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Gakuen Alice FANFIC
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thx....the chapters will come out every 2 days ^^!! yaay..banzai banzai banzai!!

how cool can that be...u are so great..if u want i can help u with ideas of my own...you and me have the same idea about mikan and natsume being partners..i just never told anybody



omg u r like soo awesome!! thx! sure u can pm me!

okay I'll pm u!I don't i'm awsome...Ur Awsome not me!!!!!!!!!


how about we're both awesome?
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MythicalButterfly wrote:


Razumi wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:


Razumi wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:

thx....the chapters will come out every 2 days ^^!! yaay..banzai banzai banzai!!

how cool can that be...u are so great..if u want i can help u with ideas of my own...you and me have the same idea about mikan and natsume being partners..i just never told anybody



omg u r like soo awesome!! thx! sure u can pm me!

okay I'll pm u!I don't i'm awsome...Ur Awsome not me!!!!!!!!!


how about we're both awesome?

might as go with that since were gonna argue for a while about who's awsome(sounds crazy)
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Razumi wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:


Razumi wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:


Razumi wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:

thx....the chapters will come out every 2 days ^^!! yaay..banzai banzai banzai!!

how cool can that be...u are so great..if u want i can help u with ideas of my own...you and me have the same idea about mikan and natsume being partners..i just never told anybody



omg u r like soo awesome!! thx! sure u can pm me!

okay I'll pm u!I don't i'm awsome...Ur Awsome not me!!!!!!!!!


how about we're both awesome?

might as go with that since were gonna argue for a while about who's awsome(sounds crazy)


XDD yea really!
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I'm sorry you guys! These chapters might be a little late!
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Chapter 3
(Note~~Sorry!! I'm very very sorry! This chapter came out late!! I have exams coming right up after winter break is over, and I haven't any time to study at all! So I couldn't get to my precious fanfiction right away! It was bugging me all day!!)
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It was Persona. Mikan was shocked. "Ah, darling you're here. I asked your teacher, but he said he didn't see you. Your next mission is to go kill a girl named Sakura. She is a Japanese courtesan, otherwise an Oiran. A high ranked one at that. But Sakura is only her nickname. Her real name is Nakamura Shiina." Persona ordered. "But where is she?" The conversation went on. "She is in Hokkaido." Persona clearly said. "You mean I'll have to leave school just to go kill her?!" Mikan screamed. "Of course, not to mention, also tell Hyuuga Natsume." Then Persona smirked and then walked somewhere like he always does. An hour later, her laundry was finally finished. She was a bit tired so she walked to the mini-girls-only-cafe which was only a few rooms away from the girls laundry room. Luckily they had her favorite coffee flavor, hazelnut. After she was done, she walked back to the laundry room, them dragged her laundry into the elevator. "Floor 7, floor 7.." Mikan mumbled. She pressed a button. She dragged her laundry, it was especially heavy, due to the fact that she doesn't want to spill her coffee. She pounded on the door to make Hotaru open. Two minutes later it finally opened. "Geez took you long enough!!" Mikan yelled softly. Hotaru glanced at her really annoyed "I told you not to go laundry your clothes in the middle of the night! Beside you can get caught. Lights are off at 9:30 p.m. Mikan I supposed you know that already?" Mikan shrugged. "I dunno.." Hotaru rolled her eyes and went back to sleep. Mikan suddenly remembered what Persona had said. "Oh no! I've gotta tell Natsume..Maybe tomorrow." She thought while folding her clothes really quickly. At last she was done, but the coffee will probably make her last a few more hours. So she climbed up to the roof to stargaze. She looked across to the boys' dorms. And there right across from where she was lying, she saw Natsume. Then Natsume saw her too. Mikan leaped to him first. "Heya, watcha' doin'?" Natsume said. "I just came to tell you what Persona's mission is this time." Mikan felt a bit annoyed. "Oh? Took him a long time.." Natsume looked perfectly relaxed. Mikan didn't even get to explain the mission yet and he's already trying to be calm. "Natsume..I didn't even get to say anything yet.." Now Mikan was really annoyed. "There's a woman that deals with very illegal drugs and secretly murders her clients with it." Mikan started. "Client? Is she a doctor or something?" Natsume looked confused. "No she's a courtesan, an Oiran." Mikan explained. "Whoa! An Oiran? That came outta nowhere." Natsume was surprised. "I know. And Persona wants us to go on Tuesday." Natsume looked even more surprised. "Why all of this so suddenly? He could've at least told us a few day before! Tuesday is tomorrow!!" The thought of Tuesday being tomorrow echoed through Mikan's mind. "T-t-t-t-t-tomorrow?" Mikan was freaking out. "U-uh yeah." Natsume wasn't understanding what was going on. "OH SHIT I GOTTA PACK!!!" Mikan leaped right back and slammed her window and started packing a change of clothes. "What the hell?" Natsume wondered. The next day Mikan woke up early. She went to go take a bath. She noticed something. She was very different from other girls. Her black hair with small highlights. Every time she sways her hair it's like a black cape. And she has lots of piercings on each ear, which are Alice control items. And a few rings too. Even Natsume didn't need that much. She shrugged though. She scrubbed her back and everywhere else too. Then she went to the bath. She sat there wondering if the Oiran was beautiful or not. "Well of course she must be beautiful, she's and Oiran after all." Mikan hugged her legs. The reflection of herself in the pure bath water was a blood stained Mikan. She closed her eyes. Flashbacks of her painful childhood came back flooding like a river. Then she immediately opened her eyes again. She got out of the bath and grabbed her bath robe. She tied it then walked out of the bath-room. She walked down the hall, but she felt a weird jolt in her body. No, someone was following her. She turned her head quickly back. She heard a laugh. "Haha! Got you!" One voice said. "Either you have an ancestry of failures or you're a failure." Mikan sort of chuckled at that. "Agh! You just blew the cover.." The last voice said. Mikan ran to her room using her agility alice. "What's wrong? Scared or something? If you were you could've as-" Hotaru was interrupted by Mikan "I'm not scared, someone followed me." Hotaru was shocked. "S-s-s-s-someone followed you?!!" Hotaru went inside of one of her inventions. Mikan sighed. She opened the door cautiously. She saw a silver haired boy and a red haired boy. She partially screamed, but her hands covered her mouth in time. She was so shocked that she fell to her knees. The boys looked scared too. Mikan had been through a lot but this was a huge shock to see boys at the dorms. "Why are you here?" She calmly asked. "W-w-we just enrolled into this school!" The silver haired boy stuttered. "What are your names then?" Mikan said as she stood back up. The silver boy replied "My name's Hakuzuki Haru." The red haired boy replied "The name's Hakuzuki Kai." And then they both said "We're twins." Mikan laughed a little. "Then you're in the wrong building. The boys' dorms are on the other side. I can guide you there. And why are you two doping around at this time of night?" Mikan asked. "Because we came just came here about two hours ago. And we don't know anything about this place." Mikan looked puzzled. "Well did they hand you a slip?" The boys looked at each other "Slip? What slip?" She went to their bags and found two slips. It had their data and everything on there. She read aloud. "Hakuzuki Kai, 15 years old. From Tokyo, Japan, Born July 4, 1993. Gender , boy. Dorm placement, Room 119. Alice, Shadow. Then she read the other slip. Hakuzuki Haru, 15 years old. From Tokyo, Japan. Born July 4, 1993. Gender, boy. Dorm placement, 119. Alice, Light. Mikan closed her eyes, then finally said, "Okay..I'll take you to your dorms." She handed their slips back to them. She went back into her dorms grabbed a jacket, put on her cropped sweatpants, and then grabbed her sandals. Then she came back out. She guided them down the hallway. And out. She walked them to the entrance to the boys' dorms. "This is as far as I'm permitted to go. Your room is 119." Then she ran with her agility alice back. The next day came really quickly
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Posted 12/29/08
nice.but i think its a little short.add more details! oh oh oh or better yet post it on fanfiction.net!
Posted 12/29/08
yeah xXmikanyuukiXx is right. Post it on fanfiction.net. And the next time more details =D Like Chapter 2! =D
Anyway, I love it.. plz continue
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i still gotta finish it..i was very tired...im gonna do it now..
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i still gotta finish it..i was very tired...im gonna do it now..


okay, can't wait and about that you have a little bit the same as my fanfic. I do not care, seriously. I think it is a honor for me =D Well anyway, can't wait for the next Chapter. XD

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Chapter 4
(Note~~Sorry for chapter 2!! I'm seriously sorry about that! I had studies I had to get to, and it was an event. And chapter 3 was a little late too I seriously apologize. And I hope this chapter satisfies you a little more. Also..there's 2 new characters!!)
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Mikan got up and groaned. It was foggy out. Hotaru was still asleep. She felt sweaty. So she went to go take a quick shower. While she was in the shower, she started singing a lullaby that her mother used to sing to her. Her black hair was very silky, so she didn't apply any conditioner. Her shampoo smelled a little funny, so she just skipped it since she wasn't even really taking a real shower. She was thinking about yesterday night, and how the two boys were following her. Then she suddenly remembered. "Holy shit!" she said. "I need to pack!" Then she quickly jumped out of the shower, grabbed her towel, and ran out the door. She pounded on the door to make Hotaru open it up. It usually took Hotaru like about, 2 or 5 minutes to open up. But surprisingly this time, she opened up right away. She ran into the room almost naked. "What's wrong? You look like an Aphrodite statue.." Hotaru said half laughing. "I gotta pack!" Hotaru looked confused. "Pack?? Why?" Mikan gave her the "you don't wanna know" glance. Well she made up an excuse anyway. "Very few student get to go on trips that are in the Dangerous ability class." Hotaru looked as if she knew it was one of Mikan's lamest excuses ever. But Hotaru doesn't really care. "What time is it?" Mikan asked. "6:00 a.m." Mikan paused. "Is it really this early?!" Hotaru rolled her eyes. "Duuh.." She climbed back into bed while Mikan was still packing regardless of what time it is. Although she only had very little to pack. Then she took off her towel, then slipped her black clothes under, then layered her uniform on top. She rolled up her arm sleeves and her black stretchy pants. Her utility belt went into her backpack. It was now 7:00 a.m. Her lips looked a bit chapped, so she grabbed her cocoa butter chap stick. Then she went to sleep again. They didn't have to go until 8:00 a.m. It passed by really quickly. She had Hotaru wake her up. She took 5 minutes to stretch and fully wake up. Then she slowly walked to the door. She still had to put on her black high tops. Then she locked the door and stuffed the key in her pocket. Then she ran down the hallway to catch up with the other kids. While she was walking with the kids who were on their way to the Academy. Then she felt a two taps on her shoulder. "Good morning. And thank you for last night!" She turned around and saw the two boys from last night. "Oh...Haru and Kai right?" Their faces lighted up like casino lights. "Bingo!!" Mikan looked as if they were retards. Then she just kept on walking. "Hey! Don't ignore us! We think you're pretty!" Kai yelled from behind. Mikan looked pissed. But she just kept walking. Finally she got to the classroom. She sat at her desk, took off her backpack, then put her head down like usual. Narumi came in. As he said in his usually gay voice: "Okay!! Today we have two new students!!" Mikan flipped her head up quickly. "Can't be!!" She screamed quietly. And there came in the two boys. The girls "oooh(ed)". "Hey they're really hot!!" A girl said. Mikan just shrugged and put her head back down. "Hello! My name is Hakuzuki Kai!" He smiled flirtatiously. "Hi. My name is Hakuzuki Haru." He fluffed his hair flirtatiously too. "Fucking pricks." Mikan groaned. Then the daily announcements went on. "Good morning everyone elementary, middle, and high school divisions! For the students who didn't bring lunches today we have: Mashed potatoes and diced ham. Gravy comes with it optionally. For dessert, we have cherry jell-o with whipped cream on top. And-Oh excuse this, Sakura Mikan and Hyuuga Natsume please report to the office right away. I repeat, Sakura Mikan and Hyuuga Natsume please report to the office right away. And have a great day at Alice Academy!" Natsume and Mikan got out of their seats and excused themselves. "Guess it's time huh? Did ya pack?" Mikan rolled her eyes. "Yeah yeah yeah I did.." As they entered the office, Persona was there. "Are you ready my little darlings?" Mikan has dreamed of killing this bastard for so long. But she knew she would never actually do it. "Yeah yeah whatever." Natsme said. Mikan didn't really say anything. you should take off you clothes when you enter the private ship. "Ship? Well Hokkaido is an island after all." Natsume said as he laughed. "Oh yes, and my darlings I can't come with you on this trip!" Persona said as he smiled with his gay face. "Can you just shut up??" Mikan yelled. "My my, we have a feisty one today.." Persona said. "Okay darlings, enough chit-chat. We have to go board the ship." At least Persona got them a taxi to the harbor. When they arrived there weren't much people there.
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It's nice....really nice.
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Chapter 5
(Note~~Okay okay..I know the last chapter was really sucky! The few last chapters were really late, so I made this one to make up for it. ^^ :lol: AHHH!!!! MIKAN AND NATSUME MOMENT!! AAAH!!!!!!! *megaphone* GET READY TO FAN-SQUEAL!!! )
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The ship that they were boarding was small. It was named Teresa. The captain looked trashy. Or, maybe all captains look trashy. Tattoos, ripped denim, topless, bandanna, cigarette, and a Nagoya-ben accent. "Ahoy matey! Get in pals!!" The captain looked really friendly all of the sudden. "Yo.." Natsume said. Mikan didn't say anything though. Then the captain slapped her on the arm really hard. "Don't be such a untalkative woman!!" Then he started laughing. Mikan practically bulged her eyes out. "Y-y-yo.....that fucking hurt!!!" Mikan yelled. "Hey hey, a pretty woman like you don't use foul language." Mikan calmed down though. She put her baggage down next to her on the seats. "What's yer name mi'lady?" The captain was a smiley. "Can you just shut up and wipe that thing off "yer" face?" Natsume almost burst out laughing, but he suppressed it. The captain just kept smiling with his cigar. "What a stupid-ass." She thought. "Hey hey! How old are you?" Mikan was listening to her i-Pod Nano and blasted up the music, so she couldn't hear him. Natsume pulled out one of her head phones and put it in his ear. Mikan tried to punch him in the face, but he dodged. "Hehe..don't underestimate me! I got stronger since the last fight." Mikan rolled her eyes. "Whatever.." Then she kept on listening to her music. Eventually she fell asleep on Natsume's shoulder. Natsume didn't realize it until he looked to his right. His cheeks flustered. "Ahh..Lovebirds! I remember those days." He looked in front. The captain's crew said it in unison. Natsume threw a nearby bucket at them. But then Mikan woke up. Without paying any attention to anything, "Ah, I need coffee." She pulled out a small portable water boiler that uses batteries and a pack of instant coffee with cream and sugar. Natsume's eyes twitched. "H-Hotaru made that for you I bet.." Mikan slowly nodded. She was slow and dumb-witted when she wakes up. "Sorry pals, we won't get there until tomorrow." The captain said. Natsume nodded. "Hey..Is that instant coffee even good?" Mikan nodded. "Lemme try some!" Natsume tried grabbing for her cup. "Nuh-uh. You can make your own." Mikan handed him the portable water boiler. After she was done drinking hers she just threw the cup off the ship. Then she took out the second volume of a manga. Natsume was bending over to see what Mikan was reading, until one of the crewmen bumped into Natsume and kissed Mikan. Both of them practically screamed. And the whole crew gasped. The scene went on for 30 seconds? No maybe even 2 minutes. But Mikan wasn't sure. They were both frozen for so long, or at least it seemed long. Mikan was the one with still enough strength to pull out of the kiss. Then she fell back. "What in the world are you thinking?!!" Mikan screamed. "What?! It was an accident!" Natsume screamed back. "Accident my ass!" They kept screaming on for a while. The crew just watched them argue as if it was a stage. "What?! Was it your first kiss or something?!" Natsume said. Mikan paused then blushed a little. "Can't say anything now huh? Maybe it was!" Then Mikan got really mad. "Now you've stepped on a mine! No! It wasn't! Are you happy?!" Then Natsume got really quiet. "Yeah! Thought so!" Then they both were quiet. But then inside Mikan and Natsume secretly wished that the kiss held on longer. They didn't talk to each other until they got to the island. "So..How are we supposed to find this woman?" Natsume asked. "I dunno. Go snooping around the red light district? But you gotta be a guy to enter. And you gotta be 18 or older." They both sighed. "Maybe I can go." Mikan laughed. "Ha! You?! Not in my dreams! You? In the red light district as a 18 year old man?! Haha!" Mikan started laughing. "Oh just shut up." Mikan turned back to the crew and paid them the ferry fee. "Thanks cutie! We'll come back to get you later!" Mikan spat at them. "Hey that ain't nice cutie!" The captain yelled back. "So where do you wanna go first?" Natsume asked. "I dunno. Up to ya." Natsume's face lit up. "OKAY! LET"S GO EAT FIRST!" Mikan rolled her eyes at the way Natsume said it. "Food, food, food, food, food, food, food, food, food, food, food." Natsume said that all the way that they were looking for a restaurant. "Can you shut up?" But Natsume kept on say "food". All of the sudden Mikan bumped into a tall bough looking guy. "Hey missy, watch where ya goin'." His voice was deep and coarse. Mikan looked up and saw a tall-club-bouncer-looking-like-guy. "Oh yes I'm sorry." Mikan said it with a smile and a cutesy attitude.
Posted 1/4/09
is there any season 2..

I wish there is!!!!
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is there any season 2..

I wish there is!!!!


There's rumors going around saying that Gakuen Alice is airing now in Japan, but we haven't confirmed it. Plus, last year people said that it was gonna come out in November, but it never came.
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wow...interesting
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