pain is all you know

...suffering is all you practice.

The demons dance insanely

...The eagles' wings are clipped

...the hungry dog is left to die.

Pain is only eased by greater pain.

A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with

......nothing, emptiness.

All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked.

You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment.

The leaves turn brown and die

......a cold wind caresses your body.

Lost in a maze, searching for a way out

Check............and mate

......the game is over, the battle is lost.

Welcome home my friend.

Feel free to dance among the dead.

can i do more?? i really love poems~

Theme: feelings
What do you do when your feelings are mixed up inside you
You try to be happy but inside your always blue
At times you'd like to cry but theres people all about
So you hold it back and try not to pout
You try not to think of the bad times you had
And try to be happy but inside your always sad
You know exactly what you really want to say
But you can never get it out to this very day
It runs about in your head both day and night
And it doesn't go away no matter how hard you fight
People ask "How are you" you say "good" what a lie
If they only knew you would really rather cry
No matter what you do it is always on your mind
And all the people around you are so happy and kind
You try everything but nothing seems to work
All that pain because of one little hurt
No one understands what your going thru now
You want to live a happy life but you don't know how

there you go hope you like it~


this work amazed me
i wanna be a bee
until you surprised me
YOUR WORKS IS REALLY GREAT


YAYYYYYYYYYY THANK YOU LOL happy you liked it lol
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Posted 12/24/08

kittymeo wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


kittymeo wrote:

here i go~

Theme:Loneliness
Night falls...doubts rise

...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in.

Loneliness becomes your companion

...depression becomes your friend

...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien.

Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart

Pain is all you know

...suffering is all you practice.

The demons dance insanely

...The eagles' wings are clipped

...the hungry dog is left to die.

Pain is only eased by greater pain.

A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with

......nothing, emptiness.

All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked.

You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment.

The leaves turn brown and die

......a cold wind caresses your body.

Lost in a maze, searching for a way out

Check............and mate

......the game is over, the battle is lost.

Welcome home my friend.

Feel free to dance among the dead.

can i do more?? i really love poems~

Theme: feelings
What do you do when your feelings are mixed up inside you
You try to be happy but inside your always blue
At times you'd like to cry but theres people all about
So you hold it back and try not to pout
You try not to think of the bad times you had
And try to be happy but inside your always sad
You know exactly what you really want to say
But you can never get it out to this very day
It runs about in your head both day and night
And it doesn't go away no matter how hard you fight
People ask "How are you" you say "good" what a lie
If they only knew you would really rather cry
No matter what you do it is always on your mind
And all the people around you are so happy and kind
You try everything but nothing seems to work
All that pain because of one little hurt
No one understands what your going thru now
You want to live a happy life but you don't know how

there you go hope you like it~


this work amazed me
i wanna be a bee
until you surprised me
YOUR WORKS IS REALLY GREAT


YAYYYYYYYYYY THANK YOU LOL happy you liked it lol

np... juz stated the truth... hehehe
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Posted 12/24/08

gleshillejacob wrote:


kittymeo wrote:


gleshillejacob wrote:


kittymeo wrote:

here i go~

Theme:Loneliness
Night falls...doubts rise

...and the fear of knowing nothing creeps in.

Loneliness becomes your companion

...depression becomes your friend

...the world changes shape, everything becomes alien.

Sorrow emanates from you, in your soul a bleeding heart

Pain is all you know

...suffering is all you practice.

The demons dance insanely

...The eagles' wings are clipped

...the hungry dog is left to die.

Pain is only eased by greater pain.

A vacuum inside sucks away everything leaving you with

......nothing, emptiness.

All attempts have failed, all avenues now blocked.

You are behind God's back and persecution becomes your punishment.

The leaves turn brown and die

......a cold wind caresses your body.

Lost in a maze, searching for a way out

Check............and mate

......the game is over, the battle is lost.

Welcome home my friend.

Feel free to dance among the dead.

can i do more?? i really love poems~

Theme: feelings
What do you do when your feelings are mixed up inside you
You try to be happy but inside your always blue
At times you'd like to cry but theres people all about
So you hold it back and try not to pout
You try not to think of the bad times you had
And try to be happy but inside your always sad
You know exactly what you really want to say
But you can never get it out to this very day
It runs about in your head both day and night
And it doesn't go away no matter how hard you fight
People ask "How are you" you say "good" what a lie
If they only knew you would really rather cry
No matter what you do it is always on your mind
And all the people around you are so happy and kind
You try everything but nothing seems to work
All that pain because of one little hurt
No one understands what your going thru now
You want to live a happy life but you don't know how

there you go hope you like it~


this work amazed me
i wanna be a bee
until you surprised me
YOUR WORKS IS REALLY GREAT


YAYYYYYYYYYY THANK YOU LOL happy you liked it lol

np... juz stated the truth... hehehe


ahhhhhhhhh thank you lol !~ im good at poems!~
Posted 12/31/08 , edited 12/31/08
okey.. am in.... this is a short poem that i wrote long time ago...hehe

p.s:i think everyone is great.. i like them all....hehe...i really like the sunshine one and the darkness child that really goods..^__^

okeay here goes.....

Prefection

Tear drop down her face
Worthlessly
Her heart is rip to pieces
Unbroken
The fear is eating her
Silencely.........
Their ideal of prefection

Slowly, the yanking and nagging is
Torturing her ears
Faster, their delution and fantasy cirling in her argony.
Faster Faster,their hand cluchtes rapidly
suffercating her.

Eating her in their perfection.
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