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wat if there is an anime like this?
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shegskusanagi19 wrote:


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shegskusanagi19 wrote:


Forest1002 wrote:

erm...wats d rich girl's name??



do u think it will be funny...
teacher:"class i'll introduce your new classmate."
*enters* "hi im miyu sakamoto...." (she stopped) she saw kasuya "omg!...theres already a nerd/geek in the class!.." *she thought *heavy atmosphere* (she pretend to be like one but she neverthought theres 1 in the class,in her mind she drops into a blackhole )

"omg!..theres another nerd besides me" kasuya thought *expression*--> (-_-III)

teacher:"wats wrong" *tapping miyu's shoulder with a big beads of sweat on the head*



lol....erm...is thr any others character tat will b frenz wit kasuya or miyu??


at 1st..its like only two of them are sitting on the back...some are gross out because they are both nerds...
but other dont mind..in fact there already some1 aproaches to them..kazuki (girl)

kazuki:" wow!..i never imagine that there will be 2 four eyes in my class this year! hehehe".."is she insulting or being friendly with us?" both miyu and kasuya thought .."by the way im kazuki minata" she said with a big smile * shakes both of their hands* (miyu and kasuya tries to hold their glasses on)


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ang dami nman.... Tamad ako basahin yan
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hehe...he'll find some other girls but..it ends up with a love triangle...i mean not only three of them is in the story..there are other characters


I see, I understand a bit on how it ends. I only hope that this story doesn't end with a cliffhanger like most romance stories.

can u explain to me how,why a romance sotry ends with a cliffhanger?


I don't have broad knowledge on romance stories but sometimes, a romance author/mangaka tends to left some of the questions unanswered so that they could make a sequel to that story.
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dude I would read/watch it if became an anime or manga! Good Job!!XD
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ang dami nman.... Tamad ako basahin yan


lols....kung manga yan ilang page palang yan.
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shegskusanagi19 wrote:


Maou068 wrote:


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hehe...he'll find some other girls but..it ends up with a love triangle...i mean not only three of them is in the story..there are other characters


I see, I understand a bit on how it ends. I only hope that this story doesn't end with a cliffhanger like most romance stories.

can u explain to me how,why a romance sotry ends with a cliffhanger?


I don't have broad knowledge on romance stories but sometimes, a romance author/mangaka tends to left some of the questions unanswered so that they could make a sequel to that story.


ahh i get it..the story is somehow not satisfying right?
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it sounds good........ somehow i think that it might turn into a huge harem with like a sporty girl... or his cover is totally blown....
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I will like it!!! I like romantic anime shows!!!
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wow.......that just totally blew my mind......
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Hmm... not bad, but it's sounds a bit like a typical shoujo manga/anime. (No offense)

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oh..interesting...nice....more of shoujo...it wud be good if ya can continue the story...
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wow!!! i really got into it as i was reading and i totally imagined the "anime" in my head and how all the characters looked like and everything. sounds really good! i'd totally watch this if it was an anime
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dude I would read/watch it if became an anime or manga! Good Job!!XD


heres some part ... ( ) words inside the parenthesis means im explaining,,, * * means expression/looks that the character had just made ..get it?!. oh sometimes face expression are like this (-_-III) (0_0) (0_-)

sorry but i'll work on his 1st day..but this part the 1st day has ended

kasuya had just arrived home, kasuya:"this place havent changed" **smirk*(in japan)..not as big as their house in america but its still bigger than a normal house.he reach in his pocket,pull out the key and opened the door.. "im home" he said, (a girl reading a manga on a room heard it) ..(before kasuya take off his shoes..the ground started to shake..the sound gets louder and louder)..*1 bead of sweats apear in kasuya's head* "its sounds like a stampede?" he whispered to himself ...a black figure suddenly appeared leaping towards him...
."ooooooooooooniiiiiiiiii-chaaaaaaaaaann!" (tight hug).. [Kasuya]:"kiruru?!"...(introduction: kiruru is his little/younger sister..a middle schooler that have a brother complex)...[Kiruru]:"oni-chan..i miss you so much!" (rubbing her face in his brother's chest..she stopped and finally look up...she sees a nerd wearing geeky glasses *shines*..her jaw drop..her hug became like a bear hug that almost brake kasuya's ribs..a little fountain (saliva/blood) came out from his mouth 1 sec.. [Kiruru]:"your not my oniiii-chaaaaaaaaaaann!!"
she threw him like a wrestler (bear hug-front suplex)..(kasuya remembered that he's not in school anymore so he dont need to pretend his weak.so he twist in the mid air and landed with his feet) [Kiruru]:"help!..some geek barge into our house!!" [Kasuya]:" wait!.." (before he could say anything..kiruru throw the flower base to him)
(his glasses shine for a sec..dodging the flower base and catching it at the same time) "now listen" he said gently..(>_>)!! <--(he saw kiruru is goind to throw a huge guitar case..he has no choice but to stop her..by using 1 feet to dash to her..grabbing her wrist) [Kasuya]:"kiruru..calm down" (kiruru panic stopped) [Kiruru]:"that voice?!" *stares* (kasuya slowly smiled..suddenly they were interupted by a voice) [Kiruru's butler]:"dont worry milady!!" [Kiruru]:"no!" (to late he kicked kasuyas face) [Kasuya]:"ugggh" (slowmotion)
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Forest1002 wrote:


shegskusanagi19 wrote:


Forest1002 wrote:

erm...wats d rich girl's name??



do u think it will be funny...
teacher:"class i'll introduce your new classmate."
*enters* "hi im miyu sakamoto...." (she stopped) she saw kasuya "omg!...theres already a nerd/geek in the class!.." *she thought *heavy atmosphere* (she pretend to be like one but she neverthought theres 1 in the class,in her mind she drops into a blackhole )

"omg!..theres another nerd besides me" kasuya thought *expression*--> (-_-III)

teacher:"wats wrong" *tapping miyu's shoulder with a big beads of sweat on the head*



lol....erm...is thr any others character tat will b frenz wit kasuya or miyu??


heres some part ... ( ) words inside the parenthesis means im explaining,,, * * means expression/looks that the character had just made ..get it?!. oh sometimes face expression are like this (-_-III) (0_0) (0_-)

sorry but i'll work on his 1st day..but this part the 1st day has ended

kasuya had just arrived home, kasuya:"this place havent changed" **smirk*(in japan)..not as big as their house in america but its still bigger than a normal house.he reach in his pocket,pull out the key and opened the door.. "im home" he said, (a girl reading a manga on a room heard it) ..(before kasuya take off his shoes..the ground started to shake..the sound gets louder and louder)..*1 bead of sweats apear in kasuya's head* "its sounds like a stampede?" he whispered to himself ...a black figure suddenly appeared leaping towards him...
."ooooooooooooniiiiiiiiii-chaaaaaaaaaann!" (tight hug).. [Kasuya]:"kiruru?!"...(introduction: kiruru is his little/younger sister..a middle schooler that have a brother complex)...[Kiruru]:"oni-chan..i miss you so much!" (rubbing her face in his brother's chest..she stopped and finally look up...she sees a nerd wearing geeky glasses *shines*..her jaw drop..her hug became like a bear hug that almost brake kasuya's ribs..a little fountain (saliva/blood) came out from his mouth 1 sec.. [Kiruru]:"your not my oniiii-chaaaaaaaaaaann!!"
she threw him like a wrestler (bear hug-front suplex)..(kasuya remembered that he's not in school anymore so he dont need to pretend his weak.so he twist in the mid air and landed with his feet) [Kiruru]:"help!..some geek barge into our house!!" [Kasuya]:" wait!.." (before he could say anything..kiruru throw the flower base to him)
(his glasses shine for a sec..dodging the flower base and catching it at the same time) "now listen" he said gently..(>_>)!! <--(he saw kiruru is goind to throw a huge guitar case..he has no choice but to stop her..by using 1 feet to dash to her..grabbing her wrist) [Kasuya]:"kiruru..calm down" (kiruru panic stopped) [Kiruru]:"that voice?!" *stares* (kasuya slowly smiled..suddenly they were interupted by a voice) [Kiruru's butler]:"dont worry milady!!" [Kiruru]:"no!" (to late he kicked kasuyas face) [Kasuya]:"ugggh" (slowmotion)
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heres some part ... ( ) words inside the parenthesis means im explaining,,, * * means expression/looks that the character had just made ..get it?!. oh sometimes face expression are like this (-_-III) (0_0) (0_-)

sorry but i'll work on his 1st day..but this part the 1st day has ended

kasuya had just arrived home, kasuya:"this place havent changed" **smirk*(in japan)..not as big as their house in america but its still bigger than a normal house.he reach in his pocket,pull out the key and opened the door.. "im home" he said, (a girl reading a manga on a room heard it) ..(before kasuya take off his shoes..the ground started to shake..the sound gets louder and louder)..*1 bead of sweats apear in kasuya's head* "its sounds like a stampede?" he whispered to himself ...a black figure suddenly appeared leaping towards him...
."ooooooooooooniiiiiiiiii-chaaaaaaaaaann!" (tight hug).. [Kasuya]:"kiruru?!"...(introduction: kiruru is his little/younger sister..a middle schooler that have a brother complex)...[Kiruru]:"oni-chan..i miss you so much!" (rubbing her face in his brother's chest..she stopped and finally look up...she sees a nerd wearing geeky glasses *shines*..her jaw drop..her hug became like a bear hug that almost brake kasuya's ribs..a little fountain (saliva/blood) came out from his mouth 1 sec.. [Kiruru]:"your not my oniiii-chaaaaaaaaaaann!!"
she threw him like a wrestler (bear hug-front suplex)..(kasuya remembered that he's not in school anymore so he dont need to pretend his weak.so he twist in the mid air and landed with his feet) [Kiruru]:"help!..some geek barge into our house!!" [Kasuya]:" wait!.." (before he could say anything..kiruru throw the flower base to him)
(his glasses shine for a sec..dodging the flower base and catching it at the same time) "now listen" he said gently..(>_>)!! <--(he saw kiruru is goind to throw a huge guitar case..he has no choice but to stop her..by using 1 feet to dash to her..grabbing her wrist) [Kasuya]:"kiruru..calm down" (kiruru panic stopped) [Kiruru]:"that voice?!" *stares* (kasuya slowly smiled..suddenly they were interupted by a voice) [Kiruru's butler]:"dont worry milady!!" [Kiruru]:"no!" (to late he kicked kasuyas face) [Kasuya]:"ugggh" (slowmotion)
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