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fransyung wrote:


i can't... think... of anything... T.T <-- not good at creating!



Don't worry! =D You're not working with a deadline ne? ^-^

And you're not the only one. T^T Everything that comes out of my mind is sorrow, angsty, and tragedy. >^<

Teacher: Lou, please make your stories more.... cheerful and less gory. ^-^;;

Teacher, it can't be helped! ; ___ ; It's my style! )x


~Lou-chan >w<
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Here4u wrote:


fransyung wrote:


i can't... think... of anything... T.T <-- not good at creating!



Don't worry! =D You're not working with a deadline ne? ^-^

And you're not the only one. T^T Everything that comes out of my mind is sorrow, angsty, and tragedy. >^<

Teacher: Lou, please make your stories more.... cheerful and less gory. ^-^;;

Teacher, it can't be helped! ; ___ ; It's my style! )x


~Lou-chan >w<


Haha Lou-chan, i'd like to see your stories!!

I agree that a yaoi pairing would be good in the game. I like games where you can choose your character.....rather than just one girl....so a choice with different bits depending on character choice would be good. But then thats likely to be very complicated to make. I prefer game styles like final fantasy, but i like most anyway....so any would be good.
I'm not very good at thinking up story ideas....i tend to end up using others ideas without realising i am....but if i think of any i'll let you know.
I'll definately support you and buy the game!!! I'll be your number one fan from England....sulking while you go to Japan =P
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let's not get ahead of ourselves! ^^;; it's scary!! ^^;; hehehehe...

i am thinking... as nicki-chan said... about the ability to choose our own character/hero... ^^
so we can choose who we want to be... in the game. plus, we can choose who to chase!
it can be a hero or a heroine... a guy or a girl... ^^ that's cool!
that will be complicated... there will be more routes/stories to create. ^^
but it will be an endless game! ^^ maybe... more than 1 game?
the first game, it can be a girl as heroine... the 2nd, it can be a guy as a hero...
they're from the same story, but they have different storylines!
from 2 different persons' perspectives! ^^

and i'm also thinking of making our main character... not perfect! >.>

i always hate to see a perfect character... everyone will definitely fall for her/him! >.<
our hero and heroine should NOT be perfect... in fact, they should be "broken"!
maybe has only one eye... or completely mute...

i read a book once about a girl who was mute. it's a very old novel...
she didn't know that she was a "girl" because since she was born, she was thrown away.
an old woman took her in, but never told her the difference between a man and a woman... >.<
because she was pretty, the old woman was afraid a guy might do something bad to her,
so she disguised the girl as a boy... since she could walk... >.>
she grew up thinking that she was a guy all along... >.<
until one day she finally met a real guy, and when she got wounded,
the guy tended her... and found out she was a GIRL! ^^;;
imagine her surprise when the guy told her!


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fransyung wrote:


let's not get ahead of ourselves! ^^;; it's scary!! ^^;; hehehehe...

i am thinking... as nicki-chan said... about the ability to choose our own character/hero... ^^
so we can choose who we want to be... in the game. plus, we can choose who to chase!
it can be a hero or a heroine... a guy or a girl... ^^ that's cool!
that will be complicated... there will be more routes/stories to create. ^^
but it will be an endless game! ^^ maybe... more than 1 game?
the first game, it can be a girl as heroine... the 2nd, it can be a guy as a hero...
they're from the same story, but they have different storylines!
from 2 different persons' perspectives! ^^

and i'm also thinking of making our main character... not perfect! >.>

i always hate to see a perfect character... everyone will definitely fall for her/him! >.<
our hero and heroine should NOT be perfect... in fact, they should be "broken"!
maybe has only one eye... or completely mute...

i read a book once about a girl who was mute. it's a very old novel...
she didn't know that she was a "girl" because since she was born, she was thrown away.
an old woman took her in, but never told her the difference between a man and a woman... >.<
because she was pretty, the old woman was afraid a guy might do something bad to her,
so she disguised the girl as a boy... since she could walk... >.>
she grew up thinking that she was a guy all along... >.<
until one day she finally met a real guy, and when she got wounded,
the guy tended her... and found out she was a GIRL! ^^;;
imagine her surprise when the guy told her!




I completely agree!! We want a heroine thats not perfect as its totally unbelievable when the character is too perfect. I like characters that 'grow' in games. So at the start they aren't so great, the idea of being mute is good.....but in a way i think it would be a bit hard for gamers to 'connect' with a mute main character. But then thats just my view....what do others think?
I definitely think that the main shouldn't be perfect though =)
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I never have perfect characters. =P I always have a damaged character and then a partner or another allie to compensate for the flaws. XD

I think I might know the story you're talking about, Fransyung-sama! D: It sounds really familiar.

I don't my stories are good at all. =T Really, here's the first two paragraphs to chapter one of my story Oretachi no Mugen no Tsubasa:



It's not very good for a novel. I'm not good at writing stories at the most. >_< Though I can make on the spot stories. Just give me a few outlines of stuff you want and it plops right out of my head. XD This is just an introductory part, though. =P Gah! I need to put up the prologue and chapters one, two, and three up on my site...but I feel so lazy to do it. XD

Oh yeah, Layako-sama, my story has not been published or copyrighted. I've just been putting up some of my stuff on my site for viewing and free reading, if you would so call it. =P

~Ayu-pan

Posted 1/6/09
Oh~ Okay. =D

But Ayu-pan, don't say your writing and stories are crap! They're all usually so original and the complexity of the characters are so great and overwhelming! D= I wanted to be a writer just like you! >.< Waaaa!

You should make people pay to read your stuff, or at least put a password on them =p Make profit! xD

Oretachi is one of your...darker and sadder stories, isn't it? xD

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fransyung wrote:


let's not get ahead of ourselves! ^^;; it's scary!! ^^;; hehehehe...

i am thinking... as nicki-chan said... about the ability to choose our own character/hero... ^^
so we can choose who we want to be... in the game. plus, we can choose who to chase!
it can be a hero or a heroine... a guy or a girl... ^^ that's cool!
that will be complicated... there will be more routes/stories to create. ^^
but it will be an endless game! ^^ maybe... more than 1 game?
the first game, it can be a girl as heroine... the 2nd, it can be a guy as a hero...
they're from the same story, but they have different storylines!
from 2 different persons' perspectives! ^^

and i'm also thinking of making our main character... not perfect! >.>

i always hate to see a perfect character... everyone will definitely fall for her/him! >.<
our hero and heroine should NOT be perfect... in fact, they should be "broken"!
maybe has only one eye... or completely mute...

i read a book once about a girl who was mute. it's a very old novel...
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fransyung wrote:


let's not get ahead of ourselves! ^^;; it's scary!! ^^;; hehehehe...

i am thinking... as nicki-chan said... about the ability to choose our own character/hero... ^^
so we can choose who we want to be... in the game. plus, we can choose who to chase!
it can be a hero or a heroine... a guy or a girl... ^^ that's cool!
that will be complicated... there will be more routes/stories to create. ^^
but it will be an endless game! ^^ maybe... more than 1 game?
the first game, it can be a girl as heroine... the 2nd, it can be a guy as a hero...
they're from the same story, but they have different storylines!
from 2 different persons' perspectives! ^^

and i'm also thinking of making our main character... not perfect! >.>

i always hate to see a perfect character... everyone will definitely fall for her/him! >.<
our hero and heroine should NOT be perfect... in fact, they should be "broken"!
maybe has only one eye... or completely mute...

i read a book once about a girl who was mute. it's a very old novel...
she didn't know that she was a "girl" because since she was born, she was thrown away.
an old woman took her in, but never told her the difference between a man and a woman... >.<
because she was pretty, the old woman was afraid a guy might do something bad to her,
so she disguised the girl as a boy... since she could walk... >.>
she grew up thinking that she was a guy all along... >.<
until one day she finally met a real guy, and when she got wounded,
the guy tended her... and found out she was a GIRL! ^^;;
imagine her surprise when the guy told her!




B-but getting ahead of ourselves is fun! =D But the part where nothing comes true is a bummer.^-^ -used to it- Haha!


That story sounds so good! =O And I agree with the 'broken' thing! =)


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I never have perfect characters. =P I always have a damaged character and then a partner or another allie to compensate for the flaws. XD

I think I might know the story you're talking about, Fransyung-sama! D: It sounds really familiar.

I don't my stories are good at all. =T Really, here's the first two paragraphs to chapter one of my story Oretachi no Mugen no Tsubasa:



It's not very good for a novel. I'm not good at writing stories at the most. >_< Though I can make on the spot stories. Just give me a few outlines of stuff you want and it plops right out of my head. XD This is just an introductory part, though. =P Gah! I need to put up the prologue and chapters one, two, and three up on my site...but I feel so lazy to do it. XD

Oh yeah, Layako-sama, my story has not been published or copyrighted. I've just been putting up some of my stuff on my site for viewing and free reading, if you would so call it. =P

~Ayu-pan



Love your 'spoiler'! Totally my style. =D Hahaha.

-waves around dangerously sharp pencil. =P-


~Lou-chan >w<
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Ronin_Ayumi wrote:

I never have perfect characters. =P I always have a damaged character and then a partner or another allie to compensate for the flaws. XD

I think I might know the story you're talking about, Fransyung-sama! D: It sounds really familiar.

I don't my stories are good at all. =T Really, here's the first two paragraphs to chapter one of my story Oretachi no Mugen no Tsubasa:



It's not very good for a novel. I'm not good at writing stories at the most. >_< Though I can make on the spot stories. Just give me a few outlines of stuff you want and it plops right out of my head. XD This is just an introductory part, though. =P Gah! I need to put up the prologue and chapters one, two, and three up on my site...but I feel so lazy to do it. XD

Oh yeah, Layako-sama, my story has not been published or copyrighted. I've just been putting up some of my stuff on my site for viewing and free reading, if you would so call it. =P

~Ayu-pan



Love your 'spoiler'! Totally my style. =D Hahaha.

-waves around dangerously sharp pencil. =P-


~Lou-chan >w<


Haha, I love waving around dangerously sharp pencils! XD -is in fact waving her dangerously shapr pencil-

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Ronin_Ayumi wrote:

I never have perfect characters. =P I always have a damaged character and then a partner or another allie to compensate for the flaws. XD

I think I might know the story you're talking about, Fransyung-sama! D: It sounds really familiar.

I don't my stories are good at all. =T Really, here's the first two paragraphs to chapter one of my story Oretachi no Mugen no Tsubasa:

It's not very good for a novel. I'm not good at writing stories at the most. >_< Though I can make on the spot stories. Just give me a few outlines of stuff you want and it plops right out of my head. XD This is just an introductory part, though. =P Gah! I need to put up the prologue and chapters one, two, and three up on my site...but I feel so lazy to do it. XD

Oh yeah, Layako-sama, my story has not been published or copyrighted. I've just been putting up some of my stuff on my site for viewing and free reading, if you would so call it. =P

~Ayu-pan



ayu-pan! i like it!!! Y.Y can i read it??? all book 1? *waving another sharp pencil around* i'm in for tragedy and death and blood too!
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Eh?! Honto?! You guys really like it? O_O
T^T Arigatou. Someone said it sounded childish and below skill level for a 14/15 year old, so I was worried. =P

I still have to type up all of the chapters and everything for Oretachi, and it's still progressing too. I'm putting it up on my site. ^_^
Oh yeah, I forgot to ask when you asked to send you the story outlines and characters and blah. Did you also want the game version layouts too? Layako wanted to turn Oretachi into a game so we made the various plots and everything for the game version too. If you did/do, I can merge them together so you don't have to look over hundreds of pages for everything. I'm very...organized with my files, but unorganized in terms of going in order when working on a story. XD

~Ayu-pan
Posted 1/6/09 , edited 1/6/09

fransyung wrote:


Ronin_Ayumi wrote:

I never have perfect characters. =P I always have a damaged character and then a partner or another allie to compensate for the flaws. XD

I think I might know the story you're talking about, Fransyung-sama! D: It sounds really familiar.

I don't my stories are good at all. =T Really, here's the first two paragraphs to chapter one of my story Oretachi no Mugen no Tsubasa:

It's not very good for a novel. I'm not good at writing stories at the most. >_< Though I can make on the spot stories. Just give me a few outlines of stuff you want and it plops right out of my head. XD This is just an introductory part, though. =P Gah! I need to put up the prologue and chapters one, two, and three up on my site...but I feel so lazy to do it. XD

Oh yeah, Layako-sama, my story has not been published or copyrighted. I've just been putting up some of my stuff on my site for viewing and free reading, if you would so call it. =P

~Ayu-pan



ayu-pan! i like it!!! Y.Y can i read it??? all book 1? *waving another sharp pencil around* i'm in for tragedy and death and blood too!



Oh! A new fad? -waves sharp pencil around too- =D
See, isn't Ayu-pan's story good though?! Even if it just a paragraph or two?

Oretachi should become a game! It'd be a great otome game since we can chose which heroine we want to play! And they're not useless like Akane and Karin with their Cheer ability! >.< Oretachi characters actually have weapons! And make their contracts through kissing >=D So it'd be a perfect romance battle RPG with possibly funny awkward moments! ^.^

~Lay-chan
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Oh! A new fad? -waves sharp pencil around too- =D
See, isn't Ayu-pan's story good though?! Even if it just a paragraph or two?

Oretachi should become a game! It'd be a great otome game since we can chose which heroine we want to play! And they're not useless like Akane and Karin with their Cheer ability! >.< Oretachi characters actually have weapons! And make their contracts through kissing >=D So it'd be a perfect romance battle RPG with possibly funny awkward moments! ^.^

~Lay-chan


mwahahahaha... no kidding??? ^^;; yeah, i want both the book version and the game version. >.> then i will see if i can create the character designs. do you have any raw sketches for the clothes and stuffs? or do you want me to create those?
Posted 1/6/09

fransyung wrote:


Kunoichi_Layako wrote:

Oh! A new fad? -waves sharp pencil around too- =D
See, isn't Ayu-pan's story good though?! Even if it just a paragraph or two?

Oretachi should become a game! It'd be a great otome game since we can chose which heroine we want to play! And they're not useless like Akane and Karin with their Cheer ability! >.< Oretachi characters actually have weapons! And make their contracts through kissing >=D So it'd be a perfect romance battle RPG with possibly funny awkward moments! ^.^

~Lay-chan


mwahahahaha... no kidding??? ^^;; yeah, i want both the book version and the game version. >.> then i will see if i can create the character designs. do you have any raw sketches for the clothes and stuffs? or do you want me to create those?



Eh? Oh, are you asking me or Ayu-pan-chan? Because this is all Ayu-pna-chan's stuff! She makes all the characters and stories. I just help her with some ideas for the game and book scenarios. xD Ayu-pan has everything. =p

Oh yeah, Ayu-pan, if you do end up gettin big with Frans-chan chan, I'll hunt you down and make you cosplay as Yasutsugu this time, so be prepared~ And don't get caught if I go over there too! ^.^

~Lay-chan
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