Post Reply Cherish YOur Love- Chapter. 8
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JUST READ IT!! AND COMMENT!
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Scene: At Arron's House

-Gui Gui knocked on Arron's front door. A few minutes later, somebody finally opened it to let her in.

Maid 1: You must be Miss. Wu

GG: Yes, I am. May I ask where is Arron?

Maid 1: Mister is not home right now, he told us once you come, we have to bring you to the backyard.

GG: Backyard? How are we going to do our project there?

Maid 1: We are just doing things as we're told.

Maid 2: Here, follow me this way.

-Gui Gui followed. While they were leading her to the backyard, Gui Gui had a weird feeling of what will happen next.

GG: Do you have any idea of what is he doing?

Maid 2: Just follow me.

-Gui Gui finnaly reached the backyard. She was amazed from how pretty the backyard is. There were different types or flowers, there was a pool too. It was always something she wanted.

GG: WOW! The scene is so pretty. Everything is so perf-

-She suddenly felt something touching her. She looked down and saw something she never wanted to see.

GG: Ahhhh!!!!!! LET ME OUTTA HERE!!

-It was a cat. She wantedto leave but the maids won't let her.

Maid 2: Sorry Miss Wu, but Mister told us that we're not allowed to let you out.

GG: LET ME OUT!!! LET ME OUT!!

-Gui Gui turned around, she saw more cats coming out of the no where towards her.

GG: AHHH!!

Maid 1: Please calm down.

--MEANWHILE--

-Arron, who just went to a supply store, came back.

Maid 1: Mister! You're finally back.

YL: What happened?

Maid 1: Miss Wu couldn't cam down. She's in the backyard screaming right now. She wanted to leave, but you told us...

YL: I'll take care of it.

-Arron walked to the backyard, calmly. When he got there, he saw Gui Gui, who was holding a stick, waching and trying to hit every single cat that was coming towards her.

Maid 2: Mister.

YL: You can leave now.

-The maids left. Gui Gui spotted Arron standing there. She dropped the stick, walked over, and slapped him across the face.

GG: YOU THINK IT'S FUNNY?!?! ARE YOU REALLY THAT BORED!?! I TRUSTED YOU! I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY FRIEND! THIS IS WHAT I GET BACK!?! YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW SCARED I WAS!! YOU MIGHT BE RICH, BT BEING RICH DOESN'T MEAN YOU CAN DO WHATEVER YOU WANT!!

-Gui Gui wanted to cry, but she didn't.

YL: If you want to cry, then cry. i have a shoulder I can lend you. (in a calm voice)

GG: Stop pretending like you care about me. I finally know, my mom and dad are the only ones who really care and love me.

YL: You actually know that your dad care about you. Let me ask you something. Do YOU care about your dad? (raising his voice)

GG: Of course I do. I...

YL: Then why are you doing this?

GG: What are you talking about?

YL: You said you love your dad and he loves you too, but you are making him worry about you, ever after he dies. (almost yelling)

GG: What are you trying to-

YL: You know it yourself. It's been 13 years already, if your father knows that his daughter is scared of a little harmless creature because of him, wouldn't he be worried about her? When he was in the hospital about to die, he wasn't worried about himself but you instead. And now, you just make him worry about you even more.

-Arron grabbed Gui Gui's hand, pulled her over to a cat. Gui Gui turned around to not look.

YL: Turn around and look! LOOK!!

-Gui GUi, in teary eyes, slowly turned her head around and looked.

YL: What is it that you are afraid of? To furry? I believe you father would want you to forget about the past and look at the future. (lower and softer tone)

-Arron pulled Gui Gui's hand closer to the cat.

GG: No, please. I'm...

YL: Don't worry, I'm right here with you.

-They got closer to the cat. Their hands together landed onto the cat's fur. Slowly, Gui Gui becamse less scared and more relieved.

YL: See, I told you there's nothing to be scared of.

GG: Thanks. Oh yeah! What was it that you wanted to give me?

YL: I already gave it to you. The key to unlock you bravery to face your fear.

GG: Thanks

-For the rest of the day, they worked on their project until night. Arron drove Gui Gui home.

GG: Arron, I reall want to thank..

YL: You said it a million times already.

-Gui Gui giggled.

GG: Oh yeah (reaching in her bag and pulled something out) I forgot to give you this.

- She handed him a sandwich.

GG: It's what you ordered yesterday.

YL: I guess I'll have it for supper.

GG: Whatever you want. I have to go in. Good night.

YL: Good night.

-Before Gui Gui got out of the car, she reached over and kissed Arron on the cheeks. She then quickly ran into the house.

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GG's POV:(In her room) Talking to herself.

"What did I just do? (smacked her head) So dumb. Gui GUi, you have any idea of what you just did? That was your first kiss to a GUY!! AAHH!! Why is my heart beating so fast.
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YL's POV:

Why did she do that? The mixed feelings I have right now.....
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-Arron didn't know what the feeling was, but he was sure, inside the mix feeling, there was a bad feeling.

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END OF TODAY'S CHAPTER!!

I have a few questions for you to think.

1. why did gui gui kiss arron (pretty obvious)
2. why did arron have a bad feeling (HINT: he dated someone before).

alrighty peoples.. your homework is to give comments and think.

i already broke my own rule. i updated when theres only 7 peoples giving comments. SO I MUST SEE COMMENTS!! 10 COMMENTS!! OR NO UPDATES!!
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Posted 1/19/09
aweee<3
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Posted 1/19/09
Man i cant wait for the next one!!!!
HOW CUTE!!!
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Posted 1/24/09
Loving the story update soon! :]
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nice story XD
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