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Prologue
Light surrounded me. Not that kind you get when looking straight at the sun. The kind that would make you cringe. My eyes stung because of the ferocity of the light. "Help," I called, "Someone please help me." The light grew. I smelt burning flesh. I opened my eyes a bit but it wasn't mine. Someone else was here. "Are you there. Please answer me i can help you." I said, "C'mon answer me."
"ugh." The person grunted.
"I'm coming." I said as i crawled slowly to the sound. I ran head first into the body. I grabbed the person and drug them a small shady part. I opened my eyes. There skin was covered in small burn pathches. "omigawd are you alright? Please open your eyes." The person opened their eyes. I gasped. Their eyes were a coral red.
"Thank you for helping me. I have been here for many ages. NOw i can finally leave Thank you." Suddenly the person dissapeared.
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Chapter 1
"What the heck?" I asked myself. "Whats with the sudden darkness?" I opened my eyes. The sudden darkness made me squint. I couldn't see anything. The sudden beeping noise made me jump. I looked around for the source of the noise and saw it was my alarm clock. I spring up out of bed and slammed my hand down on the off button. I whipped around and flipped on the light. "Now where did i leave my hoddy?" i asked my self.
I looked through my dresser, closet and dirty clothes basket but it wasn't there. "LIAM, WHERE'S MY HODDY!" I screamed at him.
"I don't know." He screamed back. "Check the dryer."
I checked the dryer. There it was. I thought to myself. 'Maybe i should've looked here first. Would've spent less breath on him.' "MOM, I"M HEADING TO SCHOOL." I called to her. I ran upstairs and grabbed a piece of toast. Sticking it in my mouth i ran out the door and headed for school. Thats when i saw him. He had white hair and red eyes. He looked like he was the biggest bully there was. He turned towards me and i jumped. He looked so familiar.
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