Gakuen Alice Fanic: Dark Sakura
Posted 1/3/09 , edited 3/11/09
This is my first fanic hope you like is am not so good in englisch so dont be so harch on me


> > Summary: Mikan Sakura a beautiful yet gluttonous 15-year-old girl. Might seem like an average girl to you, but she isn't. She moved from America to Japen, and is adapting to a new lifestyle. Mikan has a huge secret, only known by her mom/manager Yuka Sakura, her cute little brother Yōichi Sakura and her best friends Hotaru Imai . Mikan huge secret is she leads a double life, as the famous pop singer Dark Sakura . Along with her friend Hotaru, who also has a double life as the Ice Queen/new manager and she is Dark Sakura 's Best friend




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Posted 1/3/09
nice story pls update soon
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Posted 1/3/09
CUTE!!!!
Posted 3/11/09
uhm do you guys gott some ideas voor de concert and the outfit
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Posted 3/12/09

shugocharagirl wrote:

uhm do you guys gott some ideas voor de concert and the outfit


Should i help with editing? ... and you didn't say that you had a fanfic? At least... no, I didn't know. Lol.

But should I help you editing? ^^ I have now time XD

Hope that it is okay, with you!

~ Sam

BTW: I like it!!

Posted 3/12/09

Unknown_Love wrote:


shugocharagirl wrote:

uhm do you guys gott some ideas voor de concert and the outfit


Should i help with editing? ... and you didn't say that you had a fanfic? At least... no, I didn't know. Lol.

But should I help you editing? ^^ I have now time XD

Hope that it is okay, with you!

~ Sam

BTW: I like it!!




that would be so great and thnxx im sry that i dindt tell you uhm you can help me when its weekends
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Posted 3/13/09

shugocharagirl wrote:


Unknown_Love wrote:


shugocharagirl wrote:

uhm do you guys gott some ideas voor de concert and the outfit


Should i help with editing? ... and you didn't say that you had a fanfic? At least... no, I didn't know. Lol.

But should I help you editing? ^^ I have now time XD

Hope that it is okay, with you!

~ Sam

BTW: I like it!!




that would be so great and thnxx im sry that i dindt tell you uhm you can help me when its weekends


Haha, yeah, sure!

Anytime!!

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Posted 1/21/10
wwhats that?
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Posted 4/23/10
Hmm it might be better if you space out the paragraphs. I mean, the writing is small and it looks quite disorganized if you don't. No offense, of course.
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