New rapper
Posted 1/9/09
I'm my neighborhood rapper...we make beats...and i write lyrics....street poetry has always been my forte i rap about shit that happens or happened in my life

heres a bit of a song that i'm working on...

Growin up in a city in the Jersey
With shit goin on it sent my world topsy turvy
One nigga down, two, three, four
Few days later there would be more
I see brothas screamin that was the common symphony
All it would do is put me in complete agony
Just carry my glock, always ready to rock,
my enemies always bust in they neva knock
Fuckin horrible things would happen to these peeps
i just get on my knees pray to the lord and weep
seems like every dudes evil no nigga has a soul
the answer i get is"thats how i roll"
Well guess what that boy is goin the wrong way
With my little sister sick as hell dyin the long way
The brothas who met me at the seven eleven
theyve been deceased, realeased into heaven
the good lord knows where i'm gonna go
While these bitches are just on these streets for show
You have to be a hard nigga to defeat your rivals
you have to have the upper hand to have the prize of survival
You have to over come the heart aches the pains
you have to stay fresh when mlther nature brings the rain
my face all wet I Just feel like dyin
But no brotha can even see that i'm cryin
I was always the one bein chased
It was like i was trapped in the amazing race
All these challenges all up in my face
ever since i was a kid that was the case
Never told my parents cause i didnt want em to worry
In the meantime people are dyin in a hurry
Listen to these damn words that i share
this might not be real just a really long nightmare

chorus.

its what goes dowwwwnnn in the city
ever siiiiiiinnnnce i was a kiddie
i dont knowwwww what to sayhay
but i try to surviiiiiive in any wayhay
(repeat 3x) come on man lets get this shit

Secondverse comin soon.....


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Posted 6/22/09
rap
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Posted 6/22/09
better than that of spencer.haha
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Posted 6/23/09 , edited 6/24/09
You speak about how your comrades are released unto heaven and then roll back into vulgar profanity to describe a group of unfortunate subjects? You're lyrics are the same as those commercial parasites who have infested the Urban music scene who speak in such a low brow and disgusting manner while addressing people you obviously do not like, then fall back onto some pseudo-Christian prayer for hope.
I don't think "The Good Lord" would accept someone who refers to others as "Bitches" and "Niggas"

You also further the negative connotation of the word "Nigger". If such iconic African American such as Bill Cosby despise the use of the word used to insult his people, should you further it's existence by claiming ignorance to it's origin?
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Posted 6/24/09
Whack rhymes. And you call yourselfe a rapper? Shame on you!
Posted 6/24/09
Damn, that was terrible..
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Posted 9/23/09

Lakoine wrote:

Damn, that was terrible..


LOL
Posted 9/23/09

shirayukiIce wrote:


Lakoine wrote:

Damn, that was terrible..


LOL


Lol, you actually dug up this old, waste of a thread.
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Posted 9/23/09

Lakoine wrote:


shirayukiIce wrote:


Lakoine wrote:

Damn, that was terrible..


LOL


Lol, you actually dug up this old, waste of a thread.


Well actually yeah :T im always going through old pages to see something new
Posted 9/23/09

shirayukiIce wrote:


Lakoine wrote:


shirayukiIce wrote:


Lakoine wrote:

Damn, that was terrible..


LOL


Lol, you actually dug up this old, waste of a thread.


Well actually yeah :T im always going through old pages to see something new


I see, fair enough lol. Reading that first post again just makes it extra clear that rap is not for everyone...
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