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Posted 12/24/08


I'll reread the chapters again and see whether I can propose any ideas
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its okay, I'm posting the next chap now.
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A/N: I just released, that this story will me sort of magic-ky, but still Amuto, don’t worry. Ok, maybe not. Only a bit.

“Amu.” Who was that? My eyes open, and I saw a beautiful woman, dressed in white cloth, with flowing brown hair down to her waist. “The charm bracelet… keep it well, it will guide you through life’s path.” She started fading away…

“Wait! Who are you?” I desperately asked.

“I am …”
And then she faded.

My eyes flew open, and I sat up straight and looked for my charm bracelet, and to my surprise, my charms on my bracelet was replaced my different ones. Except for the spiral shaped one. Sun, Moon, Star, and the spiral, and it glowed. My charm bracelet looked beautiful, more beautiful then I could imagine anything else would be, and just then, it caught sunlight and a rainbow was formed
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My charas popped out from their eggs, hearing me awake.

“Pretty desu~” Suu said, reaching forward to touch it.

“Very nice, I could use this as an idea for my next drawing…” Miki said, forming a rectangle with her arms, closing one eye, and you could practically hear the thoughts coming.

“Shiny…” Could be heard from Dia.

Just then I realized Ran had not spoken.

“Ran…?” I said, touching her egg, and it flew open, except this time, she was different. Much different.

I'm really, sorry, its really short again, I just want to draw out the suspense.><
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its okay, I'm posting the next chap now.


yay!
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sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


ohh. Take part in it?

Anyway. I'm gonna start to TRY adn write chap 4 tommorrow.


I'll try.:p
yay!





woonsim wrote:

NICE CHAP! KEEP IT UP!





candygirl95 wrote:

Nice chapter!Update soon


its out! :)) sry, its short, and pretty bad. ><
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GoShugoCHara wrote:

You're great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the best fanfic I eVer read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep writing okay ?




thx^^ But is it real,y THAT good??





GoShugoCHara wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


GoShugoCHara wrote:

You're great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the best fanfic I eVer read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep writing okay ?




thx^^ But is it real,y THAT good??


really~~~ trust me!!





unicornee- wrote:

Haha, don't worry. Some people read but don't comment. You never know when someone is enjoying it.
Just believe in yourself, and bring out that radiance in you!
*sweatdrop*
Uh... trying to imitate Dia, ehehe...


Its out! sry, short and not really gd agian><
Posted 12/24/08

SilverStarmist wrote:


sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


ohh. Take part in it?

Anyway. I'm gonna start to TRY adn write chap 4 tommorrow.


I'll try.:p
yay!





woonsim wrote:

NICE CHAP! KEEP IT UP!





candygirl95 wrote:

Nice chapter!Update soon


its out! :)) sry, its short, and pretty bad. ><


Different?Wat did u mean by that?sry I didn't rly undertsnad
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sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


ohh. Take part in it?

Anyway. I'm gonna start to TRY adn write chap 4 tommorrow.


I'll try.:p
yay!





woonsim wrote:

NICE CHAP! KEEP IT UP!





candygirl95 wrote:

Nice chapter!Update soon


its out! :)) sry, its short, and pretty bad. ><


Different?Wat did u mean by that?sry I didn't rly undertsnad


ur nto supposed to. Next chap you will. Do u like it?
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(I don't think this chap is gd, forgive me>< I tired my best...:(()
Posted 12/24/08

SilverStarmist wrote:


sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:


ohh. Take part in it?

Anyway. I'm gonna start to TRY adn write chap 4 tommorrow.


I'll try.:p
yay!





woonsim wrote:

NICE CHAP! KEEP IT UP!





candygirl95 wrote:

Nice chapter!Update soon


its out! :)) sry, its short, and pretty bad. ><


Different?Wat did u mean by that?sry I didn't rly undertsnad


ur nto supposed to. Next chap you will. Do u like it?


sry if Im too direct.Not rly.But the nxt chapter will of course be better.Ohhh!*looks excited and rly is*
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So you think this chap is nicce...?
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So you think this chap is nicce...?


Yep.
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sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:



So you think this chap is nicce...?


Yep.


YAY! I will start writing once a FEW mroe pple ahve read this hcap.
Posted 12/24/08

SilverStarmist wrote:


sparkle22099 wrote:


SilverStarmist wrote:



So you think this chap is nicce...?


Yep.


YAY! I will start writing once a FEW mroe pple ahve read this hcap.


Whee.Why don't you create your character in Dream high Roleplay?Than we can rp.....
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Nice chapter! Pls update soon
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