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Hello all, this is a story that predates my manga project by many thousands of years. It involves many of the Riders and concepts from my manga (but not the human characters). It's been in development for awhile, but i've yet to determine its length.

Here's a synopsis for the manga, so it makes a little more sense:



I hope to do regular updates, but as you know, real life sometimes takes over. I gladly accept criticism and suggestions. Who knows, i may even include it in my story.... Also feel free to ask questions, but i won't reveal any major plots or events. I may need reminding in the future, but I also plan to upload sketches of the Riders, characters, etc at some point.

Enjoy!!


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Crap, i just noticed that i misspelled "Hidden" in my title, can someone edit it please?
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Posted 12/24/08
sound nice...so Victory have difference user rite?
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Yes, this story focuses primarily on Victory's first user, Suzaku Tazaki, who lived thousands of years prior to 2008.
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Posted 12/25/08
heh cool..i wanna c more action on it =)
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Posted 12/25/08
haha i like the story ^^ good luck working for another episodes ^^
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Posted 12/29/08
Side Story of Kamen Rider Victory: Hidden Prologue

Chapter TWO: Quick Encounter



Please make sure to comment!!!!
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Posted 12/30/08
woo i nv expect there was 2nd prologue. nice one. but enemy type still unclear..izzit nexus? lol
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As the story goes on, it will become more clear. Chapter Three will explain the situation further.
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Posted 12/31/08
heh ok..cool =)...ur fanfics seem promising.good job
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thanks!
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Chapter 3 is forthcoming. It's title: "The Hidden Past! The Origin of Victory"

Hope that gets you interested...
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of cuz i am ready to read for it
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Side Story of Kamen Rider Victory: Hidden Prologue

Chapter THREE: “The Hidden Past! The Origin of Victory”



Suzaku continued running towards the ceremony site. As he moved through the forest thoughts of the past were running through his mind. He pushed them aside and focused on his mission. Ahead of him he noticed it was getting brighter…This is it, he thought.

He burst into the clearing at full speed and steadied himself for anything. His eyes opened in surprise and he screeched to a halt.

The open area in front of him was covered with tents and equipment that was brought for the ceremony, however everything was in disarray. Suzaku sensed something was very wrong here. To his right he saw a trail of smoke going into the air, and he slowly moved towards it. He discovered it was coming from a burning tent.

Where is everyone? Suzaku thought.

Suzaku decided to check all the tents to see if he found anyone. As he did this, he found a robe among the mess.

“This definitely matched the other ones…” he said to no one in particular.

“Hey Suzaku!!! What are you doing?”

Suzaku whirled around to see…. nothing. He scanned the area, but saw no one.

“Wha – Is anyone here?” he yelled loudly. No response.

“Come on silly, stop daydreaming.”

Startled, he looked around again… but still saw no one. Am I going crazy? he thought to himself.

“What do you want to do, my friend?”

Suzaku moved to the other side of the ceremonial grounds and was completely baffled. The voices seemed familiar… but he just couldn’t place it. As he walked, he noticed a strange odor filled the air. Before he realized it, he was having trouble walking, and his eyes were becoming heavy. With a groan, he collapsed to the ground, face-forward.

From within the darkness, a pair of glowing eyes watched the ceremonial grounds. It saw the human collapse to the ground. Quickly it made his way to make sure he was unconscious.

“Tee hee! It was more effective than I thought it would be.” it spoke out loud.

“Hmm.. what exactly did you do?” replied another voice in the shadows.

“Simple, using my sleeping spell, I created a dreamscape for him. I will see his thoughts, so maybe we can determine its location without those weakling humans to use as bait.” responded the first figure.

“How long can it work on an enhanced human like him?” said the second voice.

“It’s not an exact science, Gene-“

“SILENCE!!” interrupted the second voice. “no one is to know of my involvement, fool” it said in a low voice. “Just get to work… I need to find it.”

The second figure disappeared, as the first figure turned its attention to its prey.


“Suzaku, you have been honored with a gift from the Gods… only you can determine its use.”

“Stop being so tense, they wouldn’t attack us…”

“Will you fight or will you give up?”

“What is a Kamen Rider you ask?”

Suzaku found himself surrounded by bright white lights as he opened his eyes. He struggled to see his surroundings as his vision focused. To his surprise, he was in his home village. He instantly recognized the room he grew up sleeping in.

Why am I here? How did I get here? Wasn’t I just at the ceremonial site? he wondered to himself.

The door slid open and a beautiful woman stood at the entrance. “Oh, you’re awake… that’s a relief.” she said as she picked up a bowl that was near him.

“Misaki…?” he said in confusion.

“Yes?” she looked at him in equal confusion “you must have hit your head even harder than we thought…”

“Uh huh...” he said just staring at her.

“What? Why are you staring like that? Is there something on my kimono?” she asked.

“No, I uh... I was just remembering how beautiful you are…that’s all” he responded softly.

Misaki turned a shade of red and quickly walked towards the door. “I – well, I promised your parents that I would watch you while they were out… but you can still get to your lessons if you are up to it…” she remarked while turned away from him.

“Lessons? I finished that two years ago.” Suzaku stated.

“You are only a second year student Suzaku, don’t you remember?” she eyed him with concern.

“What? Don’t you remember I transformed into a Kamen Rider and was fighting with the –“ he stopped when he noticed her increasingly baffled expression.

“What date is it, Misaki?”

“It’s **** ** ********”

Suzaku’s eyes widened. Five years ago??? How is this possible?? What’s going on??? he thought to himself.

“Maybe I’ll get the village doctor to check your condition…” remarked Misaki as she headed for the door. Suzaku realized that a physician’s exam would raise more questions than answers with his memories.

“AHH..wait-waIT-WAIT!!!!!!! You know what I’m just a little tired…. maybe I’ll rest a bit more, so uh, don’t disturb the doctor.” he stuttered.

“Mmm..okay, but your parents will want him to come later….sleep well.” she smiled as she slid the door closed.

Suzaku lay back on his cot and stared at the ceiling. He began thinking that this was probably some weird dream he was having… until it came to him like a bolt of lightning from the heavens.

This was the day he became Kamen Rider Victory.

The fateful day his life changed…

Before he took notice, he was standing in his village, wearing a training outfit.

That is unusual… was I not just –

“Suzaku!”

Suzaku snapped to attention and realized that his sensei was calling. “Are you dense?” Stand to attention like your classmates!!!!” said the old man.

“Y-yes sensei.” he responded, staring at the man with a stunned expression.

I never thought I would see the old man again… he thought sadly.

As the class made its way through the forest, Suzaku could not help but wonder what was happening. H recalled the shinobi training was a long, grueling affair, yet it seemed rather easy now. He began doubting that he was experiencing a dream. A dream was far more vague and clear than this. Then he noticed his surroundings were transforming again.

“What in the Emp –“

He was lying on the ground in pain as he heard screams and sounds of combat all around him.

Not this. this was when they died… NOOOOO!!!! he screamed to himself, Damn it, get up!! Save them!!! He managed to look down and noted the severity of his injuries…

The class had been attacked by a group of warriors with unusual animalistic appearances. However, the strangest part was their abilities…. they possessed incredible strength and magic that even folklores were unaware. He successfully fought of several opponents… but while he attempted to save his sensei, he was struck down by a bright orb of lightning.

If this was a dream, it was a pretty damn realistic dream… the sounds… the smells… the pain… the fear… that overwhelming feeling of helplessness because he could not protect anyone… it was just as he remembered….

“Tazaki Suzaku… do you want to save these innocent souls?” asked a feminine voice.

T-that voice again! He remembered all too well what happened next….

“What? H-how can I when I am practically dead? Who is this?” asked an injured Suzaku. The sounds of the raging battle slowly faded away….

“I can give you the strength to enforce your incredible will to protect… “

“H-How?”

“This power has selected you as its user, but only if you have the resolve to bear its immense will….”

“I-I don’t understand…what kind of power is this?”

“The power of hope, destruction, happiness, sorrow, freedom, oppression, danger, power, fear, and the power of great justice… the power of the greatest force…the will to create your destiny. the power of the Kamen Rider…”

“K-Kamen Rider? Sounds like a child’s fantasy.”

“Will you fight or will you give up?”

“Fight…”


….
……..


Suzaku remembered his body began to change.. it was indescribable… but as he stood he remembered that he was no longer in pain and that he suddenly was wearing a belt of sorts and holding a buckle-like object in his left hand.. Some way or another, he knew what he was supposed to do… He remembered inserting the buckle onto the belt and outstretched his right arm across his chest to his left.

How did I know how to do this…was it her that told me? he thought. Then he recalled the single phrase he spoke: “Henshin!”

His right arm swung out to his right as the transformation completed.

That was rather anti-climatic the first time I did it, eh?

The warriors and surviving students took note of this, and the subsequent battle.

Suzaku remembered he destroyed several warriors with ease. The very first one who attacked him, a Spider creature, was defeated with a single punch to the gut. He was taken by surprise by how fast his reflexes and speed had become. He quickly adjusted and defeated several more with an attack called “Rider Kick.”

In the real world, the robed figure noticed something was wrong with the sequence.

“Whaa…he’s waking up? Already!?!?” it exclaimed in horror.

Suzaku’s surroundings were changing again..but this time, he heard faint sounds getting louder and the smell of burning wood around him. That is... the burning tent!!!!! His eyes snapped open as he came to his senses. A robed figure stood over him. They stared at each other for a moment.

“How are you awake? My sleeping mist is supposed last longer!!!” it said in an annoyed voice.

“You did this to me?” asked Suzaku as he rolled away from the figure, “who are you?”

The figure laughed evilly and removed the robe. He appeared like a human male, but something told Suzaku that this was no ordinary man… just as the man transformed into a Tapir-like creature!!! “I’ll just torture you until I find out what the master wants to know, eh eh eh.”

“Damnit! You are going to pay for this you Nexus bastard.” replied Suzaku angrily as he revealed the Rider Belt and the Buckle in his hand.

“Henshin!!!” he yelled taking the stance and started running at the Tapir Kajin as the transformation completed. <VICTORY COMPLETE!>

He hit the buckle and it announced <RIDER CHOP> as Victory’s right arm glowed with energy, he sliced at the Kajin with his arm and knocked it back.

The Tapir Kajin looked scared, but chuckled as it attacked, “a little agitated, are we? Ha, perhaps it was wise to kidnap those humans after all. B-bet you want to know where they are? Right? How about it?”

“So they were taken? I see.” said Victory as he dodged the attack and delivered a series of punches followed by a swift roundhouse kick, knocking the Kajin back again.

He tapped the belt again and it announced < RIDER KICK> as he launched himself into the air and came at the monster with a tremendous energy-charged flying side kick.

The Tapir Kajin was stunned. “That’s it? B-b-but I said I–“it stuttered as it could not avoid the speed of the Rider Kick. Victory disappeared in a streak of energy as his foot made contact with the creature. He reappeared on the other side of the creature, facing away and landing in a crouched position.

“You were buying time, and were lying while trying to save your self. I have no time to deal with cannon fodder like you” he replied curtly as he stood and walked away.

The stunned Tapir Kajin exploded moments later, creating a large explosion.

This is far from over… I will find them and put an end to this like I should have back then… Victory thought as he mounted a nearby horse. Do not worry Misaki… I will be at your side soon….

END. Chapter Three.
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wow nice as always keep up the good work !! ^^
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