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so far so good
I love how ekara always bump into things : P
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so far so good
I love how ekara always bump into things : P


haha arigatou minna!!
clumsy kiddo neh~
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W0W.............
interesting... yeh
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part 2:

ekara-do u go to school here??

yabu-un! hai!! im new here! and u??

ekara-un hai!

yabu-ohh ^^wat class are you in?

ekara-im in class A junior you??

yabu-same!!^^hehe*smile*

hoshi-yabu?!

yabu-haruka hoshi?

yabu-omg!! its hoshi neh~

hoshi-un!!^^

yabu-*hug*

ekara-huh?!!*eyes open wide*

hoshi-ohh i've missed yah.. over the year!!

yabu-un!! me too! *speak in english with weird and bad accent*ohh..my... gosh..... you are much more~~ beautiful~~ than usual~~~

hoshi-*speak english with good clear accent*yes! how have you been?

yabu-watashi?

hoshi-un!

yabu i'm good u??

hoshi-*bout to speak demo ekara interupted*

ekara-umm yabu! i have to go to class now!!

yabu-wait! i want to introduce you two!!ekara this is hoshi.. hoshi this is my new friend ekara!!

ekara-hajimemashite!!

hoshi-un!!*smile*

ekara-ok i go no!!*walk fast, hit the door*

yabu-haha kawaii!

hoshi-ehh?

yabu-betsuni betsuni!!^^

hoshi-eh...

yabu- i gtg to class.. ok!!

hoshi-un!ok!! see yah after school...

yabu-oi.. im not waiting for you after school because i am going to a friends house..

hoshi-un!^^

yabu-*run to ekara* why do you walk so fast? neh~

ekara-Nande~~ *hit wall, knocked down a garbage can and hit a woman when running around the corner...

hikaru-hey!! yabu!! wats up!!! watcha doin?!!!

yuto-yah!!! wats up?!!!!i saw hoshi earlier... she is like so kawaii and kakoi!! demo why she dont like me?

hikaru-*laugh aloud* then theres no point of you saying that because she doesnt even like you!!

yuto-un!

-----flashback-----

yuto-aishiteru hoshi chan!!

hoshi-i only think of you as a firend!*walk away*

yuto-*crying*

-----flash back over-----

hikaru-i could still remember the day that you were crying and saying hoshi doesnt like me!!*imitating yuto*

yuto-stop it!!

hikaru-*still imitating yuto at school*

yuto-*walk away*hmmmph!!

hikaru-*laugh*wow!! and your still going for her?? wow?!!

yuto-what ever!! stop that hikaru!!


continue... part 2 again later k^^
hehe ja everyone!!!!!!!!



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hahaha like i said.. interesting!!
hahah
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awesome! I've never been in a fanfic xD
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lmao good job keep up the good work!
Aww the flashback of yuto getting rejected
AHA she bumped into something againnn lmao
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weee..~~ new fic for you sandy-chan~! hahaha
aw. its sooo cute and good ne,,^^
ganbatte nee~!
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Posted 12/31/08 , edited 12/31/08
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
yoki deshita!
i like it eventhough it's short!
waah..i met yabu!
my char. seems so vain at first in part 1 bwhahhaha
demo i'm much clumsy in here!..
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ahh its fun! and funny too! heheh
good fic i'll waiting for the next part nah
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I luved it^^ ur so great at it^^ im really impressed^^ lol She keeps bumping into things^^ kawaii ne? Yuto getting rejected lol^^ poor Yuto^^ anyways great fanfic^^
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Gomen!! i decided to start part three!!
i didnt want to continue 2 so i started 3 ^^

---part3---

yuto-i still remember that day when getting rejected by hoshi!

hikaru-it was soooo sad!! *laugh*

yuto-wat ever!!! you always say that!!!hmmmmph

yabu-its ok that hoshi doesnt like you yuto!there is always more time you know!!*smile*

yuto-well i'm not sure if she might even say yes to me next time!!

yabu-fight-ohh yuto!!you can get her to be with you!!go get her!!

yuto-haii!fight-ohhh!! arigatou yabu kun!!*run out*

yabu-you can get her!!!!*yell* FIGHT-OOOOOOOOOOOhhh!!!

yuto-hai!!!!arigatou!!!!!!!!*run to hoshi's place*

---15 minutes after at hoshis house---

yuto-*out of breathe*hoshi!!!!! aishiterru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hoshi-what is that guy doin here??!*run outside to see yuto*

yuto-hoshi! i know that you don't like me! demo... demo....demo...forget it!!*walk away*

hoshi-*thinking*wait yuto!!

yuto-nande?!*sad*

hoshi-i dunno why im saying this demo if you want to go out sumtimes im free this whole week!

yuto-honto ni~*very happy*

hoshi-un! hai~

yuto-demo where do we go for the date?!

hoshi-NANI?!! did you just say a date?!

yuto-hai!! you asked me on a date didnt you hoshi?!

---hikaru abd yabu---

yabu- i wander whats going on with yuto?!is it going good or bad!!

hikaru-i'm only afraid that he might come home CRYING!!*imitate yuto when got rejected then laugh*

yabu-i admit it! that is funny!! but i wish that hoshi will be a little nicer and go out withyuto!

---back to yuto---

hoshi-forget it!! if you think we're going on a date then forget it!!

yuto-wait!!wait!! im just kidding!!c'mon!!!

hoshi-see yah there thursday 2:30 pm!!

yuto-hai!!!

to be continue part 4!! gomen or making these parts so short! its becuz my partner isnt replying back so i dont wanna rite to much stuff and not be able to explain to her wat happened lately!demo wen she gets in touche with me i will make the parts longer!!














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Awesomness part 3^^ i luved it^^
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part 4

---hsj's place---

yuto-wahhhhh wat do i wear today??!!

chii-where you going yuto?

yuto-i have a date with hoshi!

chii-date?!!!

yuto-hai!!nande?!

chii-betsuni!!waahhhhahahaha good news people!!YUTO KUN HAS A DATE WITH HOSHI!!!!!!!!!

yabu-wahhhh she really said yes!!KAKOI!!!

hikaru-ehhhh?!!demo she supposed to say iie!!!

yamada-wahhh wat some news!!*pretend its shocking*

inoo-*walk to yuto, pat his back* wahh yuto kun! you did it!!

yuto-hai!!*smile*

---ekara and the twins---

ekara talking in her mind-hmmmmph that retard has a girlfriend demo he talking to me!!

yachii and yume-EKARA!!!

yume-wats wrong with you lately?!!!

ekara-hmmmph ... im so mad!! the baka was talking to me when he has a girlfriend*mad face*

yachii-NANI?!!!

yume-SHE'S HAVING A CRUSH ON THAT NEW GUY AT SCHOOL!!*LAUGH*

ekara-DO NOT!!

yume-DO SO!!

ekara-then prove it!!!

yume- ohh i will!!*laugh like muahahahahahah*

ekara-WHAT ARE YOU THINKING NOW!!!*mad face*

yume-im going to prove you like yabu!!

ekara-okok!! don't i admit it!! i like him!!

yuma-honto ni~ i was just kidding!!

---next day---

while ekara yachii and yume were walking to school yabu, keito and yamada was behind them too!

yume-*took ekara's book*ha ha!! i got your book!! you can't get it !!*laugh run around

yachii-hey!watch it!! my hair!!and the nails!!gosh!!

yume-stop wanting to be pretty!!!gosh!!theres no point you look exactly like me!!

ekara- YUME!!! GIVE ME BACK THE BOOK!!!

yume-*run then bump into keito then fall* ahhh my knee!!*knee bleed* ahhh

ekara and yachii-*run over there* are you ok yume?!!

keito-GOMENASAI!! are you ok??

yume-un! hai! nande?!

keito-*gets closer to her* iie!! ur bleeding!! let me see!!

yume-can u move a little over more?

keito-shhh let me see...

yume-can u plz move a lttle over!?

keito-*ignore*

yume-MOVE OVER!!!!goshhh how many times do i have to say it!

keito-un!! whats wrong with you?!

yume-whats wrong with you?!!i told you to move and you didnt!!

keito-GOMEN!!

keito and yume-*both grabs book* *keito hands got on top of yume*
*yume took her hand away then there face was really close about to kiss*


TO BE CONTINUE PART 5...
heh doesnt it just keeps keeting better and better??
-will keito and yume fall in love?
-will yachii meet yamada?
-does ekara really love yabu?
-is she going to confess to yabu about her love?
-what will happen at yutos "date" with hoshi?
-will it be good or bad??
-will they continue dating?
well read and find out!!!!!!!!^^





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I like it its really interesting
I really like Yume part
Keep going
Ganbate :D
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