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Haf u ever tot abt ur own bittersweet anime story?
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Posted 12/28/08
i thought of it, but not the whole story tho, im too lazy too think XD
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Posted 12/28/08

serpentura wrote:

yes i have.
there was a guy who have tentacle powers and started raping every girl on sight. it should have a harem ending, too bad the guy has a disease known as STD


Oh god, i lol'd... hard....
Posted 12/28/08
I actually read it? LOL.I must be bored.
Anyway, yeah, the story is pretty good, it's just the grammar.
=___=
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Posted 12/28/08
hm....this sounds alot like the plot in Tora Dora...hm..r u sure u made this up?...
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26 / M / On a red island
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Posted 12/29/08
i m sry if its a dup
n english is nt my strong point
n yes i did make the story myself
n if it looks lik another manga story it is pure conicidence
cos i nvr read or hear before the few manga u guys mention
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26 / M / try google earth
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Posted 12/29/08
um, okay.......What??? come again....
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Posted 12/29/08
ok i understand now...smells alot like toradora, mixed with seto no hayanome, and akane iro ni somaru saka......all mixed,
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VVake wrote:

well i haf
n dis is my own story

Morisaki Kaito, a normal high school freshman who just transfered sch dued to his father's job.
The not so normal thing about him is his abonormal yankee face he inherited from his mother side.
His mother's grandfather was the head o a notorious yakuza clan, feared by many in that field of job.
Because of his scary face many people become concious of him and dared not go near him.
However, under his scary face lies a goldern heart which won't even kill a single ant.

In the class he transfered to there was this really cute girl, her name Shiroyama Kaori.
She was innocent, exactly the type which will make you think, 'I have to protect her'
Kaito immedietly fell in love with her.
On his way home, Kaito realise that he and Kaori takes the same way home, in fact they just live a few blocks away from each other.

One month after he transfered, Kaito decides to confess his love to Kaori.
They met on the rooftop.
And he was regected on the spot.
Kaito didn't think much about the regection, in fact he expected it to happen.
'No one would want to date a person with a scary face, beside no one could guess that a person with this face could actually love someone' , was what he thought.

For the next few days Kaito spend his days as if the confession never happened.
But, one day Kaito was called out by a few of Kaori's good friends.
They told him not to follow Kaori on her way home anymore.
Kaito then realise that Kaori didn't notice that they lived in the same neighbourhood.
Afraid of being an anoyonace to Kaori, Kaito decided to wait for three hours everytime after school ends, so as not to bump into Kaori on his way home.

One day, Kaito was on his way home after the three hours wait after school.
At the traffic junction, he saw Kaori waiting at traffic light.
He then remembered on that day Kaori actually had clubs.
Suddenly behind his back jumped out a cat, being shocked, Kaito ran forward in the exact direction of where Kaori was standing.
Being afraid of Kaito's scary face, Kaori dashed out into the road.
Kaori stopped in the middle not able to decide on what to do, suddenly a truck appeared.
The driver was half asleep and did not see Kaori.
Having loved Kaori deeply, Kaito dashed out and pushed Kaori away, taking her place in the accident.

After a few weeks in coma, Kaito woked up.
He saw his parents, he saw his relative, he saw his doctor, and he saw Kaori, however, the first word he said was, "who are you?".
Kaito suffered severe memory losed due to large impact on his head.
He lost all his memories including of his parents, of his childhood, the only thing he remembered was his name.
Feeling great guilt towards Kaito, Kaori decides to take care of him until his memories returns.

That was the start of their bittersweet and a little spicy romance.
Many rivals appered, like Kaito's childhood friend from another town, Kawamizu Maiko, she knows about Kaito's kind nature and for that she is not afraid of him, in fact she has a secret crush on him.
Knowing that Kaito met with an accident, Maiko manage persued her parents to let her transfere to the same school as him.

As for Kaori's case, spending days taking care of Kaito, she finds herself slowly falling in love with him, as the days went by the deeper her love for Kaito dug.

Who is Kaito going to choose?
Is it his childhood friend or his forgotten love?

well this is the end of my story
u guys could oso guess the endin
u could oso add in ur own story
wheather is it detailed or not jus add it in
Have fun dats wat i will say
enjoy the process not the endin ^^


I like ur story.!

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Posted 12/29/08

jhazz09 wrote:


VVake wrote:

well i haf
n dis is my own story

Morisaki Kaito, a normal high school freshman who just transfered sch dued to his father's job.
The not so normal thing about him is his abonormal yankee face he inherited from his mother side.
His mother's grandfather was the head o a notorious yakuza clan, feared by many in that field of job.
Because of his scary face many people become concious of him and dared not go near him.
However, under his scary face lies a goldern heart which won't even kill a single ant.

In the class he transfered to there was this really cute girl, her name Shiroyama Kaori.
She was innocent, exactly the type which will make you think, 'I have to protect her'
Kaito immedietly fell in love with her.
On his way home, Kaito realise that he and Kaori takes the same way home, in fact they just live a few blocks away from each other.

One month after he transfered, Kaito decides to confess his love to Kaori.
They met on the rooftop.
And he was regected on the spot.
Kaito didn't think much about the regection, in fact he expected it to happen.
'No one would want to date a person with a scary face, beside no one could guess that a person with this face could actually love someone' , was what he thought.

For the next few days Kaito spend his days as if the confession never happened.
But, one day Kaito was called out by a few of Kaori's good friends.
They told him not to follow Kaori on her way home anymore.
Kaito then realise that Kaori didn't notice that they lived in the same neighbourhood.
Afraid of being an anoyonace to Kaori, Kaito decided to wait for three hours everytime after school ends, so as not to bump into Kaori on his way home.

One day, Kaito was on his way home after the three hours wait after school.
At the traffic junction, he saw Kaori waiting at traffic light.
He then remembered on that day Kaori actually had clubs.
Suddenly behind his back jumped out a cat, being shocked, Kaito ran forward in the exact direction of where Kaori was standing.
Being afraid of Kaito's scary face, Kaori dashed out into the road.
Kaori stopped in the middle not able to decide on what to do, suddenly a truck appeared.
The driver was half asleep and did not see Kaori.
Having loved Kaori deeply, Kaito dashed out and pushed Kaori away, taking her place in the accident.

After a few weeks in coma, Kaito woked up.
He saw his parents, he saw his relative, he saw his doctor, and he saw Kaori, however, the first word he said was, "who are you?".
Kaito suffered severe memory losed due to large impact on his head.
He lost all his memories including of his parents, of his childhood, the only thing he remembered was his name.
Feeling great guilt towards Kaito, Kaori decides to take care of him until his memories returns.

That was the start of their bittersweet and a little spicy romance.
Many rivals appered, like Kaito's childhood friend from another town, Kawamizu Maiko, she knows about Kaito's kind nature and for that she is not afraid of him, in fact she has a secret crush on him.
Knowing that Kaito met with an accident, Maiko manage persued her parents to let her transfere to the same school as him.

As for Kaori's case, spending days taking care of Kaito, she finds herself slowly falling in love with him, as the days went by the deeper her love for Kaito dug.

Who is Kaito going to choose?
Is it his childhood friend or his forgotten love?

well this is the end of my story
u guys could oso guess the endin
u could oso add in ur own story
wheather is it detailed or not jus add it in
Have fun dats wat i will say
enjoy the process not the endin ^^


I like ur story.!



thx a lot ^^
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Posted 12/29/08
grammar check on your title
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Posted 12/29/08
It may be kinda yaoi-ish but a guy who falls in love with another guy but becomes friendly with a girl. Soon after, he starts falling for the girl ^^
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Posted 12/31/08

Ichigo-Neko wrote:

It may be kinda yaoi-ish but a guy who falls in love with another guy but becomes friendly with a girl. Soon after, he starts falling for the girl ^^


nice u lik yaoi?
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Posted 12/31/08
my brain tired from thinking bout' this.
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Posted 12/31/08
At first I thought this was about your life since the title said "have you ever thought about your own bittersweet anime story?" big misinterpretation, my bad...

in answer to the question... yeah.. lots of times... I like to think about writing a book or something but I'm not one to stick to long-term goals.

btw, why does it have to be an anime story? why not just a plain story? eh...
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Posted 12/31/08
ahh..no talent in writing,,haha
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