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The 10th knock
By: deen22


Starring

Arioka Daiki,
Ishikari Deen [well anyone can imagine that you are my character hehehehe]
Chinen Yuuri



This story happened just these past months. It’s a magical story. And it started when two of my friends knocked at my door and said something surprisingly. Wanna know what are the knocks’ in my life? I’ll tell you my stories. This is crazy so read and understand the lines~ hekhek. Hope you read this.


The 1st knock


“Knock, knock.” I think I just heard someone knocking at my door. “yes? Who is this?” I asked him for not knowing who he is. “It’s me Deen, its Yuuri~ with Daiki of course” I wasn’t shocked of who they are. Well they’re my friends. They have special talents. Do you wanna know what? They can use magic, well when you put it in the real meaning of their talents they’re called Illusionists. They can do things that others cannot do. Just for example, they can make some things that are beyond our imagination. “Deen? Are you free this night?” Daiki asked me with a big smile on his face. “Sure! And you know I’m always free right?” I told him with curiosity at my eye. Because I was shocked that he asked me like that. He is always, “I’m busy, I’m at work” or some errands. “So where are we going?” I asked him. “it’s a surprise Deen!” Yuuri smiled.


The 2nd knock


Then the night that I’ve waited for long came. “Knock, knock.” The second knock of my life. “who is it?” well I know who is it but I just want to make sure. “Its us Deen!” Daiki answered. “Oh! Come in then” as soon as I responded I excitedly opened the door. “So are you ready to go with us?” Yuuri said. “Of course I am” well I’m so super excited! I wore my violet V-shaped neckline dress, my violet high heels, and some accessories. “You look good, I mean great! You’re beautiful today Deen” said Daiki with a smile. “Yes and your violet dress suits you~ you should’ve always wear that” Yuuri added. I was shocked hahaha I didn’t know that this dress of mine suits me! “Really!? Hahaha thanks both of you! So, where should we go?” I replied. “I told you it’s a surprise right?” said Yuuri. “So hop into our car!” Daiki said.


The 3rd knock


“Just give it a Knock Deen” said Daiki. “Knock, knock” I knocked at this mysterious door. We went to this place, the place where they perform they illusions. And so I knocked at the door and it suddenly opened by itself! I was surprised! “Whoa! What is this?” I asked them. “This is our place right?” Said Daiki. Of course I know this place. It’s their place so I really know this. And I said, “Yeah I know but it’s the first time I went to your dressing room! And It’s so… Magical!”. “We practice everyday here” Said Yuuri. “so this is the place of your reasoning’s that you’re both busy~” [raises eyebrow] I asked them. Daiki laughed and said, “Ahahahaha~ you maybe correct~”. Yuuri said, “You know, we can even call the dead persons here in our performance”. “Really?” I replied. Daiki joked, “Yes and do you want a sample?”. “Nooo!! Ehehehe..hehe~ it... it’s ok. Hehehe” I said with a sarcastic smile. “I think we should drive Deen home now. It’s getting late.” Yuuri told to Daiki. “Oh that’s right. Deen!” Daiki replied and called me. “Yes?” I asked. “I think we better go home now. It’s getting late” Daiki said to me. “Ok sure~” I replied. I just always follow him. I don’t know why but whenever I’m with him I feel so… secured. I feel safe when I’m with him. That’s why I love him. I don’t want him to leave me. It’s not because of “He’s the famous Illusionist” but it’s his self that I love.


The 4th knock

“Knock, Knock” I think I heard someone knocked at my door again. I mean it’s for the 4th time. “Who is it?” I asked the person at the door. “It’s… it’s me... Yuuri...” Yuuri said with a sad voice. “What’s wrong Yuuri? Why isn’t Daiki with you?” I asked him. He replied with a Frown “He… Can’t be with us anymore.” “Why? Why not? Is there any problem? Speak Yuuri!” I asked and asked him the same questions. And then finally he answered, “He… He’s gone Deen. Daiki is… gone.” I was really shocked when I saw him cried. And so, I cried to. Why is he gone? I kept asking my self. I wanted to collapse that time. I don’t know what to say or do. “Deen, get a hold of your self!” Yuuri yelled at me and shakes me. I was crying that time when I replied to him “But Why!!! And how! How did he die? All of a sudden? All of a sudden you’re telling me he’s gone! Why Yuuri! Why!” He was shocked of what I’ve said, but still he told me why “He… had a car accident yesterday.” “Then why aren’t you with him!?” I asked him. “I was on our show that time. I was waiting for him to come. We were just about to perform the “Live the Dead” portion of our show when I got a call from the hospital.” He replied.



The 5th knock


“Knock, Knock” someone knocked at my door while Yuuri and I were having a conversation. “Who is it?” grabbing the door knob. “We’re from the Police station. Are you Ms. Deen Ishikari?” ask by one of the Policemen. “Yes I am. How can I help you?” I asked them too. “I’m sorry to say but… we didn’t found Mr. Daiki Arioka’s body.” said one of the Policemen. I was shocked and can’t find words to say. Until one of the Policemen added “I know you were shocked Ms. Deen. And yeah, we were shocked too. No body was found on the place of the car incident. Only Mr. Daiki’s belongings and we also found a letter.” Yuuri and I looked at the letter. And it was Daiki’s handwriting. The letter says,


“To my Beloved Deen, and my best friend Yuuri,

As a great illusionist, I’ve already predicted that this kind of incident will happen. That’s why I already wrote this letter.
Deen, I want you to know that, even though how busy I was, even though I can’t find a lot of time just to be with you, I was still hoping that you would understand me. And as far as I know you… or maybe, I do know you a lot, and I know you’re the one who understand me the most. I’m sorry if I didn’t make it up to you. I wish I had time to show and tell my real feelings to you. I’m sorry if it’s just this letter that’s saying that I Love You. I hope you will still be happy even though I’m not here. I will always be by your side, even if you can’t see me.
Yuuri, Please take care of Deen. Please always make her happy. I know that you can do that, right? I’m leaving the rest up to you now Yuuri. You were and will be the Best of all my friends. Sorry for the sudden disappearance, but I should know that you can handle our show. Thanks for all Yuuri.

~Well… what do you know? Maybe we can meet again sometimes. Rather than the “live the dead” of our show.

From,
Daiki Arioka”


Tears ran down to my eyes as my knees weakened and made me bent down to the floor. My heart was so crushed. I didn’t know what or what else to do. I was trembling when Yuuri who was very sad about the incident, hugged and comforted me “Deen… I know that you can still do this. I’ll be by your side. I promised that to Daiki. That if ever, something happened to him; I will always stay by your side and take you in.” I still can’t help myself but to cry. Making myself believe in the truth that Daiki is already gone. “There’s also a box here that we saw in the scene” one of the Policemen said. “Where?” I asked him. The Policemen gave me a small brown, antique box which I found a necklace with a square sized, maybe 1X1 size Mirror as a pendant. “Wear this. And you will see what you wanted to see” was written at the back of the mirror. “We should be going now Ms. Deen” one of the Policemen said as he was preparing himself to go. I thanked them for coming to my house to give Daiki’s belongings. Yuuri and I were left in my house. “Are you alright now Deen?” Yuuri concernedly ask me. “a little… I still can’t believe on what happen” I told him. “We can do this together right Deen? Just like Daiki told me. I can’t let you alone. I’ll be on your side now.” From what Yuuri said, I had a feeling in those words. A deep meaning inside those words. But I just don’t know what was it or I can’t describe it.


The 6th Knock


“Knock, Knock” knocking at the house of Yuuri. “Yuuri? Are you there?” I said while knocking at his door. “Coming!” a familiar voice came shouting through inside the house. “Deen! What brought you here?” it was Yuuri. “I... I uh-“ I can’t make it up to a sentence. I don’t know why… My voice was trembling and shaking yet I didn’t knew why. “oh come on~ let’s go inside. Just tell it to me okay?” Yuuri said while grabbing my arm going inside the house. Yuuri let me sit on his comfy sofa, while making tea for the both of us. “So what’s up Deen?” Yuuri asked me, bringing the tea to the table. “Well… it’s been a month since Daiki was gone…” I replied. “Yeah… until now, I still can’t believe that I lost a Best friend” Yuuri sighed. “What about me? I lost the one I Love Yuuri… But, thanks for always being here for me” I sip a drink in my tea and asked Yuuri again “I still have a feeling about the last sentence he said.” “Really? What’s that Deen?” Yuuri replied by asking me too. “It’s as if he was saying that we will meet him again” I told him about the last sentences that Daiki said in the letter. Yuuri looked deeply in my eyes and said, “You really want to meet him again right Deen?” I was shocked from what Yuuri said. And yes, it’s true “Of course! Why wouldn’t I? I mean…” “I got you Deen. I know what you mean. Then I’ll make you see him.” Again, shocked from what Yuuri said “What? Are you crazy Yuuri? How could that be possible?” I said while laughing a bit. “Come to the place where we perform tomorrow at 3:00pm. And you’ll see what you must see…” Yuuri said seriously. “Okay then.” What was Yuuri thinking? Or is it really possible? Of course not! But… I’ll see for myself tomorrow.




To be continued...
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yosha!!
you finally posted it!!
kyaaaaa!!
can't wait for more knocks!!
keep it up deen!! ^^
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yosha!!
you finally posted it!!
kyaaaaa!!
can't wait for more knocks!!
keep it up deen!! ^^


hahah thanks!!
hehe ill try to update ASAP~
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hwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~!!!!..i'm the 2nd one who comment now!!!>..
wow~!!!!..daiki dead??...o_O..
anyway can't wait 4 the 6th knock~!!!....
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uwa~~~ cant wait for the 6th knock~!
ganbatte deen chan!! lol..^^
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aMi_bFf wrote:

hwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~!!!!..i'm the 2nd one who comment now!!!>..
wow~!!!!..daiki dead??...o_O..
anyway can't wait 4 the 6th knock~!!!....


hahaha lets wait for more~
thanks for reading!


chiiakii wrote:

uwa~~~ cant wait for the 6th knock~!
ganbatte deen chan!! lol..^^ :)


jhammy-tan!! [supposed to be jhammy-chan] hahahah!
thanks for reading!!
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deen22 wrote:


aMi_bFf wrote:

hwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~!!!!..i'm the 2nd one who comment now!!!>..
wow~!!!!..daiki dead??...o_O..
anyway can't wait 4 the 6th knock~!!!....


hahaha lets wait for more~
thanks for reading!


chiiakii wrote:

uwa~~~ cant wait for the 6th knock~!
ganbatte deen chan!! lol..^^ :)


jhammy-tan!! [supposed to be jhammy-chan] hahahah!
thanks for reading!!


hahaha... deen chan~ you said my whole name.. nyaa....
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hey it was nice ne (:
DEEN_CHAN!!!
GAMBATTE!!!
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hey it was nice ne (:
DEEN_CHAN!!!
GAMBATTE!!!


arigatou!!!
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awwww~ that was cute!
cant wait for teh rest X3
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omggg it's awesome!
so far so good. Can't wait for the next part
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waaah..gomene if i just put a comment on this ne~
at least i read it..
can't wait for 5 more knocks!
i wonder who will it be!
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mochicocoa wrote:

awwww~ that was cute!
cant wait for teh rest X3


hahah thanks!


azn23 wrote:

omggg it's awesome!
so far so good. Can't wait for the next part


arigatou!!~


Geh-san wrote:

waaah..gomene if i just put a comment on this ne~
at least i read it..
can't wait for 5 more knocks!
i wonder who will it be!


geh-chan!!!
hehehheeheh~
hope its good for you~ hehehe
arigatou 4 reading!
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