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Post Reply FANFIC[OS] ~ There Is No Better Gift
Posted 12/28/08 , edited 12/28/08

CHARACTERS
Yamada Ryosuke x Fujiyama Umi (OC)

DISCLAIMER

I do not own Yamada Ryosuke, or any of the HSJ members mentioned.


AUTHOR'S NOTES
Well, sorry if this is late. This is written as a fulfillment of emkyuu’s request. This was supposed to be posted before Christmas. But I was so busy. Sorry. It’s been a while since I last came here, so here’s my present to all of you. I hope you like it though. Sorry for the crappiness. *hides from incoming tomatoes*
By the way, this is written by switching point of views. So parts indicating their names means that it’s their point of view. This is kinda long, since I am not really in the right mood to compress thoughts. But I hope you like it anyway. ^^


LEGENDS
yellow = A/N
blue = Yamada's POV
purple = Umi's POV
orange = normal POV


There Is No Better Gift

By : bowling1991

<UMI>

*kring kring*

I groaned as I heard my alarm clock sound. It’s my holiday break and yet I have to wake up early. Why? Why oh why do I have to? It’s good to sleep. Plus it’s so cold right now. Sleeping is the best thing to do to greet the season. I want to be in my dreamland again. I was about to fall back into my deep slumber when my phone rang. I groaned in frustration as I sat up and reached for my phone. Whoever disturbed me is seriously going to get it. I flipped my phone on, and all my anger melted away when I saw the message. I smiled, and it seemed like waking up so early is the best thing in the world. I put my phone down and got up and went to the bathroom to prepare. Oh I know this is going to be a great day.


<YAMADA>

I chuckled as I set my phone down. I know she hates waking up so early in the morning, so she’s definitely going to turn off her alarm and go back to sleep. But I don’t mind, I love waking her up. I feel so happy just doing so, and I am glad I have this privilege of doing so. It’s my way of showing her my feelings, this warm feeling I have for her. I slowly got up and walked to my window to open the curtains. What a wonderful sight. There’s nothing compared to it. But then, I looked at my bedside table. Oh, I was wrong. There is definitely something that can compare to it. Even better. There, standing on the table, is a very plain picture frame. But it is the most beautiful thing I have seen. Why? Because that picture frame is holding the picture of my treasure. There I am, holding her hand, smiling my widest smile. Yes, I am telling the world she is mine. I smiled the last time and started to prepare for this big day. Today, I am going to SHOW the world she is MINE.


<UMI>

‘Uwaa! I am so late! I can’t believe I actually fell asleep while having my bath! Argh! Why does the water have to feel so warm, and comforting, and..argh! I have to hurry!’ I almost tripped while summoning all the strength I have to run. Oh yes, I am late. I am so weak with cold weathers. It just seems that I want to hibernate during this season. I stopped for a while to catch my breath. Before, I really didn’t mind if I am late or not. If I am late, I will still walk calmly to the place. But you ask why I am running now? I don’t know either. I just know that I am really eager to see this person, and I wanted to be beside him as fast as I could. I wanted to be on his side forever. How I wish I could. I stopped all my thoughts and focused on running to the place. I am coming. I am definitely, absolutely going to be by your side.


< YAMADA >

She’s late..again. I bet she fell asleep again. I laughed softly as I imagined her running to this place. She’s always so ‘panicky’ when she knows she’s late for our meeting, or dates. But nevertheless, I still love her. This is one of the things I love about her. I don’t tolerate her being late, but it seems like it has become a part of her at times. I don’t mind waiting for her. I have waited five years for her love, and I don’t mind waiting longer just so she could be in my arms. At the end of the day, I know everything will turn out alright. ‘Ryosuke!’ I heard someone shouting. I turned and saw her running as fast as she can towards me. When she stopped in front of me to catch her breath, I laughed at her. ‘What are you laughing at?!’ she said. ‘You look horrible.’ I answered while laughing. She crossed her arms and pouted, ‘That is so not funny Ryosuke. I ran as fast as I can just to lessen your waiting time, and now you are laughing at me?!’. And with that, she walked away. I looked at her retreating figure, and smiled. I can’t stop myself from being mesmerized by her beauty, even looking at her from the back makes my heart go wild. I walked up to her, gathered her in my arms, and hugged her tightly from the back. ‘Okay. Okay. I am sorry. I’ll not laugh again. Forgive me?’.


<UMI>

I can’t believe him! I ran all the way here just so he could laugh at me? That guy! I walked away, but immediately felt two strong arms envelop me. I melted in his embrace, it was so warm. His strong arms make me feel safe, as if it’s telling me that he’s going to protect me no matter what. I closed my eyes and sighed in contentment. I never want to let go. We stayed like that for a few minutes, loving each other’s presence. He broke the silence and asked, ‘Forgive me?’. I faced him, plastering an angry look on my face to make him feel guilty. I looked into his eyes, and saw his sincerity. I know he knows I am bluffing, but he is serious and sincere whenever it comes to saying sorry. And that what’s making this relationship strong. ‘Okay, I forgive you.’ And oh, how I love that smile. ‘Let’s go?’ I heard him say as his hands snaked to mine and laced our hands together. I let him lead me.


< YAMADA >

Tonight is Christmas Eve so I invited her to do some last minute Christmas shopping. I was the one who invited her, yet, all throughout the journey, she was the one going in shops, pointing on things, and buying a lot of stuff. At the end of the day, it turned out that I will be the carrier of a bunch of shopping bags containing her stuff. Of the ten bags I am currently holding, only three are mine, the rest are hers. But I don’t even mind at all. She loves shopping, and she seems so hyped up whenever she is doing so. Just seeing her happy is enough for me to endure the pain of my feet. Whenever I feel tired, her smile seems to cast away all of it, it just gives me strength. With this feeling, I think, no, I know and I am absolutely sure she is the one, the right one, the perfect one for me.


<UMI>

I sat down, exhausted. I looked at my watch, its 11:45 pm. ‘Oh my gosh! We’ve been shopping the whole day?’ I asked him. ‘Yeah. Practically that’s what we’ve been doing, except during lunch time when we ate. And also snacks and dinner.’ And he laughed. ‘I am so sorry. I didn’t realize! I’m going to get something to eat!’ I said, and immediately stood up and ran to a nearby stand. As I was waiting for the food, I glanced at him and saw him with closed eyes. He is tired, I know. But whenever we do this, I know he doesn’t mind. But I do. That’s why every after our shopping session, I would treat him for a body massage, just to make up for my childish behavior. I looked at my watch, its 11:50 already. Only ten minutes to go and it’s Christmas. I smiled as I remembered the gift I bought for him. I hope he likes it. I paid for the food and went back to the bench. I am sure he is going to like it.


<YAMADA>

I opened my eyes as I felt her presence. She smiled at me. ‘Tired much?’ she asked. I just nodded my head and accepted the food she gave me. ‘Don’t worry! I am going to treat you to spa tomorrow!’ I just smiled and nodded as an agreement. I silently ate and finished my food. ‘Ryosuke’ I looked at her. ‘Thank you for bearing with my childish behavior. I know you are really exhausted and yet you still accompanied and helped me throughout. Thank you very much.’ I smiled and was about to say something when she reached for something in one of the bags and gave it to me. ‘Here. Accept this. I hope you like it.’ I looked at her, a little shocked. She smiled at me, reassuring me. So I accepted it and opened it. I was shocked when the wrapped thing ended up as a velvet case. ‘No way..’ I heard myself saying. I opened the case and was stunned by the beauty of the bracelet encased in it. ‘How..when..’ I looked at her, she just laughed. ‘I know you have wanted that so bad. I see you staring at it whenever we go to that store. So I earned money to get it for you, and look! I even had your name engraved on it. I put mine too!’. I turned the bracelet and examined it carefully. I found out that she was right. ‘Thank you.!’ Was all I could manage to say.


<UMI>

I was so happy. He liked it very much, I can tell from his reaction. I took it from his hands and clasped it onto his wrist. It looks perfect on him. And I am glad he loves it. I closed my eyes and sighed in contentment. ‘Umi.’ ‘Hai?’ I answered, still with eyes closed. I noticed that he went quiet, so I opened my eyes and saw him standing in front of me. ‘Yes Ryosuke?’. ‘I have something to give to you.’. He made me stand up and help my hands tightly.
Ten, I heard people counting. ‘For five years I have gathered my courage to let you know how I feel.’
Nine. ‘I am really happy that we are together now.’
Eight. ‘Just being with you gives contentment to my heart.’
Seven. ‘And I want to make you happy for the rest of my existence.’
Six, and he took out something from his pocket. ‘I wanted to make you mine, eternally’
Five, I started to feel nervous. ‘Fujiyama Umi.’
Four. ‘Will..’.
Three. ‘you…’
Two. ‘marry…’
One. ‘…me?’.
‘MERRY CHRISTMAS!’ everybody said. I stared at him in shock as he opened the velvet case, similar to mine, but only smaller. I was stunned by the beauty of the ring it is holding. The diamond was delicately laid on center of the golden ring. Every pattern was carefully engraved on the ring. And I can tell by its looks that it was made just for me.


<YAMADA>

I looked at her shocked face. I thought, maybe it is too early? ‘When…’ I heard her start. ‘Remember five months ago when we went shopping and came in there? I saw the bracelet and I planned on buying it. Then I thought I wanted to give you a ring similar to it. I have planned this for five months Umi. And nothing will make me happier than you saying yes.’ I said. Tears were on her eyes while I was saying it. ‘Shh…don’t cry. I am not forcing you. I am going to wai..’ ‘Yes’. She interrupted. ‘Eh?’ Was it just my imagination? Or did she say yes? ‘Yes. Yes. I will. I will marry you Yamada Ryosuke.’ She smiled at me. It’s my turn to be shocked. What she said slowly dissolved to me, and when I have finished processing it, I hugged her, lifted her and twirled her happily. ‘Yes! Yes! Yes!’ I shouted at the top of my lungs.‘ I set her down and looked at her in the eyes. ‘You have seriously made me the happiest man existing Fujiyama Umi.’ I told her. ‘And you have made me the happiest woman existing. Perfect couple huh?’ she said and giggled. I closed the distance between us, sealing the promise with a kiss, accompanied by the fireworks in the background. And I know we are thinking the same thing.


“THERE IS NO BETTER GIFT IN THE WORLD THAN HAVING YOU BESIDE ME...ETERNALLY”



Okay, sorry if it is really long. I really didn’t have time to compress it that much. But still, I hope you like it. To those who read it till the end. I salute you! ^^

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Awww it's awesomeee.
I like the way how Yamada asked her to marry him it was cuteee
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Awww it's awesomeee.
I like the way how Yamada asked her to marry him it was cuteee


haha. thanks. glad you liked it. ^^
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awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!
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awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


haha. thanks so much. ^^
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Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


haha. thanks so much. ^^



ur welcome mi amigo!
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bowling1991 wrote:


Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


haha. thanks so much. ^^



ur welcome mi amigo!


haha. it's been a while since i wrote fics. so i am sure my fics are crappy now. lol.
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kyaa~!!!!!
esereth-chan!!!
Hontou ni, Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!
i so love it!! .. hahahhaha .. XD
he proposed??!!! ,.. hahhahaha!
loool .. i was thinking that the girl
was me~! .. XD haaiiizzz .. how i wish!
hmmm .. hahah .. i'm imagining some wierd things now!
hahahahahhaha .. :p arigatou! .. u made the promise!
i so love it!! .. sUgOi esereth-chan!!!! ..
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Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


Umi who?? .. hahaha ..!!!! XD
Posted 12/28/08

emkyuu wrote:

kyaa~!!!!!
esereth-chan!!!
Hontou ni, Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!
i so love it!! .. hahahhaha .. XD
he proposed??!!! ,.. hahhahaha!
loool .. i was thinking that the girl
was me~! .. XD haaiiizzz .. how i wish!
hmmm .. hahah .. i'm imagining some wierd things now!
hahahahahhaha .. :p arigatou! .. u made the promise!
i so love it!! .. sUgOi esereth-chan!!!! .. :D


glad you liked it. sorry if it's late. and crappy. i am really not good in writing. T-T. anyway, happy christmas to you. and i am glad you liked it. ^^
Posted 12/28/08

emkyuu wrote:


Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


Umi who?? .. hahaha ..!!!! XD


you are Umi. lol.
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emkyuu wrote:


Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


Umi who?? .. hahaha ..!!!! XD


you are Umi. lol.


owh .. haha .. lool .. how i wish that would happen .. in the future .. just kidding!! .. hahaha .. how i wish .. lol .. XD
ne~ fangirls .. dun worry .. my heart chages from time to time .. :p
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bowling1991 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:

kyaa~!!!!!
esereth-chan!!!
Hontou ni, Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!
i so love it!! .. hahahhaha .. XD
he proposed??!!! ,.. hahhahaha!
loool .. i was thinking that the girl
was me~! .. XD haaiiizzz .. how i wish!
hmmm .. hahah .. i'm imagining some wierd things now!
hahahahahhaha .. :p arigatou! .. u made the promise!
i so love it!! .. sUgOi esereth-chan!!!! .. :D


glad you liked it. sorry if it's late. and crappy. i am really not good in writing. T-T. anyway, happy christmas to you. and i am glad you liked it. ^^


merry christmas to you too esereth-chan!! .. no, it's ok .. really .. :p don't say that ne~ i love your fics! .. your'e really good in writing! .. THUMBS UP! .. again .. Arigatou Gozaimasu!!! .. :p
Posted 12/28/08

emkyuu wrote:


bowling1991 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:

kyaa~!!!!!
esereth-chan!!!
Hontou ni, Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!
i so love it!! .. hahahhaha .. XD
he proposed??!!! ,.. hahhahaha!
loool .. i was thinking that the girl
was me~! .. XD haaiiizzz .. how i wish!
hmmm .. hahah .. i'm imagining some wierd things now!
hahahahahhaha .. :p arigatou! .. u made the promise!
i so love it!! .. sUgOi esereth-chan!!!! .. :D


glad you liked it. sorry if it's late. and crappy. i am really not good in writing. T-T. anyway, happy christmas to you. and i am glad you liked it. ^^


merry christmas to you too esereth-chan!! .. no, it's ok .. really .. :p don't say that ne~ i love your fics! .. your'e really good in writing! .. THUMBS UP! .. again .. Arigatou Gozaimasu!!! .. :p


haha. thanks so much. i am glad you appreciated it. ^^
Posted 12/28/08

emkyuu wrote:


bowling1991 wrote:


emkyuu wrote:


Mai-Lee wrote:

awwww...it's so sweet and kawaii...yamachanXumi!! kawaii great job!! keep it up ne!! mi amigo!!


Umi who?? .. hahaha ..!!!! XD


you are Umi. lol.


owh .. haha .. lool .. how i wish that would happen .. in the future .. just kidding!! .. hahaha .. how i wish .. lol .. XD
ne~ fangirls .. dun worry .. my heart chages from time to time .. :p


who know right? lol.
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