can u make up something lyke a poem, song, story etc........
Posted 12/29/08
well i just wanted to see wat u dudes and dudetts out there can create
so yeah tat is all i wanted to find out ^^
thx if u replied to this topic

well here is mine:

would u care if i died? would u be at my side praying 4 meh 2 come back?
or would u just be standing there w/ no remorse, sorrow, or even pain? u wont huh....becuz
u never knew tat i loved u......so......of.......course u wont
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Posted 12/29/08 , edited 12/29/08
....What?

Oh I get it!


Generic emo girl, who butcher the English language and makes a generic poem.
Posted 12/29/08

AHTL wrote:

....What?

Oh I get it!


Generic emo girl, who butcher the English language and makes a generic poem.


Aw, why it got to be like that? But I have to admit, that was kinda funny.
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Posted 12/29/08
if i sed i loved u ....wat wud u say? if i sed i needed u ....hw wud u react ? if i sed hold me.... wat wud u do? if i gave u my all....wud u take it?
of course you won't u wud say i don't know wat love is, am too desperate... am too fast...am too cheap
but wat does it take for u to accept me?

(sounds so depressing)
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Posted 12/29/08
I can but it only depends on my mood
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Posted 12/29/08

Gaia93 wrote:


AHTL wrote:

....What?

Oh I get it!


Generic emo girl, who butcher the English language and makes a generic poem.


Aw, why it got to be like that? But I have to admit, that was kinda funny.


I'm just saying what I see.

A quick look at what her "location" and status message says: Butcher of the language English and emo.


Age? 13, the age when most girls and boys are overwhelmed by their hormones, and can easily feel depressed/happy.


And judging from the poem, she fell in love with some guy who didn't feel the same (Or she didn't dare to confess) and things didn't go too well.

Since she is overwhelmed by her hormones, she feels that life is pointless and all that hassle.

The only thing I can say about that is: Get a grip, enjoy life.

I mean, I've had my heart broken - but I don't go mopping around.
Bleh, post got longer than intended.
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Posted 12/29/08
haha, um no. I can't. I suck at writing poems and stories T.T
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Posted 12/29/08
SCREAMS

She walked alone that day,one night,
It was cold and memories then came to life
she felt herself shiver,that day, one night
She wanted to scream, but it didn't came out.


She was a sight and everyone said "Hi"
She faced them all and faked a smile
She cannot contain her feelings inside
She shaked in fear that he cannot be by her side.

She screamed his name from the crowd
He walked up to her as he said 'Hi"
Then she said, "hi, Hey, I'm not fine."
She hugged him close and then started to cry.


She looked up to him and he asked her "why?"
She held him close, so warm, so tight
She whispered these words to him that night,
I've loved you then, don't say goodbye.


i wrote this 2 years ago.
i do create songs and poems... its how i release
my feelings. :)
Posted 12/30/08
I'm sure there's a thread for people to post their own creative writing.
I will find it.
In the mean time please post any poems here.
http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumtopic-750/Poems.html

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