Post Reply Poetry Contest
Posted 12/19/08
Please submit you poetry here!!!we will credit your name and it will be up till the next contest!!Judging ends next Friday!!!
Posted 12/19/08
oh and btw. some of my poems (well actually most of them) don't actually express things that i feel or would want to do. Image i don't want to lose friends over these things :P

It's what I do. It's who I am.

Fear me,
Never let the fear die.
Run my dear,
Run and hide,
It is futile.
I can see through walls.
Your fear calls me to you,
My love.
As I approach my prey,
I can now feel your fear.
For there is now physical contact.
With my cold hands,
Wrapped around your neck,
I squeeze harder.
And as I squeze I whisper.
In your ear my love.
This is what I say.
" I'll steal the diamonds from your eyes,"
" I'll turn your promises into lies,"
Once more I whisper in her ear,
"You better fear me dear, for I am Death,"
"And I'll take that shit you call a life,"
"In a single fucking breath"
One more time,
I whispered in her ear:
"Fear me dear, for I am Death."

Sand on the Beach

Sitting here on the beach,
Small grains coursing through my toes,
I stare out at the ocean.
As the sun starts to set,
I think of how all these small grains,
Bunched up together form a beauty.
A beauty of sand.
This beauty is warm to the touch.
Yet as I reach further in,
I shiver, for this beauty,
Is cold under it's skin.
As the sea engulfs the sun,
I notice the moon.
The cold side of the beauty which is the sun.
And as I close my eyes,
I wonder if all beauty,
Has a cold side.

Whispers

I hear a voice,
A soft voice.
It sends shivers down my body.
This voice,
Says things I don't want to hear.
As I cry,
This voice whispers thoughts.
Thoughts of pain and despair.
Thoughts of sorrow and hatred.
Thoughts of death.
As I slowly drift away,
The voice becomes silent.
But wait,
What is that figure,
Lying stiff on the ground?
It's a body a realize,
My body.
It seems that the voice,
Which chilled me to the bone,
Was none other than death himself.
Swift that he is with his mighty scythe,
He steals my life away.

Apocalypse

Death and Destruction
Sorrow and Despair
Blood and Gore
Greed and Envy
Lust and Sin
The end of the world.
The Power of Love.

Tug O' War

Pull.
Pull and Tug
It's a Tug O' War
The game we played oh so long ago.
The game where a simple rope,
Would let me pull you in,
Pull you into my loving arms.
But that was back in the day,
The days of the past.
Now you're gone.
Taken from me now lonely arms.
The arms which hold but despair.
Despair for you my love.
Despair for you my life.
After so many years,
Play with me one more time my love,
Pull the rope.
Use all your strength.
Don't give in so easily this time.
Keep pulling.
Pull on the rope that is my life.
This time I will give in.
This time I will let go.
And fall away from life.
And fall into your loving arms.
This love which claimed my life.

End it all...

Why is it that I'm so worthless?
Unwanted by the world.
Used only as the subject of,
Petty insults...
None of them like me.
Not one...
I've tried to make friends,
But do all they do is hurt?
Is that what life is for?
To inflict, receive and go trough
Pain?
Then so be it.
Let it be mental or physical.
I've already gone through the mental.
So give me my new curse.
Give me my new addiction.
Give me my new razorblade.
I'll cut like there's no tomorrow.
So I'll forget the things that,
Will befall my heart.
This new feeling,
This self affliction.
Sure it hurts,
but it covers up a greater pain.
The pain inflicted by others.
Why is it that, that hurts me so?
Must I compare?
Am I simply not cutting deep enough?
As you wish,
My corrupted soul.
I'll cut down to the bone.
Only to have my sorrow and despair,
And pain and agony,
Run down to the floor as blood.
Ending my life.

Collecting my tears

If I collected my tears,
Shed over the years,
I would have already drowned.
I don't do anything but frown.
The love of my life,
This razor, cold and light.
Simply as sharp,
As the highest string of this harp,
Cuts through my skin,
Why can't I ever win?
I never did anything wrong.
I guess I just don't belong.
I'm slowly losing this fight,
The fight to continue my life.
Why go on with such dread?
Take this gun. Point it at my head.
Slowly I'll pull the trigger.
There's no need for a grave digger.
For when I fall to the floor,
This fuse will ignite and I will be no more.

Love Without Love

How do they do it?
The ones who make love without love.
Beautiful as dancers,
Gliding over each others bodies.
Like ice skaters over ice.
Fingers hooked,
Inside each others bodies.
Faces red as bloody steak.
Wine, wet as a child at birth.
Whose mothers are going to give them away.
How can they do it?
How can they live like that?
Will I ever be like that?
Should I be like that?

Take this life.

So many thoughts are in my head,
Of all the things already said.
Their feelings for me dark with filth,
Almost as black as this shaded quilt.
I don't know what I ever did,
I don't deserve any of it.
I can't stand this daily abuse,
This blade, tired of it's use.
My heart can't take this much pain,
There's no more room for scars, or troubles for the brain.
This one idea keeps coming to,
This simple thing I have to do.
I guess it's the one option I have left,
A simple thing. A thing called death.
By tonight I will decide,
When and where I'll commit suicide.


My holy savior.

What is death?
Death is eternal sleep.
Lying breathless in a coffin under the earth.
Death is deliverance.
Our souls sent to the afterlife.
Death is,
Freedom.
From hate, sorrow and despair.
Death is liberty.
For my caged heart.
Death is an enemy,
For which most wish to conquer.
Death is my savior.
From this world corrupted.
Bring me death.
Lay me in that coffin.

(untitled)

I wish I could hate you.
It would make this all so easy.
I would forget all about you.
An how much you mean to me.
...Nothing in life is ever easy.

Life and love are not fair.
There is not mercy.
They don't care.

This wound is still as fresh,
As the day you left me.
Time dosen't heal.
It intensifies the everything.
All this pain and suffering.

I wish I could forget.
I wish I could leave.
I wish I could die,
And stop loving you

But nothing is ever easy.

my very first (HORRIBLE) emo poem

Blackened are my thoughts,
Like the rose in my dreams.
My skin shields the light,
For the shadows within me.
I'm drowning in this quicksilver,
This liquid black.
My heart Can't escape it.
There's no turning back.

I am the one

I am the one and the only.
The messenger of all that is holy.
I am the one that haunts your dreams,
I am all the subjects in your mind.
I am the one whom, everyday,
No one but you can see.
I am the one who loves your life.
I'd just LOVE to take it from you.
I am the one with decisions to make.
What should I do with this sharpened blade?
I am your one and only nightmare.
I'm the one you dumped last week.
I am the one with a death wish,
Which will be made a reality after your own.
I am the one who's looking into your eyes.
Torn right from their sockets.
I am the one who holds your heart.
It's blood still running down my arm.
I am the one who held your life.
I am the one who just threw it away.

Rape (Graphic poem)

You don't need to worry.
I'm in no hurry.
Sit tight for now,
Watch my fancy bow.
You are my goddess.
Your beauty is flawless.
Just wait a bit miss.
I want but a kiss.
There's no need for screams.
We're in my dreams.
Now that i'm ready,
Please hold steady.
This will hurt a lot.
But you're all I got.
Forgive me for my sins,
You self-conceited bitch.
I'm almost done now.
Although I still don't know how.
You had such a perfect body.
Now you're just ugly.
As I run away,
I think of how you will never again,
See the light of day.

REVENGE {in a sick way}

Flowers of red begin to bloom,
On the white sheets in her room.
We were both there last night,
The mood was set to oh so right.
There were candles all around,
Your light breathing, the only sound
I went and sat on the side of the bed,
You gazed into my eyes. Here's what you said|
"I love you with all my heart,"
"But there is something tearing it apart."
"I've bee cheating on you" she said,
"Another boy was just here, and I gave him head."
I just couldn't believe my ears,
I almost lashed out in tears,
I stoped myself before it was to late,
I told myself: "you know you can wait."
I did not make a fuss,
I said "let's put this all behind us."
Since you in the mood,
Do to me what you did to that dude.
That will be for my forgiveness,
I'll be the only witness.
After that, lay on the bed,
Make your legs widely spread.
I bet you know what I'll then do,
If your smart, you'll take part in it to.
I will then fall asleep.
Wake up tomorrow with not even a weep.

I did wake up the next day,
To find out how I made you pay.
You were on the bed, you wrists and throat cut,
You looked perfect, but your eyes were shut.
There was blood on the walls and the bed smealt of sweat and sex.
It could have been as if I were hexed.
I looked over to find your organs on the floor,
This trail of blood says you ran for the door.
Oh, and your eyes wern't shut the normal way,
They were gauged out by my thumbs before today.
This is what happens to a girl who cheats,
Avoid doing that, and you'll avoid getting beat.

REVENGE {in a sick way} #2

Free falling from this 200 story building,
This wind in my face is all that I'm feeling.
I wish I could have fealt this wind before,
Before I dealt with that filthy whore.
We fought about it last night,
About that other boy, her one and only light.
Once I had found out,
I aimlessly wanderd about.
After walking a day or so,
I deccided to kill that boy and his hoe.
After visiting the gun store,
I came home to an eyesore.
She was on the bed, doing him again,
For that reason I shot him in the head.
The bitch she screamed and screamed,
So I ended her misery, as well as her dreams.
How could I have ever loved her so?
She was nothing but a filthy hoe.

After a month or two,
I realized what I did to you.
You were infact the love of my life,
And now I realize I had no right.
You made your own choices.
I guess I shouldn't have listend to those voices.
I relive that night over and over.
And yes I know I deserve this torture.
Since I am such a coward,
I chose to end my life in this hour.
So now I'm falling down,
There will soon be a thud on the ground
Theres no way you'll ever forgive me.
Satan will shortly have me.
So i'll take this blade and ct out my heart.
That way every one will, know,
My love for you is what tore us apart.
Posted 12/20/08

tallman227 wrote:

oh and btw. some of my poems (well actually most of them) don't actually express things that i feel or would want to do. Image i don't want to lose friends over these things :P

It's what I do. It's who I am.

Fear me,
Never let the fear die.
Run my dear,
Run and hide,
It is futile.
I can see through walls.
Your fear calls me to you,
My love.
As I approach my prey,
I can now feel your fear.
For there is now physical contact.
With my cold hands,
Wrapped around your neck,
I squeeze harder.
And as I squeze I whisper.
In your ear my love.
This is what I say.
" I'll steal the diamonds from your eyes,"
" I'll turn your promises into lies,"
Once more I whisper in her ear,
"You better fear me dear, for I am Death,"
"And I'll take that shit you call a life,"
"In a single fucking breath"
One more time,
I whispered in her ear:
"Fear me dear, for I am Death."

Sand on the Beach

Sitting here on the beach,
Small grains coursing through my toes,
I stare out at the ocean.
As the sun starts to set,
I think of how all these small grains,
Bunched up together form a beauty.
A beauty of sand.
This beauty is warm to the touch.
Yet as I reach further in,
I shiver, for this beauty,
Is cold under it's skin.
As the sea engulfs the sun,
I notice the moon.
The cold side of the beauty which is the sun.
And as I close my eyes,
I wonder if all beauty,
Has a cold side.

Whispers

I hear a voice,
A soft voice.
It sends shivers down my body.
This voice,
Says things I don't want to hear.
As I cry,
This voice whispers thoughts.
Thoughts of pain and despair.
Thoughts of sorrow and hatred.
Thoughts of death.
As I slowly drift away,
The voice becomes silent.
But wait,
What is that figure,
Lying stiff on the ground?
It's a body a realize,
My body.
It seems that the voice,
Which chilled me to the bone,
Was none other than death himself.
Swift that he is with his mighty scythe,
He steals my life away.

Apocalypse

Death and Destruction
Sorrow and Despair
Blood and Gore
Greed and Envy
Lust and Sin
The end of the world.
The Power of Love.

Tug O' War

Pull.
Pull and Tug
It's a Tug O' War
The game we played oh so long ago.
The game where a simple rope,
Would let me pull you in,
Pull you into my loving arms.
But that was back in the day,
The days of the past.
Now you're gone.
Taken from me now lonely arms.
The arms which hold but despair.
Despair for you my love.
Despair for you my life.
After so many years,
Play with me one more time my love,
Pull the rope.
Use all your strength.
Don't give in so easily this time.
Keep pulling.
Pull on the rope that is my life.
This time I will give in.
This time I will let go.
And fall away from life.
And fall into your loving arms.
This love which claimed my life.

End it all...

Why is it that I'm so worthless?
Unwanted by the world.
Used only as the subject of,
Petty insults...
None of them like me.
Not one...
I've tried to make friends,
But do all they do is hurt?
Is that what life is for?
To inflict, receive and go trough
Pain?
Then so be it.
Let it be mental or physical.
I've already gone through the mental.
So give me my new curse.
Give me my new addiction.
Give me my new razorblade.
I'll cut like there's no tomorrow.
So I'll forget the things that,
Will befall my heart.
This new feeling,
This self affliction.
Sure it hurts,
but it covers up a greater pain.
The pain inflicted by others.
Why is it that, that hurts me so?
Must I compare?
Am I simply not cutting deep enough?
As you wish,
My corrupted soul.
I'll cut down to the bone.
Only to have my sorrow and despair,
And pain and agony,
Run down to the floor as blood.
Ending my life.

Collecting my tears

If I collected my tears,
Shed over the years,
I would have already drowned.
I don't do anything but frown.
The love of my life,
This razor, cold and light.
Simply as sharp,
As the highest string of this harp,
Cuts through my skin,
Why can't I ever win?
I never did anything wrong.
I guess I just don't belong.
I'm slowly losing this fight,
The fight to continue my life.
Why go on with such dread?
Take this gun. Point it at my head.
Slowly I'll pull the trigger.
There's no need for a grave digger.
For when I fall to the floor,
This fuse will ignite and I will be no more.

Love Without Love

How do they do it?
The ones who make love without love.
Beautiful as dancers,
Gliding over each others bodies.
Like ice skaters over ice.
Fingers hooked,
Inside each others bodies.
Faces red as bloody steak.
Wine, wet as a child at birth.
Whose mothers are going to give them away.
How can they do it?
How can they live like that?
Will I ever be like that?
Should I be like that?

Take this life.

So many thoughts are in my head,
Of all the things already said.
Their feelings for me dark with filth,
Almost as black as this shaded quilt.
I don't know what I ever did,
I don't deserve any of it.
I can't stand this daily abuse,
This blade, tired of it's use.
My heart can't take this much pain,
There's no more room for scars, or troubles for the brain.
This one idea keeps coming to,
This simple thing I have to do.
I guess it's the one option I have left,
A simple thing. A thing called death.
By tonight I will decide,
When and where I'll commit suicide.


My holy savior.

What is death?
Death is eternal sleep.
Lying breathless in a coffin under the earth.
Death is deliverance.
Our souls sent to the afterlife.
Death is,
Freedom.
From hate, sorrow and despair.
Death is liberty.
For my caged heart.
Death is an enemy,
For which most wish to conquer.
Death is my savior.
From this world corrupted.
Bring me death.
Lay me in that coffin.

(untitled)

I wish I could hate you.
It would make this all so easy.
I would forget all about you.
An how much you mean to me.
...Nothing in life is ever easy.

Life and love are not fair.
There is not mercy.
They don't care.

This wound is still as fresh,
As the day you left me.
Time dosen't heal.
It intensifies the everything.
All this pain and suffering.

I wish I could forget.
I wish I could leave.
I wish I could die,
And stop loving you

But nothing is ever easy.

my very first (HORRIBLE) emo poem

Blackened are my thoughts,
Like the rose in my dreams.
My skin shields the light,
For the shadows within me.
I'm drowning in this quicksilver,
This liquid black.
My heart Can't escape it.
There's no turning back.

I am the one

I am the one and the only.
The messenger of all that is holy.
I am the one that haunts your dreams,
I am all the subjects in your mind.
I am the one whom, everyday,
No one but you can see.
I am the one who loves your life.
I'd just LOVE to take it from you.
I am the one with decisions to make.
What should I do with this sharpened blade?
I am your one and only nightmare.
I'm the one you dumped last week.
I am the one with a death wish,
Which will be made a reality after your own.
I am the one who's looking into your eyes.
Torn right from their sockets.
I am the one who holds your heart.
It's blood still running down my arm.
I am the one who held your life.
I am the one who just threw it away.

Rape (Graphic poem)

You don't need to worry.
I'm in no hurry.
Sit tight for now,
Watch my fancy bow.
You are my goddess.
Your beauty is flawless.
Just wait a bit miss.
I want but a kiss.
There's no need for screams.
We're in my dreams.
Now that i'm ready,
Please hold steady.
This will hurt a lot.
But you're all I got.
Forgive me for my sins,
You self-conceited bitch.
I'm almost done now.
Although I still don't know how.
You had such a perfect body.
Now you're just ugly.
As I run away,
I think of how you will never again,
See the light of day.

REVENGE {in a sick way}

Flowers of red begin to bloom,
On the white sheets in her room.
We were both there last night,
The mood was set to oh so right.
There were candles all around,
Your light breathing, the only sound
I went and sat on the side of the bed,
You gazed into my eyes. Here's what you said|
"I love you with all my heart,"
"But there is something tearing it apart."
"I've bee cheating on you" she said,
"Another boy was just here, and I gave him head."
I just couldn't believe my ears,
I almost lashed out in tears,
I stoped myself before it was to late,
I told myself: "you know you can wait."
I did not make a fuss,
I said "let's put this all behind us."
Since you in the mood,
Do to me what you did to that dude.
That will be for my forgiveness,
I'll be the only witness.
After that, lay on the bed,
Make your legs widely spread.
I bet you know what I'll then do,
If your smart, you'll take part in it to.
I will then fall asleep.
Wake up tomorrow with not even a weep.

I did wake up the next day,
To find out how I made you pay.
You were on the bed, you wrists and throat cut,
You looked perfect, but your eyes were shut.
There was blood on the walls and the bed smealt of sweat and sex.
It could have been as if I were hexed.
I looked over to find your organs on the floor,
This trail of blood says you ran for the door.
Oh, and your eyes wern't shut the normal way,
They were gauged out by my thumbs before today.
This is what happens to a girl who cheats,
Avoid doing that, and you'll avoid getting beat.

REVENGE {in a sick way} #2

Free falling from this 200 story building,
This wind in my face is all that I'm feeling.
I wish I could have fealt this wind before,
Before I dealt with that filthy whore.
We fought about it last night,
About that other boy, her one and only light.
Once I had found out,
I aimlessly wanderd about.
After walking a day or so,
I deccided to kill that boy and his hoe.
After visiting the gun store,
I came home to an eyesore.
She was on the bed, doing him again,
For that reason I shot him in the head.
The bitch she screamed and screamed,
So I ended her misery, as well as her dreams.
How could I have ever loved her so?
She was nothing but a filthy hoe.

After a month or two,
I realized what I did to you.
You were infact the love of my life,
And now I realize I had no right.
You made your own choices.
I guess I shouldn't have listend to those voices.
I relive that night over and over.
And yes I know I deserve this torture.
Since I am such a coward,
I chose to end my life in this hour.
So now I'm falling down,
There will soon be a thud on the ground
Theres no way you'll ever forgive me.
Satan will shortly have me.
So i'll take this blade and ct out my heart.
That way every one will, know,
My love for you is what tore us apart.


OMFG!!!!!!!those r a lot of poems.........hhmmm.....it took a while to decide and read....but me fav is love without love......yup!that's the one that the othere(whoever else will enter) will have to beat!!
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