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A Moment in Time
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ohmigawd. this is sooo damn freaking coooool~
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A Moment in Time

Chapter 8

(Flashback)

Tadase showed a prince like smile to Yume, but on the inside it was different something. Something Yume would never think that the thing inside of the so called ‘prince’.

(End of Flashback)

3 weeks later/ In Amu’s room

Normal POV

It has now been 3 weeks since Yume has joined the guardians. Then one day Yume’s Walkie-Talkie started to get static which means that someone was trying to get in touch with her.

Even though her parents told her not to get too close to Tadase, she still became a friend of his.

“Y…Yume can you hear me?” A voice called. The room was silent until Yume answered.

“Yes, who is it?” Yume questioned. “It’s Hiro,” the voice said.

“Hey, Hiro what’s up?” Yume asked. “Well, Kiri and the rest of us are still trying to fix the machine,” Hiro said.

“Kiri wanted to know where you are right now to see if it was working right,” Hiro stated.

“We will try to send an object to where you are to see if it’s working,” Hiro said.

“Okay,” Yume replied. “Try to stay clear just in case though,” Hiro stated.

Right now in the Future

“Okay everyone this is the moment we’ve been waiting for,” Kiri stated.

“Kiri are you sure this is going to work?” Haruhi asked. “I’m not sure yet so that’s why we’re sending an object,” Kiri replied.

“Oh,” Haruhi replied. “Hiro, go get the screwdriver and let’s see if it will work,” Kiri stated.

“Okay,” Hiro replied. Hiro then got the screwdriver and head towards the device.

“Alright, put the screwdriver on the table and then we’ll start,” Kiri announced.

Hiro placed the screwdriver on the table, but just seconds away before the test run the screwdriver fell off the table.

Hiro then picked up the screwdriver and in an instant the same thing happened Hiro was transported to where his friend was.

In the past right now

‘I wonder if everything is going okay there,’ Yume thought. Then there was a flash of light.

A thud was heard. Amu rushed upstairs to see what happened.

“Are you ok?” Amu questioned. “Yeah I just had an unexpected visitor,” Yume replied.

“Hi, I’m Fujisaki Hiro pleased to meet you… um Mrs. Tsukiyomi?” Hiro stated.

All Amu could say was ‘Hey?’

30 minutes later

A knock came from the balcony door. Amu opened the door.

“How’s my two favorite girls?” Ikuto asked. When he stepped in he almost flipped to see that a guy other than himself was in the room.

“Who’s this?” Ikuto asked suspiciously. “Um… Hi, Mr. Tsukiyomi I’m one of Yume’s friends,” Hiro stated.

“Oh, one of her friends,” Ikuto repeated. There was silence until Ikuto fully processed what the boy just said.

“What?!” Ikuto shouted in a whisper. “Well, um, you see papa my friends were trying to fix the machine and Hiro here got accidentally placed in this time,” Yume replied.

“And now were here,” Amu stated. Static was then heard from the Walkie –Talkie.

“Yume, can you hear me?” Kiri asked. “Loud and clear,” Yume replied.

“Please tell me that Hiro is with you,” Kiri pleaded. “He is,” Yume replied.

“Thank goodness,” KIri stated. “Kiri is the machine working?” Yume asked.

“Well, yes and no,” Kiri stated. “What does that mean,” Yume questioned.

“Ok here’s how it is the machine can work, but it only has enough juice for one person,” Kiri explained.

“Well, how will me and Hiro get back?” Yume questioned. “It will take me and Haruhi a little while longer to get some more juice and you know you can count on us,” Kiri stated.

“Ok,” Yume replied. “I have to go now to find out what’s going to help get you guys back so talk to you later,” Kiri said.

A few seconds later there was silence. “I guess we have more troubles now I’m sorry,” Yume apologized.

“It’s okay Yume,” Amu replied. Ikuto just nodded.

“Mama, papa what will we do about Hiro?” Yume asked. “WE could just forget all about him,” Ikuto stated sounding like a very over-protective father.

Amu nudged Ikuto. “Sorry, I’m just a little over-protective,” Ikuto stated.

“I know why don’t we let him attend our school and he can live with Ikuto until the time you guys leave,” Amu stated.

“That’s a perfect idea mama,” Yume stated. “No,” Ikuto stated.

“He can attend our school, but he can’t live with me,” Ikuto stated.

Amu thought about a way to convince him then it came to her. “Well, I guess he’ll have to stay with me and Yume,” Amu stated.

That caught Ikuto’s attention. “Okay, he can stay with me,” Ikuto stated.

In Amu’s mind she was celebrating that she had won. “Well, kid what’s your name?” Ikuto asked.

“Fujisaki Hiro,” Hiro replied. “While your going to our school your name will be Koshiba Hiro, but when with us you’re Fujisaki Hiro,” Ikuto stated.

From then on Fujisaki Hiro was now Koshiba Hiro.

TO BE CONTINUED…



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A Moment in Time

Chapter 9

(Flashback)

“Fujisaki Hiro,” Hiro replied. “While your going to our school your name will be Koshiba Hiro, but when with us you’re Fujisaki Hiro,” Ikuto stated.

From then on Fujisaki Hiro was now Koshiba Hiro.

(End of Flashback)

Normal POV

“Hiro, you kind of look familiar who are your parents,” Amu asked. “Fujisaki Nagehiko and Fujisaki Rima,” Hiro replied.

“Oh… WHAT?!” Amu said. “What’s wrong with that?” Hiro questioned.

“Well, you see your parents aren’t on good grounds with each other,” Amu replied.

“That can’t be true in the future my parents are happily married,” Hiro stated.

“I hate to say, but what mama said is true your parents don’t seem to see eye to eye,” Yume stated.

“Oh, I see, well at least I’ll get to see them before I was born,” Hiro stated.

“Yep, that’s true,” Yume stated with a smile. Hiro blushed.

At Ikuto’s house

“Hey, kid,” Ikuto said. “Yeah?” Hiro asked. “You wouldn’t happen to have a crush on my daughter would you?” Ikuto asked.

“Uh… um…eh yes,” Hiro replied. Ikuto felt mad, but then had an idea pop into his head.

“I don’t like the idea of you liking my daughter so let’s make a deal,” Ikuto stated.

“Ok, what?” Hiro asked. “I will allow you to like my daughter if you make sure she doesn’t get too close to someone,” Ikuto said.

“Are you serious?” Hiro asked. “Yes,” Ikuto replied.

“Who do I keep her from getting too close to,” Hiro questioned. “Hotori Tadase,” Ikuto stated.

The next day

The girls met up with Ikuto while going to school. “Amu I will get Hiro’s registration forms today and tell them that he’s my cousin,” Ikuto stated.

“Ok,” Amu replied. Ikuto pulled Amu to the side to then speak with her privately.

“Hiro agreed to watch over Yume from Tadase,” Ikuto stated. “That’s good, you know you’re a really good father,” Amu stated.

Ikuto was shocked at first then smirked. “Thank you Amu and you seem like a very good mother,” Ikuto stated.

Amu started to blush. “Now don’t get me wrong like I was praising you or anything,” Amu stated.

Ikuto chuckled and Amu became angry while she was still flushed.

After school at Ikuto’s home

“Hey kid, get down here,” Ikuto announced. Hiro came downstairs.

“Here’s your uniform,” Ikuto stated while tossing Hiro his uniform.

“Also remember our deal,” Ikuto stated.

The next day

“Class I would like to introduce you to your new classmate,” Nikaidou sensei stated.

Hiro came into the classroom. “Hi, I’m Koshiba Hiro,” Hiro stated.

Hiro was transferred into Amu and Yume’s class. Yume waved at Hiro and Hiro waved back.

The guys in the classroom glared at Hiro while the girls in the classroom glared at Yume.

‘Wow I somehow remember this feeling’ Amu thought as she looked at the atmosphere in the classroom.

“Let’s see Koshiba your seat will be… there by Hotori,” Nikaidou sensei stated.

Hiro walked to his seat. “Hi, I’m Hotori Tadase how do you do,” Tadase stated.

‘How could this person be someone Mr. Tsukiyomi doesn’t want around Yume,’ Hiro thought to himself.

“Hi, I’m Koshiba Hiro how do you do,” Hiro stated. “Mr. Koshiba I’m having a birthday party at my house next Saturday and I would like to invite you to come,” Tadase offered.

“Sure,” Hiro agreed. Tadase gave him a prince-like smile.

Tadase’s POV

‘This new guy seems to know the new chick, hmm, I have to shake him off so I can reach my goal at dating all the girls in the school,’ I thought.

‘That Hinamori ignored me like I was just a piece of trash, she was suppose to fall for me,’ I thought. ‘That Tsukiyomi girl rejected me because she said she liked that jock Souma,’ I thought.

‘But this Kimoto girl seems better so I’ll make her mine,’ I thought.

‘At this party I’ll confess to her and she’ll accept; no girl can resist my prince-like charms well besides Hinamori and Tsukiyomi that declined me,’ I thought.

When class was over I told everyone about the party. I knew right then and there that my plan was going to work.

TO BE CONTIUED…




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A Moment in Time

Chapter 10

(Flashback)

‘At this party I’ll confess to her and she’ll accept; no girl can resist my prince-like charms well besides Hinamori and Tsukiyomi that declined me,’ I thought.

When class was over I told everyone about the party. I knew right then and there that my plan was going to work.

(End of Flashback)

Normal POV

“Mama, did you hear Tadase yesterday he said that he was going to have a party next Saturday,” Yume stated.

“Yeah, so what?” Amu questioned. “Well, can we go?” Yume asked.

“No,” Amu stated bluntly. “Aw, why mama?” Yume questioned.

“Because I said so,” Amu said. Yume then started to whine and whine until there was a knock at the balcony door.

‘Papa’s here maybe I can convince him,’ Yume thought. Ikuto and Hiro then walked into the room.

“Papa can I go to a party,” Yume questioned. “Sure,” Ikuto stated.

“Tell him who’s hosting it,” Amu stated. “Who’s hosting,” Ikuto asked curiously.

“Well…umm…ah, Tadase,” Yume stated. “You’re not going,” Ikuto stated bluntly.

“But why,” Yume questioned. “You just can’t,” Amu and Ikuto stated together.

Yume then began to whine more until Amu and Ikuto couldn’t handle it.

“Ok, you can go to the party, but we’re coming too,” Amu stated. “We are,” Ikuto questioned.

“Yes,” Amu said. Ikuto then leaned over and whispered to Hiro, “Just remember what you have to do while we’re at this party,”

Next Friday

“Yume let’s go out to shop for some clothes to wear tomorrow,” Amu stated.

“Ok,” Yume stated.

At Ikuto’s house right now

“Mr. Tsukiyomi I don’t really understand what you have against Mr. Hotori,” Hiro stated.

“Well, if you know what I know you would,” Ikuto stated. “Would you mind explaining?” Hiro asked.

“Ok, but just don’t tell Yume,” Ikuto stated. “It started in our first semester of school,” Ikuto stated.

(Flashback)

“Ms. Tsukiyomi will you please go out with me?” Tadase asked. “I’m sorry, but I already have someone I like,” Utau explained.

“The next thing I know that kiddy king had a new girl around him everyday,” Ikuto stated.

“Then he went for Amu,” Ikuto stated angrily.

“Ms. Hinamori will you please go out with me?” Tadase questioned. “I’m sorry Tadase, but I’m really thinking more about school than dating,” Amu stated.

“As you can see that person that you might think is kind is actually a player,” Ikuto stated.

Hiro looked a little shock, but shock it off. “I now understand why you don’t want Yume to get too close to Mr. Hotori,” Hiro stated.

“Well, I guess we’re now on good terms with each other,” Ikuto stated.
Hiro started to smile.

“But that doesn’t mean I accept you for my daughter,” Ikuto stated. Hiro then started to cry.

The next day at Tadase’s home

Tadase’s POV

‘Okay everyone is here so now I can put my plan into motion,’ I thought.

Everyone started to gather inside of my house, but I didn’t see my prey I then started to search for her.

Yume’s POV

I don’t know why, but I brought the Walkie-Talkie with me just in case something urgent were to pop up.

I was just a few steps before going into Tadase’s house, but there was static in my Walkie-Talkie so I knew it had to be Kiri.

“Yume, can you hear me?” Kiri asked. “Yep loud and clear,” I stated.

“We have enough juice to get both of you guys back home,” Kiri stated happily.

“Seriously!” Yume exclaimed. “Yep, just tell me when you’re ready and I’ll teleport you guys back,” Kiri stated.
“Ok, I’ll talk to you when I get back home,” Yume stated.

Tadase’s POV

Man I’ve been searching for this chick everywhere. The only place I haven’t looked is outside.

When I got outside I found my prey. ‘Ok put on the prince charms,’ I thought.

“Ms. Kimoto what are you doing out here all by yourself?” I questioned.

“I was just talking to someone,” she said. ‘Ok let’s just get to the confession,’ I thought.

“Um, Ms. Kimoto I know this is sudden, but will you please go out with me?” I asked.

She began to blush and I knew how she would react. “Tadase I’m flattered, but I have some one else that I like.

Wait did she just decline me? When I had processed what she had said I started to shake with anger.

I felt like I wanted to hit something, better yet someone. This chick.

TO BE CONTINUED…



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I really love it
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omg tadase is evil!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLOXX continue!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wait if they're both going to high school (ikuto was 17 in the manga/anime so he would have already graduated by the time amu got there) how is there the guardians
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A Moment in Time

Chapter 11

(Flashback)

Wait did she just decline me? When I had processed what she had said I started to shake with anger.

I felt like I wanted to hit something, better yet someone. This chick.

(End of Flashback)

Hiro’s POV

The party is really good, but I noticed two people missing. Tadase and Yume.

I searched around the crowd of people at the party, but still I couldn’t find the two.
I got a little nervous because I knew Mr. Tsukiyomi would get me so while he and Mrs. Tsukiyomi were distracted I went outside to see if the two were outside.

When I got out I came when Tadase asked Yume to go out with him. I felt a strange tingling feeling when he said that, but that faded away when Yume said that she had someone that she liked.

Tadase started to shake and automatically lifted his hand.

Ikuto’s POV

Hmm where’s the kid, better yet where’s my Yume. “Amu do you see the kid or Yume around?” I asked.
She nodded her head no. I then became a little curious. I started to search around with Amu behind me.

After we saw neither of the two inside the house we checked outside. There we found the kid looking at something or someone.

Both me and Amu saw what he was looking at…Tadase raising his hand.

Normal POV

Slap that sound echoed through out the ears of the people outside. Tadase slapped Yume leaving a mark on her face.
Yume fell to her knees and as fast as lightning Ikuto and Hiro went to show Tadase how to treat a girl.

Amu went to Yume to check on her. “How dare you hit my Yume!” Ikuto yelled.

“She’s just a chick just like pinky over there,” Tadase stated. Ikuto punched Tadase in the gut for that comment.
“You can talk about any girls except my Amu and Yume!” Ikuto announced.

Amu started to blush at his comment. “Yeah and you never ever speak or come near my Yume again,” Hiro stated.

Yume then began to blush along with her mother. Then Ikuto and Hiro dived in for a punch at the same time leaving Tadase unconscience.

A hour later at Amu’s home

“Well, tonight has been very interesting hasn’t it?” Amu asked. “Yep,” Ikuto replied.

The Walkie-Talkie then began to get static which meant something was up. “Yume, can you hear?” Haruhi asked.
“Yeah loud and clear,” Yume replied. “Kiri and I would like to know you and Hiro are clear to go,” Haruhi stated.

Yume turned to Hiro and her parents. “I like this time, but I think we should get back now, right Hiro?” Yume asked.

Hiro nodded. “Well, if that’s what you want we’ll crank the machine up and send you home,” Haruhi stated.

“Ok, while you do that we’ll say our goodbyes,” Yume said.
“Mama, papa I loved the time that I’ve spent with you, but now I have to go,” Yume stated.
“WE understand,” Ikuto and Amu chimed together. Yume then pulled them into a hug.

“It was a pleasure to talk to the younger you Mr. Tsukiyomi and Mrs. Tsukiyomi,” Hiro said with a bow.

A big hole was then appearing on the wall. “I guess it’s time,” Yume stated.
Then a curious question popped in Yume’s head. “Um, Hiro when we were outside and you said that I was your Yume did you mean it?” Yume questioned.

“Y-Yeah,” Hiro replied. The two looked at each other then Ikuto butted in.
“Just because you did your job doesn’t mean I fully accept you…but just keep watching over her in the future,” Ikuto stated.

“You two have a safe trip.” Amu stated. The two nodded and headed inside of the hole and in mere seconds they were gone.
When the hole disappeared Amu’s mama walked into the room and said, “Amu when did you get a boyfriend?”

“No, I’m not her-,” Ikuto stated, but then was cut when Amu stated, “For a while,”
Ikuto was shocked at first, but his smirk was soon plastered on his face.

I guess this was just another moment in time…

THE END

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That was so good
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omg! great ending!
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