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Posted 12/12/07
I wrote this, it's about how sasuke left sakura, Enjoy

I look for you at day
I think of you at night
Is it so wrong…
To love you with all my might

I show my feelings everyday
You respond by turning away
Together we were meant to be
However you don’t agree

My feelings for you are strong
But you don’t appreciate
The things I try to do for you
Love you don’t know, you only can hate

The part of you that seeks vengeance
Is what brought us apart
I wonder if you knew when you left
You left me with a broken heart

Everyday I await your return
In the place I last saw you
For my world without you
Is dark as black, and sad as blue

This is part two:

Two years later
I still stand
Still dreaming of the day
We hold hand to hand

I heard terrible news
I shattered in pain and cried
For what I have heard
Was that my true love had died

Even though you are dead
I wait at the place you left
Hoping you will come through that door
Even though I no your no more

I know now that you had been killed
My heart is now full of hate
Was this the same thing that happened to you?
All along had this been fate?

Had he lost someone dear to him?
As his life had been lost to me
Is this what he was feeling all along?
Is this the side of him I couldn’t see?

Did he never want to love again?
Full of anger and now was gone
Is this the reason he pushed me away
I knew that moment I had to move on

Here I stand at your grave
With a smile on my face
Now I truly understand
That you have brought me grace

Even though you’re not here
I no you’ll be in my heart
I’ll be with you and you with me
So we’ll never be apart
Posted 12/16/07
uh not bad really shows there love for each other and all
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Posted 12/16/07
Thank you very much ^_^
Posted 1/2/08
greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat poem
but why did you killed him sooo unfair

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Posted 1/2/08

hibaaaa wrote:

greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat poem
but why did you killed him sooo unfair



Sorry about killing him, I wasn't planing on it myself. But I figured a to happy ending would be to unrealistic. I don't think in the series they would end up together, I hope they do. But I tried to make the ending as happy as I could, at that point I didn't want to change the poem. Well lets just hope in the series that doesn't happen, I mean him dying. ^_^
Posted 1/2/08

kira-factor wrote:

Sorry about killing him, I wasn't planing on it myself. But I figured a to happy ending would be to unrealistic. I don't think in the series they would end up together, I hope they do. But I tried to make the ending as happy as I could, at that point I didn't want to change the poem. Well lets just hope in the series that doesn't happen, I mean him dying. ^_^


yup , i hope
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Posted 1/17/08

hibaaaa wrote:


kira-factor wrote:

Sorry about killing him, I wasn't planing on it myself. But I figured a to happy ending would be to unrealistic. I don't think in the series they would end up together, I hope they do. But I tried to make the ending as happy as I could, at that point I didn't want to change the poem. Well lets just hope in the series that doesn't happen, I mean him dying. ^_^


yup , i hope


Me too! I really wish they end up together but it really would be unrealistic from where everything is in right now. gosh I wish he changes before it's too late... for sakura. -_-!
Posted 1/18/08

kyomaru411 wrote:


hibaaaa wrote:


kira-factor wrote:

Sorry about killing him, I wasn't planing on it myself. But I figured a to happy ending would be to unrealistic. I don't think in the series they would end up together, I hope they do. But I tried to make the ending as happy as I could, at that point I didn't want to change the poem. Well lets just hope in the series that doesn't happen, I mean him dying. ^_^


yup , i hope


Me too! I really wish they end up together but it really would be unrealistic from where everything is in right now. gosh I wish he changes before it's too late... for sakura. -_-!


i'm not really worried about her she has naruto too so she on't lose anything
but killing my sasuke i can't accept that
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Posted 1/18/08
but naruto i think should have hinata. even though i know naruto is still there for her i wish sasuke would be there too.
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Posted 2/8/08
i really like dis poem its really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 2/28/08
SSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOO GGGGGOOOOOOOOODDDDDDD


Like it . .
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Posted 3/27/08
this poem is SOOOO GOOOOD!! i really loved it~ but i still hope they end up together in the end (:
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