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[Amuto Fanfic] Pink & Blue
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Posted 12/23/08 , edited 12/23/08
Ello everyone! Wahaha, finally got 500 cr points. Anyway.. Enjoy! Please do give me some comments =D





Forewords:
Posted 12/23/08
not bad but your chapters need to be longer
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Posted 12/23/08
Chapter 1 up! Since no one seems to be interested with just the forewords. Is my story that... bad?

T_T

Oh well anyway...



Chapter 1:

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Posted 12/23/08
@mariah- Thank you ^^ Yea I know my chapters are short, because they appear long on Blogger, so I just left them as they were. Chapter 2 onwards would be longer, though ^^

(I've actually prepared chapter 2 already, but...)
Posted 12/23/08
oh ok cool (you want more people to comment right)
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Posted 12/23/08 , edited 12/23/08
Yeah partly because of that. Another thing is also because my story has been posted here for just like... less than 2 hours. So if I posted too soon, then it would make my pace seem fast, when it will slow down when school reopens. So yeah, no idea what I'm muttering actually.
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Posted 12/23/08
Nice story! Update soon
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Posted 12/23/08
Yeah update soon! :D
Nice banner btw.
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Posted 12/23/08
VRY KAWAII STORY!
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Posted 12/24/08
Thanks everyone. I'm typing out chapter 3 now, which has more Amuto scenes. Chapter 2 will be updated shortly.
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Posted 12/24/08 , edited 12/25/08
Here's chapter 2! xD

Chapter 2:

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Posted 12/24/08
ur crazy? u said this is a bad fanfic??

OF COURSE ITS NICE XD!!!! love it >w<!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 12/24/08

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ur crazy? u said this is a bad fanfic??

OF COURSE ITS NICE XD!!!! love it >w<!!!!!!!!!


Thank you ^^

I just started reading yours yesterday, so I can't comment yet, until I finish reading. I'm at chapter 6 now, I think...

Anyway, I love your story too. Maybe I should also add in more cheesy Amuto scenes of Ikuto teasing Amu ^^


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Posted 12/24/08

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trumpace wrote:

ur crazy? u said this is a bad fanfic??

OF COURSE ITS NICE XD!!!! love it >w<!!!!!!!!!


Thank you ^^

I just started reading yours yesterday, so I can't comment yet, until I finish reading. I'm at chapter 6 now, I think...

Anyway, I love your story too. Maybe I should also add in more cheesy Amuto scenes of Ikuto teasing Amu ^^




eh really ur readin it? lol thx alot XD!! but i really lyk ur idea!! no... cancel that.. make it LOVE IT XD!!

plz update soon n lets comment each other's work kay?


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Posted 12/24/08
Hai! I'm going to read your chapter 8 now ^^ *excited*
I promise to comment after finish reading all the chapters you've done so far xD
Oh and, thank you for loving my idea. I thought it was rather typical and common, though. Seems like I'm just editing the main plot of Shugo Chara. Oh well.
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