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---Part 5---

yuto-*cellphone ring*konnichiwa! watatshi wa yuto desu ka!

hoshi-BAKA!!! Hayakushite kudasai!!!(hurry up)

yuto-ikimasu...ikimasu...(im coming)

hoshi-BAKA!! ittekimasu!!(im leaving)

yuto-IIE!!! dont't leave!!!

hoshi-NANDE?!!

yuto-koko ni imasu(im here)look across the street!!

hoshi-*hang up* *smile* baka!

yuto-*wave* ohayou!!!

hoshi-baka!! its not morning!!! its afternoon*giggle*

yuto-yay!!!!i made you laugh!!*smile*

hoshi-un! hai!

---keito & yume---

yume-ummm..umm.. *turns face*

keito-*blink three times* was...was..was i about to....

yabu and ekara-THAT WAS A CLOSE ONE!!

yachii & yamada-hai!!

yume-*stand up fastly*no..nothinh happened!! it was an accident!!

ekara-IIE!! you lier!! we saw everything...*make eye brows go up*

daiki, hikaru, yuya walked by and saw them... they stopped and joined the conversation....

hikaru-sooo..wat happened??

daiki-un hai!! we heard you guys yelling so we came over here...

yabu-keito..keito..keito almost kissed!!*shocked*

hikaru,daiki, and yuya-ehhh?*shocked*

keito-it wasnt a kiss!! it was an accident!!

yume-hai!!

yuya-who did he almost kiss yamachan?

yamada-keito...keito...keito almost kissed yume!!

hikaru-yume??*shake head*never heard of her before!

yume-i'm rite here baka!!

hikaru-*turn around*i new that...ur quite pretty!!*go around her*

yume-*look at hikaru*what are you doing?!!

hikaru-nothing suspicious..

---yuto and hoshi---

yuto-why are we at the amusement park?!

hoshi-i like it here..nande? you don't like the amusement park?

yuto-IIE!! i like quiet places*smile*

---to be continue part 6!!!---








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hahhah wow!! funny !!
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OMG i luv it^^ its so funni^^
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kyaaa! i'm loving it!!!...
next pls!
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part 7

---yuto and hoshi---

hoshi- isnt it just fun?

yuto-wat do you mean? its has been about 5 hours that we sat here and watch everony else have fun...

hoshi- thats why its fun dude..

yuto- i dont get it hoshi! hows it so fun when your watching other people have fun??

hoshi-i dont know......*tears*

yuto-umm.. uhh... hoshi... ar... are you ..o..ok? did i say...... something wrong??

hoshi-*crying*.... *wipe tears* iie! im ok...

yuto-did something happen??

hoshi-you dont need to know! im going home!*run off*

yuto-*chase* hey!! way!!!!!!!!!


---yabu and ekara---

yabu-hi ekara....

ekara-*walk pass him without saying hi back*

yabu-anou! did i do something wrong??

ekara-i dont want to talk to you anymore!

yabu-did i do something wrong? i dont remember saying something bad to you...

ekara-your a liar!!!!!!

yabu-how!

*both argue*

yabu-how am i a liar??

ekara- you have a girlfriend and your talking to me?how rude!

yabu-how do i have a girlfriend?? whos my grilfriend? can you tell me who my girlfriend is?

ekara-im talking about hoshi!*look away*

yabu-she... she.. *laugh aloud* she isnt my girlfriend...

ekara-then who is she?!!!*cry*

yabu-a friend

ekara-you lier! i dont believe you!!

yabu-why? why are you crying? is it because....

ekara-because i like you!!!*cry*

yabu-*shocked* uhh..uh... nani...

ekara-aishiterru!!!!! *about to run*

yabu-*grab hand then hug*

ekara-*shocked*

yabu-is...is...is it.. is it ture??

ekara-h...ha...hai!

yabu-*kiss ekara* thenn... then... will you go out with me??

ekara-*stop crying*... *wipe tears* umm ill think about it...*about to run*... *hit pole*

yabu-*help her* are you ok?

ekara-iie! i feel dizzy...*head swirl around*

yabu-*kissed her forehead* ok now?

ekara-*shocked*...*smile* hai!*nose bleed*


---keito and yume---

yume-hey you!!!!

keito-I have a name!!

yume-watever baka!!!

keito wat did i do to you that you are so mad huh??

yume-you stole me first kiss!!!!!im going to kill you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keito-no i didnt!! it was an accident!!!

daiki-hey keito! wats going on here??

keito-i dont know either.. she just came and said thats shes going to kill me...

daiki-i will work this out!!*walk over to yume*

yume-*stare at him*

daiki-hey pretty girl...

yume-*shake head* the names yume!!

daiki-you free sometime this week?

yume- na..nan..nande??!

keito-Daiki! wat are you doing??!!!

daiki-shush!!! want to go out sometimes??

yume-you.. you.. you mean it??



daiki-*nod* hai!

yume-sure! why not?

daiki-ok! time day?

yume-ummm... NOW!!!*grab daikis hand and run to his limozine*

daiki-ehhhhhh... where are we going??

yume-*talk to driver* plz take us to a romantic place like a romantic restaurant...

driver-yes mam...

While in the car... Yume didnt realize that her friend ekara and yabu was in the car too..

keito-no fair!!!leave me here!!!!!!you people!! im going to kill you once i see you again!! come back for me!!!!!!


To be continued part 7 neh~ after reading plz comment!!!!

-will both couple go on a double date?
-will keito meet his true love in the next chappie?
-will the couples get along well or no?

well! FIND OUT ON THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!










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kyaaaa!!! that was soo fast!!!...
yami chan! demo i love it!..kyaa!
*turns hyper-ish*...waaah!!

poor keito..being left behind..xDD
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---part 8---

---couples in the car---


ekara-huh?? what are you doing here yume?

yume- *hit daiki* ...*whisper* why didnt you tell me they were in here??!!

daiki-well... you ran and didnt listen so.. yah..

yabu-ohh i know!! lets go on a double date neh~

yume-ehhhhhh....??!!

yabu-yah... lets go on a double date neh~

daiki-sure! why not?

yume-iie!!!!! i dont want to!!

ekara-sounds like a good idea demo i dunno...

yabu-ehh... nande??daiki kun! tell your date to go on a double date!!

yume-whos his date huh?!!

daiki-demo you said you would go out with me...

yume-hai! demo i didnt say i wanted to go on a double date with them!!

ekara-umm then i will join you guyz neh~

yabu-hai! how come? you think we are annoying.. after all ekara is ur friend neh~

yume-hai!.... demo..

ekara- plz!

yume-demo... i want to be alone... with that guy... and i dont even know his name....

ekara-KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA he's you date and you dont know his name..*shocked*


---yachii and yamada---

yachii-where did my imouto go... why did she leave me with you???i dont even know you!!

yamada- you think i know you?!

yachii-like i know you too?? gosh! why did that imouto leave me with a mean baka like you!!

yamada-whos the baka huh??

yachii-you! you're the baka!!!!!!

yamada-then go home if you hate me so much!!

yachii-wat do you mean??this is my home...

yamada-ohh yeah... haha...then im going home!1*pretend to leave*

yachii-good!

yamda-your not going to stop me??

yachii-why should i??

yamada-because i dont want to go home....

yachii-then stay! i dont care! just dont talk to me!!

yamada-yay!! then i stay!!

yachii-*smile then laugh* BAKA!!



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Notice for EVERYONE who reades this fic:

PLZ!!! PLZ!! PLZ! help me contact babyoraange1993 if you know her...plz tell her to do the next chappie neh~
arigatou^^
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yay finally you updated...but it was like 2 months ago!..

anyway, i hope yachii and yamachan get to get along more
on the nxt part!!!
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kyaaaaaa !!!!!!
I'm loving this fic
sandy-chan <-- [et-to, can I call you that?]
ooohhh ..
I lurvee the Yamda and Yachii pair
sooo kawaii :">
more please !!

- kyaa !! and if you're interested please read my fic . It's title is Bench-chan.
Yoroshiku *bows*
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kyaaaaaa !!!!!!
I'm loving this fic
sandy-chan <-- [et-to, can I call you that?]
ooohhh ..
I lurvee the Yamda and Yachii pair
sooo kawaii :">
more please !!

- kyaa !! and if you're interested please read my fic . It's title is Bench-chan.
Yoroshiku *bows*


hai you can call me that^^

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gomen minna san! for taking soo long to update this.. demo i was waiting for my partner to upload neh~~

i guess she didnt sooo i will xD


---part 9---

---yamada and yachii---


yama-*look around* *stomach growls*
yachii-hey! sit down would you!
yama-im hungry! can you cook for me??plzzz!!*whine*
yachii-iie!
yama-plzz!!
yachii-fine!*goes to the kitchen*
yama-may i ask... are you meaner than yuu...yu... yu..yu??
yachii-yume! we both are very close but have very differrent behaviors!
yama-how?
yachii-she only listened to our mother but ever since my mom passed away... she changed!
she hated my dad...
yama-nande?
yahii-because.. he always threatened her....i tried to stop him but... he.. he.. he wouldnt!
he said if she wouldnt listen to him he would sell her away!!so we sneaked out..
yama-ahhh~~ gomen for asking soo much!
yachii-its ok....
yama-i dont knoe why... demo.. i feel really close to you...
yachii-*shocked* nani??!!!!
yama-uhghhhh..ughgh....iie!!!


---the daiki,yume,yabu, and ekara---


yume-fine! i'll go on a double! demo!! i get to choose the place!!
yabu-go for it*wink*
yume-umm! i knoe!! lets go to that one scary amusement park neh~~
ekara-ehhh?~~~ scary??!! nani? wat kind of rides are there??
yume-you'll knoe once we get there!! nehh~~

*arrived at the park*


---keito---

keito- ehh?! !! wat am i doing here when i'm not even a loner!!*thinking*somehow... that kiss felt very weird...demo.. demo... demo?? demo nani??!!
hika-*bumped*oh! gomen!!
keito-ehhhh??!!!! wahhhh~~ kirrei!!!ah! anou.. its ok neh~~i'm okamoto keito!
hika-i'm sakuna hika! doozo yoroshiku!
keito-hai! yoroshiku! would you mind to be my friend??
hika-*giggles* of course we can be friends*smiles*
keito-even though we just met.. would you go out wiht me??
hika-*laughs out loud* *covers mouth* oops! umm gomen!
keito-*giggles* its ok
hika-ok*smiles* i would love to go out sometimes neh~~
keito-*laughs* ahhh~~ thanx!!!!!!!!!!


---yama. and yachii---


yachii-done!!!!
yama-ahhh!! smells good!!*tries* mmm!! omami!!
yachii-ehhh~~ dont lie!!
yama-im not!!
yachii-ahhh~~
yama- i want to ask you if you would help me tomorrow... my mom said that i have to find someone or i will have to marry a lady..
yachii-ahhh.. np^6 i will help neh~~


----to be continued part 10 neh~~~----

-will yamada have to marry the lady or will it turn out rite??
-will yume,daiki,ekara, and yabu have problems with there double-date?
-what will go on with keito- and hika??



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sorry that its short neh~~~
demo at leats i uploaded neh~~ hehe xD
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SUGOI!!! Aww, I wish I could've been with Chinen.... lol But, Rikku is my buddy so it's ok!
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waaah..
now i wonder who's that lady?..uwa!>_<
keito and hika's date seems to be interesting...
can't wait for the next part...

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