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Posted 8/4/09
Sure, the story is okay but there is a lot of things that are just not right. Stories are not written with that format but that's forgivable. However, the past tense of put is still the same word! And that's not the last bit...
Don't get me wrong, i just want this story to be great... in a way that there should not be any grammatical errors.
Posted 8/8/09
hey its so lovely......i like it i will read the next one
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Posted 9/4/09
i really like it

i will complete it
thanx for the story
Posted 1/2/10
i read this and luved it

cant wait to read the next chapter
Posted 1/6/10

i read this and luved it

cant wait to read the next chapter

thanks for your comment
i understnad your feelings because am dying to read the new one ...........
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Posted 5/13/10
Yay .. it was good story i liked it ...its funny 2....thank u for this story ^^ :P
good jope
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