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wat if there is an anime like this?
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takato kasuya is born in japan but he grew up in america ..he is perfect cute/handsome face smart.blue eyes. he's good in every sport (he has a fan club in each sport) especially in basketball (he was a 3 time mvp)..
he's an idol/celebrity in school(every moring when he arrives..red carpet roll for him to step to.)..he is admired by everyone..many girls have confessed to him but he didnt reply even a single one...(he thinks they only like him because of his good looks not for his personality)...the school year ends. a.month before another school year begins..his father told him they will go back to japan because of some bussines for a year..so basically he will attend/spend the school year in japan..but for him its a chance.......he took advantage of it..changing his looks wearing a square geeky glasses.almost covering his face,combing his spiky hair down..wearing a thick hair extension..(it make his hair thick and kinda round)
not only that he decided that he will hide his natural tallent being good in everything.he will only become a smart nerd .pretending that his weak and clumsy (its hard to see with his glasses on so he end up in some ecchi situation..and gets beat up for it(for comedy)

finally its the 1st day of school...he insisted to walk to the school (in america he's rich ..he arrives in a limo) and when he step infront of the schoolgate...there nothing.even a single person welcoming/greeting him.no more red carpet

he said "whoa im a normal student now.." (some of the student is looking at him,its like they were laughing through how they look at him) ....his goal is to find a girl that will like his personality even though his looks like that..

on the other side...miyu sakamoto..is also like him...pretty face,beatiful shiny hair,smart.( in a far away place in japan) when she transferred in the same school of kasuya...she also changed her image..ponytail hair..wearing round geeking glasses..and she have the same goal like him to find a guy
kasuya will list the names if the girl will become candidate for his girlfriend
he found a rich girl ,sabusa miyamoto ( like a princess..treating other people like slaves to serve for her..but 1 morning kasuya saw her..stopping her limo..looks around from the window..setps out .look at the poor little kittens..and she gave a kind smile..and take the kittens to her limo..kasuya find out the she is kind afterall...at 1st she treated kasuya like a nerd slave..but somehow she having some feelings for him.when she slips on the stair ..and kasuya save her...she pretend that she still dont like him. hides her blushing face
(basically its comedy.romance,maybe ecchi.love triangle)
the question is how can he hide his talent?...in other dificult situations?...

(you can ask me the other details..1.when kasuya encounter miyu sakamoto but for now im going to sleep..) oh tell me if theres an anime like this

heres some part
( ) words inside the parenthesis means im explaining,,, * * means expression/looks that the character had just made ..get it?!. oh sometimes face expression are like this (-_-III) (0_0) (0_-)

sorry but i'll work on his 1st day..but this part the 1st day has ended

kasuya had just arrived home, kasuya:"this place havent changed" **smirk*(in japan)..not as big as their house in america but its still bigger than a normal house.he reach in his pocket,pull out the key and opened the door.. "im home" he said, (a girl reading a manga on a room heard it) ..(before kasuya take off his shoes..the ground started to shake..the sound gets louder and louder)..*1 bead of sweats apear in kasuya's head* "its sounds like a stampede?" he whispered to himself ...a black figure suddenly appeared leaping towards him...
."ooooooooooooniiiiiiiiii-chaaaaaaaaaann!" (tight hug).. [Kasuya]:"kiruru?!"...(introduction: kiruru is his little/younger sister..a middle schooler that have a brother complex)...[Kiruru]:"oni-chan..i miss you so much!" (rubbing her face in his brother's chest..she stopped and finally look up...she sees a nerd wearing geeky glasses *shines*..her jaw drop..her hug became like a bear hug that almost brake kasuya's ribs..a little fountain (saliva/blood) came out from his mouth 1 sec.. [Kiruru]:"your not my oniiii-chaaaaaaaaaaann!!"
she threw him like a wrestler (bear hug-front suplex)..(kasuya remembered that he's not in school anymore so he dont need to pretend his weak.so he twist in the mid air and landed with his feet) [Kiruru]:"help!..some geek barge into our house!!" [Kasuya]:" wait!.." (before he could say anything..kiruru throw the flower base to him)
(his glasses shine for a sec..dodging the flower base and catching it at the same time) "now listen" he said gently..(>_>)!! <--(he saw kiruru is goind to throw a huge guitar case..he has no choice but to stop her..by using 1 feet to dash to her..grabbing her wrist) [Kasuya]:"kiruru..calm down" (kiruru panic stopped) [Kiruru]:"that voice?!" *stares* (kasuya slowly smiled..suddenly they were interupted by a voice) [Kiruru's butler]:"dont worry milady!!" [Kiruru]:"no!" (to late he kicked kasuyas face) [Kasuya]:"ugggh" (slowmotion)

the new part is in page 6 of this thread
the latest part is in page 8
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A fanfic of a sort... Well, it's good to show your story to the word but this isn't the right place to post it.
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Maou068 wrote:

A fanfic of a sort... Well, it's good to show your story to the word but this isn't the right place to post it.


u can say it like a fanatic but....its only my imagination...i dont plan to make a fanatic
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shegskusanagi19 wrote:


Maou068 wrote:

A fanfic of a sort... Well, it's good to show your story to the word but this isn't the right place to post it.


u can say it like a fanatic but....its only my imagination...i dont plan to make a fanatic


So then... This is an original story that you created. What's the genre of your story? I can only guess that it's a romance story from the look of it.
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erm...wats d rich girl's name??
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Maou068 wrote:


shegskusanagi19 wrote:


Maou068 wrote:

A fanfic of a sort... Well, it's good to show your story to the word but this isn't the right place to post it.


u can say it like a fanatic but....its only my imagination...i dont plan to make a fanatic


So then... This is an original story that you created. What's the genre of your story? I can only guess that it's a romance story from the look of it.


i think...comedy..well a love triangle its a romance.maybe its have some ecchi,school life
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there isnt an anime nor manga...but the elements..i mean the elements of the story of some particular mangas are there..(ive read at least 30-40 shoujo manga, so im really familiar with manga/anime cliche)...overall, i like the story, but i dont like the love triangle thing, try adding another guy, that might be good but too clichy..hehe
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Forest1002 wrote:

erm...wats d rich girl's name??


aw sorry i forgoten...its hard to pull all of it out of my head..sabusa miyamoto
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oh...ok^^thx
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jamie416 wrote:

there isnt an anime nor manga...but the elements..i mean the elements of the story of some particular mangas are there..(ive read at least 30-40 shoujo manga, so im really familiar with manga/anime cliche)...overall, i like the story, but i dont like the love triangle thing, try adding another guy, that might be good but too clichy..hehe


the main character is a guy...but the 2 girls have each story...yeah..there are other guys. 1 basketball player,1 soccerplayer
and other girls...all the classmate are mixed in the story i think..in the end its ends up in a love triangle
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ohhh..ohhh...then i'll be rooting for ya , and it's not that bad if you make it to a fanfic
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its good.. kinda familiar.. he doesn't need to hide his talent if it's unavoidable.. that's my favorite part.. the main character releases his super abilities that stuns others and make the jaw drop !!! yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 1/6/09

shegskusanagi19 wrote:


jamie416 wrote:

there isnt an anime nor manga...but the elements..i mean the elements of the story of some particular mangas are there..(ive read at least 30-40 shoujo manga, so im really familiar with manga/anime cliche)...overall, i like the story, but i dont like the love triangle thing, try adding another guy, that might be good but too clichy..hehe


the main character is a guy...but the 2 girls have each story...yeah..there are other guys. 1 basketball player,1 soccerplayer
and other girls...all the classmate are mixed in the story i think..in the end its ends up in a love triangle


If there are 3 or more people involved in the relationship then this is a classic case of love polygon(s).
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jamie416 wrote:

ohhh..ohhh...then i'll be rooting for ya , and it's not that bad if you make it to a fanfic

thanks...i make some part
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