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Posted 1/8/09

sparkle22099 wrote:

I don't understand?......


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Posted 1/8/09

kurugia wrote:



accepted. and well done. thanks for not putting in something like 'stat boost' in it. last thing to note, if your gonna have 40agi, aint it fair to get rid of the Blood Speed Reflexes noble fantasm? or are you stating that once you reach maximum with the Blood Speed Reflexes you will reach 40? cause if thats the case, then its alright.


yeh it reaches 40 that's what i meant HAHAHA
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Posted 1/8/09



okay thanks, i just had to be sure. accepted and welcome to the rp
Posted 1/9/09

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sparkle22099 wrote:

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thnx!
Posted 1/11/09 , edited 1/13/09
Master's Name : Cross
Master's Hair Color : Red
Master's Alignment : Neutral
Servant's Name : Croix
Servant's Class and Sex : Saber, Male
Servant's Hair Color : White
Servant's Alignment : Neutral
Servant's Weapon : Swords, Martial Arts, Magic
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Servant Stats

Strength : 14 + 10 + 5 (29 A++)
Endurance : 13 + 5 (18 A++)
Agility : 14 A+
Luck : 8 C
Mana : 13 A
Noble Phantasm : 15 A++


Ikorosu Hyakutou (the Shooting Hundred Heads) - a pummeling, high-speed series of 9 strikes simultaneously discharged in the form of 9 dragon-like homing lasers.

Delusional Heartbeat (Mōsō Shin'on) - creates a mirror image of the heart of the target with an ether clump, a dual existence that resonates with the original one. By crushing the fake heart, he can crush the real one with this curse without laying a finger on it. As he is really crushing a fake heart, any physical defense is meaningless. To resist the curse, it is not endurance that matters, but the magical power, to prevent him from creating the dual existence at all.

Fragarach - The ultimate form of counterattack, an unavoidable strike carried out in response to an enemy’s strongest abilities. It both leaves the enemy critically injured and nullifies their attack, creating a perfect balance between offensive and defensive capabilities. However, it a far less convenient weapon than it sounds. It can only be used at full potential against an enemy’s powerful strikes, otherwise its power is reduced to that of a mere Rank D attack.


Skill/Traits

Mana Burst 13 A - Allows servants to send burst of Mana into their weapons or armor temporarily boosting its strength.

Instinct 5 D - In heighten 6th sense allows to detect certain objects beyond your normal senses.

Arms Mastership 4 D- - Allows the servant to use another weapon.

Monstrous Strength 13 A - Temporary Boosts the Servants Strength for a small amount of time.


Master's Stats

Strength : 1 E-
Endurance : 1 E-
Agility : 1 E-
Mana : 10 B-


Cross's Spell List

The Rebirth (casting) - Augments the body to become physically quicker and more powerful and to be able/has a chance to harm or slay spiritual bodies and cause severe damage to inanimate objects.

Living Will (passive) - A seal spell that infuses the receiver the knowledge, ability, skills, techniques and will, to stay alive or manipulate it in a fight in order to kill.

Mystic Bane (casting) - Any non-physical spells used to do harm against the casted will automatically be reflected back to the original caster to do it's work.

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Posted 1/11/09


What about now is it ok now

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Posted 1/12/09



you went over 3 points in the servant+master base stat points. fix that, as for the rest, its all good. so accepted
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Posted 1/12/09


your over by 10 points. remember, master+servant base stat points must " = " 90 points
Posted 1/12/09
Alright, i edited. Hows it now?
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Posted 1/13/09
Do servants have to be human? Can I put a Demon
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Posted 1/13/09


race does not matter. as long as you follow the stat rules.
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your total base stat points seem to equal to 100 (remember, servant + master = 90) decrease your points by 10 and it should be fine. as for your abilities, the only one i have a problem with is the counterattack, which claims that it can 'instantly kill' an opponent. This noble fantasm is unfair cause it does not give the other rper a chance to respond. rather than 'instantly kills', try changing it to 'critically wounds' or something like that.
Posted 1/13/09
Oh, sorry about before. I pasted it twice by mistake. I've corrected the errors and if its still unsatisfactory, just get back to me and state the problems.
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Posted 1/14/09


its great, well done, accepted, and welcome to fate type-moon role play
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Posted 1/24/09
Master Name: Itsuki Mitsunagi
Hair color: White
Alignment: Neutral

Servant Name: Tomoe Gozen
Servant Class and sex: Female - Archer
Servent Hair color: Pink
Alignment: Neutral
Servant's Weapon: Dual Swords


------Servent Stats-----

Strength: 9 (C+)
endurance: 14 - 5 (A+ > C+)
agility: 16 + 20 (16 A++ > 36 A++)
luck: 9 (C+)
mana: 11-7 (B > D)
Noble phantasm: 15 (A++)
Birth Of Raiden (Japanese god of lightning)-Tomoe's agility greatly in creases and gets a bluish aura around her at the cost of mana, but this also takes a toll on her body lowering her endurance slightly (-7 mana, -5 endurance, +20 agility)
Kono-hana-sakuya-hime's(Japanese god of the cherry tree) Fury- Tomoe places the ends of her swords together so the blades face the same direction and throws the blades, range is increased slightly as it spins, the name comes from the bits of energy falling off the blades that look like cherry blossoms. The blades return to her in a boomerang like effect.


Skills/Traits:
Magic Resistance: 12 (B+)
Arms Mastership: 2 (E) ----i guess she would need this for both swords?
Eye of the mind: 9 (C+)
Independent Action: 10 (B-)

-----Master stats-----

Strength: 1 (E-)
Endurance: 2 (E)
agility: 3 (E+)
Mana: 2 (E)

Ok this is my first time doing one like this so let me know if i should change anything
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