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Posted 12/22/08 , edited 12/22/08
Here is my comment forum for my story "Snow White Lace". Please comment and help me improve my story. Don't flame too much please! XD

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codeblackhayate wrote:

Here is my comment forum for my story "Snow White Lace". Please comment and help me improve my story. Don't flame too much please! XD

~Arigatou



I just read the two chapters of your story. Let me compliment you on a job well done. I particularly enjoyed their arguments in the 2nd chapter. Both characters were funny. I didn't know shinigami's made the snow fall, though. I wasn't able to finish watching Bleach but I know they're "death gods" and it's just a bit weird to find out that they make snow too. Well, since it is your own story and you can do whatever you want, I guess it's okay. Your story then is like a unique mix of Bleach and Sugar: A Little Snow Fairy. It's an interesting combination. I look forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Posted 12/30/08

PurpleSkye wrote:


codeblackhayate wrote:

Here is my comment forum for my story "Snow White Lace". Please comment and help me improve my story. Don't flame too much please! XD

~Arigatou



I just read the two chapters of your story. Let me compliment you on a job well done. I particularly enjoyed their arguments in the 2nd chapter. Both characters were funny. I didn't know shinigami's made the snow fall, though. I wasn't able to finish watching Bleach but I know they're "death gods" and it's just a bit weird to find out that they make snow too. Well, since it is your own story and you can do whatever you want, I guess it's okay. Your story then is like a unique mix of Bleach and Sugar: A Little Snow Fairy. It's an interesting combination. I look forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!


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