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Posted 1/6/09
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Posted 1/8/09
AGH!...studies...ugh..
Posted 1/9/09

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AGH!...studies...ugh..


I love it! Only Natsume is a softy.. a little bit. lol.. anyway, i like it. and yup i have homework too TT^TT. I can't make te chapters so fast.. i'm on chapter 11 and i'm busy with chapter 12... only i have two words or something from it TT^TT i'm too busy!!
anyway, plz continue!!!

Posted 1/9/09
me to stupid school
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Posted 1/9/09 , edited 1/10/09

powerpuffgirls-z wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:

AGH!...studies...ugh..


I love it! Only Natsume is a softy.. a little bit. lol.. anyway, i like it. and yup i have homework too TT^TT. I can't make te chapters so fast.. i'm on chapter 11 and i'm busy with chapter 12... only i have two words or something from it TT^TT i'm too busy!!
anyway, plz continue!!!



I have a lot of studies. I hate my school! I mean it..LOL I'm soo sad and sooo sorry! I barely get to write anymore. It's been more than 2 days..T_T Once I leave my school, I'm gonna put a bomb somewhere and then when I leave, I'll push a button and then I'll leave laughing evilly. I'll try to finish some of the chapter today. It's almost impossible. But I'll try. All I really have to do is to edit it when I wake up again LOL. Oh yeah! And Natsume is a softy! I like it that way, it makes it more interesting. And my Persona is sassy. LOL. And I like how Mikan acts too. She's lazy! And I also made Hotaru more girly in here too. The two boys are "mysterious". =/3
Posted 1/10/09

MythicalButterfly wrote:


powerpuffgirls-z wrote:


MythicalButterfly wrote:

AGH!...studies...ugh..


I love it! Only Natsume is a softy.. a little bit. lol.. anyway, i like it. and yup i have homework too TT^TT. I can't make te chapters so fast.. i'm on chapter 11 and i'm busy with chapter 12... only i have two words or something from it TT^TT i'm too busy!!
anyway, plz continue!!!



I have a lot of studies. I hate my school! I mean it..LOL I'm soo sad and sooo sorry! I barely get to write anymore. It's been more than 2 days..T_T Once I leave my school, I'm gonna put a bomb somewhere and then when I leave, I'll push a button and then I'll leave laughing evilly. I'll try to finish some of the chapter today. It's almost impossible. But I'll try. All I really have to do is to edit it when I wake up again LOL. Oh yeah! And Natsume is a softy! I like it that way, it makes it more interesting. And my Persona is sassy. LOL. And I like how Mikan acts too. She's lazy! And I also made Hotaru more girly in here too. The two boys are "mysterious". =/3


lol just take your time. It have not be done, in one day or two days. Just take your time... =D

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Chapter 6
(Note~~ OMG I HAVE LIKE SOOO MANY HOMEWORK IT'S LIKE PILING ON TOP OF MY PRECIOUS LAPTOP!!!!!! THE CHAPTERS ARE PROBABLY GONNA BE LATE!!!)
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Mikan walked back to Natsume. "Are you done with your food cravings fat-ass?" Natsume nodded his head. "What's with you? One second you're craving for food, one second you're like screaming your head off." Natsume gave the glare. "Screaming my head off? I wasn't screaming my head off." Mikan rolled her eyes. "Well whatever. I'm gonna go take off my clothes." Natsume blushed a little. "T-take off your clothes?!" Mikan glared at him. "Perv...Not that way dumbass...Can you be any dumber?" Finally Mikan and Natsume arrived at a cornered alleyway. "Alright I can take it off here." Mikan looked up. "This is pretty high." "Well it is an alleyway isn't it? Duh it's gonna be high." Mikan looked agitated. "Oh just shut up." All she had to do was take off her uniform and roll down her sleeves. The material of the body suit was stretchy and comfortable. Then she reached in her bag and pulled out her utility belt. Natsume looked surprised. "Wow..you came prepared. I still need to change." Mikan stuffed her uniform and other back into her bag and went into another alley which was only a few feet away to let Natsume change. "So, what are we gonna do? Secretly leap over the houses or just do a counter?" Natsume unbuttoned his shirt. "Dunno, up to you." Mikan crossed her arms while leaning on the wall. "Well, we would have to like poke a hole in like every oiran house to find this "Nakamura Shiina"." Natsume had to find his utility belt. "Well, I guess we might have to. But how about disguising ourselves. I mean if she's an oiran, then shouldn't she be the only one around?" Mikan put her hand on her chin like guys do when they're thinking. "True, but how? You're not possibly gonna go in there looking like that are you?" Natsume slipped on the socks. "Of course not, we're gonna have to find disguises. But I should probably be the decoy, it's better that way." Silence went on for a bit. "Sure whatever. Are you done changing?" Natsume zipped his bag. "Yup. So what are we gonna do? It's still like 3:54 or something." Mikan slid down to the ground where she was standing. "I'm tired, I'm gonna take a nap." Natsume sat down across from her. "Lazy." Mikan opened one eye. "Hey that kiss earlier doesn't count to as a kiss to you right?" Natsume's eyes bulged out. "N-no of course not!" Mikan closed her eyes. Natsume took out a bag of chips and started munching. "Hey," Natsume looked up. "What?" Mikan kicked his bag of chips into her hands. "Can you stop munchin'?" Natsume tried to get it but she passed it around her hands. "Hey, neat trick, but I want my chips back!" Mikan bounced the bag on her feet. "Can you not see that someone is trying to nap?" She bounced it back onto his head, and closed her eyes again. Then she pulled out her iPod and listened to a mind stimulating-mind song. Then she fell asleep. Natsume went up to her and stared at her. She had a bit of eyeliner and mascara on. Her hair was covering her face. Natsume lifted it up. Her alice control items on her ear were showing. "Lazy." He whispered quietly. Mikan twitched a little. Natsume fell asleep for a little bit too. When he got up it was already around 6. He looked at Mikan. "Finally awake?" She was putting on her gloves. "We can go around now. There's less people." Natsume rubbed his eyes. "What time is it?" Mikan looked at her watch. "6:44. C'mon get you lazy butt up." Natsume got up slowly. Mikan pulled up her backpack. Then she climbed up on a garbage can and onto a wall. Then bounced wall to wall. Natsume went after her. They flew in the air like birds. "Split up." Mikan said. They flew in different directions.
Posted 1/11/09
i wish there is season 2!!!!
Posted 1/11/09
I am officially a GAKUEN ALICE fan!!!
Posted 1/11/09
when will be the season 2??>.
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Chapter 7
(Note~~Was the last chapter kinda short? I think it was. But I had a lot of studies so I can't help it I'm sorry. I'll try to write as much as I can. Cause' sometimes, I had to sit by my living room window to see cars passing by to get my stupid brain to get working. I'm listening to Shoujo Robot by Shiina Ringo. She's an awesome singer!! Okay okay okay enough chitter-chat let's get to the chapter!)
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The formation was perfect. Mikan glanced back one more time to make sure Natsume was getting the message. The plan they whispered to each other earlier. They split up to make it harder for the local police to catch them. "What a stupid idea." Natsume's voice echoed through her mind and completely destroyed her thoughts. She landed on a roof. "Woah," She slipped a little. "Traditional roofs are more slippery than I thought." She jumped anyway. "What is that idiot doing?" Natsume said out loud. Although they both felt retarded at the same time for some reason. "They carefully used a secret technique that they created using some internal energy from inside their bodies to look for the person they seek. The technique was not easy to compose, but it was easy as a pea now that they are used to the technique. Mikan stood on the eastern side. Natsume stood on the western side. They whispered words that didn't sound like any language in the world that we would know of. A state of vision that is blurred was playing in Mikan's mind. She looked at person after person. Until she came upon a small but fairly vast Oiran house. She looked at a woman entertaining a party of 3-no 4 men. "Natsume must've noticed it too." She quickly canceled the technique. She and Natsume planned to meet at the center of the district. Although she got there first. "Let's hurry." They ran towards the place. They saw her exiting the house. At first Natsume tried to throw a dagger at her, but it didn't work. Somehow it missed her. "How could you miss her?!" Natsume shrugged. "Argh you're useless!" Mikan tried to throw something at her too, but she also missed. "Look who's talking!" Mikan studied her closely. "Natsume throw another one!" Natsume stared at her blankly. "Hurry up!" Natsume threw a dagger at her. Mikan watched closely at the dagger fly normally, and as soon as the dagger flew close to the oiran, it changed directions and fell on to the ground. "Damn bitch!" She used the ancient magicks that was used during Cleopatra's times. This was confidential information that was only revealed to important personnels. Mikan ran up to her and grabbed out her dagger that was inclawed with poison, and tried to stab her barrier with all her strength. But she only heard one crack. "Help Natsume!" She felt like a stupid idiot. Natsume ran quickly to her aid. "Oh no you won't little children!" The oiran tried to break free from Mikan's wrath, but she couldn't "Stubborn little girl!" Mikan cracked a naughty smile. "Serves you right you cocky bitch!" The oiran tilted her head. "Huh? Cocky bitch you say? Who's the one talking big? I'm probably twice as old as you!" Mikan cracked another smile. "You must be an old grandma then!" Natsume came right behind her and held her hands and pushed harder with both of their strengths. "Natsume. You remember ancient magicks right?!" She whispered. "Yeah why?" Mikan heard several cracks. "This is a barrier." Natsume's eyes widened with confusion. "B-barrier?!" Mikan nodded. She heard several more cracks. "Ignorant little children!" Mikan kept hearing cracking. "S-s-stop!! If you break th-" Her sentence was unfinished. The barrier was completely broken. "If you ever cast ancient magicks, and it was broken, you would die." Mikan stated. "So, how are w-." Mikan felt very exhausted. She put all her strength into the push to break the barrier. She fell on Natsume. "Ah, you're lighter than I thought you would be." He carried her back to the abandoned alleyway that they left their things at. Mikan only slept until 10. 30 minutes of sleep. "Oh, you're awake." Mikan looked around and yawned. "Is it time to go?" Natsume nodded. "C'mon. Hurry and get dressed, and if you want I can give you a ride to the harbor." He said in a naughty way. "Eh?! No way you lose-" She fell to her knees, "See, told ya." Mikan scowled. "Fine, get outta here." Natsume walked away. Mikan couldn't get up anymore, because he legs were dead. So she kinda had trouble putting on her clothes. But she managed.She tried to get up on her own, but she couldn't. She fell back down. "Argh!! Damn it all!" Natsume came back. "Ya ready?" Mikan looked the other way. "Whatever." Natsume carried her on his back. "You know, you're awfully light for your age and height. How much do you weigh?" Mikan opened her eyes. "Oh shut up." Natsume stared back at her. "Oh c'mon tell me!" Mikan blew a soft and cold wind onto his ear. Natsume tingled. "Hey, don't do that.." Mikan was silent, then she started laughing. "You're interesting!" Mikan laughed even harder. "You're like a girl! Haha." Mikan laughed again. Pretty soon Natsume started laughing too. As soon as they went to the harbor, no ships were there. "What? What happened?" Natsume asked. Mikan asked to get down, but Natsume was still supporting her. "Hmm, that's weird. Where's our ride?" As soon as Mikan said that, she saw a woman walk past. "There's no ship to carry you to the city at this time of night." The woman kept walking by. "Damn those drunk scoundrels!" Natsume cursed. "There's no use cursing them. We'll have to wait till morning."
Posted 1/15/09
lol cool.. can't wait for when the Chapter is finished
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FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN!!!!!!!!!! I HAD THIS SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER BIG EXAM 2 STUDY 4!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAHH CAN I JUST DIE FOR AT LEAST A MINUTE FOR ABANDONING YOU GUYS FOR LIKE 10 DAYS?!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMFG IM GO SORRRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 8
(Note~~ SORRY PEOPLE!! I did not finish the chapter for soooo long, I mean I feel terrible, so yeah. But I had stupid exams! So I guess I couldn't help it.. :angry:)
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Natsume glared at me. "So? What are we gonna do, sleep here and freeze our asses to death?" I glared back. "So? It's not even all that cold! I mean, we're in Hokkaido! Puh-lease, deal with it mister!" He didn't care about what I said. "Did you at least bring a blanket or something?" I checked in my bag. There was one, the one I brought in case it got cold. "Yeah, one." I kind of faded off in the end. "Gimme' it!" He yanked the blanket from my hands. I just didn't cared and looked the other way. My feet were sore, my eyes were giving up, and my chest heaved. I felt very tired. "Natsume...I'm..gonna..fall....alsee-" I didn't even get to finish my sentence. "Hey. Hey! Oh boy, she's knocked out cold." I didn't care what happened at that moment. I felt like overcoming that ancient magick barrier was more tiring than ever. I could hear Natsume faintly calling me, as I drift into my sleep. Was I weak? I didn't know. I didn't know why I was so tired, I was never this tired in my life. The only time I was probably almost as tired as this, was when Hotaru stayed up for three whole days straight working on her experiment in our dorm, while she was using smelters and everything. It was so dramatic, and it was now too. When I woke up, I heard ships and boats sirens. All of the sudden, I felt a poke on my face. I looked to the side that Natsume was at. "Hey, you awake?" I groaned and stretched. I tried walking again, I felt A LOT BETTER, but my feet weren't fully awake yet. One time, in Persona's class (for people who do his dirty work like me.) he taught us about ancient magicks. The strongest type of sorcery that is currently present in the world. "Get up sleepy-head." I felt the poke again. "Okay! I'm up! You don't have to poke at me like I'm crazy!" "Sure, sure. Hurry up we gotta go find a boat!" Mikan got up but then her legs were still kinda dead, she could walk on her own, but Natsume still had to support her. "So, where are we gonna find a boat to Tokyo huh?" Natsume looked around. "Let's go look over there." Mikan and Natsume walked over to one of the booths. "Excuse me?" "Yes?" "Do you know where we can get a boat to Tokyo?" The woman thought for a bit, then she turned around and opened the door. She stepped out. "You can board that small ferryboat over there, she charge 4000 yen for a ride to Tokyo. She pointed to a ferryboat full of men. And a boat named Chelsea. "HEY!! It's that boat!!" Mikan shouted. Natsume walked over there with Mikan. "Hey! Why didn't you come yesterday?" The captain turned around and said. "Well, we had some other errands to do." The captain shrugged. "Well get in!" Mikan and Natsume went into the boat. "By the way lady, what happened to you? Your leg?." Mikan looked away. "Nothing, I just tripped." "Then you must've tripped bad.." "Oh just shut up!" The captain went back inside the small cabin on the side. "Hey what happened yesterday?" Natsume asked. "Nothing, just standing by the barrier just injured me a little. Remember? The lesson about ancient magicks?" Natsume nodded his head. "Well since you're alright, I'm gonna take a nap." "Go ahead." By what Natsume meant, was sleeping on her thighs. "H-hey! What are you doing?" "What does it look like I'm doing? Do you expect me to sleep on hard wood?" Mikan's face softened. "W-well just this is f-fine." Then she looked the other way. She felt her face getting hot. It was getting darker, but they were getting closer to Tokyo, really close, just about 11 miles away now. "Good thing he doesn't drool.." Mikan mumbled to herself. Mikan dozed off for a while. "Hey we're here!!" The captain's voice was loud. Mikan and Natsume groaned. "Oh my go-" He yawned. "Oh my god, we're here?" Mikan woke up next. "Oooh...we're here?" They both got up and grabbed their bags and paid the captain. As they stepped off the boat, it wasn't long until they got back to Gakuen Alice. "Ahh. We're back!"
Posted 1/27/09
Hey now it is like, that it is Mikan's POV...
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