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Posted 1/6/09
hey kurugia i can make my characters points up to 90 and have 35 left right? or is it all together meaning you have to use up 55 in the servants stats? and leave the other 35?
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everything seems to be in order, so accepted
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Posted 1/7/09 , edited 1/7/09


its 90 points for your stats only, and 35 points for your skills/traits

If you need help on this, take a look at the mine and zepar's
Posted 1/7/09
kk thx.
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is this Fine?
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Posted 1/7/09 , edited 1/7/09



seems fine. jus some minor edits required. when summoning, being able to summon both is a lil over-powered so if you instead stated that you can summon a dragon or a phoenix instead of summon a dragon and a phoenix would be much better.

Your offensive skills are basically your noble fantasms from the looks of it. so basically jus change the and to or

As for the description you see under offensive, supportive, and magic skills, they would all fall under the skills/traits section. Try to choose the skills/traits as those listed on the list. The noble fantasms are special skills that your character uses so you can make your own. As for skills/traits its something that should be kept similar to other ppl (comes from same list).

Now you still have 35 points left to be used on the skills/traits section. You seem to understand how to use it on the stats, so now try using it on your skills/traits. The points enable us to keep things balanced. if you were to max out 2 skills, then while you maybe great at the use of those two, you are unable to use any others that are listed. however if you were to use your points on getting all the ones listed, then while you may know how to use it, you wont be able to use any of it to its maximum.

Choose the skills/traits that would fit your character on the listed ones. if your heavy front fighter, then offensive, if archer/rider type then supportive, and magus type would be magic. Or create your own custom hero with whichever skills/traits (must still choose those on list)
Posted 1/7/09
yeah thx for the correction i actually meant "or" but i guess i missed that part xD.
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Posted 1/7/09
Master Name: Shin
Hair color:Brown
Alignment: Neutral
Servant Name:Shin
Servant Class and sex:Samurai,Hand to hand/Male
Servent Hair color:brown
Alignment: Neutral
Servant's Weapon:Samurai Sword,Martial Arts, and Magic
Picture of Servant:


Servent Stats

Strength: 15 +5 A (20 AA+)
endurance: 13 +5 A (18 AA+)
agility: 20 A++
luck: 5 D
mana: 12 A++
Noble phantasm: 15 A++

Offensive Skills:
Monstrous Strength: Temporary Boosts the Servants Strength for a small amount of time (for every 1 (Letter) rank it increase Str by 2)

Tsubame Gaeshi : It is an attack that bends the laws of physics to cause what is known as a Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon, which consists of three unavoidable, simultaneous strikes from different directions. Unlike the techniques of other Servants, Tsubame Gaeshi requires no additional Mana beyond what Assassin needs to move, although a level foundation is necessary to ensure perfect execution. The name honors a technique of Sasaki Kojirō, who was said to be able to cut down a swallow in mid-flight.

The Seven Rings that Cover the Fiery Heavens -An extremely powerful spiritual aegis.Originally a huge bronze shield coated with seven layers of tanned ox hide, activation of this Noble Phantasm materializes seven consecutive prismatic flower petals, which each petal emulating the protective strength of a fortress. Amidst legendary Noble Phantasms artifacts, Rho Aias is renown for having exceptional and unsurpassed resistance against all types of spears. This shield was once the property of Telamonian Ajax, a Greek hero from the The Iliad who evenly matched Hector of Troy in combat.

Master Stats

Strength: 1 E-
Endurance: 1 E-
Agility: 1 E-
Mana: 10 B-



Skill/Traits
Magic Resistance: 13 A All Spells Under A are Neglected
Instinct- Rank: A-The ability to always "feel" the best course for oneself during combat. This heightened sixth sense is now close to precognition. It reduces by half any obstacles to vision and hearing.
Mana Burst- Rank: A-This transfers magical energy into one's weapon and body, and by releasing the magical energy instantaneously, it increases one's ability. Simply said, it is like magical energy jet propulsion. Uses this magical energy for His sword techniques, guarding, and movement.

Supportive Skills
Stats Boost
This skill Boosts up Every category by 2x for 2 mins.
Presence Concealment: The ability to Hide your presence from other servants. (to Counter Instinct, Concealment rank must be higher than the Other servant’s Instinct)
Independent Action: Allows the Servant to go on its own without the master’s presence
Arms Mastership: Allows the servant to use another weapon. (For example 1 Servant is usually Arm with a Long Sword, he can either get another Long Sword to dual wield, a Lance, Bow etc.) for every 2 letter grades you can be proficient and use another weapon.
Bravery:His/Her Courage will allow you to Ignore Illusions, and Mental Interference.
Clairvoyance: Enhanced visual perception

Shin Magic List
Magic Resistance: Resists Magic Spells Below the Rank put into Magic Resistance
Territory Creation: Creates an invisible magical boundary around a certain area that allows the Servant to detect anything within it’s border, The more Rank the larger the area
Element barrier
Can Create a Barrier out of any element. fire,wind,earth,Air.

Ok I think I got it IF not then Help me
Posted 1/7/09 , edited 1/7/09
Master Name: Ray Cronos
Hair color: red
Alignment: good
Servant Name: Tung
Servant Class and sex: assassin, male
Servent Hair color: dark blue
Alignment: evil
Servant's Weapon: gauntlets
Picture of Servant:


Using 90 Points

Servent Stats

Strength: 15 + 5 (20 AA+)
endurance: 5 D
agility:15 + 15 + 10 (40 A+A+B-)
luck: 0 F
mana: 10 B-
Noble phantasm: 15 A++

Blood Speed Reflexes (passive)
this skill only running in the bloodline of certain kind of elite assassin servant can be used, the longer the battle drags on the faster the user will become if bleeding the reflex of the user will be enhanced too.

Realm of Nightmares (casting)
once activated the user has 10sec to touch a victim, once succeed the victim will fall into a dream world of there worst fears and be immobilized for a duration of 3min in the real world.

Energy Drain (passive)
making contact with anyone will get their mana and life drain.

skill/traits

Instinct: 7 C- good for finding random battles
Presence Concealment: 10 B- find me if you can
Eye of the Mind: 10 B- built for servant killing
Independent Action: 5 D likes to wander around and prey on the weak
Territory Creation: 3 stupid enough to go in my domain shall perish

Master stats

Strength: 1 E-
Endurance: 1 E-
agility: 1 E-
Mana: 7 C-

Despell (casting)
Negate any spells costing mana to use max of 5 casting a day

Last Chance (casting)
sacrificing 99% of once life in order for the servant to be resurrect with 99% extra stat boost for duration of 5min

Servant Recall
teleports the servant to the master instantly only can be used once a day



PS: if anythings wrong please tell me
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Posted 1/7/09

tungaroo wrote:

Master Name: Ray Cronos
Hair color: red
Alignment: evil
Servant Name: Tung
Servant Class and sex: assassin, male
Servent Hair color: dark blue
Alignment: evil
Servant's Weapon: gauntlets
Picture of Servant:


Using 90 Points

Servent Stats

Strength: 15 + 5 (20 AA+)
endurance: 5 D
agility:15 + 15 + 10 (40 A+A+B-)
luck: 0 F
mana: 10 B-
Noble phantasm: 15 A++

Blood Speed Reflexes (passive)
this skill only running in the bloodline of certain kind of elite assassin servant can be used, the longer the battle drags on the faster the user will become if bleeding the reflex of the user will be enhanced too.

Realm of Nightmares (casting)
once activated the user has 10sec to touch a victim, once succeed the victim will fall into a dream world of there worst fears and be immobilized for a duration of 3min in the real world.

Energy Drain (passive)
making contact with anyone will get their mana and life drain.

skill/traits

Instinct: 7 C- good for finding random battles
Presence Concealment: 10 B- find me if you can
Eye of the Mind: 10 B- built for servant killing
Independent Action: 5 D likes to wander around and prey on the weak
Territory Creation: 3 stupid enough to go in my domain shall perish

Master stats

Strength: 1 E-
Endurance: 1 E-
agility: 1 E-
Mana: 7 C-

Despell (casting)
Negate any spells costing mana to use max of 5 casting a day

Last Chance (casting)
sacrificing 99% of once life in order for the servant to be resurrect with 99% extra stat boost for duration of 5min

Servant Recall
teleports the servant to the master instantly only can be used once a day



PS: if anythings wrong please tell me


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Posted 1/8/09
I don't understand?......
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Posted 1/8/09
I Approved it lol
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accepted. and well done. thanks for not putting in something like 'stat boost' in it. last thing to note, if your gonna have 40agi, aint it fair to get rid of the Blood Speed Reflexes noble fantasm? or are you stating that once you reach maximum with the Blood Speed Reflexes you will reach 40? cause if thats the case, then its alright.
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Posted 1/8/09 , edited 1/8/09


okay... your supportive and offensive skill should go under the 'skill/traits' section, and remember to distribute the 35 points among them, (so you might want to lower some on the others that you've already placed the points under.) the Tsubame Gaeshi and The Seven Rings that Cover the Fiery Heavens are obviously noble fantasms so you can leave them where they are.

and last thing, theres no 'stat boost' in among the skills/traits list that your supposed to choose from. i dunno where ppl got that idea from (its unfair for others) but it doesnt exist.
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Posted 1/8/09 , edited 1/11/09



What about now is it ok now

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