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wahh sugoii(:
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as always sei-chan. you're awesome when it comes to writing. ^^
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GEHCHAN.
omgod ILOVEIT.
i cried..it was sooosoooogood..
uwaaaaaaaaaaa
iloveyou*huggies*
hahaha
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wahh sugoii(:
NICE!!!


sankyuu for the comment! =D
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as always sei-chan. you're awesome when it comes to writing. ^^


waah no i'm not..haha..
i'm not as good as you..
nwey, thanks for the comment!
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chuu~
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

GEHCHAN.
omgod ILOVEIT.
i cried..it was sooosoooogood..
uwaaaaaaaaaaa
iloveyou*huggies*
hahaha


aww honto?!..
glad you love it!..hehe..
gomen i made you cry..
it's really for you!..aww
bad hikaru!...he hurt you here..but don't worry
let's find it out in the sequel ne! =D
love you too! *huggies back*
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yamachan-kakkoi wrote:

GEHCHAN.
omgod ILOVEIT.
i cried..it was sooosoooogood..
uwaaaaaaaaaaa
iloveyou*huggies*
hahaha


aww honto?!..
glad you love it!..hehe..
gomen i made you cry..
it's really for you!..aww
bad hikaru!...he hurt you here..but don't worry
let's find it out in the sequel ne! =D
love you too! *huggies back*


kyahhh its okayy.
iloovee sadfics.hahah
i wanna read the sequeeel!!
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kyaa~...gud work na~...congrate!
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW......
that was so nice!
i love it SSSO much, i guess its my favorite one-shot already!...
Posted 1/13/09
uwaaaaaaaa~! rei-chan! i'm finish!! xD

i really like this fic! especially when they argued! haha! and i'll wait for the sequel! xD

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wooow. good job, geh-chan! this is really good! I mean, seriously! this is so good!

anyway, PLEASE! I wanna read the sequel! :>
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tsenn_chan wrote:

kyaa~...gud work na~...congrate!


waah tsenn chan! sankyuu no tame ni yomu suru!


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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW......
that was so nice!
i love it SSSO much, i guess its my favorite one-shot already!...


waah honto?...aww...thanks for reading.
i might post the sequel soon...don't miss it ne~


lizbeth_yao95 wrote:

uwaaaaaaaa~! rei-chan! i'm finish!! xD

i really like this fic! especially when they argued! haha! and i'll wait for the sequel! xD


hehe....honto?...wait for the sequel ne~...
yeah the argument part is somehow sad...aww..hee


jally23 wrote:

wooow. good job, geh-chan! this is really good! I mean, seriously! this is so good!

anyway, PLEASE! I wanna read the sequel! :>


hehe..gomen i might not post it today...demo just wait for it ne~..
gomen...
nwey, tnx for reading!
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ohhh O__O
i read this like..when you first posted it...demo..i forgot to comment..
gomen~
demo i liked the one-shot!
it's cute? lol ^^
dunno how to describe haha...
but yea can't wait for the sequel!
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SEQUEL: "I only look at you and no one else..."

Additional Characters:

Nakaken

LEGEND:

Hikaru's POV - blue
Chika's POV - red


When will I ever see you again? Is there a way for you to forgive me? Is there a way back into your heart to love me? Cause now I'm prepared to know what love is. I'm prepared to do everything for you so as long that you'll be happy.

Yabu: Yatta can't believe you'll be treating us again!
Inoo: Yeah sankyuu Hikaru!
Hikaru: Whatever makes you happy. I got no choice naa?
Yabu: Hmm, you should've lose the deal just for her sake you know.
Hikaru: Why should I?
Inoo: Cause you're also falling for her.
Hikaru: Iie, it's not.
Yabu & Inoo: Hai you do.
Hikaru: It's nothing.
Yabu: If you only know, we keep on noticing you for this past few months and it's not you at all.
Inoo: You even know how to shout at girls now if they're catching you up or something. I think you haven't got over her.
Hikaru: I don't know.
Yabu: I wonder what happen to Yoko-san. What could be the hidden reason?
Inoo: I missed the way when she gets mad at him.
Yabu: Anyway, change the topic. Our performance will be shown later night right? And we got something to perform next week in Shounen Club ne?. Have you guys written your songs?
Inoo: Don't ask me. I just sing with you.
Hikaru: Yeah I'm done with it.
Yabu: Honto?
Inoo: what's the title?
Hikaru: Akogare no Egoist
Yabu: EH?! What's with that?
Inoo: It sounds nasty.
Hikaru: It's my song so what do you care about?
Inoo: Mind if we...
Yabu: Read the lyrics?
Hikaru: Iie. You'll just find out. Anyway, gotta go ahead guys. Ja-matta

I felt normal. To the extent, that I'm another person now. As you have heard, yeah, I learned how to shout at girls now. What will I do? They are annoying. I wonder where could she be now. Will she see me performing on screen? I hope she knows the song is dedicated for the both of us. No, only for her. I hope she does understand what could the meaning of my song be. I need to get her back but how? She could be nowhere to be seen.


~~

Chika's mother: It's Shounen Club after 5 minutes. Will you watch it?
Chika: Ah...yeah. Sankyuu kaasan.

I forgot how it was like to watch Shounen Club. The only way to keep me watching this is when my kaasan reminds that I will watch it. She knows it's my favorite. I wonder why it's my favorite. I have no idea at all.

TV: Min'na, we present to you Hikaru Yaotome performing Flame of Love. Pls stay tuned. Dozo~

Again, I heard his name from this show for 3 months. His name echoes in my mind. Who could he be? Is he that special to me? What would be.....my connection to him? Good thing, it took me a month to remember my parents again and my friends.
There comes a time when I see Yabu or Inoo performing, my head aches. I don't know why. Have I been close to them too? Who could they be? I know they're famous but why does it make my head ache.

FLASHBACK~~
Last June

Chika's mother: What happened to my daughter?
Chika's father: Why is she so scared to us when she saw us? She...she doesn't even know our names!
Doctor: I'm afraid to say it but it will take a long amount of time before she recovers.
Chika's father: What is it, Sensei?
Doctor: *sighs*That's because from the accident, she suffered a mild amnesia. As a result, she's forgotten everything.
Chika's mother: Masaka [It can't be]*sobs*
Chika's father: So that means, she might....
Doctor: Forgotten her own name as well.
Chika's mother: When do you think she'll recover?
Doctor: She may start to remember some things for 3 months. Good thing it's only mild. Cause others who suffered amnesia may last for 3 years. Anyway, don't force her at the moment to remember everything. Otherwise, the process of remembering things might take longer.But showing her some things you think could help might make her remember again.

Upon hearing that, I felt nothing. Nothing at all. Why could these woman with her husband so worried about me? Who are they? They seemed kind but still, they seemed hard to remember.

July

Chika: Kaasan
Chika's mother: Hai?
Chika: I just remembered, why did you let me transfer to another school? Is there someone I know from there?
Chika's mother: How could you say that?
Chika: Datte I feel that someone is there who...who knows me a lot. I know I have friends in there but there's someone, I can't remember who.
CHika's mother: THat's the reason why we let you transfer to another school.
Chika: Why?
Chika's mother: They might get sad if you don't remember at all and it will make your mind pressured. It will lengthen your amnesia.
Chika: IS that wrong? Why would they be sad? I'm the new me ne~?
Chika's mother: *sighs* Ne~you'll understand if you remembered everything.

END OF FLASHBACK~~

Slowly by slowly, I remembered my previous school where I met a friend named Suzumi. I called her and she was so shocked that I couldn't remember anything. SHe visited me in my house whenever she's free and she's helping me to remember our friends especially like Yabu and Inoo. BUt never she mentioned anything about Hikaru.
SHe mentioned her once but she wouldn't continue further. Afraid that she might force my brain to remember him. Even I'm not forcing it to remember, my brain has its own life and sometimes, my head would ache all of a sudden. How could that be? What's in him? I shouldn't remember him. Maybe he's just someone else.
Nothing special at all.


~~

I was glad and I just realized that Suzumi still keeps in touch with her. Too bad, she wouldn't tell me how she is or where she lives. She keeps it a secret from me. Still I felt relieved cause Yabu and Inoo don't know her whereabouts too. In other words, we're just fair. I decided to go out from school for awhile since
there's nothing to do that much in our school. we're just preparing the things for the festival. Whatever that festival is, I just don't care. I went to the park where I could relax myself. I close my eyes and breathe hardly. AS soon as I open my eyes, I saw a familiar figure. Could that be her? Or maybe I was just imagining things.
I tried rubbing my eyes and yeah, it's her! She somehow changed a bit. But she still looks sweet from afar like before. I run as fast as I could so that I can talk to her once again.

Hikaru: *hugs*Chika chan! chika chan! Hisashiburii! Hontoni gomenasai for everything. For all the things I said back then. I didn't mean to say those to you. I just hope you understand. You know I didn't mean it right? Forgive me onegai.
Chika: *shocked and struggles to break free* Sumimasen demo...you're Yaotome Hikaru san ne~?
Hikaru: Yeah! *chuckles* why would you ask that?
Chika: Datte.....datte I don't know why but you seemed so....close to me.
Hikaru: Nani? I don't understand you.
Chika: Are you my friend?
HIkaru: Nani? Why are you saying that?
Chika: *smiles*I just can't believe I have another JE friend other than Yabu-kun and Inoo kun.
Hikaru: Chika, stop acting strange ok? It's not funny.
Chika: I'm not acting. It's just....I don't....really know you at all. I only know you're a celebrity and that's it. Sumimasen.

When I heard that, I feel like my world was torn apart. She's totally forgotten about me. How could she remember that about Yabu and Inoo. I don't know if she did that on purpose or maybe something else. Still it hurts me the most when Chika sees me as a different person. A stranger. Now the pain is added. The pain that I hurt her
and the pain that she's forgotten about me.

Hikaru: *starts touching her shoulders* Chi...chika..dous..doushite? *I feel like I'm about to cry when my voice cracked*
Chika: *struggles to remove his hands* Oi pls don't do this. What's wrong? You're scaring me?
Hikaru: *continues to touch her shoulders* Noo. Why are you scared at me? I won't hurt you. Just tell me, why are you doing this?
Chika: Pls let me go. You're scaring me Hikaru-san. THis is not right. we just met.
Hikaru: MET?! Are you out of your mind? You know me! Don't close your memories about me! You know you have fallen for me before and I did the same thing to you!
Chika: *touches her forehead*Wa..wakaranai yo[I don't know]! Let me go! I don't know you! YOu're hurting me! WHoever you are, gomenasai! I don't remember at all! Stop it!*runs away*
Hikaru: iiiiieeeee!

No, it couldn't be. Why she felt like it's so hard to remember me? I need to see her whatever happens. I won't stop until I know why she forgot about me. The next day, I asked Suzumi to know what has really happened to Chika. She wouldn't tell me what happened but then I forced her to tell me. It took me a long time before I finally let her tell the truth.

Suzumi: Are you sure you wanna know about it?
Hikaru: Hai! Pls do tell me.
Suzumi: why should I tell you? You have hurt her before ne~?
Hikaru: How come you know that?
Suzumi: Of course. She's my friend. She told me before that thing happened.
Hikaru: what thing? I...
Suzumi: She got an accident!
I was speechless. She got an accident? When? HOw? It's all my fault. I hurt her so bad.
Suzumi: Because of that accident, she's forgotten about us. I tried my best to let her remember me too. It took me a long time before she fully knows me again. I'm also telling her about our classmates and friends in here but sadly, I only mentioned you once.
Hikaru: WHY?! You should've told her about me.
Suzumi: I can't
Hikaru: NAZE?!! NandayO?!
Suzumi: It will give her a hard time to remember. It will lengthen her amnesia.
Hikaru: Demo why on---
Suzumi: Because you hurt her! so....much
Hikaru: how...how did you know?
Suzumi: I was about to get something in the rooftop when I heard you both. So I kinda eavesdrop so that I'll know what you're talking about. I didn't mean to do that but since she's my friend. I wanna know. I heard her crying. At first, it was unforgivable for you to do that to my friend. Even though I admire you for being cool and famous. But I never thought, you are indeed a playboy.
I thought it was only your image of being one. But it's real. How could you do that to her?If you really want her to remember you, do it yourself.
Hikaru: Matte!

Suzumi continued to walk without looking at me while I was left standing, thinking what will I do to make her remember me. If only I shouldn't have done that. WHat a crazy jerk I am!


~~

I keep on pondering who he is...But still not a single hint of him would tell me who he is. Why is he so sad when I didn't remember him?Maybe, just maybe...I was his...No forget it. It couldn't be. How could I be dating a celebrity before?Did I even date him or?...Oh no, my head hurts again. I shouldn't force myself. But then, I felt like someone's standing in front of me. Don't tell me it's him again. Why there's something in my mind that want me to remember him?

Hikaru: Come with me.
Chika: Eh? Hikaru kun? Where are you taking me? OI!
Hikaru: Someplace that would make you remember who am I.

I just don't know where would he take me. It took us 5 minutes before we reach our destination. It's a school. Oh yeah, I remembered. THis is where Suzumi told me that I studied here before.

Hikaru: So do you remember anything?
Chika: *chuckles* Of course I remember anything in here. Suzumi told me about this school.
Hikaru: EH?! You also remembered Yabu and Inoo too?
Chika: Hai! Ne~what are you trying to do?
Hikaru: I'm helping you to remember some things.
Chika: Hidoi demo Suzumi just helped me about this.
Hikaru: Well I'm helping you more.
Chika: You're just going to make things worst you know.
Hikaru: Naze dayo?
Chika: Just pls stop. It might make my amnesia bad. Do you want me to remember something?
Hikaru: Hai. It's me I want you to remember.
Chika: Why's that?
Hikaru: Datte I did a very big mistake and i want to make it all up to you. But the bad thing is, you've forgotten about me.
Chika: Then whatever that thing is then we should forget it.
Hikaru: It's not that simple.
Chika: Come on, you're the one who said, it is a mistake. So I think you're forgiven and let's forget that. Ok?
Hikaru: No you don't understand. I guess it's better to tell you everything what happened before. Just pls give me a chance ok?
Chika: Just do it slowly. Don't force me to remember everything.

SO after that, he continued telling me my past as he promised. He was careful of choosing the words so as not to force me on remembering about it. In the end, I found another reason why I need to forget about him.

Chika: So that was your mistake?
Hikaru: ....Hai
Chika: *smirks*Ne~hikaru kun. I think it's better this way.
Hikaru: Why? Because I hurt you so bad?! Come on. Isn't my sorry not enough? I'll bow down so that you can forgive me*kneels and bows*
Chika: *pulls him up*No no no! Hikaru kun! Stop this! Ok?
Hikaru: Will you forgive me?
Chika: I dont know. I'm sure I was so hurt that time cause you...you played my feelings.
Hikaru: That was at first! I realized I loved you already! pls believe me.
Chika: That was unforgivable Hikaru kun. I never thought a celebrity like you would be ....the worst.
Hikaru: I...I know that. But pls give me one more chance.
Chika: I'd rather forget anything about you.

While I was about to walk. I heard him saying something that made me decide if I will continue to remember about him or forget him....forever.

Hikaru: If you say so but Chika-chan...I would rather be forgotten than to lose someone like you in my world, in my life.

I guess......
he learned to love me...
that much.

~~...............

Suzumi gave me a call so that we can hang out together. She said she'll bring someone with her besides Yabu kun and Inoo kun. But then Hikaru is not included. When I heard that he won't be with us, I felt somehow sad from the bottom of my heart. Does he really deserve a 2nd chance?Cause I know what he did is really the most painful thing I've ever felt.

10 minutes later and we met in front of a manga cafe. I saw Yabu kun, Inoo kun, Suzumi and the other good looking guy I don't know. Must be her friend or something. Surprisingly, Yabu kun and Inoo kun gave me a warm hug. I felt like I'm their lost sister and they knew that I got amnesia. Suzumi decided to introduce the boy beside him.

Suzumi: Chika chan! This is my bestfriend.
???: Hajime mashite. Nakajima Kento desu. *bows and shakes my hand*
Chika: *bows* Oh hai! ano, Yoko Chika desu. yoroshiku!
Suzumi: Ne~Nakajima kun, she's also my bestfriend. *chuckles*
Nakaken: That's just great. =D
Suzumi: Anyway, shall we?
Yabu, Inoo, Chika and Nakaken: Hai!
Yabu: Aww, Kei kun, will you for at least let go of the book you're reading. You might fall.
Inoo: It's ok, I got eyes below.
Yabu: O_O

Nakaken: So ano, Suzumi chan told me about you.
Chika: EH?! Honto?!
Nakaken: *laughs* Yeah, something wrong?
Chika: No it's just...
Nakaken: Don't worry, she just told me about the things you like, dislike and the part when you had your accident.
Chika: Aww, that's just great! Suzumi's such a blabbermouth.
Nakaken: Come on, daijobu! I'm the guy who keeps secrets.
Chika: Maji?
Nakaken: yeah, you can count on me when you need something.
Chika: Oh, that's just......sweet.

He smiled at me in return. That smile was like one of the nicest things I see. I think I might forget Hikaru-kun.
But wait, why is he in my mind?

Probably deep within from the bottom of my heart.


he's the only one i'm looking for.


THE 2nd SEQUEL IS TO BE POSTED SOON! STAY TUNED KUDASAI!
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uwa~ i want more~ lol
cant wait for the other part.
congrats neechan~!! you posted it.. hahaa.. totally labs it. mwa
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