[Fanfic]A Love Tree Between RimaXNagihiko
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Posted 1/20/09 , edited 1/20/09
my first fanfic. hope u enjoy the chap 1...

CHAPTER 1 - TROUBLED MEETING

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Posted 1/20/09
Uhm, it's not bad, but a little short. you could make it longer ^o^
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Posted 1/20/09

-Hikari wrote:

Uhm, it's not bad, but a little short. you could make it longer ^o^


yea i think so too... i hav made one about this, its pretty gud n when i wanted 2 post this, it has been erased by accident!!! when i wanna make this once more, the story bcome not quite gud >< i'll try to make chap 2 longer n better
Posted 1/20/09
Do your best!!! Its not bad coming from me I critize a loooot XD But the storys going well I can kinda picture it, it seems intruiguing and you should continue till the end
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Posted 1/22/09
continue larhss...
first time i've read a rimaXnagi fanfic...
gahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! i wonder what would happen?
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Posted 1/22/09
Nice chapter! Update Soon!
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Posted 1/22/09

TeNShIkA wrote:

my first fanfic. hope u enjoy the chap 1...

CHAPTER 1 - TROUBLED MEETING



SHORT N SWEET! NICE STARTING! *hug*
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Posted 1/26/09
this is like one of the few fanfics not about amuto or tadamu, YAY!! i also like rimahiko so GO GO RIMAHIKO!!
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