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again thanks for the confidence. what do you think of this idea? not rlly too sure about the time period, or the weaponry to be honest, but that is aside from the point for the plot. So there is a war going on, and the enemy decides to break the rules and bring in biological war fare. But they never thought to test it on children when they tested it. But it pretty much turned all the adults into veggies because it messed with their neurology. however, it effected the kids by making them stronger, faster, increased vision and hearing, and made a bigger threat to themselves. So then a kid, (no name for now, i am terrible, absolutely terrible with names) decides to take up the mantle of leader for their small town. And when the enemy comes in to exterminate the villages they thought helpless, the kids retaliate and blah blah.... i think u get jest, what do you think? i thought it was originial, but i dont know, the idea might have been used before


Hey you know that's a real good start. (Don't worry about names, I suck at them too, I mean come on, my Main character is named Nick.) See that can be a lot of fun to play around with. Like besides the idea of your basic outline and plot, you get to play with a lot of fun stuff using that. For instance that plays with, well The city is run by kids only, so is there order amongst the kids or maybe there are lots of kids with super powers having fun and causing havoc throughout the town. That can be really fun. Another thing that you get to play with, that is one of my personal favorites, is the science. You can come up with the chemical composition of this disease, you can explain how it's effect manifests in children and how it creates ability's in which the kids may adapt to.
So that sounds like a really fun idea you got there. Play around with it a bit and when you think you really got something, start writing it, cause it sounds like you got a fun idea there. lol I hope to see it as a new Story on this group soon.


Im glad you like it. Now that your brought that up, i was thinking maybe a small village that no1 really knows about is struck first. and that after they establish a food source and a defense, they go out to see if there are other survivors. So they go to a city, (they is the main character, and his small gang of 5 kids) and they find that it is all chaotic. With the parents gone, kids have gone crazy, gangs have been created all over the city. graphiti and vandalism marks all the walls. So his group is going to have to try to bring them together and unite them to fight the war... i dont know... something like that, and i am glad you like my idea
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why thankyou pupil, haha, just disregard my current critisicm until i can figure out what i was trying to say


lol It's all good, It's just I recognize some of the mistakes I've put in there, so I'm trying to see if any of those kind of jog your memory. I'm always trying to improve this kind of stuff so that people can find it more understandable and enjoyable for people to read.


for sure, i know what you mean. reading your stuff makes me want to get back onto mine, but it was all on my dad's laptop which crashed and i lost it all. so i am trying to find something new to do. i want to think of something completely originial you know? but i doubt that is rlly possible. i dont know, maybe my inspiration hasnt hit me quite yet, lol


I have ideas for animes simply by letting my mind wander. I almost never actively set out to make up an anime, but once I have my idea, I flesh it out until it is complete.

The first stage of this creation process involves building on the initial idea, some random thought which occured to me in my daydreaming. This initial idea is not neccesarily a premise! It could be an idea for a strange way for an anime to look, or for a beautiful setting for an anime. From the first thought, I build the rest of the story based on what I feel fits.

I'll give the stories of the origins of both of my stories on this group.

I no longer remember precisely what I was thinking when I first envisioned Urdumkeit, but I do remember that the setting came first, and that I created the plot and characters a few days later.

Chthonia was different from all of my other animes, in that I actually set out to create something. You see, I play this sort-of LARPing thing with two of my friends. I have invested a number of really cool characters and ideas in these LARPs, but the LARP's plotline is far too convoluted to make into a story. The solution? I transplanted many of my characters and ideas into a new anime, and then invented a plot and setting that would fit. Most of the characters in the school are not from the LARP though. As the series progresses, more of them will show up (although you won't be able to tell which characters are originally from Chthonia, and which are transplanted.)

I hope that this long monologue has somehow helped you.
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why thankyou pupil, haha, just disregard my current critisicm until i can figure out what i was trying to say


lol It's all good, It's just I recognize some of the mistakes I've put in there, so I'm trying to see if any of those kind of jog your memory. I'm always trying to improve this kind of stuff so that people can find it more understandable and enjoyable for people to read.


for sure, i know what you mean. reading your stuff makes me want to get back onto mine, but it was all on my dad's laptop which crashed and i lost it all. so i am trying to find something new to do. i want to think of something completely originial you know? but i doubt that is rlly possible. i dont know, maybe my inspiration hasnt hit me quite yet, lol


I have ideas for animes simply by letting my mind wander. I almost never actively set out to make up an anime, but once I have my idea, I flesh it out until it is complete.

The first stage of this creation process involves building on the initial idea, some random thought which occured to me in my daydreaming. This initial idea is not neccesarily a premise! It could be an idea for a strange way for an anime to look, or for a beautiful setting for an anime. From the first thought, I build the rest of the story based on what I feel fits.

I'll give the stories of the origins of both of my stories on this group.

I no longer remember precisely what I was thinking when I first envisioned Urdumkeit, but I do remember that the setting came first, and that I created the plot and characters a few days later.

Chthonia was different from all of my other animes, in that I actually set out to create something. You see, I play this sort-of LARPing thing with two of my friends. I have invested a number of really cool characters and ideas in these LARPs, but the LARP's plotline is far too convoluted to make into a story. The solution? I transplanted many of my characters and ideas into a new anime, and then invented a plot and setting that would fit. Most of the characters in the school are not from the LARP though. As the series progresses, more of them will show up (although you won't be able to tell which characters are originally from Chthonia, and which are transplanted.)

I hope that this long monologue has somehow helped you.


Yay! 8th Sin has joined in! I was wondering when you'd get here and start telling us your ideas on all of this stuff.
Yeah I'm kind of the same but a slight bit different. Most of my ideas for stuff like this are from daydreaming, but I tend to be more towards getting ideas that flake off of other things.
For example my "Lady in the Wall" Story was inspired by two other Ainime Shows which are "Chaos; Head" and a new show that I tried to watch called "Akikan!". It's the same thing as "Bomb it Down", I got that idea from "Fallout 3" and "Line Barrels of Iron". I just seem to work better with combined ideas and curiosity of taking one thing and pushing it down a different path. That's just me though.
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again thanks for the confidence. what do you think of this idea? not rlly too sure about the time period, or the weaponry to be honest, but that is aside from the point for the plot. So there is a war going on, and the enemy decides to break the rules and bring in biological war fare. But they never thought to test it on children when they tested it. But it pretty much turned all the adults into veggies because it messed with their neurology. however, it effected the kids by making them stronger, faster, increased vision and hearing, and made a bigger threat to themselves. So then a kid, (no name for now, i am terrible, absolutely terrible with names) decides to take up the mantle of leader for their small town. And when the enemy comes in to exterminate the villages they thought helpless, the kids retaliate and blah blah.... i think u get jest, what do you think? i thought it was originial, but i dont know, the idea might have been used before


Hey you know that's a real good start. (Don't worry about names, I suck at them too, I mean come on, my Main character is named Nick.) See that can be a lot of fun to play around with. Like besides the idea of your basic outline and plot, you get to play with a lot of fun stuff using that. For instance that plays with, well The city is run by kids only, so is there order amongst the kids or maybe there are lots of kids with super powers having fun and causing havoc throughout the town. That can be really fun. Another thing that you get to play with, that is one of my personal favorites, is the science. You can come up with the chemical composition of this disease, you can explain how it's effect manifests in children and how it creates ability's in which the kids may adapt to.
So that sounds like a really fun idea you got there. Play around with it a bit and when you think you really got something, start writing it, cause it sounds like you got a fun idea there. lol I hope to see it as a new Story on this group soon.


Im glad you like it. Now that your brought that up, i was thinking maybe a small village that no1 really knows about is struck first. and that after they establish a food source and a defense, they go out to see if there are other survivors. So they go to a city, (they is the main character, and his small gang of 5 kids) and they find that it is all chaotic. With the parents gone, kids have gone crazy, gangs have been created all over the city. graphiti and vandalism marks all the walls. So his group is going to have to try to bring them together and unite them to fight the war... i dont know... something like that, and i am glad you like my idea


Yeah just like I said, that is off to a really good start. Just keep branching off ideas for that and you'll have a great story in no time. I already like where it's going.
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again thanks for the confidence. what do you think of this idea? not rlly too sure about the time period, or the weaponry to be honest, but that is aside from the point for the plot. So there is a war going on, and the enemy decides to break the rules and bring in biological war fare. But they never thought to test it on children when they tested it. But it pretty much turned all the adults into veggies because it messed with their neurology. however, it effected the kids by making them stronger, faster, increased vision and hearing, and made a bigger threat to themselves. So then a kid, (no name for now, i am terrible, absolutely terrible with names) decides to take up the mantle of leader for their small town. And when the enemy comes in to exterminate the villages they thought helpless, the kids retaliate and blah blah.... i think u get jest, what do you think? i thought it was originial, but i dont know, the idea might have been used before


Hey you know that's a real good start. (Don't worry about names, I suck at them too, I mean come on, my Main character is named Nick.) See that can be a lot of fun to play around with. Like besides the idea of your basic outline and plot, you get to play with a lot of fun stuff using that. For instance that plays with, well The city is run by kids only, so is there order amongst the kids or maybe there are lots of kids with super powers having fun and causing havoc throughout the town. That can be really fun. Another thing that you get to play with, that is one of my personal favorites, is the science. You can come up with the chemical composition of this disease, you can explain how it's effect manifests in children and how it creates ability's in which the kids may adapt to.
So that sounds like a really fun idea you got there. Play around with it a bit and when you think you really got something, start writing it, cause it sounds like you got a fun idea there. lol I hope to see it as a new Story on this group soon.


Im glad you like it. Now that your brought that up, i was thinking maybe a small village that no1 really knows about is struck first. and that after they establish a food source and a defense, they go out to see if there are other survivors. So they go to a city, (they is the main character, and his small gang of 5 kids) and they find that it is all chaotic. With the parents gone, kids have gone crazy, gangs have been created all over the city. graphiti and vandalism marks all the walls. So his group is going to have to try to bring them together and unite them to fight the war... i dont know... something like that, and i am glad you like my idea


Yeah just like I said, that is off to a really good start. Just keep branching off ideas for that and you'll have a great story in no time. I already like where it's going.


thanks a lot, i appreciate it
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thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?
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thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?


umm... i edited my 1st response, but my episodes are way way shorter than yours, so you may not have room, but u should. thats what i did anyways, to keep it closer together. and if it comes to the point where u cant put any more into a spot. i can edit some1 elses response and copy paste your next episode into there, or another moderator can do that
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thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?


umm... i edited my 1st response, but my episodes are way way shorter than yours, so you may not have room, but u should. thats what i did anyways, to keep it closer together. and if it comes to the point where u cant put any more into a spot. i can edit some1 elses response and copy paste your next episode into there, or another moderator can do that


Well I just keep using the spoiler trick to make my episodes compact. Do these responses actually have a letter limit? Cause if so that kind of sucks. I guess I can just keep editing my Main Topic sort of how I did with part two of episode 1. Would that work or is that too much trouble?
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thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?


umm... i edited my 1st response, but my episodes are way way shorter than yours, so you may not have room, but u should. thats what i did anyways, to keep it closer together. and if it comes to the point where u cant put any more into a spot. i can edit some1 elses response and copy paste your next episode into there, or another moderator can do that


Well I just keep using the spoiler trick to make my episodes compact. Do these responses actually have a letter limit? Cause if so that kind of sucks. I guess I can just keep editing my Main Topic sort of how I did with part two of episode 1. Would that work or is that too much trouble?


i dont think they do.

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Ichigo-bankai wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


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thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?


umm... i edited my 1st response, but my episodes are way way shorter than yours, so you may not have room, but u should. thats what i did anyways, to keep it closer together. and if it comes to the point where u cant put any more into a spot. i can edit some1 elses response and copy paste your next episode into there, or another moderator can do that


Well I just keep using the spoiler trick to make my episodes compact. Do these responses actually have a letter limit? Cause if so that kind of sucks. I guess I can just keep editing my Main Topic sort of how I did with part two of episode 1. Would that work or is that too much trouble?


They actually do have a letter limit. Want to know how I found out? Because I couldn't fit more than 2 episodes in a post. That's why I make each one in a new post.
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Rezzy64 wrote:


Ichigo-bankai wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


Ichigo-bankai wrote:

thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?


umm... i edited my 1st response, but my episodes are way way shorter than yours, so you may not have room, but u should. thats what i did anyways, to keep it closer together. and if it comes to the point where u cant put any more into a spot. i can edit some1 elses response and copy paste your next episode into there, or another moderator can do that


Well I just keep using the spoiler trick to make my episodes compact. Do these responses actually have a letter limit? Cause if so that kind of sucks. I guess I can just keep editing my Main Topic sort of how I did with part two of episode 1. Would that work or is that too much trouble?


They actually do have a letter limit. Want to know how I found out? Because I couldn't fit more than 2 episodes in a post. That's why I make each one in a new post.


Oh okay, So I should just have new episodes posted as responses in my topic then?
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The_8th_Sin wrote:


Rezzy64 wrote:


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Rezzy64 wrote:


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thanks a lot, i appreciate it


lol No problem, I find it fun helping out people with story writing and stuff. Oh hey I got your letter asking me about the genre of my Anime, I responded to it a few minutes ago.
Also another thing. If I want to post the second episode of my show, do I post it as a response on my already made forum topic?


umm... i edited my 1st response, but my episodes are way way shorter than yours, so you may not have room, but u should. thats what i did anyways, to keep it closer together. and if it comes to the point where u cant put any more into a spot. i can edit some1 elses response and copy paste your next episode into there, or another moderator can do that


Well I just keep using the spoiler trick to make my episodes compact. Do these responses actually have a letter limit? Cause if so that kind of sucks. I guess I can just keep editing my Main Topic sort of how I did with part two of episode 1. Would that work or is that too much trouble?


They actually do have a letter limit. Want to know how I found out? Because I couldn't fit more than 2 episodes in a post. That's why I make each one in a new post.


Oh okay, So I should just have new episodes posted as responses in my topic then?


You could add the episodes onto one post until they don't fit anymore, and then start a new post.
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You could add the episodes onto one post until they don't fit anymore, and then start a new post.


Huh... Well I guess I could try to fit episode two on the main topic... but we'll see what happens when I have to get around to it.

Also I wanted to ask, I really like you're Chthonia story. Are you going to continue that? Cause I'm still looking forward to the next episode.
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You could add the episodes onto one post until they don't fit anymore, and then start a new post.


Huh... Well I guess I could try to fit episode two on the main topic... but we'll see what happens when I have to get around to it.

Also I wanted to ask, I really like you're Chthonia story. Are you going to continue that? Cause I'm still looking forward to the next episode.


It's in the works, but I've been quite busy. I have just gotten to the action part, and since the details in action scenes are made up on the fly, I have no idea how long the scene will last.
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The_8th_Sin wrote:

You could add the episodes onto one post until they don't fit anymore, and then start a new post.


Huh... Well I guess I could try to fit episode two on the main topic... but we'll see what happens when I have to get around to it.

Also I wanted to ask, I really like you're Chthonia story. Are you going to continue that? Cause I'm still looking forward to the next episode.


It's in the works, but I've been quite busy. I have just gotten to the action part, and since the details in action scenes are made up on the fly, I have no idea how long the scene will last.


Yeah I get what you mean, action scenes are a bit troublesome.
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