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lol I have never heard of that show before that character looks really funny. Is the show any good?
I am glad you liked it. I really wanted to start getting into the more intellectual aspects of this story. Man, I am so glad you liked it because I was real worried about what people would think about the various topics I brought up in this episode. I mean mind you a lot of this character is also based on things that I think about philosophically and psychologically and such (except for the anti-social part...). So I was real worried that people wouldn't like it, that's also kind of why I tried to give up on the series. Then a couple friends of mine as well as some people on cunchyroll encouraged me to continue on it. So basically what I'm trying to say is I am really glad that you liked it intellectually, because it encourages me to continue he series. lol


damn, i'm really amazed on how you came up with such an interesting character as Tobias. Now i see... you based it from you.
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Tobias is also quite similar to Tae from shin angyo onshi, both have different outlook in logic.
I think i remember him sayng "People see what they want to see. Humans are trapped inside a box called common sense. If one is freed from that box, goodhood can be obtained." something like that.
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Tobias is also quite similar to Tae from shin angyo onshi, both have different outlook in logic.
I think i remember him sayng "People see what they want to see. Humans are trapped inside a box called common sense. If one is freed from that box, goodhood can be obtained." something like that.


Ha ha, that's a pretty interesting way to look at it. I've already started on the third episode and it gets into some stuff sort of like that.
Well I'm glad you like the story s far.
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Tobias is also quite similar to Tae from shin angyo onshi, both have different outlook in logic.
I think i remember him sayng "People see what they want to see. Humans are trapped inside a box called common sense. If one is freed from that box, goodhood can be obtained." something like that.


Ha ha, that's a pretty interesting way to look at it. I've already started on the third episode and it gets into some stuff sort of like that.
Well I'm glad you like the story s far. :D


btw i meant GODhood not GOODhood didn't notice that. Anyway, thanks for keeping me updated, please do notify me again when chapter 3 is done.
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Rezzy64 wrote:


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Tobias is also quite similar to Tae from shin angyo onshi, both have different outlook in logic.
I think i remember him sayng "People see what they want to see. Humans are trapped inside a box called common sense. If one is freed from that box, goodhood can be obtained." something like that.


Ha ha, that's a pretty interesting way to look at it. I've already started on the third episode and it gets into some stuff sort of like that.
Well I'm glad you like the story s far. :D


btw i meant GODhood not GOODhood didn't notice that. Anyway, thanks for keeping me updated, please do notify me again when chapter 3 is done.


Not a problem, because you told me that you liked it and were waiting for the next episode it encouraged me to start writing it again, so I should be thanking you for pulling me out of writers block slump.
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Hello hello once more! So I welcome you all to Episode 3 of “HHTWIHF”. This episode is a very important episode of my story because this is what I would like to call my first shenanigans episode. I think I tried to mention at one point that as this story continues, weird stuff was going to start going down. The first two episodes were important to start the story and explain some important characters and background, but now I'm ready to start showing off what this story is really about. So I hope you all enjoy my first episode of true “HHTWIHF” madness!

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Episode 3; It's real I swear!



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Wow... hm... um... what can I say? I'm just as speachless as Misuki... I really got in to the whole ep and I loved the phylosofical theories u proposed on it, straingly enough we did an experiment on such things the other day in class, with the exseption that an object didn't become a reality, but the brain is really suseptible to suggestions and it actually does work in that way. Over all, I had a lot of fun reading this chapter and m looking forward to the next. This was the first ep on which Tobias didn't got under my skin and made me want to shoke him Homer Simpson style. lol
Good work Rezzy!
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Wow... hm... um... what can I say? I'm just as speachless as Misuki... I really got in to the whole ep and I loved the phylosofical theories u proposed on it, straingly enough we did an experiment on such things the other day in class, with the exseption that an object didn't become a reality, but the brain is really suseptible to suggestions and it actually does work in that way. Over all, I had a lot of fun reading this chapter and m looking forward to the next. This was the first ep on which Tobias didn't got under my skin and made me want to shoke him Homer Simpson style. lol
Good work Rezzy!


Well I'm really glad you liked it. I actually did figure out how I was going to do this episode based on a philosophy class I had a couple days ago. lol So you liked Tobias in this episode, is it that he's normally annoying, probably because of the attitude he normally has that I gave him.
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A wonderful romp! It started out simple enough, with the experiment. At first, I thought you had nothing surprising to show me; the experiment pretty much happened exactly as I expected. After all, it was only a matter of time before Tobias and Mizuki began to create objects with their will. In fact, I was on the verge of calling shenanigans on your use of the word shenanigans. It was only when Tobias pointed out that they had to dispose of the thing (which I will call a superbox), that I realized just how much fun it was going to be. Even if HWHTWIHF never comes to any significant conclusion or teaches any specific moral message (not that I think that's what's going to happen) I would still enjoy say, 26 episodes of this kind of wierd adventure without coming close to bored. Forget your other stories; here's the story that needs to get made into a manga. Go find yourself an artist and get working on it. Other than those few minutes of blindfold-induced darkness, it's perfect comic material.

By the way, who the hell is Jared?

“No she did.” Jared says as he points at Mizuki.
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A wonderful romp! It started out simple enough, with the experiment. At first, I thought you had nothing surprising to show me; the experiment pretty much happened exactly as I expected. After all, it was only a matter of time before Tobias and Mizuki began to create objects with their will. In fact, I was on the verge of calling shenanigans on your use of the word shenanigans. It was only when Tobias pointed out that they had to dispose of the thing (which I will call a superbox), that I realized just how much fun it was going to be. Even if HWHTWIHF never comes to any significant conclusion or teaches any specific moral message (not that I think that's what's going to happen) I would still enjoy say, 26 episodes of this kind of wierd adventure without coming close to bored. Forget your other stories; here's the story that needs to get made into a manga. Go find yourself an artist and get working on it. Other than those few minutes of blindfold-induced darkness, it's perfect comic material.

By the way, who the hell is Jared?

“No she did.” Jared says as he points at Mizuki.


OH MY GOD! (I'm blushing from embarrassment.) DID I ACTUALLY SAY JARED! O_O"
lol... That is a horrible mistake on my part... As you know, I'm working on three different stories, HHTWIHF, To the End, and The Darkness of Qularia. So I guess because I was thinking about ideas for the Qularia story... I accidentally switched main characters as a mistake of absent mindedness. I'm really surprised that I didn't catch it in my proof read... I'm going to fix that right away! Thank you for pointing that out!

Wow, you really liked it like that? Well I will tell you right now, the original idea for "HHTWIHF" was that it wasn't actually going to tell a main story. All the episodes are supposed to be like this episode, where one main thing occurs and has to be dealt with in that episode. Except in cases like episodes one and two where I needed two episodes to explain things thoroughly. So I'm really glad you liked it, expect more episodes to be like this one, and also as a spoiler, expect more shenanigans from the superbox. Although I doubt I will ever make a plot out of the super box again (btw, if you didn't notice I like the name super box, it fits the object well.), I will have it mentioned here and there throughout the series as a brief comical experience as to answer the question, "What ever did happen to the super box?".
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i know its kind a late, but nice! I like it. Keep it up 'thumbs up'
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i know its kind a late, but nice! I like it. Keep it up 'thumbs up'


lol thanks. I just need to figure out what I'm going to do for next episode. Here's a spoiler but I was think that I might do the next episode about being lucky or unlucky. I just need to figure out how to incorporate that as a psychological theory and then turn it into a small plot. I'm having to do all sorts of research on the idea. I heart Wikipedia. lol
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Well, how surprised are you guys right now? Yeah I'm still writing stuff, I'm just not as enthusiastic as I used to be about it. I mean don't get me wrong, I love writing especially stuff like this, HHTWIHF is probably my most well thought out story that I have ever made that was capable of continuing into multiple episodes, but sadly as of about almost a year ago reality kicked in and it's been hard. My dream of having a writing career is dwindling away, but I'm trying to find one even though it's damn near impossible especially considering there is little to no market for fiction in America right now. I would love to find a business for my writing but it's very hard and complicated.

Well anyways, if it makes anybody feel better, the release of this next episode proves that I have not completely lost faith in writing. I'm also ready to develop at the very least three more episodes. So if I make it to at least seven episodes that will make me confidently proud to say that I have actually written an anime series. So I hope that my audience, no matter how minuscule, will enjoy this. Criticism is greatly appreciated. Also I am accepting requests for manga illustration targeted at this series, so if anybody is interested, feel free to pm me.
That's pretty much it, enjoy.
Oh and last but not least, a warning... This particular episode is really fricken long. Approximately a whopping 15 pages. Dare to delve? Good luck my fellow readers and writers.

“He Holds the World in his Fingers”

Episode 4; Isn't that cheating?!?!



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