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Posted 1/21/09
uwa then can i be ayumu Kuri?!!!!!
uwaa~~~ i love daiki!! hehehe
Posted 1/21/09

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Geh-san wrote:

kyaaaa! can't wait for the first part!!!
yerriii chaaaan!
i want to be with yabu!!!!!
i choose you hana ji ah!
haha
that line rminds me of pokemon eh?


Sure.... but Rei-nee... did you read her profile and did you like it?
hahahah! Yeah... when ash says..
I choose you, Pikachu!


hai ive read it..
although there's a part in her likes which is not really my type..aha
don't worry it's just one thing..
it's rapping!...xD
but all in all,
her profile is fine! i like it..


If you're okay with it...

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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


Asuka-chan_12 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

kyaaaa! can't wait for the first part!!!
yerriii chaaaan!
i want to be with yabu!!!!!
i choose you hana ji ah!
haha
that line rminds me of pokemon eh?


Sure.... but Rei-nee... did you read her profile and did you like it?
hahahah! Yeah... when ash says..
I choose you, Pikachu!


hai ive read it..
although there's a part in her likes which is not really my type..aha
don't worry it's just one thing..
it's rapping!...xD
but all in all,
her profile is fine! i like it..


If you're okay with it...



hai it's ok!..
when will you post the first part?=D


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ohh can i be sarah sis?
yamada partner??
Posted 1/21/09
deen22: Are you sure about that? Any complaints about her profile?

Yamada_Yuuki: You sure? How about your profile? anything you don't like...?

Here's chapter 1~! ^^

C H A P T E R 1: How they're connected [Part 1]

“Miss? Miss? Are you okay?” Daiki shook the girl lying on the floor. The girl shifted.

“Five more minutes, mom.” The girl mumbled and Daiki giggled quietly.

“I’m not your mom.” Daiki smiled.

Hearing this, the girl opened her eyes and sat up.

“Are you okay?” Daiki asked again.

Hearing his voice, the girl’s head turned quickly at Daiki’’s direction. She smiled awkwardly. “I’m fine.”

Daiki smiled and offered her hand to the girl. The girl happily accepted it. She straightened herself up.

“What were you doing?” Daiki asked the girl curiously.

“Oh,” the girl said, looking up. “Sleeping.”

“Sleeping?”

“Yeah.” The girl picked up her bag.

The girl walked out of the dance studio, her bag on her shoulders. The girl stopped, rolled her eyes and turned around.

“Who are you?” the girl growled.

A boy stepped out of the shadows. “Arioka Daiki. How about you?”

“Ayumu Kuri. Why are you following me? And weren’t you the one who woke me in the dance studio.” she replied.

Daiki chuckled and said, “Yeah. I’m not following you. I’m going there.” He pointed to a tall, big building with a sign that read, ‘Johnny’s Entertainment.

Kuri suddenly laughed. “Right. Now I remember you. You’re a member of the band Hey! Say! JUMP. Am I right?”

“Yeah. Are you a fan?” Daiki asked.

“Not much but my friend is. She absolutely LOVES you.” Kuri chuckled.

“Okay, gotta go now. Johnny might fire me.” Daiki smiled.

“Yeah bye. By the way, what were you doing in the dance studio?” Kuri questioned again.

“Just passing by.” He answered and continued walking to the building.

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“Tadaima!” Kitanawa Yana yelled as she entered the big and quiet mansion.

“Welcome home, Nana-chan.” Kinu-san, her caretaker, greeted.

Yana smiled brightly. Kinu-san has been her friend and caretaker for a very long time.

“What did you buy?” Kinu-san asked her and tried to peek in the shopping bag that Yana is carrying.

“Can’t tell.” She put out her tongue at Kinu and hid the bag behind her back.

Kinu-san pouted. “No fair.”

Yana giggled. “Life isn’t fair. Where’s father?”

“Office.” Was Kinu-san’s usual reply.

“Oh.” Yana said sadly.

“So, how was your shopping.” Kinu-san asked eagerly, trying to cheer her up.

“I finally got the shirt I wanted.” She sighed as she put down her shopping bags on the couch and sat down. “I met a guy.”

Kinu-san’s head snapped up. “A GUY?!”

“Yes. A guy.” She replied, took out her little sketch book and well, started sketching.

“Where did you meet him?” Kinu-san asked.

“We bumped into each other.” Yana replied, not looking up.

“What’s his name?” Kinu-san questioned, now sitting on the couch.

The question made Yana look up. She replied, thoughtfully, “I haven’t ask.”

“What?!”

“But,” she said before Kinu-san can burst. “this is how he looks.”

Yana showed Kinu her drawing. Kinu looked thoughtfully at it.

“Wow, he’s handsome.” Kinu complemented. “He seems familiar.”

Yana rolled her eyes, picked up her shopping bags, stood up and got her sketch pad. “Whatever.”

-----

“Guys, wanna play with me?” Takahashi Rena asked her 5 stepbrothers with the basketball in her hands.

“Sure!” the 5 brothers chorused.

Rena smiled. And she quickly went out of their house, with her stepbrothers following her. They went to the basketball courts and started to play.

Their game was fun and Rena can really play. She beat her 5 stepbrothers all by herself.

“Hey guys, can you get us drinks?” Rena asked her stepbrothers.

The brothers left Rena sitting on the bench near the courts to go get food. Then something happened that made Rena regret for making her stepbrothers buy food.

It started to RAIN. With thunder and LIGHTNING

Rena started to run quickly. She tried to look for her brothers but failed. Then she started running home. While running home, all soak and wet now, she bumped into someone and she fell badly not to mention and her ankle landed in a bad angle.

“Miss, are you okay?” she heard a boy’s voice but can quite see him because of the rain.

“I’m fine but I think I twisted my ankle.” She winced as she touched her swollen ankle.

The next thing she knew, she was being carried back to her house by the boy she bumped into. Of course she told him where she lives.

She rested her head on his shoulders. Her eyes started to droop and then she fell asleep.

-----

“Snack time!” Jae Eun said cheerfully.

Chiaki, Michiyo and Aya immediately ran to Jae Eun and took the biscuits, juice and the other snacks that was in the tray that she carried. Jae Eun can’t help but smile as she watched the kids eat.

“Done already?!” Jae Eun stared at the kids in amazement.

“Ne, oneechan, let’s watch T.V.” Aya squealed and pulled Jae Eun in the living room.

Michiyo turned on the T.V. and switched it to the channel where ‘Music Station’ was being aired. The 3 kids sat down and so did Jae Eun.

“Here is Hey! Say! JUMP with their song, Mayonaka No Shadow Boy, dozo.” The host announced.

10 guys started singing.

“kucchi muite yo CHERRY
Socchi janai CHERRY”

The song was pretty catchy. Aya, Michiyo and Chiaki danced with the guys, and Jae Eun watched while clapping her hands to the rhythm.

“Okay, guys, sleep.” She sort of ordered the kids as she tucked in Aya.

“Can you play us a lullaby?” Michiyo smiled eagerly at Jae Eun.

“Alright.” She sighed and sat on the piano sit.

She played a very, very nice piece that she composed on her own. The kids listened to it for a while and then fell in to a deep slumber.

Jae Eun opened her eyes as she finished her piece. She looked at the kids and smiled. She tiptoed out of the room and quietly went to the living room.

She clicked her tongue at the sight of the living room. The kids sure made a mess. She started tidying up the living room. While cleaning she picked up something. It was a CD. The CD’s cover was 10 guys in all black clothes. It was titled, ‘Mayonaka No Shadow Boy’. She remembered the T.V. program a while ago and recognize the title and the boys. Her eyes fell on a certain, particular boy.

-----

“Say Cheese!” a bright light flashed.

“Oneechan! Don’t do that to me!” Keiko scolded her sister.

“Gomen! Gomen! I just like annoying you.” Hana Ji-Ah said while browsing the pictures of her camera.

Keiko rolled her eyes and stomped away to her room.

“Brat.” Hana scoffed.

Hana spotted something on the floor, it was a CD. She picked it up and examined it.

“Must be Keiko’s.” she said.

DING! DONG!

Hana head snapped towards the door. “Pizza’s here!”

She stumbled to the door and opened it. She was a little disappointed in what she saw. It was not the delivery man. It was a guy.

“Excuse me, miss, I found this on one of the stores.” The guy handed her wallet.

“Thank you! Oh thank you very much!” Hana, unconsciously, hugged the guy. She has been looking for her wallet for a week now. Luckily, someone honest found it. Or maybe someone with enough money already.

When Hana realized what she was doing, she let go of the guy and looked down in embarrassment.

“I’m Yabu Kota.” The guy, named Yabu Kota, offered his hand for a handshake.

Hana looked up, shook his hand and also introduced herself. “Hana Ji-Ah.”

Yabu smiled at Hana.

“Thank you very much.” Hana said again and Yabu chuckled.

“Won’t you come in?” Hana asked.

Yabu looked at his watch and frowned. “Sorry, I can’t, I’m late for something.”

“Oh Okay. Bye! Take care.” Hana said, disappointedly.

“Bye! Hope we meet again.” He said and quickly ran into the streets and disappeared.

“Who was that?” Keiko asked as Hana closed the door.

“A guy.” Hana said, smiling while clutching her wallet.


Hope You liked it!
Girls, keep telling... [if I'm right! LOL]

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i don't have any complaints ^^ it's exactly like me!!
haha even the bullying xD
Posted 1/21/09

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i don't have any complaints ^^ it's exactly like me!!
haha even the bullying xD


Ahahahahha! Okay! You're her then! ^^
I hope you like Chapter 1~! ^^
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eep! i loved the first part! lol
woah..the rena part was like.. "woot woot!" xD
keep up the good work
can't wait for the next part!!
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nothing at all! she's soo my character!
hahah and we have same likes!
like dancing or likes to stand up for what her friends
esp Listening to music and reading manga/comics
and all her likes! hehehehe nice chapter 1!!! more!! hehehe
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wee... love the first part~! wushhu...
cant wait to post the other parts. nya!
can i be with takaki or anything who is still not taken.
nya~! hahaha
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cooool story!!! lurve it but can i be Yuto's partner Ayase Huriko
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waaaahhh~! cool chap 1!! xD
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hey hey! you made a fanfic?
COOL. this one will be a great onee :D
can i be Ayase Hiruko nway? partner of Yuto?
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kyaaaa! i love taking pics of others you know!
and i hugged yabuuuu!!!!
waah that was a nice chap!!!
way to go yerrii chaan!
Posted 1/23/09

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eep! i loved the first part! lol
woah..the rena part was like.. "woot woot!" xD
keep up the good work
can't wait for the next part!!


Ahahah... Thanks Yuuki-chan! Gambare massu!




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nothing at all! she's soo my character!
hahah and we have same likes!
like dancing or likes to stand up for what her friends
esp Listening to music and reading manga/comics
and all her likes! hehehehe nice chapter 1!!! more!! hehehe


Hontou? Ok then! If you're ok with her! You're Ayumu Kuri then! ^^


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wee... love the first part~! wushhu...
cant wait to post the other parts. nya!
can i be with takaki or anything who is still not taken.
nya~! hahaha


Well, Takaki's not taken yet... and his partner is Kitanawa Yana!
Check her profile and tell me if you have any complaints about her ne~!
Thanks for reading, Aki-neechan! ^^


lizbeth_yao95 wrote:

waaaahhh~! cool chap 1!! xD


Thanks! ^^


prettydiane_owws09 wrote:

cooool story!!! lurve it but can i be Yuto's partner Ayase Huriko


Since two of you are asking, have a look at her profile and tell m if you have any complaints!
Thanks ne~!


vanialestari wrote:

hey hey! you made a fanfic?
COOL. this one will be a great onee :D
can i be Ayase Hiruko nway? partner of Yuto?


Yup! I hope soo too!
Sure! Have a look at her profile and tell me if you have any complaints about her...
then I'll think about it! Arigatou, Vann-chan! ^^


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kyaaaa! i love taking pics of others you know!
and i hugged yabuuuu!!!!
waah that was a nice chap!!!
way to go yerrii chaan!


Ehehehe... Yeah.. me too!
Oh and there will be MORE than hugging later! hahahh...XD!
Thanks, Rei-nee!


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