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Posted 1/27/09
C H A P T E R 3: How they're connected [Part 3]

“Phew! That was some run!” Masami Yuuka panted.

She just finished running. And now she’s getting a drink and then Mochi ice cream—her favorite.

Before you know it, she was running again. She was in deep thinking right now and she runs when she does that.

Suddenly someone screamed,

“Oneechan, look out!”

Yuuka turned her head and saw a soccer flying towards her. Her eyes widened. She immediately closed her eyes and got ready for the pain. But it didn’t come. She slowly opened her eyes and saw a hand in front of her saving her from being hit by the soccer ball.

“Be careful next time!” a guy’s voice yelled to the boys playing soccer and threw back their ball.

The guy faced Yuuka and smiled at her. Yuuka smiled back.

“Thanks.” Yuuka said to the stranger.

“No problem, miss.” The guy replied.

“You are?” Yuuka looked at the guy.

“Ikuta Toma. And you?”

“Masami Yuuka.” She replied and once again looked at Toma as though she knew him.

“Ahah!” she clasped her hands. “I know you! You’re THE Ikuta Toma!”

Toma laughed. “Yes. I am the Ikuta Toma.”

Yuuka smiled at her own silliness.

“Sorry about that!” she beamed.

“Did the soccer ball hit your head?” Toma narrowed his eyes at her.

“No.” she replied, a little confused.

“Thanks to you.” She added, shyly.

Toma smiled. “You’re supposed to be screaming right now.”

Yuuka looked at him in disbelief. “I’m not that kind of girl.”

“Come on!” Toma grabbed her and put on a hat and sunglasses.

The two of them entered an ice cream parlor. Toma dragged Yuuka on an empty table and sat down and of course forced Yuuka to sit down.

“What are you doing?” she whispered harshly as she watched Toma browse the menu.

“Ordering.” Toma replied and called for the waitress.

“Yes, sir?” the waitress asked. Yuuka noticed the waitress looking suspiciously at Toma.

“One sundae please.” Toma looked at Yuuka. “How about you?”

Yuuka looked at the waitress and hesitantly said, “Mochi ice cream, please.”

The waitress smiled at them and went to get their others. Yuuka pulled Toma by the shirt.

“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!” she whispered angrily.

“I’m waiting for our ice cream!” he replied. “with you.”

Yuuka looked at him in disbelief.

“Ehem.” Yuuka and Toma turned around. The waitress stood before with a rather shocked expression.

Yuuka smiled awkwardly at the waitress as she placed their orders on the table.

“Arigatou Gozaimasu!” Toma beamed. The waitress quickly walked away.

“I can’t believe you—“ Yuuka looked up. She rolled her eyes as she saw Toma eating the sundae as if he hadn’t eaten ice cream for centuries.

“Baka.” Yuuka muttered and also started eating her ice cream.

-----

“It’s raining!” 11-year old Choi Eunmi squealed.

“Can I go? Can I go?” Eunmi excitedly asked her mother.

“Okay.” Her mother agreed. “but, don’t stay too long.”

“Okay!” Eunmi hugged her mom and gave her a kiss on the cheek.

Eunmi hurriedly opened the door and stepped out in the rain.

Eunmi turned around and around in the rain. She giggled as she started splashing in to puddles. She also started dancing. She danced and danced in the rain. She raised her hands and felt the rain beat on her palms as she closed her eyes.

Eunmi suddenly heard someone chuckle. She immediately put her hands down, opened her eyes and looked at the source of the sound. She saw a boy about her age smiling with an umbrella of course.

“Why’d you stop?” he asked, tilting his head.

“Because I heard.” She replied.

The boy smiled. “It’s fun playing in the rain, isn’t it?”

Eunmi nodded and beamed at the boy. “Do you play in the rain?”

“Always.”

“Want to play with me?” Eunmi asked, hopefully.

The boy frowned. “I can’t. I have to do something important.”

“Oh…” Eunmi pouted.

Then before she knew it, the boy was running.

“WAIT!” she yelled. The boy stopped running and looked at her.

“What’s your name?” she asked.

The boy grinned. “I’ll tell you the next time we meet!”

“Next time?” she mumbled as she watched the boy disappear in the rain.


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uwaaaaaaaaaa~! you always got nice chappies! i'll wait for the next ne? hahah! ^_____________^
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Posted 1/29/09
C H A P T E R 4: Christmas

“Hayaku, Kumu-chan!” Miyumi yelled.

Ayumu ran to Miyumi and when she was beside her, she immediately grabbed her and ran out of the dance studio. Miyumi ran while dragging Ayumu with her in the busy streets of Japan.

Ayumu looked back at the studio resentfully.

Finally, they arrived at Miyumi’s house. They both approached the door quickly while catching their breath. Miyumi fished her keys in her bag. She put the key in the key hole and it opened.

Miyumi grabbed Ayumu—again—and dragged her to the living room, where they both sat down on the couch. Miyumi quickly turned on the T.V.

Ayumu groaned. “We’re watching this—again?!”

“It’s different every week.”

“Here’s Hikaru and Yabu, dozo!” one of the hosts announced.

Ayumu stared at them thoughtfully.

“Isn’t that members of Hey! Say! JUMP?” she asked.

“Yup,” Miyumi looked at Ayumu, “but Chii-kun in not there. Why?”

“Nothing.”

“What nothing? SOMETHING definitely happened.” Miyumi demanded.

“You might be mad.” Ayumu stated in a slight nervous tone.

“I won’t! I won’t!” she promised.

Ayumu slowly said, “I met Arioka Daiki.” Miyumi’s eyes widened and opened her mouth to speak but Ayumu quickly shoved a finger in front of her face. “Let me finish.”

“I’m sorry.” She apologized truthfully.

“When?”

“What when?” Ayumu asked, confused.

“When did this happen? Was Chinen Yuuri there?” Miyumi asked and didn’t bother to answer.

“I don’t know, maybe a few weeks after.” Ayumu shrugged.

Miyumi turned back to the T.V. and Ayumu frowned.

“Let’s open the presents!” Ayumu squealed and was almost caught being fake. Miyumi looked at her with a smile back on her face.

Ayumu handed Miyumi her gift.

Miyumi started to tear the wrapper off quickly. She tilted for she saw a smaller box inside the box. She again took of the lid which revealed another box she did five times and she finally stopped on one, small box.

At first she was VERY disappointed by the small box. But then she opened it. It revealed a very beautiful, silver charm bracelet. She stared at it in awe.

She, again, beamed at her bestfriend. “It’s beautiful.”

Ayumu smiled. “What about me?”

“Eh, isn’t my love and care for you enough for a gift?” Miyumi continued to examine the bracelet.

“Well, it isn’t! Where is my gift?” Ayumu demanded.

“Calm down. I was joking. Of course I have a gift for you!” she squealed and looked for Ayumu’s present under the Christmas Tree.

Miyumi shoved Ayumu’s present to her. Ayumu rolled her eyes and carefully untied the ribbon. She unwrapped it completely. And to her surprise saw….

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Yana finally handed the last handkerchief to her beloved caretaker, Kinu.

Kinu smiled and accepted the gift. Apparently ALL of the servants receive handkerchiefs. They all have different designs but most of all what made them smile is that their names were stitched carefully onto the handkerchief.

“Arigatou Gozaimasu, Yana-sama!” All of the servants chorused and respectfully and thankfully bowed to Yana.

Yana smiled and said, “Dou iteshimashite, minna! I just hope you like them! I’m lucky I remember all of your names!”

Kinu-san chuckled, “Nana-chan, come let’s eat.”

“Where’s father?” Yana hopefully asked.

Kinu-san looked at her and sighed. “In his study.”

“Again? But it’s Christmas!” Yana exclaimed.

“That’s your father you’re talking about.” Kinu-san muttered to herself as she watched Yana make her way to the dining room.

Yana sat down at the long enormous table—it can fit 20 people!—but there she is sitting alone, as usual.

Yana slowly ate the food prepared. It was so much. And then she thought of something.

“Hey, minna! Come and sit with me! Eat! ‘Specially you Kinu-chan!” she yelled and smiled.

Every servant looked at each other and back at Yana, who was still eating. Then Kinu-san and one of the maids sat down with Yana. Yana smiled at them and they smiled back.

Kinu-san and the maid started eating. The other servants looked at them and sighed. All of them joined Yana in dinner. Yana was so happy to hear chattering in the dining table. She was always alone.

Yana balanced the tray in one of her arms while still carrying a paper bag. She knocked on her father’s door.

“Come in.” said a lazy voice.

Yana opened the door to find his father with bottles of sake—again. She looked nervously at her father.

“What are you doing here?!” he snapped immediately.

“I—I just wanted to—to bring you food.” Yana stammered.

“I don’t want to eat.” Yana’s father replied coldly.

“I’ve got a present for you, Otousan.” Yana smiled and placed the paper bag on her father’s table.

Yana’s father looked at the paper bag. He stood up from his chair and threw it harshly back at Yana, who was hit in the face.

“I DO NOT KNOW YOU!” her father bellowed.

He went out of the room, slamming the door. Yana felt her eyes stinging and her sight was blurred when she started to pick up the contents of the paper bag. She placed it inside again and clutched it closed to her chest while crying.

It was like this EVERY time.

-----

“Merry Christmas, Keiko!!” Hana greeted her sister, Keiko, who seemed to be in the Christmas spirit too.

“Merry Christmas to you too, Oneechan.” She replied and smiled sweetly.

Hana dragged Keiko into the dining room and sat down with their little feast ready.

“Ittadakimasu!” both of them shouted and bowed.

Both of them dug in, in Hana’s cooking, which was VERY satisfying and good. Hana felt someone staring at her. She looked up and was relieved to find that it was only her sister.

“Whaf?” she asked, her mouth full of sushi.

“Who was that guy?” Keiko inquired.

Hana swallowed. “What guy?”

“The one that showed up a few weeks ago to return your PRECIOUS wallet.” She said in one breath.

“Oh him.” Hana tilted her head. “None of your business.”

“It’s my business!” Keiko yelled. “What’s his name?”

Hana rolled her eyes. “He’s really handsome! You might take him away from me if I tell you!”

“YOU BAKA!” Keiko screamed and shook her. She resumed eating.

After they’re little feast, it was time for the exchanging of gifts.

“Here!” Hana exclaimed and gave her gift to Keiko excitedly.

Keiko rolled her eyes at her sister’s childishness. Keiko unwrapped the gift that was neatly wrapped. She lifted the lid of the box.

Her eyes widened as she saw its content. “HOLY SH—“

“Keiko! Your manners!” her sister scolded her as she covered her mouth before Keiko could say anything that might corrupt her ears.

Keiko looked at her sister and hugged her, tightly, squealing with delight. Hana hugged her sister back. Both of them pulled away.

“Do you like it?” Hana asked her still squealing sister.

Keiko nodded while clutching a black, sleek and probably one of the latest model of cellphones. It had been Keiko’s dream to get this cellphone. Every time they passed a certain store while shopping, Keiko would stop and almost drool over the cellphone.

“Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!” Keiko repeated and repeated to her sister who was smiling, glad that she was able to make her sister’s wish come true this Christmas.

“Now, take care of that! If anything happens to it, I will not feed you nor talk to you for a WEEK!” Hana threatened her sister.

“Hai! And here’s mine!” Keiko shoved her gift to Hana and quickly and excitedly examined her new cellphone.

Hana chuckled and quickly unwrapped her present. It was a Polaroid camera. She absolutely love taking pictures. And this was the PERFECT gift.

She clutched the Polaroid camera and stared at the ceiling while her sister was still fanning over her new cellphone.

She was still wondering about that guy.

-----

“Ittekimassu!” Jae Eun yelled and got outside.

It was very cold today and yet here she was walking in the streets of Japan, which was covered with snow, to go to the PARK. Yes. The PARK.

She walked her way to the park, with her hands in her pocket and glancing every now and then to different windows’ displays.

She smiled as she arrived in the park. She loved taking walks here and so she encircled the park. After a few rounds, she sat down on a bench, a little out of breath.

She caught her breath as she enjoyed the view. Many couples were out today. Holding hands, spending Christmas together. She just loved the sight.

Something hard hit her chest and she let out a little yelp and looked down to yell at the person but her expression softened when she saw a little girl crying.

“What’s wrong, little girl?” she asked gently as she stroked the crying girl’s hair.

“Mo—mo—mommy!” The little girl squeaked.

“Did you lose your mommy?” she once again, asked gently. The little girl slowly nodded, still crying on Jae Eun chest.

“What’s wrong with her?” a voice asked.

Jae Eun looked up to find a boy’s face close to hers. She quickly looked away, blushing.

“She lost her mother.” Jae Eun swiftly explained.

“Oh. Come and then, little girl, let’s look for your Mama.” The boy said and grabbed the girl’s hand, who grabbed Jae Eun’s hand.

So, together they looked for her Mom. They found her at the police station, also looking for her daughter. The 2 of them reunited with tears.

Unconsciously, neither Jae Eun or the boy knew that they were holding hands. Both of them watched the reuniting of the Mother and daughter with satisfied smiles.

The two of them turned around, still oblivious at their intertwined hands. They walked in silence.

Jae Eun finally noticed that her left hand was a little warmer than the other. She looked down and her eyes widened. She quickly snatched her hand away. Kei noticed this and looked at her.

“I—I—I’m so—so—sorry.” She stuttered.

“Daijobu.” The boy assured her.

“I got to go now!” Jae Eun slipped away without waiting for the boy’s answer.

Meanwhile, the boy chuckled, turned around and walked away.

-----

DING DONG!

The doorbell rang and Torikushii sprang to the door and opened but only to find no one. She looked down and saw a bouquet of flowers and a box. She also heard faint running footsteps.

She picked up the flowers and the box. She closed the door and sat comfortably in the living room’s couch. Her parents were out so she was alone.

She examined the thin long slender box. She finally opened it and to her surprise saw her long, lost, favorite paintbrush.

She, now, looked at the flowers and noticed that there was a letter attached to it.

She carefully got the note and tore the pink envelope open. Inside was a white paper, obviously containing the message. She unfolded it and read it quietly.

It read,

“Dear, Naname-san,

Well, I guess you’re wondering how I got your paintbrush. Well, it was when I saw you first, painting. You were on the riverbank, painting the setting sun, do you remember? After you went away, I approached the place where you painted and fortunately, for me, found your brush and found out your name. I’ve been watching you paint lately. It relaxes me a lot since I have a lot of work. I hope you don’t think of me as a stalker. I really am not! I just enjoy seeing you paint. And now I return it to you. I have treated like a treasure and I’m sure you will to. I can’t give it to you personally because I have a lot of work and I don’t want you to see me. I hope you liked the flowers. I want you to keep a look-out for me. Maybe I’m just around the corner. There again, watching you paint.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Yours sincerely,
Your secret admirer.”


She refolded the letter, place it back in the envelope and smelled the fresh flowers.

She was, at first, astounded to find out where her paintbrush had been. She also thought of the boy as sweet and caring.

It was her first time finding out of her secret admirer.

She would definitely keep an eye out.
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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:

So Confusing!

Okay here are the taken ones:

Yabu Kota x Hana Ji-Ah [lizbeth_yao95]
Yaotome Hikaru x Takahashi Rena [ rikkuluvsNewS ]
Arioka Daiki x Ayumu Kuri [deen22]
Okamoto Keito x Naname Torikushii [ shieLdembLem ]
Yamada Ryosuke x Sarah Sis [ Yamada_Yuuki83 ]
Chinen Yuuri x Miyumi Sasaki [lizbeth_yao95]
Morimoto Shintaro x Choi Eunmi [mochicocoa]
Morimoto Ryutaro x Kim Choon-Hee [Jannahh94]


The not Taken ones:

Inoo Kei x Kim Jae Eun
Nakajima Yuto x Ayase Huriko
Ikuta Toma x Masami Yuuka


Takaki Yuya x Kitanawa Yana>>Might be unavailable

Well, many wants to be Ayase Huriko, so those who wants to be her PLEASE, PLEASE post it again then TELL ME if you have ANY complaints, feed back or ANYTHING!

THEN I WILL THINK about it...





eeh?! yerrii chan! i already k hana ji ah's role ne~?
Posted 1/30/09

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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:

So Confusing!

Okay here are the taken ones:

Yabu Kota x Hana Ji-Ah [Geh-san]
Yaotome Hikaru x Takahashi Rena [ rikkuluvsNewS ]
Arioka Daiki x Ayumu Kuri [deen22]
Okamoto Keito x Naname Torikushii [ shieLdembLem ]
Yamada Ryosuke x Sarah Sis [ Yamada_Yuuki83 ]
Chinen Yuuri x Miyumi Sasaki [lizbeth_yao95]
Morimoto Shintaro x Choi Eunmi [mochicocoa]
Morimoto Ryutaro x Kim Choon-Hee [Jannahh94]


The not Taken ones:

Inoo Kei x Kim Jae Eun
Nakajima Yuto x Ayase Huriko
Ikuta Toma x Masami Yuuka


Takaki Yuya x Kitanawa Yana>>Might be unavailable

Well, many wants to be Ayase Huriko, so those who wants to be her PLEASE, PLEASE post it again then TELL ME if you have ANY complaints, feed back or ANYTHING!

THEN I WILL THINK about it...





eeh?! yerrii chan! i already k hana ji ah's role ne~?


Gomen, Rei-nee~! I made a mistake!

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Asuka-chan_12 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


Asuka-chan_12 wrote:

So Confusing!

Okay here are the taken ones:

Yabu Kota x Hana Ji-Ah [Geh-san]
Yaotome Hikaru x Takahashi Rena [ rikkuluvsNewS ]
Arioka Daiki x Ayumu Kuri [deen22]
Okamoto Keito x Naname Torikushii [ shieLdembLem ]
Yamada Ryosuke x Sarah Sis [ Yamada_Yuuki83 ]
Chinen Yuuri x Miyumi Sasaki [lizbeth_yao95]
Morimoto Shintaro x Choi Eunmi [mochicocoa]
Morimoto Ryutaro x Kim Choon-Hee [Jannahh94]


The not Taken ones:

Inoo Kei x Kim Jae Eun
Nakajima Yuto x Ayase Huriko
Ikuta Toma x Masami Yuuka


Takaki Yuya x Kitanawa Yana>>Might be unavailable

Well, many wants to be Ayase Huriko, so those who wants to be her PLEASE, PLEASE post it again then TELL ME if you have ANY complaints, feed back or ANYTHING!

THEN I WILL THINK about it...





eeh?! yerrii chan! i already k hana ji ah's role ne~?


Gomen, Rei-nee~! I made a mistake!



ahehe ii desu ii desu!...oh yeah...btw..i love the parts i just read!
i'll be reading them again...
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sorry for reading late
is already so much fun reading the "Main Characters"
maybe the fic is more great...

but

but

but

but

it really great...
can't wait for the next part...
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whee~
sorry for reading late
but I really liked it!
I can't wait for the next part!
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*wootz!*

Okamoto&Torikushii
ROCKS~!
*haha!*
ROFL!

*applause*
it's so good su-chan~! XD!
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yay! thankies for letting meh in it x3
hehe~ Duckie xD
what a cute nickname XD
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uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh~~~~~~ sooo kewl..... love it~~~~~~
still no ayase huriko............ hehe......
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Is Takaki taken???
If he is can I be with Inoo???
Great fic btw.
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