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Posted 12/22/08
For those of you who want to share your work and just didn't know where to submit it...here is the right place to do so, specially if you want it critiqued. There is also a new set of albums for members work to go into.

AGD Members Works
you can also comment and rate their work in the album, but for more specific and longer comments, just post them here.

Here's some ground rules.....

Make sure you specify exactly what you want critiqued and what advice you want to help you achieve better results.
Those critiquing should keep things friendly and constructive.

examples of bad comments

1. Wow....I wish I could do that good....
2. You did great.
3. You could use some improvement.


Try explaining why you think that something is great or what it is that could be improved on and a possible answer as to how they could do that improvement. Useless and short comments will be deleted...

When commenting on a work...make sure you quote the work you're commenting on.


With that, I turn it over to you members...enjoy and have fun!!

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Posted 12/22/08 , edited 12/22/08
I found a nice killzone render so i made this:



Its mainly a whole bunch of different lighting effects and some c4ds for the background

Any critique is appreciated
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Posted 12/23/08 , edited 12/24/08
Here is another one



Its somewhat simple but it took me a long time to make
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Posted 1/22/09 , edited 1/22/09
First Sig i've made in quite a while... I dont really like how it turned out for some reason but here it is

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Posted 1/23/09

osibisaad wrote:

First Sig i've made in quite a while... I dont really like how it turned out for some reason but here it is



I don't see why you don't like it, it turned out alright to me. And sorry for the lack of interaction, I've been very busy the past two months.
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Posted 1/23/09

Angel_Of_Tenderness wrote:


osibisaad wrote:

First Sig i've made in quite a while... I dont really like how it turned out for some reason but here it is



I don't see why you don't like it, it turned out alright to me. And sorry for the lack of interaction, I've been very busy the past two months.


I think its because the background might have looked a bit better if i had kept a "real" look in the background instead of trying to make it look somewhat cartoonish

lol its alright... I forgive you
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Posted 1/25/09 , edited 1/28/09
Just finished this new sig 2 days ago i really like how this one turned out



oh and i finally fixed my cloud sig so that the background is properly not there :)



EDIT:

Here is a new sig and a totally different style than i've done before

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Posted 1/29/09 , edited 1/29/09


Well, I see you've uploaded some sigs, they're very nice work...would you consider possibly doing a tutorial on how you make them, at least for one of them? Would be great to have a members input on how they make them, specially since you seem to do rather well on them. And if you don't, you know of any useful tutorials that would simulate what you've done to make them? Thanks for contributing too
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Posted 1/29/09 , edited 1/29/09
I've never made a tut before and it would probably take quite a while to make it so i think I'll upload the PSD for the cloud and maybe a few others ones to mediafire once i edit the layer names to explain what i did.

I'll make a tut for the next sig i make that i deem worthy.
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Posted 1/29/09 , edited 1/29/09
Here it is !!!!

Cloud http://www.mediafire.com/?wk3zztydmkt

Ahh please give some input on whether it helped you or not, so i know if i should post another or not.
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Posted 1/30/09 , edited 1/30/09

osibisaad wrote:

Here it is !!!!

Cloud http://www.mediafire.com/?wk3zztydmkt

Ahh please give some input on whether it helped you or not, so i know if i should post another or not.


Ok thanks, I'll check it out and you really should put it in the signature tutorial area instead of here. Don't worry about it this time I'll move it after I check it out.

Oh and I need to know the name of the font so that I can go get it so my photoshop won't have an error because of that. And I work it into a clearer tutorial for ya so people can understand what you did and how you did what you did.
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Posted 1/30/09 , edited 1/30/09

Angel_Of_Tenderness wrote:


osibisaad wrote:

Here it is !!!!

Cloud http://www.mediafire.com/?wk3zztydmkt

Ahh please give some input on whether it helped you or not, so i know if i should post another or not.


Ok thanks, I'll check it out and you really should put it in the signature tutorial area instead of here. Don't worry about it this time I'll move it after I check it out.

Oh and I need to know the name of the font so that I can go get it so my photoshop won't have an error because of that. And I work it into a clearer tutorial for ya so people can understand what you did and how you did what you did.


The font is Casmira you can find it at www.dafont.com

ahh and you don't need to make it into to a tut because there are a few errors on it which i am now correcting while i make it into a proper tut, I'm about halfway done
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Posted 3/7/09 , edited 3/8/09
I havent been here in a while but i just finished a sig i quite like



I was experimenting with patterns again and i really like the result

and now for something completely different...



and last but not least....

EDIT These are all mine I just didnt make another version of them with my user name here in them. They were made for gamespot.com

PROOF: http://www.gamespot.com/users/ff12freak/about_me?tag=profile-nav;about-me I use my first name here , if this is not enough proof i also have the psd:s (of course)
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Posted 6/26/09 , edited 6/26/09
something i just finished after a long period of procrastination



here are some others




and here is perhaps my nicest one of this bunch

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