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This is my first One shot!! and it's dedicated to my Geh-shan Sempai! I LUFF YOU!!!
And, Please be nice with those comments xD
and don't forget to enjoy it!


Characters:
Gin played by Geh-san
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Yabu Kota played by himself

Synopos(?): A girl named Gin fell in love with Yabu, but .....
NOT GONNA TELL YOU THE RESTTT! just gotta read it when I post it :3
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Posted 12/21/08
uwa hahahaha!!!!!
YABUGIN!!!!!
kyaaaa!!`
tanoshimi dessuu!
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Posted 12/21/08 , edited 12/21/08
kyaaaaa!
i cant wait :3!!
it sounds so good<3
and ur summary/sypnosis makes me go crazy trying to figure out XD
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Posted 12/21/08 , edited 12/22/08
Bitter Chocolate

Gin played by Geh-san
Yabu Kota played by himself

NOTE: This is a one-shot mostly in Gin’s view :]


“How long has it been since I have not seen him? He told me to meet him at the café, but I slept in. He was heading home, but when he saw me, he waved. I ran to him ignoring the streetlight that shown red, and he ran towards me. I regret of having met him in the first place…but it’s too late now.”
I sigh as tears stream down my cheek. I lay on my bed, thinking about how him and I met. It was like we were destined to be together…until now.

~FLASHBACK~
2 years ago
“You’re wet, you’ll catch a cold…” a nice hand handed me a handkerchief.
“Oh, thank you.” I wiped the rain off my dampened skin. I looked up at the smiling face of a handsome man. He was about my age. His eyes glistened as I thanked him and smiled. He asked me a question.
“May I ask your name?”
“Gin…” I answered. He smiled, a wide smile. I couldn’t think of anyone that could smile so wide. My heart skipped.
“What a nice name! My name is Yabu Kota.”
The rain had stopped and the sun shone through, revealing a wonderful rainbow.
He asked if I was free that day. I answered yes.
“Let’s go to the Akaishi Café! I heard they have the best cheesecake in the whole world!”
“Alright”, I answered shyly.
We entered the café, and the waiter led us to a table.
“Thank you,” the man who addressed himself as Yabu politely answered. “So, what would you like? Coffee? Latte?”
I looked at the menu. There wasn’t much choice, but I chose the mocha frappoucino and a slice of chocolate cake. He ordered caramel café au lait with extra whipped cream and a slice of lemon tart. We sipped and ate our sweets, until we both broke the ice.
“Ano..!” we both stammered.
Yabu spoke in a soothing voice, “Yes? You ask first.”
I felt a little embarrassed for asking what I was about to ask. “Ettou…Why are you being so nice to me? We only met today…er, more like 20 minutes ago.”
He smiled at me and replied, “Do you believe in love at first sight?”
I stared at him, blinking my eyes. My thoughts when he said that was, “What did he just say?!”
He laughed, a jolly laugh. “I was just kidding hahaha!”
I just stared at him.
“The real reason is, I had a sister that looked just like you that is in heaven right now…” he said in a sad voice.
“Uso!”(really?!) I gasped and looked at him sadly.
“Hahaha Uso-dayo” He laughed.
I stared at him blankly in disbelief.
“Okay, okay. Well, I don’t really know, it’s just that, I just had a feeling that I wanted to get to know you more...?”
I stared at him with my heart pounding. “Could it be?” I thought.
“Woah! Look at the time! I’m going to be late for work! Bye Gin-san, hope to meet you again!” He paid the cashier of the food for both of us, and ran out the door.
All I could think of was, “That was weird.”

Days passed, and there was no sign of the man named Yabu Kota-san. I began feeling stressed not seeing him. His smile made me forget my anger against the reality of this cruel world. I went to the café, in seek of him, but no luck. I even went to the place where we first met, but no sign of him. A month had passed, but nothing. Until, I coincidently bumped into him in the train. He tapped my shoulder while I was standing, dozing off into the air.
“Gin-san! How nice to see you again!”
“Oh, hello.” I didn’t show how happy I was to see him.
He smiled as my heart melted.
He asked if I would mind giving him my phone number. Of course, I answered yes.

Since we both had each other’s phone numbers, we would call each other at night and stay up past 2am. He was like a best friend I could never have. He filled the empty space in my heart. I couldn’t imagine a world without him. And I think he felt the same way too.

Months past, until the tragic accident happened.
We planned on meeting each other at the café we always went to, but for some reason, I slept in. I looked at the clock, and it was 11am, 2 hours past the meeting time. I rushed and put on whatever I could find and rushed out the door. I knew he wouldn’t be there. 2 hours past, no way would he be waiting! I was just around the corner, when I saw his back and I stopped and yelled out to him.
“Kota-san!”
He turned around and saw me. He waved.
I ran crossing the busy intersection, ignoring the streetlights. It was red, and a big truck was zooming about to run me over.
Yabu saw that I was in danger, and ran trying to make me stop. I didn’t understand, until I heard the honking of the truck. I was terrified.
Yabu pushed me and I could hear a big clunk.
I was scared to look to the side, but something glistened.
I stared at what was lying about 3 feet away from me.
I cried hugging the lifeless body of whom I loved. I cried, but stopped for a sudden when I felt a hand touch my cheek. I looked down at him, and he looked up at me. He had blood streaming down his head. He handed me something, and in a low whisper he said his last words. “I…Love…You” And went into a long deep sleep. I cried and opened the box he handed me and to my surprise it was a necklace that I wanted! “Why?” I whispered. I hugged him ever so deeply.
~End of Flashback~

I regret meeting him. I hoped I could go back in time, and make it so I didn’t meet him. I wanted to die many times, but something stopped me every time. It was the necklace that I have around my neck. Looking down at the glistening chain, reminds me of his eyes every time he smiled and laughed. I wished I could have confessed my love, but I couldn’t. I will never fall in love, not until I see the one I dearly love again…


~10 Years Later~
“Ugh! Gomen Shoon, I left something. Wait for me.” I tell my new love.
I rush inside my cramped apartment room and open the door to my bedroom and get my cardigan on my bed. As I take the cardigan in my hand and look forward, I saw an image. I was scared at first, but when I saw the familiar glistening eyes, I cry out in joy.
“Kota-san?” I manage to say. He nodded. He tried to say something, but no words came out. I tried to understand, but I wasn’t a pro at reading lips. He didn’t need to say anything, I was just happy to see him. I told him that I still loved him. He just smiled and shook his head. I didn’t understand, why wouldn’t he accept it? He mouthed to me what looked like, “Be happy, and live a happy life.” Tears streamed down my cheek as I saw my only love disappear into thin air. I wiped my tears and ran down the steps of the apartment holding the necklace Yabu gave me 10 years ago, and ran to Shoon.
“Did you wait long?” I ask.
“Nah, I’d wait forever for you.” He answered laughing.
His eyes reminded me of Yabu, and made me get teary eyed.
“Hey! What’s wrong?” Shoon asked a bit worried.
I smile and answer back, “It’s nothing. Just got something in my eyes, that’s all.”
He smiled and wiped my tears. We walk together side by side, and watch as the sun was setting. I now realize how lucky I really am.

-The End-

Ending Song: LOVE LOVE LOVE by Dreams Come True
http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk51AYSNKUc <-linky of teh song :]
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UWAHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!
hUHUHUHUHUHUHu!!!!


UWAHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!!
YUUKI-PYON!!!!
huhuhuh!!!! you made me cry!!!!!
nandeee!!!
huhuhuh!!!!
*sniff sniff*

It WASG A GREAT GREAT STORY!!!!
i love it! promise! even if i cried!!!
hehehehe
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uwaaa~!!
Yuuki-chan! ..
huhuhu .. it's ..
it's .. it's so sad!! ..:(
i soo .. love it! .. i really
love sad fanfics .. :(
waah!! .. all i can say
is .. i love this so much!!!
THUMBS UP! yuuki-chan!!!
hahaha ..
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Posted 12/22/08

emkyuu wrote:

uwaaa~!!
Yuuki-chan! ..
huhuhu .. it's ..
it's .. it's so sad!! ..:(
i soo .. love it! .. i really
love sad fanfics .. :(
waah!! .. all i can say
is .. i love this so much!!!
THUMBS UP! yuuki-chan!!!
hahaha .. :D


Ohh~
Thanx!
sorry for the late reply ^^;
but yea...xD
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deen22 wrote:

UWAHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!
hUHUHUHUHUHUHu!!!!


UWAHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!!
YUUKI-PYON!!!!
huhuhuh!!!! you made me cry!!!!!
nandeee!!!
huhuhuh!!!!
*sniff sniff*

It WASG A GREAT GREAT STORY!!!!
i love it! promise! even if i cried!!!
hehehehe


ehhh?!! you cried???! O__O Gomenasai >.<
didn't mean to make people cry...T__T
minna gomen >.<
but..glad u liked it ^^
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waaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
yuuki pon!!!arigatou gozaimashita for making this fic for ME..
it made me cry...i can't take it if kocchan just suddenly disappear from me...
what a great start of your oneshot! great story indeed!..
waah i really love it so much!!!
fanfic wa daisuki desu yo!
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Posted 12/22/08 , edited 12/22/08

Geh-san wrote:

waaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
yuuki pon!!!arigatou gozaimashita for making this fic for ME..
it made me cry...i can't take it if kocchan just suddenly disappear from me...
what a great start of your oneshot! great story indeed!..
waah i really love it so much!!!
fanfic wa daisuki desu yo!


hehe glad that u liked the one-shot ^^
huhuhu...everyone said that they cried while reading it ...
haha...un..well they said they liked it..so.. i guess i should accept it ne? haha
un, i mite make a sequel..iduno for sure..but...i MITE..can't promise it yet though ^^
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Geh-san wrote:

waaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
yuuki pon!!!arigatou gozaimashita for making this fic for ME..
it made me cry...i can't take it if kocchan just suddenly disappear from me...
what a great start of your oneshot! great story indeed!..
waah i really love it so much!!!
fanfic wa daisuki desu yo!


hehe glad that u liked the one-shot ^^
huhuhu...everyone said that they cried while reading it ...
haha...un..well they said they liked it..so.. i guess i should accept it ne? haha
un, i mite make a sequel..iduno for sure..but...i MITE..can't promise it yet though ^^


kyaa! i love it so much!!!
i feel every BIT of the scene!..XD...
mochiron, you should accept it deshou...
waah i hope you do make one...onegai onegai
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awesomeee one shot fanfic : )
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awww..such a sweet loving storie!! hehe it's great....ur sucha a great friend!! geh-chan and yabu!! and shoon!! kawaii!! hehe
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WOW!!NIce one!^_^
This story so sweet!
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awww..such a sweet loving storie!! hehe it's great....ur sucha a great friend!! geh-chan and yabu!! and shoon!! kawaii!! hehe


it's yabu and me ONLY..haha..kidding..i also love shoon..but not as much as yabu...
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