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Posted 1/4/09
i think i will want to post a story about me aka Duchess Marianne or Lenneth the Valiant......... since inspirations are coming in right now
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Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal to her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."
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shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


Nice one but who is Sister of yours??
Posted 1/4/09

mayachanhehe wrote:


shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


Nice one but who is Sister of yours??


she will reveal herself is she wants. until then its a secret ^ ^

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shaksyss wrote:


mayachanhehe wrote:


shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


Nice one but who is Sister of yours??


she will reveal herself is she wants. until then its a secret ^ ^



ok ^^ will wait till she wants to. >.<
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shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


I find it good!! it will be good for a soap opera!! hehe!! jk!!!
I wish i could write something too
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shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


I find it good!! it will be good for a soap opera!! hehe!! jk!!!
I wish i could write something too


speaking of soap opera, you can actually write it too. just let your imaginations run wild!!!
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mayachanhehe wrote:


Mysterioza wrote:


shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


I find it good!! it will be good for a soap opera!! hehe!! jk!!!
I wish i could write something too


speaking of soap opera, you can actually write it too. just let your imaginations run wild!!!


Ermmm...i'm not very good at expressing myself in with writing! the only stories i ever wrote where in school and that was because i had to write the essays
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mayachanhehe wrote:


Mysterioza wrote:


shaksyss wrote:

Alone on the the white throne the King is sitting,
He betrayed his wife, now he is dying.
The Golden Knight stabbed himself as a punishment,
Because he let his feelings get over him for a moment.
He was reckless, longing and desired his Sister,
When he sworn to the Queen to be loyal with her.
Now the King is dying and regret what he has done,
His last thought: "Please, forgive me, my loved one."


I find it good!! it will be good for a soap opera!! hehe!! jk!!!
I wish i could write something too


speaking of soap opera, you can actually write it too. just let your imaginations run wild!!!


Ermmm...i'm not very good at expressing myself in with writing! the only stories i ever wrote where in school and that was because i had to write the essays


hmm....... how about reading more literature books?? i also started to read them to improve my essays, and also because most of them were in the 17th~18th century, the period where royalties and nobles exist.
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hmm....... how about reading more literature books?? i also started to read them to improve my essays, and also because most of them were in the 17th~18th century, the period where royalties and nobles exist.


I read a lot of books!! almost every 2 weeks i buy new ones! i love reading books (except school books) but i just can't write a story
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mayachanhehe wrote:

hmm....... how about reading more literature books?? i also started to read them to improve my essays, and also because most of them were in the 17th~18th century, the period where royalties and nobles exist.


I read a lot of books!! almost every 2 weeks i buy new ones! i love reading books (except school books) but i just can't write a story


oh...... may i ask u something else?? do u like anything that requires u to calculate or think about the formulas, or anything that is not??
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mayachanhehe wrote:


Mysterioza wrote:


mayachanhehe wrote:

hmm....... how about reading more literature books?? i also started to read them to improve my essays, and also because most of them were in the 17th~18th century, the period where royalties and nobles exist.


I read a lot of books!! almost every 2 weeks i buy new ones! i love reading books (except school books) but i just can't write a story


oh...... may i ask u something else?? do u like anything that requires u to calculate or think about the formulas, or anything that is not??


I'm not quite fond of these stuff i used to be!
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mayachanhehe wrote:


Mysterioza wrote:


mayachanhehe wrote:

hmm....... how about reading more literature books?? i also started to read them to improve my essays, and also because most of them were in the 17th~18th century, the period where royalties and nobles exist.


I read a lot of books!! almost every 2 weeks i buy new ones! i love reading books (except school books) but i just can't write a story


oh...... may i ask u something else?? do u like anything that requires u to calculate or think about the formulas, or anything that is not??


I'm not quite fond of these stuff i used to be!


then r u good in maths or anything that requires formulas??
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then r u good in maths or anything that requires formulas??


Not really! i'm very lazy to think these stuff

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mayachanhehe wrote:

then r u good in maths or anything that requires formulas??


Not really! i'm very lazy to think these stuff



if that's the case, r u good in drawing??
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